I remembered that my Legendary animatic would originally include the second part of the song with the suitors, but I had some problems with my pc and my program and that part ended up being corrupted or something.
Anyway on the "a hundred old faces of men who call me small" this little scene would happen and I still kinda love it so I did a little sketch
I love you albums. I love you songs connected by similar themes. I love you listening to songs in a specific order picked by the artist. I love you reoccurring motifs throughout the same album. I love you album covers. I love you albums with extended editions. I love you songs that reference each other.
as ive been trying to teach myself how to write rap lyrics (incredibly fun btw you should try) i'll make little challenges for myself by limiting what im allowed to do as a fun means of practice.
in this section of a song i wrote about optimism and kindness, i tried to reuse rhyming syllables as much as possible, and I'm really happy with how crowded I was able to make it!
here's the lyrics highlighted with the different rhymes. i think some of these highlights might be sorta stretching it, but i think that also comes down to my lackluster delivery. the hardest part of actually rapping for me is finding a flow.
actually singing my lyrics is the part i practice the least because i always feel like i look silly whenever i do-- cuz i probly do! because im practicing something im not well practiced in, and that's how that goes.
additionally, i think the internal rhyme schemes are pretty disorganized. even though i technically accomplished what i set out to do, it comes across as sorta mumbly.
all the same, all things considered im proud of this bit 😇