#shoot now I wanna reread again

[supnerds]

Just read all of Raeliana in like three days because I remembered you posting about it a while back. These two morons deserve each other. I was NOT warned about how funny it would be. IDK how she expected him to not fall for her everyone knows that love interests have the type "woman with the Audacity" and then she just rolls up and pretends to be engaged to the King's younger brother. Iconic. Thank you for such a fabulous recommendation

Hdjshsjkslsk this ask made me laugh I loved every part of it

I’m so glad you loved it!! Yeah @slagathorius-maximus dragged me into it and I was obsessed!!

“these two morons deserve each other” you’re so RIGHT and yes I 100% agree with this accurate description I love their relationship so much

truly a funny story I love stories with humor it’s part of what makes a story great

I am so happy you read raeliana!! One of my all time favorites and I subconsciously compare all other romance webtoons to now. Also I am right there with you on the three days thing - I have done that with the majority of webtoons I’ve read

ps - did you know there’s an anime now? :)

[vivvangel]

could u do when enha sees u trying to reach smtg on top of tha shelf ( short reader ) tysmmm and I love ur content

viv's note 💌: this is such a cute ask, thank u!! tried keeping it gender neutral. girlies who read dork diaries raise your hand also nikis scenario is a bit diff ig ☝🏻 ✧ warnings: very small and precise scenarios tbh. enha x short reader, teasing, use of nicknames and swearing. fluff!

tiny | enhypen reaction to their short s/o trying to reach something on top of the shelf !

LEE HEESEUNG (♡⁠)

"what are you doing, baby?" he says, a smirk spreading on his lips when he sees you not being able to reach the top shelf. "just tryna-" you pause, tiptoing to reach it, but no avail. "just trying to grab my mug, hee" you turn around, pouting — heeseung thinks you're absolutely adorable, coming towards you and patting your head, grabbing the mug with ease, you could never. "here you go," he smiles softly, why was your boyfriend such a giant? you weren't short, he's just too tall! really.

PARK JONGSEONG (♡⁠)

from the bedroom, jay heard you screaming, "JAAAAAYY" — him frantically running to your voice, "what's wrong?, oh my god" jay's eyes scan the room for a second, "love, what's wrong?" he asks softly. you looked at him, as you stood in front of the bookshelf, with your hands on your hip. cute, jay thinks, walking to you. "my majesty, how can i help you?" he says sarcastically and you point to the fourth shelf, "dork diaries, i wanna reread.. dork diaries" you say, your voice trailing off into a mere whisper by the end of it. "goodness sake, love" he eyerolled, grabbing it for you.

SIM JAEYUN (♡⁠)

baking with jake, what could ever go wrong? nothing, except the fact you couldn't reach a damn thing. "i swear in another life, ill be born as a 7 foot nba player, for fucks sake" you huff, as a result of being unable to grab the sugar, as you continue mixing the cupcake batter to achieve a more liquid state. "yeah right, you'd still be a short dork" jake chuckles, shooting you a playful glance as he grabbed the sugar from the shelf, sliding it on the counter to you. "hey, you aren't that tall yourself, mr sim" you taunt, making him grin. "taller than the you, aren't i?" — "oh, shut up yunie"

PARK SUNGHOON (♡⁠)

the front door of your shared apartment flung open, sunghoon glancing at the door before his eyes went back on the game he was playing on the tv. "you home already?" he asks, glancing at you once again as you come in with your shopping bags, putting them down on the kitchen counter. "you will not believe what happened!" you say, sunghoon noting a frustrated tone in your voice. he looks behind, "mhm, tell me about it" and looks back at the game. "i was at the store, and i was struggling to grab stuff from the shelves and the worker there thought i was a fucking child, can you believe that?" you scoff, it was completely unbelievable to you that they'd think that — not that unbelievable to your boyfriend, sunghoon, who literally always towered over you. he quietly chuckles — "stop laughing at my misery, hoon!"

KIM SEONWOO (♡⁠)

"baby, i wanna do that big boy trend" you voiced out, sitting up on the sofa. "big boy trend? isn't that dead already?" sunoo says skeptically, side eyeing you. you whine out a please, and he agrees — "but cutie, compared to you, i'm like.. actually big, you couldn't even grab the bowl—" he says, biting his lip to hide the wheeze that would come out if he didn't, "i'm not short!" — "yeah, princess, whatever you say. now come here!"

YANG JUNGWON (♡⁠)

"wonie, i have something extremely serious to talk about" you lowly say, making jungwon look at you, narrowing his eyes. "serious, huh? what's up?" he says, his voice laced with concern. "i think.. i think i'm too short for you" — what? jungwon starts laughing, how does he have the audacity to laugh! "why are you laughing, won?" you question him, crossing your arms. "baby, you're so tiny and cute, i wanna put you in my pocket. -- oh? is this about you not being able to grab my tie from that box earlier?" he chuckles, and you nod. "you're so short, but you're cute so it's fine" — "so, you think i'm short?" — "i think you're cute, y/n"

NISHIMURA RIKI (♡⁠)

having a boyfriend so tall, makes you look like a little gremlin beside him (his words, not mine!) "riki, i'm literally not that short, you're just—" you tiptoe, trying to get the childhood photo of you out of his hands, you don't even get to finish your sentence, niki cutting you off. "i'm just too tall" he mimics your tone, bursting out in laughter, ruffling your hair. "hey! i wasn't done!" you pout, but he kisses it away.

[roseyrays]

# ENHYPEN SMAU RECS 💖

# RIKI

# more time with you! — by @yenqa, it’s very CUTE and the ANGST is scrumptious :))

# love dive — by @tzyuki, RIKIY/N ARE SO CUTE

# love is (not) easy! — by @kynrki, riki smau, THE ANGST RHAHAHA MADE ME CRY BUT I LOVE IT

# shoot! — by @amakumos, again ADORABLE and THE FLUFF (rikiy/n is what i want in an relationship), can’t believe you can find the love of your life in genshin

# cupid’s corner — by @amakumos, ANOTHER GREAT SMAU, ITS JUST SO CUTE & RIKIY/N MAKES ME WANNA JUMP OFF A BRIDGE

# trial and error — by @kyyuri, AGHHHH, again rikiy/n>>the world

# beat the allegations — by @woonierkiz (aka my mutual), it only has two chapters for now BUT AHHHHHHHHH

# don’t date my brother — by @mosinterlude , LOVED HOW YOU ADDED KONON AND THE ANGST 🤌🤌, also love the fact that it has some idol’s sisters (and brother) <33

# soulmate tracker — by @son4taa, i remember reading this a while back but forgot about it im sorry 😭😭, ITS VERY GOOD THOUGH

# 💌 c u p i d 💘 — by @roseyrays (aka me!), yes this is self promoting 🤌🤌

# ( 尤も ) natural — by @ifearjwn, NOT THE PADDLE BOARD, y/n simps 🫵😁, love u riki, can’t wait for more chapters!

# oh, ni-ki you’re so fine! — by @aernx ,made by mutual! ,sooha jumpscare 😟, NI-KI SO CUTE

# JUNGWON

# stuck by glue — by @yyunari, WINX CLUB AU!, me when y/nwon 💖💖

# mint chocolate shirt — by @wonieleles, i love me some one-sided rivalry, won just stop being mean and kiss her already 🙄

# idol crush! — by @enhas-bestie, I WANT TO PUNCH THE ANTIS SO BAD

# whats after like?! — by @haew0nz, i forgot about what happened 😭, will reread but ik it’s good!!

# cat hotline ♡ — by @faelyncore, CATS AND LOVE=FAV

# wr⩇ng r⩇⩇m! — by @soov, SO CUTE SHSJSJSJSJ

# our beloved leaders — by @tzyuki, yes i just binged the whole smau today, f that zira anti fr, Y/NWON 😔😔🩷🩷

# JUNGWON & RIKI

# pick me! — by @urszn, YUUURRRRR

# SUNOO

(i only read one 😭 please recommend me some)

# ykwim? — by @astrae4, still only has a few chapters but i love it already 💖💖

# SUNGHOON

(i only read one 😭 please recommend me some)

# vlive confession — by @starjaeyun, ITS JUST SO AHH, waiting for more chapters 💖💖

# JAKE

# paper rings — by @117luv, the kids are adorable ❤️❤️, when he changed his user 💀

# dad diaries — by @117luv, spinoff of paper rings, cute ☹️❤️❤️

# hey prez!! ✰ — by @yeeunjia, on hiatus but really good ❤️

# rink of love — by @pagesofmiracles, so cute 😭😭🩷🩷

# JAY

unfortunately didn’t read a jay one yet 🫠 will read after i’m done with this

# HEESEUNG

# dear, heeseung — by @jungwnies, will reread ❤️, it’s cute too

# twitter sucks! — by @filmbyjy, the comedy here LMAO, riki in this is literally me

# curious cat — by @heerocks, AHHHH 💖

# JUST ADDED

# don’t date my brother — by @mosinterlude, LOVED HOW YOU ADDED KONON AND THE ANGST 🤌🤌, also love the fact that it has some idol’s sisters (and brother) <33

# soulmate tracker — by @son4taa, i remember reading this a while back but forgot about it im sorry 😭😭, ITS VERY GOOD THOUGH

# rink of love — by @pagesofmiracles, so cute 😭😭🩷🩷

# our beloved leaders — by @tzyuki, yes i just binged the whole smau today, f that zira anti fr, Y/NWON 😔😔🩷🩷

# 💌 c u p i d 💘 — by @roseyrays (aka me!), yes this is self promoting 🤌🤌

# ( 尤も ) natural — by @ifearjwn, NOT THE PADDLE BOARD, y/n simps 🫵😁, love u riki, can’t wait for more chapters!

# oh, ni-ki you’re so fine! — by @aernx ,made by mutual! ,sooha jumpscare 😟, NI-KI SO CUTE

[webslingingslasher]

heyyy I was just wondering WHAT THE HELL DO YOU PUT IN THIS FRAT!PETER FICS BC I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT TROUBLE AND PETER! I just melt for them together😭😩❤️

I swear when I'm about to fall sleep he just pops into my head and HAVE to grab my phone to reread some of them. Your writing is just soooo god and I wanted to thank you for creating such a work of art🥵🥵🥵

Also I can't stop thinking about frat!peter being jealous like finding a guy talking who hooked up with trouble and overthinking how different they are from each other? and if the ex fling keeps trying to talk with trouble in a friendly way, he would play it cool? i feel like he would look at them talking and he knows about what happen between them but is kinda nervous? idk

I LOVED BRUJA THANK YOU SO MUCH I HAVEN'T ENJOY READING LIKE THIS IN SOOO LONG🥹🥹🥹

first, peter and trouble are crack. second, thank you very much for enjoying!!!

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peter knows what it looks like to awkwardly chat with an old hookup, he’s done it more than a few times. so, when he watches your eyes dance around the room while you politely laugh in response to the guy in front of you, he just knows.

he’s taller than peter, and he’s not one to be self conscious about his height, but he might now. and he’s got bigger biceps, peter’s spider-man and doesn’t have the build this guy does.

and he’s got nice hair. really nice hair. the kind of hair he knows you love. it’s like peters, but longer and a bit more curly. peter pats the hair on the back of his neck, he’s been growing it a little longer, but apparently not enough.

in a desperate attempt to keep your attention on him tonight, he takes his hat off to throw it on top of the fridge. you always beg him to take it off, it’ll work. he’s sure of it.

it doesn’t. you’re unable to stand still, if he was projecting, he’d say you went from awkward to uncomfortable. peter’s not going to be the guy to barge in, but he takes a step forward, just in case.

it’s like you can feel him, your eyes shoot to his across the room. no words are said or mouthed, but your eyes said enough. ‘help.’ its all he needs.

peter cuts the guy right off, slinging an arm low around your waist. a kiss to your temple, ‘hi, trouble.’ you relax into his touch, you hold on tight to his arm. ‘have you met tanner?’

he hasn’t, and he really doesn’t care to. it looks like tanner doesn’t either, they’re both sizing each other up. peter’s putting on a brave face, but he knows tanner's thinking he’s no competition, and peter can’t help but feel the same.

still, he throws a hand out. ‘sup, man. i’m parker.’ tanner shakes it, ‘sup.’ peter holds his hand a bit too tight, he’s trying to subtly prove that even if he was smaller, he could kick his ass if needed.

tanner asked peter how he knew you, he had to bite his tongue on the disrespect. he knew exactly how peter knew you, his possessive hold tells it all. ‘i’m her boyfriend.’

you dig your nails into his arm, you were caught off guard with the statement. he said it like it was obvious, tanner smirked. ‘ah, lucky man.’ peter really doesn’t like his face.

‘yup. sure am.’ you nudge back against him, peter takes it as a hint to get out of there. he couldn’t agree more. ‘wanna get a drink?’ you nod quick, 'yes, please.'

your 'boyfriend' made a small show of spinning you in his hold, you laughed at the twirl and balanced yourself on his shoulders. 'nice seeing you again,' you forgot who you were with for a second.

'you too, tanner! have a good night.' peter nudged your lower back to get you walking, you didn't make it four steps until you were pulled in for a bruising kiss. every thought melted away, there was only one person on your mind.

'peter,' it puffed out, just like your lips.

'trouble,' he said it like a greeting. you shook your head, leaning in for another, you were lucky tonight, he supplied.

'thanks, boyfriend.'

'that was a typo.'

you scoff. 'no it wasn't, that was you acting like you have one foot up so you don't feel as threatened.'

the choice of words make his skin crawl. peter knows it's not exclusive, exclusive. but he at least thought you both were on a similar page, one that didn't include saying 'so you don't feel as threatened.'

'what the fuck is that supposed to mean, trouble? so i don't feel as threatened? i was doing you a favor, but feel free to go entertain whoever you want, i'll do the same.'

peter's sudden aggression had your head spinning, you tried to grab onto his arm before he left you entirely. 'did i say the wrong thing? i didn't mean to say the wrong thing!'

'i didn't feel threatened until you said i should be. i just really don't like being reminded that i'm a choice you can change your mind on at any time, it's not a good feeling.'

sometimes when he says something to that effect, you want to tell him he could do something about it. sometimes, you let it go and remind him you're not looking for anyone else, if you were, you would've stopped putting up with his shit ages ago.

this is one of the times you put his fears at bay.

'look, peter, that guy, tanner? he's all talk, he seems like some cool guy but he really kind of sucks. in the least commitive way possible, boyfriend, there are no threats.'

'you keep talking about threats.'

'cause you have none!' you exhale deeply, 'i don't like anyone else, okay? and talking to other guys makes me wanna bash my head into a brick wall.'

'you talking to other guys also makes me want to bash my head into a brick wall.'

you grin and smooth out a wrinkle on peter's shirt. 'good, we're on the same page, then.'

peter throws an arm around your shoulder while he guides you to the kitchen.

'i'll deny it if you say anything, but i quite like reading at the same pace as you, trouble.'

[shatcey]

Why does it have to be him?

He was already a love rival in Hideyoshi's route. And it was so sad and painful… I think one of the reasons I don't reread Hideyoshi's route is because I don't wanna go through it again.

Yes, Mai used to be called Ichiko…. What can I say… at the time of choosing her name, I only knew that name)

And now again in the Kicho's route!

You are merciless!

I expect it to be Motonari. They're at least somewhere nearby. But why Mitsu?

Do you think it's funny to make relatives fight over a girl? Literally shooting at each other? Do you think it's funny to make this perfect man suffer? I don't think so! Yes, I was very happy to have the opportunity to see him more often than usual, but not at that cost! Mutsu, honey, I love you! And despite how sweet and wonderful your cousin is, I still prefer you!

Now that I think about it… Ieyasu was a love rival in the Masamune AND Keiji routes… So this is not something uncommon…

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[wulvert]

What kind of powers do vampires have in Paperteath? Or is that too spoilery? Also I just discovered Paperteath and I'm absolutly loving it. It's quickly become one of my favorite webtoons (up there with The Last Dimension and Nevermore). I've reread it at least 3 times so far.

hii!! thank you so much omg im rly glad you like paperteeth- ive been feeling a little insecure abt it lately ahah.

ive made a few posts about this but i cant find them without scrollimg back like 50 pages on my blog & i dont wanna do that 🤧 so ill make a new one and actually tag it this time

so for default powers they dont have that many other than regenerating, nothing can kill them aside from beheading, fire & a wooden stake to the heart, so everything else just heals, like if you chop their arm off or shoot them in the head itll be fine again fairly quickly. as long as its none of those three things (the sun sets them on fire so im counting it as fire but i guess also the sun) (but if u dunk them in water fast enough theyll be okay) theyll recover.

but the way these vampires work is that they kinda evolve/adapt over time to their surroundings! if a vampire is starving consistently over a long period of time theyll get features that make catching and eating people easier like claws more teeth etc- & these traits can be passed down to vampires turned by those vampires so some vampires are a little different than others. some of these things are now present in the majority of vampires like hibernating in winter. when ye olden vampires got too cold (they have no body heat they can only get warmth from other warm stuff. like. human blood. idk.) and froze over in winter one too many times theyll have just started hibernating- (but vampires in places with no cold season rnt affected by that ofc & now that a lot of vampires have heating the sleepiness in winter is just inconvenient. u try take a 10 min nap and wake up months later)

so cool stuff like turning into a bat is usually exclusive to really really old vampires . like. draculas. plural.

so yeah they mostly just have weaknesses which makes up for the very hard to kill thing. theyre scared of garlic. crucifixes & silver burns & they get stuck in a coffin if a rose is on their door. (vampires who were buried in the week between dying and coming back often want to sleep in a coffin but if they werent it doesnt apply)

I could go on for 50 years abt how they work so i will stop!!!

[wolverineluvr]

Content Warning ⛈️: First time writing smut. Fluff and smut. Vaginal penetration, fingering, unprotected sex(I forgot condoms existed), bleeding from an injury. Reader is referred to as "girl" once or twice. Fem bodied reader! Not proofread (I can't reread my own works I'm too embarrassed)

Summary🔎: When some random guy basically crash landed in your back yard, you certainly weren't expecting this.

Ft. Fallen angel Toji

Words: 2k

After a crash comes from your backyard, it's reasonable to say that you were pretty concerned. It woke you up at like, 3am! You want to beat whatever caused that's ass! But, you're still scared.

You groan, it woke your cat too! Now the little fucker's running around. You sigh, getting out of bed. "Calm down you lil' rat." You say, as you pick up your cat, Ash. You pet and kiss his head but he just struggles to get out of your arms, so you set him back down. You're just wearing a random baggy t-shirt and some shorts.

You walk out of your room, Ash trotting after you shortly after you leave. Walk to your kitchen, you have a rather small house, 2 rooms, 1 bathroom. You look out the kitchen window into your backyard. Fearing that you'll actually see something. It's too dark to see outside. You walk to the door to your backyard, Ash rubbing and headbutting against your legs.

You flick on the light switch and open the door. The light outside it on now, you look past your screen door and see...

What the fuck?

Why is there a random guy in your backyard?

Why does he have wings???

The guy seems pretty beat, rubbing and holding his head with a groan. He's sitting in a small crater. What the actual hell? You open your screen door, walking outside to make sure Ash doesn't get out. "What're you doin' in my damn backyard!?" You yell, looking at the man. His eyes look up at you, before narrowing in a glare. "Shut..up." The man grumbles, starting to stand. The man's.. attractive. You can give him that.

His pretty, forest green eyes, and his charming jet black hair. He's tall, and he looks extremely strong. Which causes him to be, well, intimidating. And it almost stops you from speaking but, this is your house. "Yer in my backyard! Don't tell me to shut up!" You yell, now scowling. "Tch...you're too loud.." The man grumbles, His legs slightly trembling but he manages to stand. "Yeah!? And what the hell're you s'posed t'be? Some cosplayer!?" You yell once again, this time raising your voice louder on purpose.

The man shoots you a glare, your mouth goes a little dry, and you almost shut up.

"Ugh, where am I anyways?" The man sighs, to which you quickly snap at him. "I just said that you're in my backyard!" You yell again, quickly regaining your attitude. "Stop yellin', loudmouth!" The man with greyish wings says, taking a step towards you, to which you quickly step back, your hand finding it's way to the door knob of your screen door.

You step on something, a rock you think. It hurts a little, since you're barefoot. You glance down and kick the small rock away, still scowling. When you look up, the man is closer, now on the concrete of your backyard. Your hand twists the doorknob open, but you notice the man holding his head, he's bleeding. Despite being rude sometimes, you still don't want to be really rude. "D'you.." You clear your throat as the man looks up at you. "D'ya wanna come inside?" You ask, the man, hesitates, before begrudgingly nodding.

So, it's been a few days since then, and now you have a roommate. And you've learned his name is Toji Fushiguro.

"Go away." You groan, laying in bed. "Nope." Toji hums, also laying in your bed. "S'my bed asshole. Yer in my house, listen to me." You sigh, rolling onto your side to look at him. "Nope." He says again. His arms are behind His head and his eyes are closed. His wings are tucked under himself, they're a light grey to white and they're fluffy. He's wearing some casual clothes, sweats and a black tee-shirt p. You move and try to kick him off your bed. It doesn't work. You groan and get out of bed, it's 6pm. Ash curls up beside Toji, causing Toji to pat his head. You're probably gonna go get some food. Maybe takeout or something. "Where're ya goin'?" He asks, opening one eye to look at you in the doorway. "T'get some food." You say, glancing back at Him.

"Well damn, get me some too." Toji says, closing his eyes once more before rolling onto his side. You sigh and roll your eyes before walking out of the- your -room.

"What the fuck?" You're confused. Why's your damn bathroom a mess? And why is Toji just sitting on the edge of your bathtub? Why is he only in a towel?? "Shut up, y'r bathroom is too damn small." He says, scoffing. His wings are wet. Like, really wet. You laugh. "Awh, does poor baby need help?" You mock him, he shoots you a glare in return, as usual, through his dripping hair, covering some of his face. "Fine, you want help? Then don't be an asshole." You say, walking into your bathroom. He scoffs and stands up, "Nothin' I can promise." he shrugs. "Shut up." You say, walking to the bathtub. You drain the water and then refill it with pretty warm water. And bubbles, of course. Who doesn't like bubbles? And, maybe it's to make it so you can't see into the water as easily.

Toji waits, he looks irritated, but, well, of course he does. "Alright, get in," You gesture to the bath. "I fuckin' tried that already." Toji grumbles. You sigh. "Yeah, well, it's your wings right? So like..try to keep them up or somethin'?" You say, lightly shrugging as you look up at Toji, who's currently standing up with his arms crossed over his bare chest, and you're sitting on your knees on the floor.

"Fuckin' fine I'll try that." Toji grumbles and you turn away as he gets into the bath. Eventually, you look back at him. Your bath seems a little too small for him. Your face gets a little warm from seeing Toji bare chest, and the knowledge that he's fully naked in your bath.

"Uhm, so, d'you need help with..anything?" You say, looking at Toji. "Just my damn back." Toji grumbles, moving a little closer to the now turned off faucet, signaling for you to help him. "Oh alright," You murmur, sitting up on your knees and leaning over the bath. You get a bar of soap and a loofa, getting it ready before slightly scrubbing Toji's back. You try to be careful around his wings, you don't know how sensitive they are.

You start with his upper back, as he waits for you to be done. You eventually decend to his middle back before you hear him speak up. "Y'wanna wash my front too?" You can hear the smirk in Toji's voice.

"What?" You say, thinking you heard him wrong. You don't even know him that well.

"What, ya can't do it? Too much of a pussy? Alright," Toji shrugs, and you take that as a challenge, although in reality, you do really wanna do it. "I'm not a pussy, asshole!" You grumble, taking up and looking down at Toji. "Alright, then take of yer clothes and get in with me." Toji says. You scoff, roll your eyes, but move to slip off your shirt, pants, and underwear.

You can feel Toji staring at you, through you. You feel your body getting hot. You notice Toji moving back a little and gesturing for you to get in the bath. You do, slipping into the bath whilst slightly covering yourself. He holds your hips, putting you on his lap. You try to not look down, and stare up at Toji's face. His hand moves to peel your arm away from your chest, before pausing. "This alright with ya?" Toji says, glancing up at you.

You nod, before murmuring a small yes. Toji's smirk widens a little, as you allow him to take your arms from your chest, and his hand moves to start to lightly need your breasts. You feel his other hand moving down from your hip, to your core.

You put your arms around his neck. His large, rough middle finger starts to tease you, causing light whimpers to spill from your lips. His index finger soon starts to enter you, slowly moving in and out of you before he adds his middle in. He starts to move his hand a little faster, his rough thumb expertly moving to rub your clit. "Mm, Toji," You lightly moan, moving to attach your lips to his.

It surprises him a little, making him pause in his movements, you think you did something wrong, but Toji quickly reciprocates the kiss, his fingertips moving to lightly pinch and play with your nipple, his hand quickly continuing to play with you. You cup his cheek, tilt your head, and move a little closer to him on his lap.

You feel his hard on press against your stomach, causing yourself to get wetter. You pull away from the kiss to catch your breath, you feel that knot in your stomach building up. "Nhh.. Toji," You murmur, causing Toji to pinch your nipple a little harder. "Yeah, sweet girl?" Toji says, continuing to use his fingers to stretch out your wet pussy, his thumb presses hard on your clit, before moving again, drawing another moan out of you. You feel the knot in your stomach about to snap.

"Don't-.. I-I mean.. I wanna.." You clear your throat from embarrassment. "I wanna cum on your..um.." You struggle finding the words. "Take yer time," Toji says, his smirk changing to a shit-eating grin. Your anger bubbles up a little again. "Fuck me Toji!" You grumble, your hands clenching into fists as you continue to hug Toji's neck.

"All ya had t'do was ask," Toji hums, thrusting his fingers into you one last time before taking them out of your core, making you frown a little from being empty, but excited, knowing what's coming. He picks you up but your hips, aligning you above his dick. He slowly lowers you down, you let out a breathy gasp, your hands finding place on his shoulders. You've never really seen Toji's dick before, so you aren't sure how large it is, but it feels big. Bigger than you've taken before.

The tip is in, and he continues to lower you down, trying to be gentle, though, know he's making small noises himself. The stretch burns a little, and you try to relax yourself to make it easier. Eventually, he bottoms out. You're not too tight around him, but you still need to adjust. He feels you clench around him as he makes a small movement. "Please- Move.." You choke out, causing that shit-eating grin te reform on Toji's face.

"What, already dumb on my cock and I haven't even moved yet," Toji coos mockingly, but starts to slowly pick your hips up, moving you up and down on him. He feels you move your hips as well. "I'm not dumb, asshole-" You say, but get cut off by a moan, you tuck your head into the nape of Toji's neck as he starts to slightly thrust his own hips up, as well as picking up the pace of him using your hips, he uses his thumb to massage your clit again.

"So-" Toji grunts. "I'm the asshole 'ere, but m'bein' nice and fuckin' ya, should I just stop then?" Toji says with faux concern. "No!" You spit out, causing you to feel embarrassed. "Please.. don't stop.." You moan into Toji's neck. "S'what I thought." Toji hums, moving faster now, causing the water around you to splash, but neither of you mind it getting your floors wet.

"Fuck..Toji!" You squeal, feeling your orgasm coming. "Shit," Toji grunts, feeling your walls clench around him and your fingernails digging into his back muscles before you cum on his cock, your walls spasming as he continues to move through your orgasm.

After you finish Toji feels himself almost done as well, so he continues to move, leaning down to suck and bite at your neck. "Shit shit shit! Inside.. fuck..please!" You moan, your arms around Toji's neck tighten. You feel Toji's movements stutter, before he shoots his load into you, his hands on you relaxing, and he pulls out.

"Was that good, princess?" Toji smirks, looking at you. You shyly nod before Toji gets up and out of the bath, picking you up and putting you down outside of it. "Go take a piss or whatever n'I'll finish washin' myself up." Toji grumbles, grabbing the loofa from out of the bathtub. You nod, and, although feel embarrassed, you go to the bathroom.

Toji's laying beside you in bed, an arm over you you're pulled close to his chest. "G'night." Toji grumbles. "Night.." You respond. Guess someones takeout got cold that night.

(Note, this absolutely sucks ngl)

[i-love-def-leppard]

I Wanna Touch You (Joe Elliott x Reader) - Part 2 🔥

A/N: At last…Part 2 is finally here!!! Here is the link to Part 1 if you haven’t read it yet or would like to reread :) I apologize again for taking forever to publish this part of the one-shot. Most of you have heard I’ve been super busy recently, experiencing some writers block, and accidentally deleting HALF of the story when I was almost finished *sigh.* Please keep in mind that this is my first time writing smut so please bear with me for this one. I promise I will get better with some time! Anyways, I’ll shut up now and let you get to reading!! I hope you enjoy!! ♥️

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WARNING: detailed smut ahead ‼️

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1983 Pyromania Tour - backstage

After what felt like forever, the boys were finally done their set.

You see Joe quickly making his towards you at the side of the stage where he left you standing in demand, seconds before he walked on.

He quickly tosses his microphone to his roadie, taking the final steps to meet your figure.

“Fucking finallyyy.” Joe exhales as he grabs his hands towards you.

He waists no time, pulling you into him by your waist, placing hungry kisses to your lips. He kisses the corner of your mouth, slowly moving downwards to plant sloppy kisses along your jaw.

Softly moaning at his touch, you bring your hands up to lightly tug at his hair, sweaty from what felt like the longest gig ever.

“Mmm, Joe” you moan into his ear.

As soon as the noise leaves your mouth, your eyes grow wide, quickly remembering that you are still surrounded by many members of the band and their crew.

Shit.

“Gonna give us a free show, eh?” Phil laughs as you look up and see the rest of the band standing right there.

“In your dreams, Collen.” Joe shoots back after he reluctantly pulls his lips off your neck. “C’mon, love. Let’s go somewhere where we have some more privacy, hmm?”

“Yes, I’d like thatt. Lead the way, baby…bye boys!” you giddily respond. Joe adding to the humor by jokingly flipping them off.

After earning gross looks from the rest of the band, Joe grabs you by the wrist and pulls you into the direction of his dressing room.

“NO SHAGGING IN MY ROOM! GOT IT!?” you hear Sav yell from behind you. Flashbacks quickly flood your memory, remembering the time you both mistook his dressing room for Joe’s resulting in…

Well, let’s just say, Sav was rather traumatized.

With this, you and Joe can’t help but let out childlike giggles as you make your way to his room, knowing how much you’ve grossed out the rest of the band.

When you finally reach Joe’s dressing room, the laughing mood between you both changes in an instant.

Joe kicks open the door, quickly locking it behind him, immediately pinning you up against it.

Your lips hungrily attach to one another like magnets. You felt like you have already waited too long for him, so you pick up the pace by parting your lips, letting Joe’s tongue explore your mouth.

Wow. He is such a good kisser. I could come undone right now.

Your hands tug at his hair while his squeeze at your breasts, skillfully making their way down down to your ass.

“Damn, Y/N. All I could think about during the set was you and ripping this perfect little outfit off.”

Joe says, gasping for air against your mouth as both of your hands desperately roam one another, starved all night to touch.

“Please, Joe. I can’t wait any longer. I need more.” you desperately plead into his ear, reaching for his belt.

“Don’t worry, love. I’ll take good care of ya.”

He replies as you feel him reach down in between your thighs, slowly pushing them apart so he can fit his hand in between.

“Fuck. I forgot you weren’t wearing anything under this skirt.”

“You are such a fucking tease, you know that?” he growls into your ear as you start to feel him rub his long fingers through your slick folds.

“Ohh, Joe.” you whine at the sudden attention to your clit.

“So wet for me already, baby?” he praises you as he forces your chin up with his free hand. You are now forced to look deep into his darkened eyes.

“You look so pretty right now. Goddd- I’m so lucky.” Joe says in admiration, right before he pushes two of his long fingers into your entrance.

“Ohh, fuck! Feels so good!” you moan into his mouth. His lips sloppily cover yours, muffling the rest of the sounds trying to escape your lungs.

Knowing you want to feel more, Joe picks up the pace of his fingers. You can’t help but to grind your hips against his palm and the prominent bulge in his leather pants, looking for as much friction as possible. This earns a deep groan to escape his throat.

“Feel good, hm? Shit- I can’t wait to get inside of you.” he pants, already out of breath as he watches you fall apart for him.

Coming close to your fast release and your legs threatening to collapse, your heart rate increases and your moans get louder.

Your boyfriend knew all the tell-tale signs your body makes before an orgasm, but you can’t help but remind him.

“Joe- I can’t last much longer” you moan into his mouth.

With this confession, Joe quickly pulls his fingers out of you causing a loud whine to escape your mouth from the sudden lack of contact.

You are left standing against the door, your face flustered red, as you watch your boyfriend’s lips curve upwards into a grin inches away from you.

“What the hell? I was so close! Why’d you stop?” you whine as you watch him raise his middle two fingers to his face.

Your jaw drops as you watch him push those two slick-covered fingers into his mouth, sucking your juices clean off.

Fuckk. That was so hot.

“You taste so good, love” he smirks. “You thought you could just tease me earlier without receiving any consequences? Tsk- now you know how it feels, hm?” he playfully taunts you.

“Please, Joe. This is torturee. I need to cum.” you beg.

“Hm- alright, love. I’ll let you off easy this time, but only because you asked so nicely.” He replies, not being able to tease you any longer.

He too was getting increasingly desperate for some relief.

You attack each other’s bodies again trying to get as much clothing off as possible.

“Fuck, Y/N. As sexy as these tits look in this top, they’ll look even better with it off.” he says ripping it off of you and throwing it to the ground.

“And fuck it-. You’re leaving this dirty little skirt on. I wanna watch you get fucked with it on” he growls into your ear.

Whimpering at his filthy words, you go straight to pulling his Union Jack shirt up and off his head. You throw it to the side. Then, you grab his handcuff belt, working on getting that undone.

As you work on his belt, Joe attacks your neck with his mouth like his life depends on it.

There will definitely be marks later.

Hooking your long nails into the waistband of his underwear and leather pants, you lower them down both at once. Joe steps out of them, exposing what you have been waiting for all night.

“Shit, Joe.” you admire, sucking in the breath of air you forgot to breathe due to the sight before you.

No matter how many times you’ve seen your boyfriend naked, he never fails to impress you with his size.

“Like what ya see?” he proudly questions.

“Mmhmm, yes. Anddd…I’m gonna prove it.” you purr against his lips.

Suddenly taken over by a dominant urge, you place your hands on his chest, gently pushing him back onto the couch behind him.

He lays completely undressed with his back lying flat against the cool leather material. Just the position you want him in.

“Wow, Y/N/N. I could cum right now, just from looking at you.” He says admiring you through the top of his eyelids as you stand over him, ready to pounce.

His words are all it takes for you to throw your legs over his, straddling your entrance just over his twitching cock.

Before you allow yourself to sink down on him, you bring your face to his saying, “I love you, Joe,” softly kissing his lips.

“I love you too, Y/N. So much.” he wholeheartedly says right before sucking in a sharp breath, failing to notice your sneaky hand traveling down in between your bodies to stroke his aching cock.

“Fuuucckkk-” he moans with relief.

With this relieving sensation, Joe is now the one falling apart for you.

After a few pumps, you rub the tip of his cock in between your folds, collecting as much wetness as possible before slowly sinking down on him.

“God, you feel so good.” Joe grunts into your ear.

You quickly both gain a steady rhythm that pleases the both of you.

“Mmmphh-” you loudly moan, adjusting to his size.

Joe’s hips buck up into your g-spot with hard thrusts, adding to your pleasure as you ride him with all of your energy.

Palming your hands on his chest, your hands can’t help sometimes trail downwards, tracing the patch of hair leading down to his shaft.

Your hands grip his shoulders for support, in fear you may already collapse.

“These perfect tits. Damn-”Joe swallows heavily while he massages them with both hands.

Throughout, Joe’s hands switch from playing with your tits to hardly gripping your waist. He pulls you down further onto his dick, grinding against each other with great force.

“Ahh- baby you take me so well.” Joe praises you.

You start rolling your hips in a circular motion, knowing that this is what throws Joe right over the edge.

“Christ, Y/N, you’re so fucking goo-.” Joe moans as his sentences become slurred due to intense sensations of pleasure.

The slick sounds of his dick pounding into you echoes throughout the room.

“That’s it, baby. Right there. Ah-” he cries.

“S’close- Ohhh my god, Joe!” you scream, not caring if the people on the outside hear you both.

Oh, they can definitely hear us right now.

You notice Joe’s abs flexing more and more, realizing he is getting close too.

“Fuck, Y/N. I don’t think I’ll be able to last any longer with you. I’m about to cum.” he gasps into your mouth as you lean down to kiss him.

“Don’t fucking stop, baby.” he begs on the edge.

“C’mon baby. Cum for me.” panting as you struggle to kiss him back. The feeling of your oncoming orgasm getting increasingly more intense.

“Ohhh. Fucking hell-. Mmmphh. Baby, I’m cumming.” he deeply whines, echoing off the walls.

Thrusting down onto him one more time, you watch as his face contorts in ecstasy, body trembling at the sensation.

“OHHH, Y/N! Ah, fuck- fuckkk!” he deeply moans as his load fills up your insides. His hips continue to thrust up and into your soaked entrance, mindful of making sure you finish at the same time.

You sneak your hand down to rub at your clit, causing the well-known sensation to bubble down low in your stomach.

Immediately after Joe, you cum. And -shit- you cum hard.

“OHH!! Joe, mmphh. Fucking hell-” you scream at the top of your lungs as your body completely weakens and shakes from your orgasm.

The hand giving attention to your clit drops to your side in weakness, giving Joe the opportunity to take over the motion, helping your ride out your high.

“There you go, baby.” he says sweetly, watching your body shake and collapse on his chest. Your face now resting in the crook of his neck.

Shortly after, he slowly pulls out of you causing the familiar warm sensation to creep down your legs.

You both lay there for a minute or two, allowing yourselves to come down from your high. The smell of sex fills the room.

“Wow. That was so fucking hot, Y/N.” he says, catching his breath. “You did so good for me, love.”

Unable to form a proper response at the moment, you just tilt your head up to his, planting a sweet kiss to his lips.

“I love you, Y/N.” he says.

“I love you too, Joe. You have no idea-” you reply lifting your head to look into his eyes.

He laughs saying, “Oh, but I dooo. You proved yourself pretty well just now, love.” he smirks as he gently squeezes your hip in a teasing manner.

Giggling, you can’t help the pink shade that rises to your cheeks created by a mix of pride and slight embarrassment at your performance just moments ago.

“Sooo…what do ya say-? Round two when we get back to the hotel?” Joe asks.

“Oh, definitelyyy.”

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[overnighttosunflowers]

Uh, hi! 👋 I’ve read all of ur fics (obsessed with ur fics) and bookmarks for imodna. I was wondering if u have any other recs? I am dying for this ship. /fans self. 🥵

do I have two imodna anons now or is this my same friend back again. either way HELLO AND THANK YOU FOR THE ASK I am sure I do have recs!! also apologies for the delay in answering this because it was a good question and I had to think about it and also my week has been nuts

a lot of my smut bookmarks are on private because (shrugs vaguely in the direction of self-consciousness). while I don't know exactly what kinds of fics you're looking for, judging by your emoji usage I'm gooooooing to guess smut is up your alley and I will rec some under the assumption that this post is going to get buried real quick. also sticking some non-smuts by the same authors. if you are looking for sfw fic specifically shoot me another ask and I'll tack on some more

all 3 of HoodieHeda's fics, also rec High Speed Connection which is sfw and a goddamn delight

all of picturesofthegoneworld's fics but there are a bunch so I will specifically say I'll Come Running and Horripilation (but also seriously read them all)

doribuki's Something To Be Said About Delights anthology fic, plus I already recced her That Look That's Perfectly Un-Sad (sfw) on a different anon post and their current WIP To All Things Housed In Her Silence (sfw) is rewiring my brain

all of marleybone's fics but I'll pick out Flashing Colors because I reread it recently. also his WIP Consequences of a Bleeding Heart is brilliant

vividfriend's true refraction is absolutely wonderful and the rest of their fics are too, homecoming (sfw) was a really lovely post-rez fic

if you like my fics you will probably like lorelei_de_rolo's fics

AstoriaColumnStaircase did a really cool fic called Command that played with use of that spell in a smut context, also her Flowers (sfw) lives rent-free in my head every day of my goddamn life and she does really cute comics too

the_chainbreaker's Think About Me does really cool fun hot things with differing POV narration

imogntemult wrote a really lovely morning sex fic called golden (like daylight)

pmonkey816 wrote a great post-episode-33 fic (i.e. when we knew shit with Otohan had gone bad, but Laudna wasn't quite dead yet) called Wrap me up, Unfold me and I've been meaning to read their We Do, but Friends Don't for ages and ages and have heard good things

acquario wrote a really lovely fic called before you go, can you read my mind?

pieces by Bugsquads is hot as hell

not smut but rozecrest has two lovely poetic little fics that I highly recommend which you have probably already read as I think they are in my bookmarks (as are a number of these probably)

and, not smut but every single goddamn pigflight fic but more specifically I Feel Blood or Amory if you're looking for fucked up and i let it turn me 'round or you wanna be friends forever? if you're looking for sweet.

OKAY THERE ARE DOUBTLESS MORE but my brain is, frankly, melting and I need to go to bed so PLS ENJOY <3

[jackiebrackettt]

man, knifetrick was fantastic. I am still a huge Tasmin fan, best tailor. we should all reread kt and meme again. remember the memes? the bits about everything Ran does being gay 'why do you need both arms? to hold men?' and such? by talos this cant be happening, everywhere.

i think one of my favorite moments was probably the balcony, it caused a lot of emotions. like, that whole night was great and the tension had me screaming, and then finishing the chapter was both the worst thing ever (in an emotional damage way) and the best. get bonked idiot.

if you feel like it, what was a favorite side character or moment of yours? or just other character things?

I still adore your kt fics also. :] i'm petty sure i sent an ask about loving Artificial Loneliness ages ago and that still stands, such a good AU fic, so so interesting.

@baaloved

going to answer ur question first but: man this is why I need to reread it bc my memory is so bad o(-( I only remember broad strokes of it atm</3 so side characters I’m blanking on a lil but agreed though Tasmin is Very fun :]

I ended up being a little too busy tonight nd I will be 2morrow night but I def wanna do a kt reread !!! maybe we can all make an event out of it or smthing if I advertise it enough (<- depends on whether I feel like organising that o(-( rip) but I’ll def liveblog it and maybe try and find those memes again and it’ll be like back in uhh *checks ao3* whenever kt was posted

balcony scene is srsly iconic i don’t think anything can beat that tbhh but! I’m a big fan of the poison reveal too (“too harmful to use on Jackie” that slayed) andd there’s a scene I really love bc of how @/metfell drew it - very cinematic ! it’s the one where ran is about to shoot jackie in the back of the head or smthing but someone shows up

^ I mean the whole thing slays tbh but again.. my memory</3 plus I can’t just write out the whole book lol

and wrt my fics: TYSM!!!! this is so kind I’m so glad you liked them :]!!! I’m sure my writing style has changed a bit since then but every now and then I reread them myself and I’m still proud of them ^_^ Artificial Loneliness is kinda the first (and only I think?) AU story I’ve ever written nd finished it holds a special place in my heart :]

[giggly-squiggily]

I just reread some of your Free! fanfictions and I was wondering if you'd write a tickle fight between Natsuya and Rin? I feel like Rin would totally start something like that, just to mess with Natsuya, but then again, I also feel like Natsuya would be able to turn the tables on him eventually. Of course you don't have to add it to your list if you don't like it. ❤️

Oo, I like this prompt! To be honest, it got a little away from me when I was writing it, but I kept the initial idea of "Rin starting shenanigans and lives to regret it" part, lols! I've gotcha covered!

CW: Drinking

Cloud 9 (Taglist)

@myreygn, @duckymcdoorknob, @baby-tickles2022, @cupcake-spice13,

“Man..you’re pretty strong, Rin. I bet you’re fast as hell in the water.” Natsuya laughed as they stumbled back to the redhead’s apartment. Well- he stumbled; Rin was more or less dragging him along. The booze in his belly made his head swim and his limbs feel like jelly.

“Yeah, I tend to win a lot.” Rin grunted, sighing in relief as they trudged into a now empty elevator. Pushing Natsuya until he was leaning against the wall, he rolled his shoulders with a groan. “Maybe we should push you into some? Might sober you up a bit.”

“Ha!” Natsuya laughed, his body sinking to the elevator floor as his eyes began to droop. Soft snores pushed past his lips, thinning Rin’s patience with each exhale.

He knew Natsuya was a lightweight when it came to alcohol; both by his own admission and Ikuya’s foreboding “Watch him- he can’t hold his liquor”.

Still, he didn’t think it’d be this bad. Not after a single shot!

“Get up, we’re here.” Rin kicked his foot, making the older man shoot up with a snort. Natsuya blinked at him dazed before bowing his head, almost immediately going back to sleep.

“Ugh, you’re hopeless!” Rin groaned, dragging Natsuya to his feet and hauling him towards his apartment. “You’re lucky I’ve got a couch to spare, you overgrown toddler.”

“Mm…what were we talking about?” He asked as they got to the door, Rin balancing him with one hand while the other fumbled with the keys. “Oh yeah- you’re strong, Rin!” The hand around Rin’s waist pinched, sending the redhead’s keys flying. “How much do you lift? I want muscles like this!”

“Gah! Gehehet off, you wieherdo!” Rin grabbed his wrist before it could pinch again, holding it far away from his torso. This unfortunately upset the delicate balance of their huddle. The next thing they knew, they were on the floor before Rin’s door, sprawled on their backs.

Thank god no one was up- still; the thought alone didn’t keep Rin’s face from burning in shame.

Natsuya on the other hand found the entire thing hilarious. Head thrown back, he laughed like a child, the sound somewhat slurred by his drunken state. “Geahhahaha! We went boom! Ahehahhahaa!” He clapped like a seal, feet kicking some.

“Ugh, you really are a child when you’re drunk.” Rin sat up, making short work of the door. “Fine, you wanna act like a child, I’ll just have to treat you like one!”

“Ahehaha…what-Ahehahahahahhaha!” Natsuya all but shrieked when Rin’s fingers found his sides, digging into the soft spots along his lower ribs. “Rihihihiihihihn, whahahahhahahahit! AHehahahhhahahhahaha!”

“Wow, you’re this ticklish? And I thought Ikuya was bad.” Rin grinned, delighted by the reaction. He was still a tinge embarrassed by the noise they were making, so he grabbed Natsuya’s shirt and hauled him into the main room of the apartment, kicking the door shut behind him with a grin. “Now I’ve got you where I want you!”

“Nohohohoo! Nohoohoh, Rinnie, plehehahhahahahse!” Natsuya sounded less drunk as he scooted backwards. Seems like this was sobering him up? Good. “Wahahait, can we tahhahahalk about this?”

“Sure we can- after I sober your ass up.” Rin shot forward, hands flying along Natsuya’s torso and making him fall backwards, laughing all the way. “You know how exhausting it is dragging a body from the restaurant all the way to my apartment? Don’t even get me started on the taxi fee!”

“Iiihihiihihihi’m shahahhahahahhaharry! Ahehahahahhhahahhaa, Riihihihihnnie plehehahahhahase!” Natsuya squealed, curling into himself as his cheeks flushed a bright pink, eyes squeezed shut with mirth.

“That’s another thing! Who’s this “Rinnie” you keep talking to? My name is Rin. R-I-N!” The redhead jabbed him in the gut with each letter, emphasizing his point. “Say my name right and maybe I’ll stop.”

“Pfft- nahahhahahhhahat fahhahahahhair- AHH RIHIHIHIHINNIE PLHEHEHHEHEHAHSE!” Natsuya screamed when hands wiggled beneath his arms, digging into the skin there. “IHIIIHIHIHIM SOOHOHOHOHBER IHIHIHIHIM SOHOHOOHOOHBER!”

“I didn’t hear my name.” Rin pointed out, still tickling.

Natsuya made a weak wheezy sound, tears of mirth threatening to leak down his cheeks. Finally, after what felt like forever, he gave in.

“FIHIIHIHINE! FIHIHIHINE RIN PLEAHHAHAHASE!”

There it was. Rin pulled away, watching Natsuya curl into himself with greedy breaths. “Ahehehe…hehehe…gohoohohod, that was ahhahahwaful!” He groaned, trying to glare.

“Heh, you didn’t sound very upset when I was tickling you.” Rin pointed out, all shark teeth when the other flushed. “There, now you know what will happen if you get drunk again.”

“Heh…you sound like Nao. He always threatens to tickle me for drinking.” Natsuya reached out before Rin could stand, hands locking around his ankle. “Like him, though- he forgets a pretty big thing about me.”

“And that is?” Rin asked, tugging lightly at the iron grip around his leg.

“That when I’m even a little bit tipsy…I’m a terrible tickle monster.”

Rin didn’t have time to react. He could only squawk indignantly as Natsuya dragged him over, fingers flying over all his own tickle spots. “AH! Ahehahahhahaha! N-Nahahahahtsuya!”

“Aww, what’s wrong? Can’t take what you dish out?” Natsuya cooed sweetly, eyes dancing with mischief. “Come on, Rinnie- show me just how tough you are!”

[bonesandthebees]

Also, I can’t believe I wrote two whole text walls and didn’t even talk about the corn metaphors. Wilbur being tied down by the roots, the same roots his father is buried between, being forever connected to that unmarked grave. And it literally rooting him into place. Also them disappearing when he sees Phil because he always feels safe with him and then coming back day during his fight with Tommy because the guilt is resurfacing. Oh and the deer in the headlights metaphors very clearly tells us how Wilbur sees their relationship (even if it’s a scewed view).

Also, I very much loved how secretive they were being about it with Phil around, almost like they were using his presence as a shield to not talk about it, to not have that conversation, yet they are still unable to properly talk about it without him there.

Then there’s Tommy coming out with the gun and Wilbur needing to take it from him. I’d have to reread it, but I can’t image the image of his, now grown up, younger brother with a gun in his hands was good for him. So he needed to take that gun, like he feels he should have taken it years ago. And he tries to rewrite his wrongs and actually protect him this time (like he didn’t last time, like he didn’t actually get their dad to let go). But he still can’t shoot because he’s a pacifist.

Lastly, the imagery works very well. This could be a really good short film with the way you described the flashback and when the gunshot would be placed. I also feel like this would work really well as a little novella, but I’m not sure it’s long enough for that. Maybe a book bundle with some of your other stories because from what I’ve heard you write really good ones (and now I’m feeling like I might actually want to read under the brine and I can’t remember the title of the other one, but I know there’s at least 2 more really really good ones).

Anyway, third times the charm so I’m stopping here before this turns into yet another wall of text (no 4 paragraphs does not count as a wall). And now I’m going to go a be productive because school really is coming for my throat (I can’t wait to graduate, I’m so done)

-🌲

YEAHHH CORN METAPHORS YOU GET IT!! he's quite literally rooted to that place. to his father's grave buried within the cornfields. the roots that tie him there are his guilt over what he did and while they briefly go away when phil hugs him they come right back when he's reminded of his guilt again.

having phil there makes it easier because they quite literally can't talk about it so it frees them from the expectation, but at the same time they can't avoid it. it's just this heavy Thing between them neither one can completely ignore and it just makes everything so much more complicated

yuppp wilbur had to take the gun the second time around because he didn't want to fuck up again. he didn't want to fail tommy a second time. he couldn't let tommy be the one to fire the gun this time. but then wilbur himself still can't shoot because that's just not who he is. he's not the one who can pull the trigger and he never will be.

honestly if i had the patience to sit down and write a screenplay I think this would be best formatted as a film. there were a few more scenes i had ideas for but i wanted to keep the story on the shorter side but i could definitely lengthen it to a full blown movie. maybe one day... but yes I have a soft spot for my novella length fics they're very special to me

(ok not trying to hype myself up but if you wanna read any of my novella length things I highly recommend under the brine like it's an oldie but a goodie i'm still very proud of it. that one and starman waiting in the sky have my heart i love both of those so much)

best of luck with school spruce you'll get through this!!

[wc-wild-rewrite]

Into The Wild Reread!

Its actually been like 6 years since i last fully read this series, so it was fun going back through! Overall i give it a 9/10, one point removed for slightly clunky writing and scene changes.

HOWEVER, Every single sentence that includes Spottedleaf is awful and uncomfortable, so it's actually getting an 8.5/10

Please note that i wrote the notes as i read it and have not edited them

My chapter by chapter thoughts and notes are under the cut!

Prolouge

Iconic opening prologue, but we're really stretching the definition of bracken-colored for mr reddish-brown oakheart here.

When did the clans meet otters

I wonder how Mousefur feels about the last fight alongside redtail being the one where tigerclaw saved her

"Fewer kits than normal" bluestar theres 5 of them i'd say thats a decent number, 6 if we're counting Lynxkit

I dont remember many of the prophecies but i hope they use more star ones, the shooting star is a cool one

Chapter 1

They really love their full stops huh, its slightly jarring, as someone who writes with so many commas

I still love their descriptions of the enviroment

I like how they show Rusty's ignorance towards the necesscity of prey by having his first scene be him toying a live mouse, and that being why he lost it

Rusty, collars are not supposed to pinch, your being mistreated

I dont think ive ever seen anyone remember to add the 'lightly raining' part into an animatic or comic or anything

I like to think he spotted Bluestar in the trees when he says it feels like something's in the woods

I like that rusty's sorta mean, real tween energy

They better bring this fox back

This is painfully lore-dumpy but i love greypaw's total disregard for rusty's anger. And for his disregard for clan code, talking to a kittypet when he shouldn't be. Sets up his later code breaking.

I'm always really concerned about rusty's "just sit there and look hungry" comment, like buddy why do you know that??

Lionheart is canonically handsome

I really like how majestic and respectable bluestar is shown to be in this scene, i can feel her power

Bluestar has been keeping an eye on rusty for a while, spurred by the prophecy, i'd imagine

Chapter 2

I cant tell if bluestar snapping at him so fast is because of how despserate thunderclan is in that moment, or if its a hint to how fast she can turn against people.

Rusty's willignness to look a wildcat in the eye and argue is very interesting, i see where squilf gets it from

'Young kit' i love lionheart

Chapter 3

I like to think the yellow eyes in his dream are yellowfang's

Kittypets know what hours are, i wonder if the clans do

I love smudge, poor guy

They have pine trees on thunderclan territory

I kinda like asshole longtail, hes fun

Great job longtail, you got your ass kicked by a fresh apprentice

Only finished his training two moons ago means longtail is 14 moons, and was probably a solo apprentice. I can see why Bluestar is afraid of not having enough, if the last batch of apprentices only had one.

Interesting that they were so quick to accept Firepaw, but only after he proved himself in a battle. Very telling of their culture.

Graypaw never describe Spottedleaf ever again, its very uncomfortable, "not bad looking either" you are a child

"Neither young nor pretty" this line is especially funny now that grey and dark are brothers, like yeah, thats peak little brother energy

Chapter 4

Ok whos this ginger queen, shes been mentioned twice now

Firepaw stop asking for lore a cat just died

Now i wanna see a redstar au

I like how sassy spottedleaf is with tigerclaw

Tigerclaw in this scene feels so much like Scar, i wish they kept this

I like the lore of the leader's den being carved from a river, wonder if DOTC is consistent with that

Love the sharing tongues and eating lore, the idea of older warriors inviting younger ones to eat with them being an honor

I like that the elders are perfectly fine with firepaw

Interesting that sandpaw isn't actually described as cream or sand colored, but 'pale ginger'

Again, loving the eat rituals with the apprentices eating by the stump

Sandpaw's such a bitch i love her, such a tween mean girl, i can only imagine her with a high, bratty voice

Chapter 5

Two toms sitting in a hollow a few tail lengths away cuz their not gay

Birch, ash, and oak trees are added to the 'trees thunderclan has' list

"Thats treachous talk, kittypet" says the guy who tried to take over all the clans, thus sharing a territory

I like that lionheart supports firepaw's thinking

Thunderclan smells warm, Shadowclan smells sour, Riverclan is...pungent, i guess?

Dust and Sand are such brat siblings

Love the implication that windclan and thunderclan have different stalking types due to their difference in prey, light footed for thunderclan, and maybe heavy on the back legs to make a better kick-off for a run for windclan?

Ravenpaw has been an apprentice for 2 moons, meaning hes 8 moons old, and he probably became an apprentice on the tail-end of longtail's apprenticeship, or just after his warrior ceremony

Chapter 6

Two moons passed, 8 moons old, Raven should be 10 moons

Firepaw can scale ash trees with ease

One of lionheart's favourite phrases is "surprise is the warrior's greatest weapon"

Ok good, the fox was relevant

Thunderclan cats apparently climb trees often, given that halftail apparently used to

Chapter 7

"Easy prey for yellowfang" girl why are you in third person

2 moons in and he already doesnt want to feel pity towards a clearly unwell cat, i can totally see an au where he becomes one of tigerclaw's followers

"You seem in an awful hurry to die" is one of my favourite lines

Arch-cat of stench

Chapter 8

Patrol of tigerclaw, willowpelt, darkstripe, lionheart, and bluestar. One hell of a combo

Yellowfang was spoken of for her bravery and wisdom as a medicine cat, interesting

I like the respect Spottedleaf gives Yellowfang, aware that shes another medicine cat. They've no doubt met before this.

Sympathetic eye narrowing

"We found no bodies from either clan" i call bullshit

"Usually she only trains the kits of her deputies" again, bullshit, but interesting concept

Leaders talking with all their senior warriors and not just their deputy for advice

Cultural respect for healers and elders

Chapter 9

They know the word breakfast

Little grey-and-white kit and a tabby kit, probably swift and one of the frost brothers

"Certainly no hardship being around spottedleaf again" you've exchanged about 3 sentences with her

Willowpelt in patrol with her son again

The double mouse eating scene is always so funny to me

Chapter 10

Queens line their nests with balls of down, which are apparently duck underfeathers

Wow, two-ish moons and firepaw doesnt remember smudge at all

I like the parallel between rusty & greypaw and smudge & firepaw

Its actually kind of unsettling how fast he's forgotten his old life, like wow the cult indoctronation really worked huh

Chapter 11

Ravenpaw tripping over his snake, baby boy

Fluffy gray kit, likely cinderkit, no more than 2 moons, meaning they were newborn when rusty joined

Also a tiny black kit and a tortieshell, mystery kits

Rusty's been there for almost 3 moons

Bluestar has serious trust issues huh

"I think i could grow fond of her" ok yeah i see why bluestar x yellowfang exists

Clawface and Stonefur are considered great warriors, at least to Greystripe

Chapter 12

I forget at this point in the book tigerclaw isn't actually known as a bad guy, hes just grumpy and mildly suspicious

Crookedstar is bigger than Lionheart, which means hes fuckin massive

Brokenstar has been leader for 4 moons as of this chapter, meaning he probably became leader around the time spottedleaf got her prophecy. Causation, perhaps?

Eugh can we stop describing spottedleaf as sweet scented

Ough, littlepaw was definitely lying about his age there

Lionheart banter!

Ravenpaw being a good storyteller is my favourite thing

Ah, brokenstar, you mangy bastard

I like that he paused for dramatic effect though, drama queen

I cant tell if Smallear really is deaf or if hes playing it up so he gets left alone

Chapter 13

"But even he will obey bluestar" only for 3 more books

I like that travelling to the moonstone is one of the apprentice milestones

Spottedleaf get your nose off that apprentice

Chapter 14

Leaders cannot eat before the moonstone journey, interesting

Wow, what a dickhead twoleg, also possibly drunk driving

Chapter 15

Love the idea that tigerclaw is just fucking terrified of the moonstone

So bluestar just implied tigerclaw is spiritually weak, interesting

I love the description of the moonstone, it makes it sound so ethereal

Chapter 16

Barley is short and knows Bluestar

"You are tied to your clan like a queen to her kits" oh you have no idea barley

Barley i love you and your inexplicable rat fighting skills

Firepaw knows how to put cobwebs on

This chapter implies coming back from losing a life can take hours

Chapter 17

Blackfoot you asshole put those kits down!!

Yellowfang i adore you

R.I.P rosetail, we didnt know you existed until this chapter

Nooo grandpa lionheart, poor guy

I think its this point that starts the beginning of bluestar's fall, honestly

Chapter 18

Ah, here's tigerclaw's beginning of evil, starting with appointing his cronies as bluestar's bodyguards

Ooo yellowfang still has pain from that leg injury

Wow Yellowfang just called Blackfoot a stupid tank

Darkstripe really just got call shitstripe, huh?

Oh shit, i always thought darkstripe and longtail were aware of tigerclaw's actions from the start, but hes playing them too

Chapter 19

Spottedleaf you cant just tell apprentices about prophies and not give any context

The authors really dont know how to do a scene change, huh?

Firepaw fights light-pawed

Chapter 20

I cant tell if its clunky writing or intentional but the way ravenpaw describes redtail's death is very storyteller-y

Never use the word suppleness again

Brindle really just had her kits silently huh

Elders wash their ears when their expecting rain, more lore thats never mentioned again

Really cute that whitestorm is sitting guard for his mate and kits

Its been like 4 minutes since firepaw stepped out of the nursery, brindle's in there, how the fuck did the kits get stolen

Firepaw you shared 7 sentences with her, why are you so furious

Chapter 21

Can these grown adults stop sending minors on dangerous missions

"Goodbye, my sweet spottedleaf" EW. EUGH. AUGH.

"One of brindleface's kits has a cough" considering tulipkit dies, yeah, she wasnt lying

Something something clawface being a warrior greypaw respected only for him to kill the med cat and kidnap kits

Frostfur's kits are three moons old

Chapter 22

Brokenstar makes them apprentices at three moons and warriors at five

Marigold and Mint were four moons old

Chapter 23

Third time Willowpelt and Darkstripe are in a patrol together

Oh Whitestorm, your not the smartest tom in the clan, are you

Chapter 24

Brokenstar nearly got scar-at-the-end-of-lion-kinged there

It'd be cool if mr lil tabby kit kept the ear scar, i know he doesnt tho

Chapter 25

Tigerclaw really putting on the sad dramatics there

Fireheart and Greystripe, iconic and fitting names!

My thoughts

Solid 9/10, not perfect, bit clunky, but iconic and nostalgic. Im shocked i remembered basically all of it, even tho last time i read the whole thing was about 6 years ago

I think the chapters are too short in places and cut in weird parts, and the authors cant do a scene change for the life of them, but this was 2009, so its fair. Lets just hope they improve (said the fool, foolishly)

Oh, and the spottedleaf thing was terrible and uncomfortable.

[mithen]

hi! just reread your superbat wrestling fic again because its genuinely one of the best AUs ive had the honor to read, and i was getting nostalgic for some beautiful au worldbuilding.

i gotta ask one teeensy question though, since its been on my mind: does damian ever enter the picture in this universe? you’ve mentioned him and carrie kelly doing kiddie backyard wrestling. i really wanna know if in this au, damian is actually the son of talia and bruce, and what that would mean for bruce, clark, the superbatclan, and the DCW overall.

the heroes of the squared circle is like,,, a gateway drug to pro wrestling. revisiting it has made my youtube algorithm pop off with more wwe videos, and now i cant escape vince mcmahon looking insane. thank you

Not being able to escape the image of Vince McMahon is a terrible fate and I would wish it on no one, but otherwise I’m thrilled to hear you liked the story!  I went back and forth on Damian so often and never quite made up my mind whether he’d be Bruce’s actual son or just in kayfabe, but... I did lean toward Bruce getting Talia pregnant without knowing it while he trained with her father, and then Talia raises Damian to be a vicious shoot wrestler, but then he ends up being a flippy high flying spot monkey instead, lol. So many characters have showed up in canon since I wrote the story, I almost wish I had time to add some side stories!

[alectoperdita]

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From Fanfic Writer Asks

6. Are there any fics from others you reread all the time?

This week it's @5cs-fanart-and-misc's How to Turn a Dive into a Shoot. It's just a perfect collision of my interests in fighter Jou with Bara tits and them doing stupid drunk shit together. I would like to subscribe to this newsletter.

I reread The Serpent's Vow about once per year. So thanks for that reminder. It's getting to be that time again.

18. What’s one of your favorite lines you’ve written in a fic?

Hahah I will try to think of something that's not that one Lure line.

How about this from an upcoming chapter of Mob? I just really enjoy writing the little minutia of body language like this.

When Jounouchi passed him an amber drink, as dark as brilliant as his eyes, Seto brushed their fingertips together. Slow. Purposeful. He fitted his fingers into the space between Jounouchi's, sliding deliberately over each and every knuckle before he grasped the glass by the rim.

29. Share a bit from a fic you’ll never post OR from a scene that was cut from an already posted fic. (If you don’t have either, just share a random fic idea you have that you don’t plan on getting to.)

Chapter 5 of Shoot to Score originally had a first kiss between Jounouchi and Kaiba. But the entire section didn't feel quite right and felt like it was moving too fast. I ended up scraping the scene. I'm very happy with what I actually published, with their conversation on Donki, which I think better fits the fic's vibe. But here's a snippet from the version where they kissed as they walked home together.

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Jounouchi shifted from foot to foot, then back again. His gaze darted to the sidewalk before flying back to Kaiba's face. "You're really asking me out?" he whispered.

Kaiba nodded, but his heart sank at the lack of an affirmative answer. "Do you not want to?"

"Of course, I wanna!" he exclaimed. "I just don't get why. Why now?"

Kaiba considered a few replies, but in the end, he thought it might be best to show the other boy. Jounouchi's eyes widened into saucers as Kaiba canted his head down and planted a chaste kiss to the blond's soft lips. It was over almost as soon as it started, but the brief contact electrified every nerve ending in his body, confirming he'd made the right decision. Jounouchi made a sound like a whimper when he pulled away.

Looking the blond dead in the eye, Kaiba said, "Because I've been thinking about doing that. And I'd like to do that again in the future if you don't object."

"Does that mean you like me?" Jounouchi latched onto the front of his shirt with a death grip that Kaiba didn't want to shake. His voice and hand trembled in unison.

The cicadas buzzed as the shadows on the street lengthened. Overhead, the street lights flickered on.

He had known Jounouchi for how long now? Almost two and a half months? What did he know about him beyond his name and age? Or that he was on the basketball team and lived with Mutou? He didn't even know what Jounouchi was studying at the university.

In fact, it was ridiculous how little he knew compared to how much Jounouchi knew about him. But today, he had learned that Jounouchi had a younger sister he rarely saw, his parents were divorced, and he worked part-time at the bakery Kaiba used to frequent. Each new fact gave him a tiny rush. A bit of satisfaction that he was finally closing a few of the many gaps in his knowledge about Jounouchi.

Kaiba reached up to cover Jounouchi's hand with his. "I can't be sure my feelings are exactly the same as your 'like.' But I want to spend more time with you. I want to learn more about you. What makes you laugh and smile. What your favorite food is. What you're studying for the future. Is that okay?"

[fi3stazo]

so that villain au? 👀

(5/7/23 edit: this version isn’t up to date anymore!)

(Rereading this after I typed everything out, apologies that it’s so long 💀)

I’m just gonna try my best cause explaining things aren’t exactly my forte </3

(AU under the keep reading because this is really long </3)

I’ve been calling this AU like the uh. Dolor universe. Like I call the Panchito from that world Dolor!Panchito. Anyways also in both worlds, Panchito and José are already in an established relationship So first off, like yours, Panchito and José go on an adventure with the McDuck family and in the end José is swallowed up by magic from some sorcerer. Of course Panchito doesn’t react well to this and he’s uh. Sad. He quietly distances himself from the McDuck after that

Donald feels bad and then he gets the brilliant idea to show one of the gazillion artifacts that Scrooge has to Panchito, which is basically opens dimensional portals. It is also very fragile. Donald has Panchito come over to the manor to look at it, and basically says that they could maybe try finding a José that lost his Panchito and bring him over so that maybe they could be together or something(?)

As they’re flipping through dimensions(?) they look at numerous Josés. Then they spot one who acts, talks, looks, everything, exactly like their old José. This José is the one from our dimension. Panchito was fairly reluctant until now. He gets kind of excited and states that he’d like to bring that one over. Donald goes no no that one has a Panchito

(Dolor!)Panchito gets a bit upset and grabs the artifact from Donald and insists on at least meeting him. Donald grabs it back and says they’re not bringing that one over. They fight over the artifact until it slips from Donald’s hands and it shatters on the floor, rendering it useless. Something in Panchito snaps, and he leaves. Panchito basically cuts himself off from the McDuck family and Donald unintentionally planted a seed from this interaction.

This next part I’m not really sure what happens, either Panchito gets pointers from someone or he does it on his own, but he tries to open his own portal to our world. He has to do suspicious side jobs to achieve it and whatnot. Anyways back to what I consider canon (In comes Paperinik! Duck Avenger???? Whatever name of his that you prefer. I prefer Paperinik cause it vaguely sounds like “paper n’ ink” but anyways)

Paperinik, AKA Donald(if you didn’t know, Paperinik’s this superhero alter-ego of Donald’s in some comics. It slaps way harder than it should tbh, anyways) notices the activity and puts an end to it. And then Panchito tries a different way and Paperinik stops him again. And uhh this basically goes on for a few years. Also Panchito gets his own new place to stay, and avoids his family in Mexico(my hc one, at least). And uhh he gets an outfit change

Don’t know if I want this to happen either but maybe Panchito pieces it together that Donald is Paperinik down the line. Maybe Paperinik says something that was kind of personal and makes Panchito go how would you know that. Or mf follows Paperinik home one day or something, I don’t know but if he does find out then it’d make for some pretty cool dialogue. Idk I feel like I shouldn’t because I think it would make him too op or something

Back to canon, after a while Paperinik mentions something about his gadgets being made by Gyro. (I’m not sure if I wanna go with the og Gyro or the 2017 one but I think I’ll just use a mixture of both.) Panchito jumps to the conclusion that perhaps he can get this Gyro guy to make him a dimensional portal. So Panchito tracks him down, and basically. Holds him hostage and forces him to work on a dimensional portal. He crushes/destroys Lil’ Bulb on his way in and even shoots Gyro’s foot at some point because he tried getting help 💀

But uhh eventually the portal device is finished and Panchito leaves Gyro and runs off with the device to use it on his own. He observes our world for a little bit before he actually crosses over.

There, while our José was asleep, Dolor!Panchito just. Takes him to his place in his dimension. Yeah anyways Dolor!Panchito dons his old clothing again to look more like our Panchito, and gives José some dumb excuse as to why he woke up in a new place. Though hesitant, José trusts him because Panchito hasn’t ever intentionally betrayed his trust before. Dolor!Panchito essentially plays along with our world’s consistencies in hopes that José won’t realize he’s in a different dimension. He doesn’t need to cover up his personality given that since José’s here now, he feels more happier and some of his old spirit comes back with it if that makes sense Eventually José pieces clues together from Dolor!Panchito’s abode that, oh god, he’s not in his own world. (The final nails in the coffin was Dolor!Panchito failing to get rid of some written plans and not hiding the dimensional device well enough. Probably. Other telltale sign I think: Dolor!Panchito gets angry at the mention of Donald.) José reasonably gets upset and demands Dolor!Panchito to bring him back to his world. Though agitated, Dolor!Panchito obliges. Hesitantly. And Dolor!Panchito just goes back into his normal attire seeing that he can’t change José’s mind anymore.

They both travel to our dimension, and José reunites happily with Panchito and Donald. Both have been freaking out because he’s been gone for a few days, at least. Dolor!Panchito gets angry watching, especially at Panchito. Something about Panchito being the reason why José didn’t want to stay, that it was his fault. Dolor!Panchito starts a physical fight with Panchito. Panchito was upset that he kidnapped his partner anyways so he goes with the fight

The two actually get out of José and Donald’s sight at some point because it was a lot of running around and the fight just kept moving but anyways there comes a point where Panchito shoots Dolor!Panchito’s foot (ah, irony,) albeit accidentally. Dolor!Panchito gets a burst of anger from that and he manages to knock out Panchito. Then, he gets the idea to swap clothes with him. You probably get where this is going. Donald and José catch up and Dolor!Panchito pretends to be their Panchito and basically goes ohhhhh my god guys he shot my leg, we should put him back in his dimension before he wakes up

Dolor!Panchito pretends to fumble with the dimensional device he used and just so happens to press the right buttons to open a portal to his home dimension. The three toss Panchito though and keep the device on their side and close the portal. Eventually Panchito gathers his bearings and wakes up somewhere he’s unfamiliar with.

An (recovering) Dolor!Gyro and Dolor!Paperinik find him and assume he’s their Panchito. (Dolor!Lil’ Bulb is there and okay btw, Dolor!Gyro was able to fix him.) After a small tussle and some explaining from Panchito, the two believe him and agree to help return him to his dimension. Since the dimensional device didn’t come with Panchito, Dolor!Gyro has to make a new one and that prolly takes less time than the last considering he would already have the plans done and he’d just need to make it. The three make it to our dimension.

They get to Donald, José, and Dolor!Panchito. (Cue Donald and Dolor!Paperinik/Donald desperately trying to pretend to be different people lol) Donald and José don’t believe them when they say that the Panchito they’re with is the wrong one. (Panchito hasn’t changed out of Dolor!Panchito’s attire or anything so that probably made it worse.) Dolor!Panchito of course plays along. Dolor!Gyro tells them to ask Dolor!Panchito about an event only Panchito would know, within the same period of time Dolor!José has been presumed dead. José asks the question and Dolor!Panchito answers incorrectly, and Panchito corrects him. Yeah so cat’s out of the bag

Don’t know how it gets to this point but maybe José, Donald, or Panchito ask why this is happening and such. If Dolor!Panchito knows Dolor!Paperinik’s identity, then Dolor!Paperinik is the one who recounts what happened to Dolor!José. If he doesn’t, then perhaps Dolor!Panchito begrudgingly recounts it instead. Donald says he thinks they might be able to help with that.

See, José got swallowed by magic in both dimensions, but one he got out and the other he didn’t. In our world, the family defeats the sorcerer and basically forces him to try and bring back José, which he succeeds in. In theirs, the sorcerer got away.

(By the way, is the sorcerer based off of a pre-existing character perchance??? Or is he an Oc??)

Donald says that the family and the sorcerer are on decent-ish terms, given that they’re on a truce. That they can try and convince the sorcerer to cross dimensions with them to try and bring Dolor!José back.

So, yeah. That’s what they try to do and it works. Dolor!Panchito is reunited with Dolor!José, a happy ending I think-? I’m not sure what happens next but I want to solidify everything in the story to this point first before I continue to add on.

This story will probably change a bit, so this isn’t the final version, obviously. There’s things like the designs especially that I’m kind of on the fence about right now. I’m okay with Dolor!Panchito’s design but I might change a few things later. Also about that. I originally intended for this universe to be almost exactly like ours, which means everyone’s designs will likely be the same. Just kind of bothers me that Dolor!Panchito is the only one that changes. But I think I’ll stay with the majority of the designs being basically the same as the originals. The reason why Dolor!Panchito fixates on our world specifically so much is because it’s exactly the same as his(almost, except him) and I don’t want to stray from that logic

Anyways, all done! Thanks for asking!