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#i loved writing this chapter so much tbfh
passthroughtime · 3 months
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the update postponed indefinitely because i suck the biggest ass apparently 🤣
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bcolfanfic · 2 months
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Hi I been missing buck and Bucky. Do you have fanfic recs?
god there's so many i love! but if you're looking for a completed multi chapter that has all the things (sweet boys, marge and period typical homophobia angst) i really really loved this
i think it's very sweet when people are for lack of a better word "delicate" with marge's place in clegan fics, and esp love the reoccuring trope of making her queer too- so much so that's kinda what i've been thinking for her arch in my young vets au. *but* i also love stories like this that veer a little more period accurate re: how she might feel about things. the whole plot line with her friend and the church here was also just really clicked for me as a girl who grew up in the southern baptist church myself. very very accurate telling of that specific small town church culture and how it festers. 10/10. (@whichcouldmeannothing hi <3)
and while we're on the topic this is another really great fic that writes marjorie as more complicated. no spoilers for those that haven't read it, but i literally gasped out loud when That happened. and tbfh i'd even say gale earned that lmao. women's stories matter!!! i vote that whoever wrote this has a radio rebel reveal here on tumblr so we can all yap about this amazing amazing story.
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ssreeder · 2 months
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Hi, genuine question for Ur well being
Since this Is the last part/book of the Fanfiction i wanted to ask if u would be 'retelling' the whole series like if u would have to rewrite the whole season (cuz that would be SO MUCH WORK ITS CRAZY😭) or if u will like stop at some point of thr 'og timeline' bcuz from there on its almost thr same as the original (ex: aang's final battlr w ozai or the last agni kai of Zuko n Azula)
If u had to rewrite the og-show w a new timeline' how will the povs work? Like will u write aang's pov in the final Battle against ozai (cuz if u do ESP the part where he Is in the A.S the Kyoshi novels DID a pretty good job explaining It when Kyoshi entrrs It)
This Is Just for pure boredom 😭 cuz im so curious abt how u will write EVERYTHING (cuz its a LOT. Especially rewritin S3 tbfh)
LIKE thats ACTUALLY a LOT of work and i dont know if u have the sanity for that 😭😭 (NOT IN A NEGATIVE WAY IM JUST ADMIRINF UR MOTIVATION🙏🙏)
antways i LOVED the new chapter SM It was SUCH A chill n cozy One that now im so scared abt the next cuz Ur... EVIL(/j)
I also expected the cliffhanger to be DEVASTATING SND CRY ONCE AGAIN 4 THIS FIC but It wasnt ACTUALLY so bad but NOW U MADE ME CURIOUSSSSS
(will We get to see the Fire NATION Boys flashbacks back when they we're on the ship e zuko? Im still waiting to find out if IROH know abt jee.)
Now im even more frightened abt the next haha
Ok im done lol, love Ur work and KEEP UP (Sorry u had to read alltat:P)
Olllooooo!
ok anon so I’m not sure if you’re asking me if I plan to rewrite season 3 and the shows canon ending? But if you are, let me reassure you that I am absolutely not going to do that haha. LIAB won’t even end the same way the show ended so it wouldn’t even be possible for me to do that anyway
I love that you assume they’re gunna win the battle in BSS and go on to fight ozai -
what if they lose? Maybe the city falls and they have to leave it all behind and hide from the FN? Regroup, care for the injured, mourn the dead…
Speaking of dead. Fuck if what if Aang dies? Can’t fight ozai if he’s dead.
Azula loves to throw lighting & hates to lose so anything’s possible when you believe in yourself that much.
or maybe everything will be fine?! They will all be ALRIGHT because it’s liab and nothing bad ever happens in LIAB :D :D
sorry anon I won’t say what happens but I can promise you one thing FOR SURE - I will not be rewriting canon season 3 haha.
YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAAAA I’m super happy you enjoyed the last chapter haha the plot is beginning to move and we are headed towards the battle!!
as for flashbacks, the iroh zuko talk is an iroh pov and he’s super focused on the convo so unfortunately there won’t be much “flash-backing” but the ship will be mentioned so you never know haha.
thanks for the ask anon!!!
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borathae · 4 months
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Chapter 8
You had the silliest stories for every kind of bird and its melodies. I WOULD LOVE TO TALK WITH HER
oh yeah waking up to chickens sounds is really great and nostalgic, my grandma and aunt has soo many chickens and roosters, its always buq buc qkoo (im sorry lol u get what i mean)
again she is really disoriented about her location again whats going on in the mansion
she shouldn't leave the wing??? hmm thats sus, will jimin or joon do something??? like last time???
he is a time traveller. YES SIS IS CONNECTING THEM DOTS YEEHAW
“No, don’t be stupid”, you say, giving your own cheek a little slap. theory time, you hit yourself for stuff like these when your self-esteem is really low ALSO NO U AINT STUPID
see he is sus very sus How very nice of him, you really weren’t in the mood for such conversation. ok i take that back u are (not) stupid
You have an entire library all to yourself. YEEHAW LETS GO BABY A majority of his books seemed to carry the weight of many years with them. I wonder why, 👀 THE SMELL OF BOOKS AAA YUM
A photographer named Vante. oh ho ho HOO very mysterious indeed It is a pity really, you would have loved to know the face to those pictures who's gonna tell her
reading and learning with kissing will definitely escalate to something else haha
this house is very distracting and not at all helping with her concentration. whats going on yall, where the hell is tae
They are most definitely busy with something else, maybe riding their horses or doing whatever one does in such a big estate. haha
oh no, now she is hungry and has to go downstairs shit im so nervous and worried
blood red curtains?? 👀 also im loving this creepy mansion yay she found the kitchen THANK GOD THERE IS NO ONE THERE
did she find the garbage bin
no dishes, dusty kettle, empty cupboard, no sauces and SWITCHED OFF FRIDGE???? thats very weird, dont they eat or what 👀im running out bye, whats a taehyung????
AH WHO IS IT PLEASE NOT JIMIN FUCK ITS JIMIN
oooh we have been scented i see
taetae uwuw who said i wanted to leave haha
OK I TAKE THAT BACK I WANNA LEAVE WHAT IS HE DOING ofc his usual shenanigans
Taehyung is the time traveller and Jimin is the witcher, equipped with powers of seduction. PERIOD BOO AND YES SHE ASKED ABOUT HIS ACTIONS
HWAT IS HE DOING LEAVE ME ALONE 🤺 BACK AWAY🤺 BACK THE FUCK AWAY I SAID 🤺
would you mind handing me that knife over there?” NO HE IS GOING TO IDK KILL U le gasp he sucked our blood
TAEHYUNG OMG THANKS, little human??? 👀👀 back to the room i guess WITH NO BREAKFAST * side eyes jimin
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ok so the besties fought each other physically, great WOW CHILL she got hungry unlike some of yall 👀
STOP MANIPULATING ME GOD DAMN IT AAAH ok the questions are coming yes goo go go YES HE ADMITTED IT
idk if i want her to go home or ask more questions GO HOME AND SLEEP AND DONT GIVE 2 FLYING FUCKS but that wont write the plot so stay
anyways this chapter was short, but felt lengthy from all the emotional roller coaster haha it was fun and i loved the library a lot
bye im gonna sleep, hope u have a great day/night with pillow cold on both sides
You had the silliest stories for every kind of bird and its melodies. I WOULD LOVE TO TALK WITH HER
I LOVE HER SO MUCH
oh yeah waking up to chickens sounds is really great and nostalgic, my grandma and aunt has soo many chickens and roosters, its always buq buc qkoo (im sorry lol u get what i mean)
I know what you mean heheh my grandma and her neighbour both have chickens (actually I'm lying, every second household where I live has chickens hfasdhfh they always run around the roads as if they're invincible)
I also love seeing the confusion rise more and more 👀
“No, don’t be stupid”, you say, giving your own cheek a little slap. theory time, you hit yourself for stuff like these when your self-esteem is really low ALSO NO U AINT STUPID
100% YES I can see her using self-punishment because of trauma tbfh
reading and learning with kissing will definitely escalate to something else haha
lmaoaooa for real JFJADJSFJ lowkey goals tbfh
this house is very distracting and not at all helping with her concentration. whats going on yall, where the hell is tae
the danger is rising tbfh
AH WHO IS IT PLEASE NOT JIMIN FUCK ITS JIMIN
HAHAH the fear of him tbfh so valid
oooh we have been scented i see
lowkey so hot JFJADSJF
HWAT IS HE DOING LEAVE ME ALONE 🤺 BACK AWAY🤺 BACK THE FUCK AWAY I SAID 🤺
me fr
ok so the besties fought each other physically, great WOW CHILL she got hungry unlike some of yall 👀
no but they really punched each other over her I NEED angry Tae tbfh
anyways this chapter was short, but felt lengthy from all the emotional roller coaster haha it was fun and i loved the library a lot
gaah I'm happy you loved the lil journey heheh <3
bye im gonna sleep, hope u have a great day/night with pillow cold on both sides
I hope your pillow is cold too my love <3
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chokchokk · 1 year
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Hi! Can I request for mafia/badboy/CEO domSanHwa x freader smut? I’m not sure what you’re comfortable with so just make it freaky and write what you’re comfortable with and leave out those you are not okay with!!
Was thinking about: daddy kink, mirror sex, breeding and bulge kink, choking, voyeur, exhibitionism, dirty talk, slight hair pulling??, any other freaking things you wanna add~
dearest anon, when i got this request i smashed my fist into the desk because HOW DID YOU KNOW i am trying to rewrite my mafiateez-series because i just love the concept of criminials!ateez so muchthatihavebeentryingto— *inhales*
i know you don’t know but i am making this canon now LMAO!!!
and tbfh with ya i do not have a daddy kink LMAO but you phrased it so kindly, yet you asked for freaky so i really hammered down on that one (youre welcome.) hope you get your thirst quenched!
here's the link to read "serve time" !! if you want find out more about the series, click to read more :)
to be honest, i spent my whole life making fun of the western sexy man bad boy mafia-trope ok. LMAO sue me
as a sucker for korean noir, i just appreciate/love the angsty, gritty and morally scratchy reality of kkangpae/geondal (= korean gangsters), and that world portrayed in korean media a titsy tiny bit more.... lol
inspiration for this series over all would be "nameless gangster" (yoon jongbin) and "new world" (park hoon-jong) but only for my characterisation for the teez boys
there's always been a little lack of strong female characters in these movies and while i do understand where that comes from, i wanted to explore the morality and ethics a woman could stand for in an industry like this without being too much of a femme fatale? i think i do tend to write for a more dominant, cheeky fem!reader, but yeah!!!
i had this one in my drafts since june 30, with my mafia series i had on ao3 being posted idk when i started with writing for ateez this year and i just?? idk kinda held myself back from wanting to really take myself serious because i fr just wanted to make fun of the trope lmao....... now i'm here having written 15k+ words so uh. yeah look at me now right
that being said, my main influence is having read bai, aka @/hwaightme's mafia!gangster!seonghwa fic "bang bang" AND I CAN'T STRESS THIS ENOUGH LMAO BECAUSE UH? it might actually be tattooed into my brain idk. IT'S JUST SO AMAZING? and fulfills every little dream of mine to have a woman-centred mafia noir movie. UGH.
anyhowww korean culture!
i used a bunch of proverbs which will kinda become important but ill make very clear when you can or when you don't have to pay attention so dont worry LMAO !!!!
with the help of my irl friends, i have tried to make the honorifics sound more natural and will provide you a list now to kinda guide you through it (it's not THAT complex tho tbh.)
this is only for chapter 1, i dunno exactly how it's gonna be like for chapter 2 !!!
"teacher" = "seu-nim" to refer a buddhist monk
"brother" = "hyung-nim" to refer to older male, in this context used to express that san is a mafiaboss who speeaks highly of seonghwa ("hyungnim" is also used to address mafiabosses)
"baby" is honestly a standalone? the equal would be "aga" or "jagiya" but i think mafiaboss!san means it as like baby baby, so "aga" (the cuter version of "aegi")
"daddy" (LMAO HELP) = "OPPA"???? okay this one still has me baffled but it will not be that relevant anyway. we did think of this as.... oppa tho. like it has the same implications at least LMAOOO
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rollingsins · 1 year
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Why do I so badly want Reader to be in an accident or have a serious health condition scare just so Emma and Jenna patch things up and realise this fight isn’t worth it anymore?!
Anyway love your stories so much! I get excited whenever I’m notified that you uploaded. Keep writing!
She’s suffered enough after last chapter tbfh
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Bloodbond - Chapter Two
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Part two of my entry for @ts-storytime!!
Chapter Summary: With no one else to turn to, Roman goes to the Royal Librarian's son, Logan, for answers. But he — and the demon he dragged along — might not like the answer he gives.
Warnings: blood/injuries, self-deprecating thoughts
pairings: pre-established logicality, eventual prinxiety
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art by @pattykrabbies {here} and @vdkstar {here}!!!
(cover by @vdkstar <3)
“I warned you Roman, time and time again, and yet you refused to hear me through that vexatious veil of stupid self-confidence of yours. Casting a spell that you’ve only half translated is dangerous. And now look at the mess you’ve caused!” Logan shook his head angrily as he lectured Logan, his eyes flashing with anger behind his glasses. “And now I suppose you’re going to ask me to clean this up?”
“No!” Roman protested, jumping to his feet. The sudden movement activated the invisible “rope” between them, and the demon was yanked forward, stumbling away from the wall with a muttered swear. Roman sucked in a deep, annoyed breath. “...yes,” he admitted, after a moment of silence.
Logan pinched the bridge of his nose, setting his cup down on the table. “Why am I even friends with you?” he asked as he turned and walked back up the stairs, presumably to grab one of his many books.
“... because you love me?” Roman offered, and was met with charged, angry silence. He sighed dramatically, falling back down into his chair and running a hand through his hair. Patton smiled sympathetically, his eyebrows furrowed.
“Don’t worry, kiddo, I’m sure Lo will think of something! You’ll both be back home in no time.” With that, he turned to the demon lingering in the corner of the sitting room. The demon’s face was dark as he worried the hem of his tattered cloak, glancing between Patton and Roman as though afraid either might attack.
But Patton wasn’t one for attacking. “Hello! I’m Patton, but you can call me Pat. What’s your name?”
There was a moment of awkward silence, thick enough that Roman wouldn’t have been able to cut it with the sharpest of swords. The demon glanced around himself, as though wondering if Patton was even talking to him.
“It’s… I…” He floundered uncertainly, his face scrunched up like he was unused to being treated with kindness. Roman watched the scene play out with one eyebrow raised, glancing between Patton and the demon, the corner of his mouth quirking up into an amused smile.
“Pat, it’s a demon. You don’t have to be nice to it,” Roman pointed out flippantly. Patton gasped, offended, and fixed Roman with his patented Dad Glare.
“Roman! I’m surprised at you! Everyone deserves kindness.” He held his glare for a moment longer before turning to smile warmly at the demon in the corner, who was looking very conflicted, his eyes wide and his mouth hanging open in a little ‘o’ of surprise. He fidgeted with his hands, lowering his gaze.
“You… uh… you can call me Anxiety,” the demon — Anxiety — said, his tone quiet. Roman scoffed at the unusual name and Anxiety glared, his wings shifting beneath his cloak.
“Well, it’s nice to meet you, Anxiety. And I’m sure —” Patton shot another look at Roman. “— that Roman feels the same. Right, kiddo?”
“Uh. Yes, it’s absolutely grand to meet you.” He rolled his eyes, leaning back in his seat, his voice practically dripping with sarcasm.
“It’s… ni — uh, okay meeting you too.” Anxiety paused, regarding Roman with narrowed eyes. “Well, most of you.”
Roman gasped, offended, as Logan walked back into the room, struggling under the weight of a heavy, dusty tome bound in ancient-looking dragon skin. He dropped it on the table with a dramatic flourish that Roman would have been proud of, had he not feared the answer he knew he was about to get.
“This particular kind of magic is incredibly rare,” he began, adjusting his glasses as he sat and flipped open the book. A cloud of dust puffed up as he turned the pages, and Roman rubbed at his nose absentmindedly as he leaned closer. “You’re lucky I was even able to find something on it. It’s especially dangerous as well, lucky for you.”
He landed on a worn page scribbled with runes and met Roman’s eyes. “From what you described, I believe that what you have enacted is… a Bloodbond.”
“A Bloodbond?” Roman wracked his brain, trying to remember if that was the name of the spell in the story he’d heard so long ago. Meanwhile, the demon paled, his eyes going wide.
“It’s… we’re…” He seemed to know what was going on, and judging by the look on his face, Roman had been right all along. His stomach dropped. “Our souls are linked.”
“Yes, that’s exactly right,” Logan said, regarding the demon with interest. “I assume you were both injured when the spell went out of your control?”
“How do you know it went out of my control?” Roman asked, offended. “You can’t just… assume…” Logan shot him an annoyed look and he caved, rolling his eyes with a dramatic huff. “Ugh, fine. Yes, I was injured, but I healed myself!”
His arm twinged in pain, and he could practically feel Logan eyeing the obvious wound on his leg. He winced, averting his gaze. “...mostly.”
“What about you?” Logan returned his gaze to the demon. “Were you injured enough to bleed?”
Anxiety said nothing, merely shifting his cloak aside to reveal a long cut spanning the length of his forearm, stark red against the pale white of his skin. Roman’s blood ran cold; the demon’s injury was identical to the wound on his own arm. And he had been limping earlier, too, which meant…
“That confirms it.” Logan nodded to himself as red-hot regret seeped, unbidden, into the pit of Roman’s stomach. He opened his mouth to speak, but Patton stood before he could, ignoring Logan’s inquisitive look and approaching the demon. His eyebrows were drawn together in worry, his mouth turned down in a concerned frown.
Anxiety’s eyes widened and he took quick steps backward, yanking his injured arm back beneath his cloak and baring his teeth in a cornered snarl.
“Show me your arm, kiddo,” Patton said softly. “I won’t hurt you, I promise! Obviously Roman —” He paused to shoot another Dad Look at Roman, who was feeling quite attacked on all fronts. “— wasn’t planning on healing you, and I might not be a mage, but I know a thing or two about healing!”
“But —” Anxiety, for his part, seemed just as shocked as the rest of them at Patton’s kind boldness. There was a moment of charged silence — an argument between eyes; soft and gentle browns chipping away at the guarded uncertainty hidden in the deep purples — and then slowly, stiffly, the demon held out his bleeding arm.
Roman felt the pain in his own arm disappear as Patton quickly finished the healing charm, plopping back down on the couch with a satisfied sigh. “That better, kiddo?” he asked, and the demon nodded stiffly, his face carefully blank. “Good! Okay, honey-bee, you can continue,” he said to Logan.
“Ah. Right. Um…” Logan blinked, glancing at Patton and then at Anxiety as he composed himself. “The explosion of magic brought on by your inability to complete such a half-assed spell —”
“Hey!”
“ — must have injured you both. Thus, your blood was mixed within the spell. Upon summoning… Anxiety… your souls were linked because of this. That is why you cannot walk away from each other without being tugged back together, and why Anxiety cannot return to his home realm. As of now, you are soulmates.”
“How the hell do we fix it?” Anxiety asked, his eyes narrowed as he shot Roman a scathing look that the prince was only too happy to return. “I don’t want to spend any more time around this idiot.”
“Well good, because I would rather die than have to spend any more time around you!”
“That can be arranged.”
“Are you threatening me?”
Logan slammed the book shut with a deafening bang, sending dust flying and stopping the argument in its tracks. “We cannot fix anything,” he said, glaring at both of them in turn, like an angry mother would glare at bickering children. “This kind of magic is nearly impossible to reverse without the correct resources. And, of course, the correct abilities, which I believe you’ve already proved you possess none of.”
“How dare you?” Roman gasped, clutching a hand to his chest as Anxiety snickered. Logan readjusted his glasses and continued, ignoring Roman’s Offended Prince Noises.
“In fact, the only person that I know of who might be able to undo this calamity is the Royal Mage, and, if I’m being honest, I’m not entirely sure he’d even know how. This magic is incredibly ancient.”
“But you know about it!” Roman said, his stomach churning with regret, his hands clenching into fists. “Couldn’t you undo it?”
“Roman, I am not a mage. I am simply a bookworm.” He got to his feet and hefted the heavy book back into his arms with a grunt. “Oh, and when you get to the capital city, would you mind collecting my notebooks from my old room?”
And that was when it hit Roman like a ton of bricks. He had to go to the capital. He swallowed, hard, trying to hide how his hands began to shake. If his mistakes were kept confined to this small village, known only to those he trusted, then it would have been fine — but to travel to the capital city would be to reveal his stupidity to his kingdom.
It would be to reveal his stupidity to his father.
“I… yes, I suppose I can do that.” He took a breath; he would not show this weakness in front of the demon. But the demon seemed to be in the same boat; his breathing was quick, his hands shaking beneath his cloak, his wings shifting nervously. It was then that Roman realized: they were fearing the same thing.
King Odin, his father.
King Odin, the demon-slayer.
He shook his head, narrowing his eyes. No. It wasn’t the same. They weren’t the same. “Who knows?” he began, pushing his uncertainty down and shooting a glare at the demon. “Maybe he’ll die on the way there and I just won’t have to deal with it anymore!”
Anxiety snarled, his face darkening. “Trust me, your highness, if anyone dies on this little trip, it won’t be me.”
“Actually, you’re both wrong,” Logan said, pausing on his way up the stairs. “There is… one more aspect to a Bloodbond, a particularly dangerous trait. If one of you dies… so does the other. Your souls are linked, after all. So if anyone dies on your ‘little trip,’ you’ll both end up dead. You need to be careful.”
Patton gasped and the demon growled and Roman breathed deeply, trying to ignore the horrible feeling in his heart. Princes don’t get scared, he told himself silently. Princes don’t get scared.
“Great. Wonderful. Aren’t you glad you’re such a screw-up, princey?” Anxiety said angrily, nose twitching in rage and worry. Roman glared back, a thousand angry retorts dying on his tongue.
The demon was right.
“Now, now, c’mon. No fighting.” Patton got to his feet and Agatha jumped to attention, barking once happily as she curled around his legs. Roman and Anxiety glared but stayed silent, and Patton smiled, nodding. “Now, you’re both staying here tonight, okay? And I don’t want any arguments from either of you. I… I don’t trust you enough to leave you alone together.”
“That hurts, Pat,” Roman said, only half-joking. Anxiety remained silent, glaring at the ground. Patton shrugged, absentmindedly running his hand along Agatha’s soft fur.
“I hope you both like stew!” he said by way of farewell, offering them both one last smile before retreating to the inn’s kitchen, Agatha on his heels. Logan nodded sharply to each of them in turn before retreating up the stairs, heavy book in hand.
Roman regarded the demon, his heart pounding an angry mantra of unbidden regret.
Your fault your fault your fault —
“I… suppose…” He stopped, took a breath, and the words got stuck in his throat and refused to budge. He cleared his throat, glaring at the floor. “I suppose I… should… ugh! Alright, it was not very… prince-like… of me to get you caught up in all of this. So, I… I apologize for any inconvenience I may have brought.”
There! He’d said it. At least now he could rest easy, his conscience appeased. Patton would be proud of him.
Anxiety raised an eyebrow, looking him up-and-down. “Save it, princey. Don’t like just to appease your stupid human ‘conscience’ or whatever.” He turned towards the window and ignored Roman’s half-hearted attempts at denial. Roman let out a long, angry sigh, glaring at the demon’s turned back.
This was going to be a very long trip.
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asscrackcreed · 2 years
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part 2 after the author replied i wasnt sure if i should carry on but with their unapologetic attitude ofc i went through with it
STOP WITH THE KADAR AND MASTURBATING THING ITS FUCKING GROSS WHY DOES HIS BROTHER A N D MOTHER KNOW !!!!!!!’ ENOUGH
omg kadar is 16 and maliks 19 shut the fuck up EWWWWW
ok let me explain it properly this author fetishised kadars teenage hormones why do we keep coming back to kadar wanting to have sex esp if hes a minor its disgusting theyve made a point that u can explore gross things in fiction because yk its fiction and not irl and tbh idgaf because youre telling me you enjoy reading about a minors sexual life? youre telling me you enjoy reading about a brother telling his MINOR brother about HIS sex life? defend incest if u want im not here to change ur mind about incest but if u think that u can just write about minors sexually u are fucking disgusting
a lot of talk about god but none of it relates to the story or being gay so idk not interested
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DES AND EZIO KISSED. WITH TONGUE. AND EZIO INSTIGATED IT?
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chapter 27^ i cant do it anymore its 3am as im typing i’ll finish the rest when i wake up
kadars only personality trait is being horny tf
adha is very religiously strict and thinks altaïr is a godless pig uhm. ok… making adha rude is very uncalled for you couldve chose to use a random woman like…. a stranger but no it had to be canon altaïrs dead ex… and altaïr says ‘i dont know much about islam’ i dont understand why some fanfic authors insist on making altaïr completely atheist, i feel like altaïr wouldn’t be religious tbfh but hed still have islamic norms and values. when we can write characters in a way the original source material doesnt why cant we include cultural and religious aspects? why do ppl try so hard to remove the fundamental aspects of islamic culture. altaïr not knowing islam just drags the story more because if he did then hed understand adha and like idk hed connect with malik more and adhas anger would be justified but here she is being an ass and assuming the worst because…? she could’ve just called him an asshole idk why she dragged religion into this its reminding me of strict religious ppl who hate the new generation so far there hasn’t really been much about the good things of islam
adhas apologising now for assuming the worst. she paints smth for him? doesnt really make sense but alright
if altaïr can honor his mum with a tattoo (which is haram but anyways) he could surely honor his dad by celebrating eid or smth or just praying some time idk the paragraph im reading is about how his grandmas not religious and his dad was a practising muslim but never taught altaïr which ok he died when altaïr was 5 fine but idk the authors very intent on making sure altaïr isnt muslim but personally if he was muslim it’d be interesting because then hed struggle with his faith and himself i mean malik doesnt seem to struggle at all so idk ig everyones different
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excuse me? so we can add black fetishisation to the list as well cuz wtf was that? it doesnt even add to the story its so random and unnecessary?
uhm altaïr and adha fell in love not a lot of depth to their relationship considering this mustve been over the course of days maybe even a few weeks idk just not a lot of time as it is to uh fall in love but shes engaged so theyve left it at that still not a bad plot point ig but it doesnt affect malik as of yet which undermines this plot point but lets see what happens
leo and sofias interactions are cute i like this leo malik and sofia friendship going on
im not gonna comment on any more incest its obvious this author just has a thing for it and theres so many fics that have incest and if i was to really fight that id do it for the other fics too also i wont comment on their writing as a whole anymore the main issue here is the cultural erasure and fetishisation
these do not affect the plot in any way shape or form, yes its an old 2014 fanfic but the author seems to not give a fuck that theyve written gross things. as well as poorly write islamic characters, it feels like a ‘youre either religious or your not’ and writing things like this is harmful! youre telling readers that muslims are either very harsh (like adha was) or very sweet (like maliks mum for being okay that maliks gay) but what about the catholic side of the family? theres no indication that they’re homophobia stems from religion. also ppl think its okay to just make altaïr unaware of his own heritage and faith? yes hes not muslim per say but hes syrian? his father died young but you can choose to write about the family wanting to help altaïr keep his customs alive. its white. its so white. it makes me more upset that the author will only focus on us disliking incest rather than accept that they’re wrong for cultural erasure. youve told hs that he’s syrian and white but just added that he misses his dad. and u cant defend sexualising kadar at all i wont hear anything about that because what u enjoy in fiction is also a reflection of what you enjoy irl. if you think incest is cool you will have a natural interest of it irl theres a reflection of your interests in your writing. if for example i wrote angst you would naturally expect that i like it or have a connection to it in some way, that i enjoy somehow. but i dont really like angst i could write for it but thats from my experience and thought process. someone who writes smut doesnt mean that they’re sexually active but theyve thought about it, they might’ve done some research to it. do u see what im tryna say? you are actively advancing on your interests when you right about them in fiction, you have a connection to it. if you hated smut someone would assume you hated it irl. the logic applies here too, if you dont like incest irl and it grosses you would simply not read incest in fiction because it grosses you out. if you dont like cultural erasure and sexualising minors irl then why tf would u add it to ur fic? why would u think that the boundary fiction would allow that to be okay? and the thing is micro-aggressions back in 2014 were bad and i know that but the author having had feedback and not even acknowledging it in this day and age is disgusting. ppl say they like sass verse, i have to say the plot of it is interesting but there were so many unnecessary aspects that did not contribute or feel nice to read at all. even if someone uses the excuse that they didnt know smth about islam, i as brown muslim you can not dismiss my feelings towards the way they wrote any muslim characters.
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I literally keep paychecks on an open tab on my browser at all times and I’m constantly going back to re read my favorite chapters (15,17,18 are my top 3 tbfh) like dude your writing is phenomenal and the way you write smut and dialogue is just *chefs kiss* and the way you write Levi feels so natural and true to his character like that man has crawled into your soul and made himself at home and it shows through your work !!!! Hope this isn’t weird or awkward, just wanted to tell you how amazing you and your work are !!! ❤���❤️
🥺🥺🥺 you are so kind thank you so much..it makes me so indescribably happy whenever people say that about how I write Levi ahh he certainly has crawled into my soul and lives rent free GJFHFHDJFJ it's not weird or awkward at all!!! I really appreciate you stopping by and sending such a sweet message ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ sending u much love and I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it progesses 🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️
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malyen0retsev · 3 years
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hi sarah!! I finished the grisha trilogy about a week ago and it’s been such a struggle to search up s&b without risking having to see people drag mal through filth so thank you for existing 😭 I liked the series (mostly I just ended up really loving mal and alina both separately and together) though I can’t help but feel like LB really missed with some of the writing/plot points (the darkling’s motivations were especially confusing to me). She’d sometimes add in things that served no purpose whereas when the story could’ve benefitted from a few more sentences just to get a clearer sense of what alina was feeling, there was none. It makes me think that mal probably would’ve been a more well-liked character if the writing was just better (or if the books had dual perspectives instead maybe) What do you think?
Firstly - welcome to the pain of loving Mal TRUST ME IT IS BETTER THAN IT WAS YEARS AGO but you just gotta 'pretend you do not see it' to stay sane tbfh... and secondly, I agree with you tbh anon! What we have to bear in mind is that TGT was Leigh's first book, and then second and third book. They were the books that were her debut series, and thus there definitely were mistakes in them at times, and little statements that you thought were going somewhere that didn't. She was still growing as an author (though I still maintain that as a debut S&B is fantastic, and for me there still is no Grishaverse book that floors me in the same way R&R does).
When it comes to Mal being more liked in the fandom, I don't think it was Leigh's writing (because I think he did come across well, I understood what he was doing when he wasn't being 'perfect' - is called being human and having a human reaction to things - because Mal fundamentally isn't written to be perfect and that's the point). But I do think TGT being written in third person, with some Mal chapters, would have benefitted the story A Lot. And I mean, that's why in the show we actually see his story - because it's far more powerful to show it in its entirety instead of just having bits dropped here and there in dialogue. We see it in his letter, but too many people can't be bothered to read it. Mal is a character you need to actually use reading comprehension to understand, and by only seeing through Alina's eyes, people often can't be bothered to weigh up bias etc etc.
But I mean Leigh herself has said she'll never write in first person again, she likes writing in third because of the depth you can go into and the number of characters you can fully flesh out the emotions of - and she's never said she regrets writing TGT in first person, but I think it's clear that she wishes she had written it in third. Hence in the show we see Mal's story. It's telling the story Leigh wishes she had told, and thus show!Mal absolutely is book!Mal (THE NUMBER OF DIRECT BOOK QUOTES HE HAS) but we just see his storyline. That's the difference. And suddenly, he's become much more liked in the fandom. So this is a convoluted way of saying that yes, Mal absolutely would have benefitted SO MUCH from TGT being written in third person. I still adore seeing him through Alina's eyes though, and how her love for him basically bleeds through every single page of the trilogy.
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allyreads · 5 years
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fic recommendations
this is a list of few of my favourite fics, check my reblogs for even more fics !!
author recommendations here
search the members’ initials to see what i recommend that isn’t on this list!! (kth for kim taehyung, ick for im changkyun, etc.)
fandoms i read: bts, svt, mx, exo, got7 and nct (so far)
disclaimer:
1. this is not a complete list, i’ll keep adding to it.
2. majority of these contain or are smut
3. very angsty so be careful of your heart
got7:
jaebum:
far from home - @red-exo
a light-hearted read that doesn’t use the most complex of vocabulary yet is able to make me feeeeeel all sort ways. although based on a simple concept, the story will definitely hike JB up your bias list!!
jinyoung:
the noisy neighbours - @chickenkooks
mark:
i want desire (a series) - @taexual
who doesn’t love a good mafia AU! series
bts:
seokjin:
currents - @yeoldontknow
one of the most powerful fanfictions ive ever read. all the revelations at the end…i can’t find any other words to describe how powerful it was.
hoseok:
systems of touch - @yeoldontknow
fuelled by love and sexual tension, this story portrays a rather professional side of jung hoseok and a reader through an artistic storyline.
oceans of gold - @junqkook
always had a soft spot for greek mythology (as mentioned below in yoongi’s) the myth of apollo and hyacinth were incorporated perfectly into this fic i’m obsessed.
jungkook:
policeofficer!jungkook - @nothingatallspecialinanyway
inspired by the music video, it’s a simple and hot piece of writing that portrays the AU!possible sexy side of jeon jungkook
oblivion - @softlyjiminie
demon!AU’s are just the best. this has angst too UGH I LOVE.
young wolf - @junqkook
for game of thrones fanatics ;)
forever and a night - @gukyi
a heartbreaking yet lovely werewolf!JK fic
not quite lovers - @junqkook
a hot ass fic, as expected from yara. in this fic the reader is the CEO rather than the guy. it was a refreshing change of perspective
rottenfolk - @junqkook
faerie jk is rotten alright
after dark - @seokoloqy
the sea & the storm - @jamaisjoons
P E R F E C T I O N honestly. so well written and so well thought out and the concept isn’t like any other im so in love
the turing test - @fortunexkookie
there are so many kook stories that i adore and this is one of them that i read so far. it’s another multi-chapter android!jungkoo; and recommend this story so much it’s so carefully crafted.
the monogamy monologues - @kpopfanfictrash
comedy gold, honestly. it’s so funny and so romantic and an amazing late-night read where you get lost in jungkook’s eyes through the form of words. 
rattled - @taehyungforreal
i know the series just started but i can’t help but fall for single dad!JK and i can’t wait to see how the series progresses
namjoon:
legacy - @mintjoonlep
intro: for her - @jamaisjoons
yoongi:
upgrade - @gukgalore
sorry tae, but i think yoongi has won here in this one
1. hello paradise my name is
2. mint
3. aidoneus, my love - @seokoloqy
i’m a sucker for greek mythology so it’s natural that this whole hades!AU series has got to be one of my favourite yoongi fics
heart haunting - @jamaisjoons
taehyung:
the morning after - @softlyjiminie
i just realised i didn’t list any tae fics when i first created this, but i found one!! this is a short, poetic angst / smut written in a genre i can never ever get bored of: the powerful, lingering feelings for an ex lover
1-800-music-street - @httpjeon
buzzed - @ junqkook
warm - @ httpjeon
i’m seeing a pattern in these fics...roommate!taehyung. there’s something so simple and sweet about this concept. gives me hope that love (and sex) can be exciting even in a domestic setting.
everythingoes - @jamaisjoons
so. fucking. good. OH MY GOD. this fic shook me to the core. unrequited love! angst! new found love! all my fucking favourites i love this fic pls go read it i don’t care if it’s 24k words and it’s 3am just go read it ok thanks bye.
taboo - @jhspetitegf
professor!taehyung oops
jimin:
lovebug - @ httpjeon
rockin’ the coffin - @ junqkook
HOT DAMN (it’s all i can say tbfh)
casual clothes - @httpjeon
faded love - @jamaisjoons
my all time fave genre: angst on divorcées / exes who still love each other. this piece was written to perfection. *chef’s kiss*
bloom - @ jamaisjoons
similar to seungcheol’s fic (listed below), this is also about the hanahaki disease and unrequited love. (my favourite!) i sound like a sadist but i promise i’m not
ot7:
eternal orbit - @interludemoonchild
stumbled across this and spent hours reading this series. every single second was worth it. i love the development of character and relationships between each of them. can’t wait for the next few chapters.
nct:
ten:
mine - @whereisten
demon!ten is seriously what i live for. such a hot, sexy fic i loved it. can’t really say much because you’ve got to read it to truly understand just how one demon can really rid you of your sanity.
lucas:
lovestruck!lucas - @warmau
exo:
baekhyun:
nothing like us - @ohh-baekhyun
enough - @kpopfanfictrash
a heart-clenching, emotional angst that potrayed the falling out of and falling back in love perfectly. alongside that came sensual smut to emphasise the connection AU!baekhyun had with the reader. it’s a lovely piece, everyone should check it out.
behave - @elle-lowriting
dom!baekhyun is just… wow. who knew a five letter, authoratative word could have such an effect. i know, me neither. catch a glimpse of baek’s dominance with this fic!!
light - @writing-exo-things
an extremely creative take on fanfictions, created based off exo’s latest demonic-esque concept. intriguing storylines such as this are then well planned out such as this one right here ^ i really recommend reading a few of her/his works. here’s the masterlist for the whole x-ėxø series. it’s a wonderful concept.
mister - @angstyexo
chen:
i hate you - @soobadnoonecanstopher
similar to far from home (JB’s fic), this piece is based on a rather common idea. this one was an enemies to lovers AU. it’s fun to read a tension-filled relationship that is soon resolved by unexpected ways. in short, this was a blithe and beguiling story.
saudade - @fairyyeols​
a slightly heartbreaking but lovely mixture of angst and fluff
chanyeol:
the dress - @thotantics
black tie - @yeoldontknow
my universe - @sehunniiie
the etymology of us - @8bityeol
bodyguard - @optimizche
junmyeon/suho:
automatic - @exosmutxoxo
( i can’t find the link for this :((( )
jongin/kai:
reunited wrongly - @causekpop
heaven - @fairyyeols
seventeen:
jun:
ashes - @taexual
i knew i had to add this to the list right away after reading it. overall, this is a piece that portrays angst and a deteriorating relationship perfectly.
heat - @guccisvt
if u enjoy werewolf!AU’s and hot sexual tension like i weirdly do, this fic is for you. a little lengthy, but worth every word.
mingyu:
but he didn’t - @pasteluji
i clearly have a thing for angst these days but this fic really crushed my heart. managed to portray everything so well: the situation itself and the perspective of BOTH characters I LOVE IT
seungcheol:
what you can’t have - @guccisvt
unrequited love with a twist
monsta x:
hyungwon:
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J/G/M writer here! Aaaah thanks for the encouragement! You just gave me some extra feelings because despite Jon being the most monstrous out of the three of them, both Gerry and Martin have a much firmer grasp on this game of power and fears they find themselves involved in right now... I started writing the first chapter! May I link you once it's done? (And I like... Get over the stage fright? I'm nothing if not a Lonely avatar)
jon's always grasping for information despite being the avatar of the eye and it makes me laugh and breaks my heart at the same time tbfh. and the eye picked possibly the worst person (excluding tim 😔) to bring back in this scenario, which i love btw, like ya u sure showed jon ur Power™.... by bringing back probably the best person to throw a wrench in ur plans besides Granny C4 herself sjgkvksl god bless, i'm excited for this fic.
ABSOLUTELY plz link it, i'd love to read it so much gjfhfjgh. 💚💚💚 lonely avatars unite for the sake of sharing content
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mala-sadas · 4 years
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writing tag game
Tagged by @motherkarizma! Thank you, lovely ♥
fandoms:
I’ve been writing Pokémon Special/Adventures fic for a while, but I recently started writing MCU fic as well!
tropes:
as in which ones I’ve written frequently? school kid shenanigans, found family bonding, Dad!Green, canon compliant stuff, light/fluffy romance, lots of friendship fics, and uh...I wrote an amnesia fic once? I don’t write a lot of tropey stuff tbfh
number of fics:
I have 28 published fics on Ao3, as well as a handful of drabbles and AU prologues that never made it up there. Maybe someday.
fic I spent the most time on:
Unsurprisingly, it’s The Phantom of the Musical! It took me about a year to finish the first draft, and due to a combination of less free time, a slow beta, and lack of motivation, it took over a year to edit and post it after that.
fic I spent the least time on:
I’m gonna have to say Comfy for this one. Some of my earlier, shorter fics might’ve taken less time because a) they’re shorter and b) I wasn’t as meticulous with editing, but I don’t remember exactly how much time I spent writing them, and I also had to spend time coming up with a basic idea for the plot. Comfy, though? The idea just popped into my head as I was falling asleep and I got up and started writing it almost immediately. 3 hours writing, 1 hour editing, and it was posted the same day I came up with the idea.
longest fic:
Also The Phantom of The Musical - it’s 91k words long, and 112k if you include The Musical Archives, which is a collection of side stories and deleted scenes from the main fic (that by itself is my second longest fic).
shortest fic:
A New Family, at only 693 words - but to be fair, it’s basically just a prologue to my Oak Family series.
most hits/kudos/comment threads/bookmarks:
Okay, so my first (and longest) MCU fic, First Impression, wins in all of these categories except one. So in the interest of not being repetitive, I’ll share the second or third highest-ranking fic in each category.
hits:
Comfy - 1,606 hits, the highest for a one-shot and second highest overall. It’s also second highest in kudos and bookmarks. why do you guys like this one so much I literally wrote it in three hours please
kudos:
Baking Grace - 60 kudos, the highest among my Pokéspe fics. It’s 6 chapters of CommonerShipping fluff, and honestly I still think it’s one of my best works.
comment threads:
The Phantom of the Musical - 42 comment threads across 30 chapters. I gotta give a shout-out to @cap-cavern for leaving a comment on every chapter of this fic, I appreciate every single one of them ♥
bookmarks:
Weather or Not (You’ll Be There) - 14 bookmarks. I don’t have much to say about it, it’s just a fun little Irondad one-shot.
total word count:
221,448! And no one but me will want to read all of them.
fic you want to rewrite/expand on:
I don’t think there’s anything that I really want to rewrite or expand, but I do want to write more in the Oak Family series. 
share a bit of a WIP or a story idea you’re planning on:
Well since I’ve been thinking so much about First Impression lately, here’s an excerpt from an upcoming chapter of that:
As Scott made to open the driver’s door, Tony began to feel the anger draining out of him, leaving a wave of fatigue in its wake. Sitting down suddenly sounded so appealing. He pushed Scott away from the door, towards the rear of the car. “Nuh-uh. Front seat’s mine. I have seniority.”
Scott glared at Tony. “Does that really matter right now?”
“It always matters,” Tony replied, pulling the driver’s door open.
Wisely, Scott decided that the matter wasn’t worth having another argument over, though he kept glaring at Tony even after he sat down in the front seat. He had a little more difficulty getting his door open than Tony did; whatever energy blast that got the car into this condition probably jammed the door. After a few sharp yanks on the handle, Scott finally succeeded in opening the rear door. He looked into the backseat and swore.
“Shit. There’s a kid in here!”
tagging:
@friendlyneighborhoodsecretary @reachingforaspark @saieras @vexx-ation @cap-cavern @mythgirlimagines 
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moonfirerainbow · 5 years
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OKAY I have avoided talking about/reblogging/tagging or hinting at any spoilers in all the leaked clips because I know how much I hate spoilers but I cannot!! Stay quiet!! Anymore!! I have tagged this as a spoiler post because I can't hold it in anymore!
First:
WHAT THE FUCK ANDRES MOSCATTO DO NOT FUCK WITH MY EMOTIONS.
Okay. So. The R +
If it isn't an E, the only other thing I can think of is a B for Bev. Here is why.
We have the clip of that little joking kiss at the restaurant, right? And to me, Richie is not seriously moving in for it. Like, it looks completely like how a lot of us have thought of the Richie and Bev dynamic. They just fuck around a lot and love to pull shit like that. BUT. Since this is a BIG FUCKING MOVIE. I would not put it past these people to make it that Richie liked Bev the whole time, and that's why he was not as nice to her in chapter 1.
However, if they no homo this, they are going to get so much fucking heat. Maybe some people will think this won't have anything to do with it, but Tyrus just went canon. Literally everything with LGBT+ subtext will now be under that critical eye with the expectations of following through. And okay, yeah, the homophobes/indifferent hets can and will overlook it, but hey there are too many of us to let it go quietly. So many people will make it into a huge deal. Especially if there is a fuck ton more subtext/obvious content (like I truly believe there will be) supporting Eddie + Richie. My sister also pointed out that having this Reddie relationship become canon would wrap up the movie well with the Adrian Mellon content we are also getting. Which, let's be honest, I think a lot of us are still surprised is being kept in this movie. I seriously thought they would pull something else and do everything they could to not have the Adrian Mellon stuff.
So tbfh, if that letter is anything other than an E, that's bad/lazy writing with no follow through, because literally nothing else makes sense.
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spicyraba-neku · 5 years
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okay, but have you the letter fans considered
a twewy and the letter crossover bc i love these
neku in isabella santos' place being a disgruntled real estate agent
Joshua being luke wright
Rhyme is,,ironically, rebecca???
Mr. H hilariously becomes joshua's hannah wright bc they wanted to evade taxes so they decided to get married legally
Zach is beat, holy fuck, can u imagine?
Any of the reapers could be johannes tbfh
Rose Cooper being Shiki Misaki bc why not right
No actual murder (in the letter's events anyway,,,) happens bc joshua is still that composer god but he got custody over luxborne instead of shibuya
Shiki and neku are childhood buddies that came from japan
Eri's takako but shes a nice ghost hanging around, fucking with people for fun. In this case, she's named Eli bc american translations, i guess???
I just love the thought of rhyme being a teacher okay, shed fit in rebecca's role
I think I want ashton untouched bc can u imagine him getting a crush on our local spicy tuna roll??? I sure can
Holy fuvk thats a crack ship isnt it??
holy shit thats amazing
Should i draw fanart
I should draw fanart
But really if ashton was anyone in the twewy cast itd be either sho or....uzuki?
Kariya's the johanne bc i just think its hilairous, okay? Otherwise it could be megumi, his idol worship of joshua certainly fit. Not johannes, obviously, but yeah.
Konishi as marianne could you imagine
So neku is doing his job as usual, trying to save up for a super expensive art college with shiki who wants to become a seamstress
And then the ermengarde mansion thing happens, sold to joshua for some reason (he imprinted the minds of neku and shiki, an interesting idea popping up in his mind...)
Joshua, the little shit, makes neku see the UG bc Eri hangs around there a lot, bugging players and generally being a nuisance
Neku and shiki are like, super affected by josh's meddling and get fainting spells. The day of the open house and the duo are like, bombarded with visions of...stuff. things. Yay.
Neku thinks the mansion is haunted, shiki's reserving judgement, but the rest of them think theyre crazy. So they try to investigate
And then the chapter of isabella's in the office?? Yeah, they die there,
And they end up in luxborne's UG. Oh no
Most of their missions tend to be over at the mansion WHICH MIGHT THEY ADD IS A GOOD FINE HOUR AND A HALF AWAY. JOSH, YOU EVIL LITTLE SHIT.
Their week is spent trying to uncover the mysteries of luxborne mansion while trying to convince their friends that yes, they are alive, please calm the fuck down. Well no theyre technically dead BUT THATS NOT THE POINT, BEAT, WE CAN STILL HEAR YOU TALKING SHIT ABOUT US GODDAMMIT STOP CONVERSING AS IF WE ARENT IN THE ROOM.
The drama over the isabella/ashton/rebecca thing is never there bc??? Neku??? Sho/Uzuki??? Rhyme??? Never going to fit.
Instead sanae thinks this neku person might be good for joshua so he constantly, CONSTANTLY tries to set them up which drives neku up the wall. My spicy boi cant seem to catcha break, can he?
Shiki is kiterally the most chill person on earth and is okay with this. She gets into debates with neku about the advantages of living in the UG never having to pay wages for living, because effectively, they are DEAD. They dont NEED to pay taxes.
Neku is just beinf a stubborn shit. No question
Meanwhile shiki makes nice with Eri/Eli and nothing is ever the same again
Luxborne turns into a fashion craze when the two mentioned above combine forces, force Neku to run errands and make a lot of luxborne local brands popular.
Joshua doesnt turn them into reapers but doesnt let them live either
Luxborne UG operates differently from Shibuya. Im putting the headcanon that every area with a UG operates with its own sets of rules, systems, and mechanics
So like, luxbornes game is a race. U have to complete the most missions before ur granted a pass, hence why theres only one pair winner. Missions arent just in the mail, theyre probably the little detours too, but none of the players are told this.
Because shiki (and with some persuasion from neku) is gung-ho about it, they end up being the winners of the game EVEN THOUGH THEY WERENT BEING SERIOUS. No one has ever made joshua laugh as hard as these two have. He asks them if they want to revive as humans or if they want to ascend to reaperhood.
Before shiki says reaperhood, neku punches this sunnuvabitch bc hello??? Shiki??? This guy MURDERED us, or did you forget??? And asks for like, a year with their friends and fam. Since, obvsly, theyre the winners, joshua grants this wish
Okay so shibuya has reaper creeper, but luxborne, being inherently western in culture, use...Ouija boards. Im not kidding.
The scary things that happen in ouija boards are probably just frustrated players trying to write a coherent sentence while a timer ticks away at their hands giving them too much pressure that they flip the fuck out and psych the lights to burn out and explode. It is now tradition to freak those who use the ouija boards,
Players who have used the ouija board now are suitably enraged and partly amused bc oh, they get it now.
Wow im definitely going ona tangent here, i love twewy and the letter okay dont sue me for this
Would @yangyangmobile even want to see this im literally spouting bullshit right now
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Hey! I really love Bloodsport and it's exciting to see a figure skating au, so first off, thank you so much for all your hard work writing and drawing it!!! The drawings are gorgeous btw. I was wondering what your fancasts for the skaters were since you mentioned Mikhail Kolyada for Andrew. I think you might have put it somewhere before??? but I can't seem to find it so I'd thought I'd ask. I was just watching his short program from the 2017 Cup of China, which is so amazing.
Hey hey hey! thank you so much!!!!!!! that means a lot to me! Bloodsport is literally my baby. I was just sitting and writing Cracker Dust, then quickly hopped back to BS to fucking write chapter 8. I’m pathetically in love with this world lol!!!! 
So my fancasts!!!! okay. So, I had a long post detailing why I chose the skaters to pair with the characters. Unfortunately, that was deleted when my account was. However, heres a short summary!
Mikhail Kolyada IS my Andrew as a skater. And omfg. His short program from the 2017 Cup of China is literally the EXACT REASON WHY I MADE THAT DECISION. I am literally making that Andrew’s short lol! For many reasons, which will become more clear as the fic goes on. 
Nathan Chen is my Neil - for many reasons. As a skater, he’s both impressive and inconsistent. You can see his growth from just this year, to the last. When he jumps he may have a wonky landing, but he fucking holds on. And that is very much how I see Neil. Pushing the boundaries and climbing in the ranks. He’s still very much a young skater and it shows. but I literally cannot find anyone more perfect to fit Neil than Nathan. Also, his program Nemesis is my fucking everything and it is Neil’s short. 
Yuzuru Hanyu is Riko - fucking obviously. I mean, I dont think there should be much explanation for that. He’s polished, he’s experienced, his technique is stunning, but he still has his slip ups. I know many dont think him and Nathan can compare, but I honestly think those that believe so are sorely mistaken. Nathan may be inconsistant, his artistry may lack, but their styles are VERY different and I’m sorry, but Nathan’s spins rival that of Patrick Chan’s imo. Anyway, back to Yuzuru. He’s also quite cocky lol. So I think in many ways, he’s perfect for Riko (in the sense of skating and on ice presence). 
Javier Fernandez as Kevin. What a fun fucking skater. I’m not saying that kevin isnt fun - but like. He’s not. However, I cant find anyone to fit Kevin better than Javier. At first, i was going to point him towards Evan Lysacek
Patrick Chan as Jean Moreau. I think it fits perfectly tbfh. Gorgeous skater, fluid, amazing presence, subdued, it fits. 
The shibsibs for dan and matt. I mean, I know they're siblings and obviously, because of that, their dances are different. However, they have an energy that i LOVE. Also I mean, come on.  
Karen Chen is my Renee. Small, spunky, subdued, out of this fucking world. She also choreographs a lot of her programs. 
Allison and Seth I’ve always had a hard time thinking of. If anyone has any ideas, let me know! For now, I have them as Tatiana Volosozhar and Maxim Trankov but that is subject to change. I also want to find someone that would match Allison as a single skater very well. because in bloodsport, she was a single lady before she teamed with seth after an injury. So, any ideas shoot em at me!
Nicky is Adam Rippon - the entire reason why I even started this fucking fic, deadass. Like?! Do I need to explain?!?!?!?!???!? NO. I DONT. 
That’s all I have so far! OH I ALSO HAVE JEREMY AS KEEGAN MESSING! because come. the fuck. ON OF COURSE I DO. I still have to think of Alvarez and Laila, but yeah! Hope this helps and if anyone has suggestions, send em my way!
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