Am I the only one who thinks that Steve's reaction to Bucky locking omega outside was too relaxed and not that angry?? Like he was pissed yeah but ngl I was expecting him to be more mad and actually do something. Like, if someone locked my gf outside in the fucking rain while she was pregnant, u best believe that I'll murder someone. Steve's so much talk about being an alpha but honestly he doesn't really do anything to protect omega. And it makes me so mad bcs Omega is so used to being abandoned and so used to Steve not taking her seriously and justifying/excusing all the bullying he and his friends did. For once I just want someone to rage over all the mistreatment she's been through and just support and defend her. When I put it all like this, Steve sounds really awful 💀but the slow growth he's shown in the drabbles and even in poyt pt 4, really proves that he truly loves Omega even if he doesn't know how to express it in a healthy way. To end my rant, I just wanna say that ur such a good writer - the way u write relationships and the growth of characters combined with themes of anxiety and insecurity makes me wanna just frame poyt. Like, the scene where Steve mocks Omega by telling her of his cheating and then the bath tub scene???? Perfection. It literally made my heart drop in my stomach and I got this weird feeling in my stomach - yk the one where ur so in pain that u can actually feel it?
Also bestie who broke ur heart? The way you write is so beautiful and so devastating - its like you've been through seven divorces 😭 you write like you've lived and have let ur heart be broken.
<3.
TRUST ME I KNOW THIS. But consider: this wasn’t the climax of the whole fic, that I have other things in store, that I couldn’t have him completely lose it on Bucky in that scene. You guys need to trust me on the writing process. I deliberately wrote it the way I did. I KNOW his reaction was more subdued but just trust me! Also, had Steve gone full rage mode and completely beat Bucky up that night… would we have gotten the bathroom scene or would omega have been too worried about Steve? It would’ve shifted the focus from her to them two and she wouldn’t have had her moment. Writers need to shape their plot to fit the next scene, which is one of the harder parts of writing too.
Also, Steve didn’t know omega was pregnant at the time. Also, Steve was more concerned about his omega freezing to death so he had to prioritise her over doing anything to Bucky in that moment. Please understand that I consider what I’m writing and I realise what I need to give to you guys at what moment, and what I need to hold back on bc it’s better for the story as a whole! Please understand that anything given to you is intentional, just like anything held back is intentional too!
Apart from that, LMFAOOOO I’ve actually never had my heart broken! Sometimes I wish I did, because I feel like it would make my writing better! I’ve mentioned this before, but I love daydreaming about really really sad things—so writing all that is made easier bc I already make myself cry when I daydream about sad stuff lmfaooo (I realise this makes me sound unhinged af). But really, Steve himself is based on a lot of fuckboys I’ve spoken to or my friends have spoken to (not so much now, as I wouldn’t put myself through that now… but back when I was a teenager and didn’t know my worth and let assholes like that walk all over me! A lot of Steve’s gaslighting is a direct influence of IRL fuckboys!
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16 and 24 for the fanfiction writers ask meme?
16. favourite place to write?
Ough. Literally my desk at my computer, but I do love writing on my phone on the train as well - it's a shame I got rid of goog docs bc it really helped with switching devices.
24. how do you recharge when you're not feeling creative?
oug. I have no idea. I just try and read and hang out with friends and use stickers and go on tumblr and inevitably it comes back! I think i need to take the advice i give my friends re: this issue lol.
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excuse me, ms. Darly but could we get a short lwh!fam like this https://www.instagram.com/reel/C5a8Ngzt3Xg/?igsh=MTYydm1xamt0eXo2Mg==
pairing: dilf!jungkook x reader
summary: jungkook has a habit of snoring, and nabi had enough of it.
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Nabi is a very clingy baby.
Very cuddly, too.
So most nights, she somehow finds her way into your and Jungkook’s bedroom.
It's almost like she has a sixth sense for when you're about to settle into bed, starting to cry and whine to get your attention.
And almost always, Jungkook comes back with Nabi cradled in his arms, her fake tears still glistening in her eyes as he carries her into bed.
You remind him that it's not good to let her get used to this habit, and he always defends it by saying he can't resist letting her sleep with you both. "Her big tired eyes melt me into letting her sleep with us."
Jungkook finally gets to experience firsthand what it means to turn putty at the sight of round, sparkly doe eyes.
And just as Nabi has a habit of wanting to sleep between her parents, Jungkook has a habit of snoring. Every night. Though he claims he doesn't snore as loudly when you complain and you always give him an incredulous look, snarling back, "how would you know?"
All three of you are cuddled up in bed, Jungkook’s snores richocheting off the walls as you're deep in sleep—except for Nabi.
She's squirming in bed, the covers getting pulled and tugged with the movements of her little body, which causes you wake up. Your eyes flutter open.
You just catch the moment when Nabi raises her tiny hand and smacks it against Jungkook’s cheek just enough to create a soft echo of the slap.
Jungkook's snoring comes to an abrupt halt.
He grumbles, shifting to adjust his position and escape whatever just hurt him, all while keeping his eyes closed.
You stifle a giggle as you watch him groggily scratch his cheek. Nabi's big, curious eyes drift to your smiling face, and she wriggles her way back to you.
"Good job, Nabi," you whisper, pulling her close. She snuggles into your side, her little fingers curling around your chest as she nestles in.
"Did she just hit me?" Jungkook mumbles, still half-asleep, his voice thick with confusion.
You laugh softly, brushing a hand through Nabi's silky hair.
"Your snores annoyed her," you say, giggling. "See, you are very loud."
"Nabi's ruthless," he huffs.
Jungkook cracks one eye open, glancing at the two of you cuddled up together.
"Traitor," he mumbles, pouting in mock betrayal. But he quickly switches back, leaning in to drop a gentle kiss on her forehead. "Sorry, baby. Dad didn't mean to be so loud. I'll let you sleep now, yeah?"
Nabi lets out a little yawn, her tiny mouth stretching wide as she snuggles deeper into your side. The sight of her small, sleepy face and the way her eyelashes flutter as she fights to keep her eyes open melts both you and Jungkook.
Jungkook shifts to make more room, his arms wrapping around you and Nabi in a protective, cosy embrace.
You rest your head against Jungkook’s shoulder, the three of you nestled together in a perfect cuddle pile. As Jungkook’s breathing gradually synchronizes with Nabi’s, he kisses your forehead, his touch tender and loving.
"Love you, and I'm sorry."
"Love you, and it's okay," you whisper back.
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The new Ari fic I don't know y but it kinda made me sad😔 like- daddy Ari is suppose to be soft but he was such a meanie in this😣
I think I'm really gullible too because I thought he was really gonna make her his girlfriend but the ending-----
The smut was fucking to diee for I loved the fic wayyy too muchhhh the ass thingyyy dude this was like--- I was gone reader said she woke up to him playing with her ass shhhhgdhjkkjjk!!! I love it
Wish he would make her his girlfriend though and honestly sharing and caring always excited me but here it mad me sad I don't fucking know y 🥲 oh I do because this maybe means he will never make it exclusive 😔 but who am I kidding I love the thought of it way tooo muchh too hehe (hugs)💗
Ughh yess he was soo mean 🥺🥺🥺 but also sexy!!! And at least not poyt!Steve level of mean tbh 😭😭😅😅
And hehehe the ass part 😭😭 yES SHE FELL ASLEEP TO HIM PLAYING WITH HER ASS AND WHEN SHE WOKE UP HE WAS STILL PLAYING WITH HER ASS SKSJSKAKSJ MY DREAM 😭😭😭😭🥵🥵🥵
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🐹 (you are a darling and a sweetheart and I love our friendship dearly)
Ough bestie no YOU are the darling and the sweetheart and I love being friends with you too!!!!!!!!!
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@neosatsuma tagged me, thanks!! <3
tea and hot chocolate | cosy books or halloween movies | plaid or corduroy | foggy mornings or twinkly nights | orange or black | pumpkin or apple pie | wool or velvet | picking fruit or carving pumpkins | libraries or coffee shops | cinnamon or peanut butter | spooky or cosy halloween | candles or fairy lights
Tagging @donotfeedthewildauthor @hms-tardimpala and @thegreatblondebalrogslayer if u want!
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