#(Though I apologize that galactic in this typed form looks awful)

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Hi!  Would anyone be interested in reading a plot outline I’ve been working on for the last few months?  I’m so stuck.  I can’t tell if I made it too complicated or if it’s not complicated enough.  My main problem is that I can’t figure out what the resolution should be.  Honestly, or the climax for that matter.  I can adjust complications once I figure out where it’s going.  If anyone’s interested, please read more.  Be warned, it’s kinda long.

Family from New England moves to New Mexico so son can attend camp

living with relatives for the time being

father works for the Parks Dept; transferred to New Mexico; son given scholarship

mother stay-at-home, unable to find job (schoolteacher? coffee shop owner?)

son (James?) is whiz-kid, excessive intelligence and charisma; prospective space engineer

daughter (Sarah?) is also highly intelligent but awkward and lonely, social anxiety?; no idea of her future

siblings are 3-5 years apart → are they in high school together??

“Aliens & Astronauts” → high-end space camp; best in the country, possibly the world

New Mexico - near NASA base in Houston for field trips/lectures/guest speakers but separate entity

rents national park space for rocket and training areas

classroom and dormitory buildings nearby on the edge of a town

Students/Campers sent into space for a week

rigorous preparation including diet and exercise, after school sessions, weekend lectures

functions similar to internship; years-long, all year long camp experience

high school students

freshman year - only summer sessions, mostly lectures, few exercises

sophomore and junior year - full enrollment, restricted diet, increased exercises

senior year - specific diet, strict exercise regiment, classes, trip to space in July

Camp had incident 2 years ago

kids stayed in space for a full extra week (possibly longer?) → “rocket malfunction”

actually, aliens abduct the shuttle and extract the humans’ serotonin

attendance drops as parents are afraid of further rocket malfunctions → scholarships created for first time; previously camp was excessively expensive

after summer of “rocket malfunction” all kids come back from space depressed

Aliens are race of construction workers

thin upper arms for delicate (ex. electric) work

stocky lower arms for heavy lifting

tail for balance and suspension

third eye attuned to measurements and levelness

mind for engineering and physics

planet sucked into black hole; refugee ship seeking political asylum in Earth’s atmosphere

Earth is considered a safe zone in the universe

all loud music and yelling; no real antagonism or even awareness

makes a lot of noise with satellites and radios but never enters interplanetary/galactic wars

its orbit grants universally-recognized political asylum; Earth is neutral/safe territory because it is so stupid/oblivious

Aliens have been in Earth’s atmosphere for a few years

recently ran out of serotonin stores → refugee ship only had finite supplies and most were lost when the planet was lost

without home atmosphere, aliens are dependent on serotonin

probial scans of Earth show abundant serotonin in humans

nonconsensually extracting serotonin from humans is against intergalactic law, but they are desperate → do not have time to ask for it because that entails teaching Earth about aliens first

Aliens tell first campers/counselors they kidnap that they will destroy the Earth if they don’t comply

100% empty threat; refugee ship does not have ability to destroy planet and species is not even antagonistic

humans are too scared to question it; to depressed/hopeless/despairing when they return home

counselors that lead space excursions comply for successive summers because they think they are protecting Earth

they communicate with aliens via walkie-talkies/similar handheld radios

must be something small so it could be secret/private; not a grounded computer in a lab/office

Sarah befriends younger sibling (Steven?) of James’ best friend (Aaron?) at camp

hang out while forgotten because older siblings are at camp; etc.

both notice the depression in different forms

James loses charisma and isolates himself

Aaron eats more and develops anger issues

Siblings investigates camp during family weekend

overhear counselors on walkie-talkies

steal walkie-talkie and attempt to call space station for help

space station laughs at the kids, but the galactic police overhear and assess the situation

Aliens become agitated when counselors don’t respond for weeks

send down small group to investigate; come down at night, steal spacesuits to hide/blend in

siblings trap them in laundry shed

when they return with counselors, the aliens are gone → forced their way out but then reconstructed the wall even better than it originally was

no evidence they were even there, though counselors notice the different wall?

older siblings apologize for younger ones and promise to get them off campus

on the way, they see the aliens’ shuttle and attempt to move it to the large models park, assuming it is camp property → accidentally trap aliens again by putting shuttle under lock and key

Galaxy police arrive to arrest alien scouts for trespassing with illegal intent

staking out planet/assessing situation?  for how long?  should siblings call NASA well before family weekend on pure suspicion?  because atmosphere is political asylum could they already be there?

two agents from nearest base

shapeshifters → look like campers because there are more kids than adults at the camp and they think it will help them blend in better

studied Earth from afar for long time, never actually visited; absolutely clueless about the planet realistically

see kids attempting to move shuttle they (the kids) are unfamiliar with and offer to help

police recognize it as the invader shuttle

Police interrogate kids as they move the shuttle

Sarah & Stephen suspicious of the police due to weird language choices and body language, etc. → assume they are the evil aliens

knock police unconscious and make James & Aaron drag them into a large model to hide

start interrogation of their own; freak out when they realize they really have captured aliens

Siblings take police home with them after things calm down?

police could draw guns on kids when they realize they’ve been attacked

very very very long and awkward conversation in which police explain full situation to kids

ET style situation at home with kids hiding aliens

call it an impromptu sleepover or something 

police wander around the house in awe of humanity

Kids wake up to aliens doing science experiments in their garage

Police found Sarah’s epi pen bag and almost died from their curiosity

Adrenaline is poisonous to most species that do not originate on Earth

Does one police alien die from the epi pen?

Police threaten to arrest kids, but Sarah shows them the needle marks in her thigh and elbow to prove he uses the “poison” on herself not others; kids explain what allergies are

what is her allergy? needs to be something pretty common if used that often to have needle point scars → a type of tree or plant since she transplanted from one side of the country to the other?

HELP FROM HERE ON PLEASE  → I don’t know how the galaxy police are going to find the aliens or how either will react to finding them.  I also want Earth to set the aliens up on Pluto.  I feel like they should demand something in return for giving them a planet in the same system, but I’m not sure what.  Technology of some kind?  Contracts?  As in, employ the aliens (indentured servitude kind of)?  I’m just so lost at this point.

*serotonin: C10H12N2O // Pluto has atmosphere of carbon and nitrogen *adrenaline: C9H13NO3 // poison to most species that do not originate on Earth Earth sets up aliens on Pluto

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i was really excited to get this one out, hope you guys like it.

also a warning for...ahem...sexual stuff(no smut yet) and violence(not described graphically).

chapter 1

chapter 2

chapter 3

chapter 4

chapter 5

tagging: @nightshade1994, @glampyra

Julie looked out a large glass window in their new house, and was fascinated by the sight of this highly advanced alien civilization. This town was small and quaint, but still displayed just how advanced the yyorians were. The houses looked futuristic, being made out of chrome with their own glass windows. The house they were in also had advanced appliances and furniture, and even outside, she could see the other indications of how advanced they were, with their lights and cars that drove all by themselves. Out in the distance, she could still make out some elements of the planet’s natural environment, being able to spot mountains.

One thing in particular that grabbed Julie’s interest, was the fact this planet had two suns. She looked behind her for a moment, seeing that she had two shadows here, instead of only having one on Earth. She’d brought it up to Rick, and he explained the two were connected. Julie smiled to herself, thinking that if her friend Mark was here, he’d say something about the two suns on Glorf being like the two suns on Tatooine from Star Wars. Remembering her friend made Julie’s smile fade, she missed him a lot, and Vivian too, she knew they were definitely worried about her.

But, Julie knew she had to stay here until the situation with the Fyralogin Empire had simmered down enough, to the point where she and Rick could return to Earth. By doing this, she also felt she was protecting her friends, if Cyn knew about them...she shuddered at the thought. It gave her comfort to know they would be okay.

Julie turned back over to see Rick, who was in the process of working something, he’d started a while ago and hadn’t stopped even once. She was concerned about him, knowing overworking himself like this wasn’t a good idea at all, she had to do something.

She went up behind him and poked his shoulder, causing Rick to angrily turned around shout “What?!”

When he realized it was just Julie, a look of regret formed on his face, he felt awful for yelling at her, and her expression showed how hurt she was because of it. He sighed, and decided to try and apologize. “S-S-S-Sorry..ha...didn’t realize it was just y-y-you.”

“It's okay…” Julie responded. “I know you didn't mean it.”

Rick pressed his lips together, eyeing her. “What is it that you want?”

Julie gave him a concerned look. “You've been working for too long, you need to take a break.”

“Oh, y-you w-worried about me?” He asked jokingly.

“Of course I am!” She exclaimed. “Please, just try and relax, at least for a little bit, you need it.”

Well, she did have a point, he was feeling very hungry, thirsty and exhausted after all; but Rick had been working on some important inventions, namely creating new powerful weapons to use. He had been so focused on them he hadn't paid much attention to anything else. He was glad she had been looking out for him, for some reason, it made him feel all weird inside, but he tried to ignore it.

“Alright,” He agreed, getting up from his seat. “I'll go and get us something to eat and drink, be right back.”

Julie watched as he formed a portal, and very quickly, she stared in awe as food and drinks popped out, before Rick himself did. “Dig in.” He winked.

She grinned, and did so with him, realizing what he meant when he’d told her he had getting food covered.

A lot of what Rick had gotten was junk food, and while Julie was the type to prefer eating a healthy balanced diet, she didn't mind at all; Rick was here with her, and because of her growing feelings, she was more than happy to indulge in this with him. That, and she too was also really hungry and thirsty. So, she gleefully munched down on the food with him, finding herself amused when she saw him wolf down his food, and feeling so happy to be near him.

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While they were in the midst of eating, a member of the inhabits of Glorf, the yyorians, appeared. “Rick Sanchez, Vrillon requests your presence, please follow me.”

“Vrillon? Who the hell is that?” Rick asked in annoyance.

“He is the leader here, the one that greeted you and her when you two arrived here.” The yyorian explained. “He is interested in talking more with you about your stay here.”

Rick groaned. “Come on Julie, let's go.”

The yyorian stopped them. “Your girlfriend is not allowed to go, only you.”

Julie became panicked. “But..but I'm not used to this place! I won't know what to do without you Rick..” She even began to tear up a little.

He gently placed a hand on her shoulder, and began to try and comfort her. “It'll be fine, I'm sure I'll be back in no time anyways. T-This place isn't even that hard to figure out either, there's nothing for y-you t-to worry about.”

She smiled, and hugged him without thinking. When she realized what she had done, she pulled away, only to see Rick was blushing and smiling at her.

“You didn’t...mind this time?” Julie asked.

“It’s okay,” Rick replied, his voice sounding gentler and softer than normal. “I..I...I k-k-kinda l-l-liked it...a l-l-litle..” He slowly cupped her cheek with his hand, and Julie leaned into it, her face flushed.

The yyorian sighed. “We need to go Sanchez, it’s urgent.”

Rick rolled his eyes and followed the yyorian, glancing back at Julie one last time before leaving.

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Julie’s heart was still beating fast from how Rick had been so gentle with her, she figured he was getting used to her touch slowly, and it made her feel all warm and fuzzy inside. She loved the feel of his rough skin against her, and she longed for it once more. Julie pressed her hand against the cheek Rick had cupped, and sighed in content.

She really wished he was here with her, but still understood he had to leave because of this…‘Vrillon’ person. Julie felt nervous about the whole thing, but she knew Rick could handle himself, he was so strong, powerful, confident and brave after all; plus, there was the whole ‘most dangerous criminal in the galaxy’ thing.

In the meantime, Julie decided to see if she there was a type of refrigerator in here to put their food in. She knew Rick would be happy to know the food he’d been eating earlier hadn’t gone bad, and she hoped to see a smile on his face.

Julie looked around in what appeared to be the kitchen area, when she stumbled upon a silvery-coloured fridge, and when she opened it, was huge and empty inside. She beamed, and went over to the were food was, carrying it over and placing it into the fridge before closing it.

She breathed a sigh of relief, although at the back of her mind she was still a little nervous she might have messed up a little...she really hoped she didn’t..

Now that that was taken care of, Julie was stuck on what to do next. She thought about it a little, a decided on taking a bath. She figured it would do good for the stress she’d be dealing with slightly, and to calm her nerves and worries.

Grabbing the hygiene products she brought with her, Julie looked for the bathroom, and found it, her eyes resting on a large, circular bath.

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The yyorian led Rick to a desolate-looking building, instantly making him believe something was off, he was glad he’d carried one of his new weapons with him.

When Rick entered the building, accompanied by the yyorian, he was greeted by Vrillon, who had an entourage of some other yyorians with him. Rick narrowed his eyes at him. “What do you want?” His tone clearly showed how annoyed and angry he was.

Vrillon smiled at him. “So I hear you come from the planet Earth, and your girl too, how nice. I once tried to interrupt their tv stations but it didn’t do much. Tell me, how are things going there now?”

“Shut the fuck up and tell me what y-you actually wanted me here for, a-a-and why wasn’t J-Julie allowed to come?”

Vrillon shook his head. “You have quite the temper don’t you? Well I have heard about how violent and destructive you tend to be, so this is no surprise. Anyways...I want to talk the fuel source piece you have.”

“What?” Rick was confused.

“It’s great how you’re fucking over the fyralogins by doing this, and as one of the top members of the Galactic Command, I think it would be useful to take. They know you have it, but if you give it to me, they’ll never know the truth, it’ll trick them.” Vrillon explained.

Rick got even more pissed. “And why should I trust you? I don’t trust any type of government or any of their affiliates either, y-you’re no different.”

Vrillon realized that getting to Rick was going to be harder than he had hoped, he couldn’t have that, and pulled out his gun. “If you don’t give it up, I’ll kill you, and your pretty little girlfriend too.”

That was the last straw, Rick pulled out his gun, and shot Vrillon into nothing but tiny pieces.

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Julie stripped naked and stepped into the bath, before sinking down into the warm water that now enveloped her. She instantly felt her stress and tension beginning to fade away, feeling much more relaxed and calm.

She felt that it wasn't enough though, she needed a little more to relax her further, and well, considering she was staying with Rick for an indefinite amount of time, Julie knew there might not to be too many chances she could do this.

Julie bit her lip, and let one of her hands trail her down her body, until she reached her sex, and began to stroke it. She used her free hand to caress one of her soft breasts all the while, unable to fight back her moans. Her legs naturally began to spread open as she pleasured herself, her pussy becoming soaked with need.

She then let out a soft moan. “Mmm...Rick..”

When she realized she moaned his name, she surprised herself, but didn't mind at all, considering her growing feelings for him.

A fantasy formed in her mind of Rick stripping naked himself, and joining her in the bath. She began to stroke her pussy again, imagining Rick touching her, fondling her breasts, stroking  her sex with those long thin fingers of his. The thought of him doing that to her, made her more aroused and wet than ever.

She had never really thought of him...sexually before, but now that she had, she couldn't get enough of it, becoming consumed by her desire for him. Julie let out sweet moans, unable to stop thinking about the criminal mad scientist, wanting him with her.

Her mind wandered to thinking about Rick fucking her, taking her roughly while she begged for more. At this, her stroking became faster, and she now had her fingers on her clit. Julie could feel her orgasm coming, and when she did finally cum, she let out Rick’s name on a loud moan.

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The other yyorians stared in shock as they saw their leader was blown to bits. Rick gave them a menacing look, gun still pointed in the air, waiting.

One of the group members, an orange-colored yyorian named Oran, spoke up. “What do you think you're doing? You can't just kill our leader you asshole!”

Rick sighed, and Oran suffered the same fate as Vrillon. He looked at his gun, contemplating his next move, and deciding he couldn't let the rest of the group live, someone was guaranteed to reveal what Rick had done. With that, he fired at the rest of them, and when it was over, the room, and Rick himself, were splattered with blood.

He groaned, knowing he’d have to clean this mess up and hide the evidence. He quickly teleported to where his inventions were, and picked one up that could do the job. While there, Rick swore he heard distant moaning, but shrugged it off and returned back to the room. There, he removed all traces of blood from the room.

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Julie felt so wonderful after her orgasm, and stayed in the bath a little longer, content, before getting up and drying herself off.

It was getting late, so she decided to look for the bedroom, and found it, only to be completely embarrassed to notice there was only one bed, clearly meant for her and Rick to share. Everyone seemed to think they were together, and while it wasn’t true, Julie didn't mind at all that people thought they were. She could only imagine what Rick would think about them having to share a bed.

Julie got up and put on her nightgown, before sitting down on the bed. She laid there, thinking about the man she was growing to love, and desire as well. She remembered the burst of confidence she had gotten when defending Rick from Cyn, and wondered where it came from. Then it hit her, what if Rick’s confidence was rubbing off onto her? The thought of him bringing out the best in her was a pleasant thought, and Julie also noted how filled with joy and happiness she would be with Rick around. Maybe it was true after all..

The bedroom door opened, making Julie put her head up, and turn back to see Rick. She got up and eagerly ran towards him, wrapping her arms around his neck. “You're back!” She shouted happily. “How did...it go with Vrillon?”

Rick chuckled, amused by how enthusiastic she was, and also enjoying her hug, noticing he was becoming less nervous about her touch. “Not good, h-he demanded I give him the fuel source, and when I asked why I should trust him, he threatened me...and you too. I wasn't going to put up with that and so I had to...d-dispose of him and his goons.” He explained.

“Well, I'm just glad to know you're okay.” Julie replied, and looked back at the bed. “By the way, I stored our food in the fridge for you. Also, when I was heading off to sleep, I found they only have one bed, I guess the people here really do think we're together..” She laughed awkwardly.

He was glad to know she had stored their food away for later, but Rick's eyes widened when Julie mentioned there was only one bed. He glimpsed behind her, and saw it was true. “Fuck.” He muttered.

“It's okay, we can still sleep as far away from each other on the bed as possible..” She assured him.

“Y-You're right,” Rick grumbled. “I guess that's what we'll do.”

Julie watched in embarrassment as Rick took off his lab coat, shirt and shoes before heading over to the bed. “Y-Y-You coming?” He asked.

“Right right..of course..” She mumbled, and headed over to the bed with him.

Having him so close was maddening, but she was able to keep herself together. Despite the awkwardness of the situation, she was able to fall asleep eventually.

Rick had also felt the same way, having to share a bed because he didn't tell them that he and Julie weren't actually a couple. He had been consumed by his odd feelings for her, and now was starting to realize those odd feelings could be..love.

Love..bah! If that really was the case, it pissed him off to know he had been so foolish as to allow himself to fall in love with someone.

But...he hadn't been able to help himself...Julie was so kind, beautiful, loving, sweet, gentle, understanding, thoughtful-

No! He needed to stop thinking like this! Love wasn't real, it was just a bunch of bullshit, and so were these new feelings...Rick just had to try and ignore them as best he could.

vrillon is a reference to a tv hijacking on november 26th 1977, i couldn’t help but do it. here’s the hijacking:

i couldn’t help but include the classic fanfic trope of having two characters share a bed, it just made sense, the glorfians think they’re together after all. rick getting the food for him and julie through a portal is a reference to when rick did that for him and ice-t in “get schwifty”.

i tried to find 70s sci-fi art to base the cities and the buildings(including their interior), so i just looked up some futuristic stuff.

the interior of the building julie and rick stay in is based on these: