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馃Ι constantly forgetting this little freak has a british accent
#shouldve made him scottish im better versed in that 馃槱#partly bc my long distance bestie is scottish#that and irish are such good accents#i have a private OC with a county cork accent and writing his diaglouge is a TASK 馃槱#*dialogue
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the cons, for me, as a picky reader as well as being a writer when it comes to reading fics as bedtime (i.e. 1am) stories is: a. the fic is so good I can't stop thinking about it which will then inspire me to continue a WIP or create a new idea entirely OR b. the fic isn't written well or is just not the best (again: for me, miss picky reader) which would then inspire me to continue a WIP or create a new idea entirely. Either way, I'm not getting any sleep so the term "bedtime story" is lost on me bc I'm more wired than ever before
#the only fics that out me to sleep are mine aksksks#solely bc i already know what's going to happen#so the excitement and need to know more isn't there#i'm not trying to sound arrogant or anything#bc my writing ain't shit either#but u know when an idea or premise of a fic#is so soooo promising and has so much potential#but the execution just....doesn't quite hit??#and I mean like#scenes or dialouge or words that throw you off so much#*dialogue#bc u have no idea where it came from#like there's fics I've read where an argument would occur#and i'm scrolling back up like#did I miss a chapter or something???#bc it honestly is just so random sometimes 馃槶#anyways it's 3am#I should sleep sksksks#ramblings
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sometimes you need dialogue tags and don't want to use the same four
#they're like synonyms and adjacent words and some of them only loosely fall into the category shown i just needed to stick them somewhere#fanfic writing#writing#creative writing#writers on tumblr#writing dialogue#writing reference#writing tips#synonyms#writing resources#for future reference
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so hard not to become the most annoying person on earth if you're a little excitable and just learned a little about a topic literally no one around you has any interest in
#unforch ive been laserfocused on the composition of toilet cleanibg products and (unrelated) international fishing politics this week so far#i want to talk about anti limescale chemicals 馃槴 and chinese ships off the coast of west africa 馃槓#TO EVERYONE IN THE NOTES: don't worry i am not particularly wounded by the awareness that my coworkers would not appreciate a rant#it is a good idea to make sure your conversations remain dialogue and not uninvited monologue for an uninterested captive audience#there is a time and place for excited half-informed monologues.
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"You don't know me. I'm not the same person anymore."
"That's okay. I'll get to know you again."
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"I have depression." - character who has been through extensive therapy.
"I feel dead inside all the time and nothing helps!" - character who does like, regular introspective thinking and is aware of the concept of mental health.
"Leave me the fuck alone I'll be fine once I get over my stupid shit." - repressed character.
"It's fine I'm just having an Empty Time. What? Yeah, empty times, you know, when everything is like bzzzzzz in your brain and you don't shower for two weeks. Why, what do you call it?" - ooooughhh now we're talkin
#anyway. tones should match the character and I rewrite dialogue 3 times to add layers of stunted communication and trust issues#for the characters who have that obviously
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we share a warriors bond (we were both in the same fandom at the same time and now neither of us are in that fandom anymore but we鈥檙e still beloved mutuals)
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I haven鈥檛 seen anyone post about this but here鈥檚 jerry鈥檚 original dialogue vs the remake!
#ITS GROWTH!!#my edit#my screenshots#smb#pm#ttyd remake#mario#goombella#luigi#jerry#dialogue#image#switch#gcn#ttyd#supet mario bros#the thousand year door#pmttyd#paper mario#jerry ttyd#jerry paper mario
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I鈥檝e always wanted to draw what I think the various Deltarune weapons look like, and I figure why not start with the swords!
The Twisted Sword - The Axes - The Scarfs - The Rings
#these were made based on the item descriptions as well as the dialogue from attempting to equip them to other characters#(鈥媤hich is why the the wood blade has a giant bite mark shsjsjdjdjdkd)#also each one was based on a different style of sword#the wood blade is a short sword; the spookysword is a long sword; the trefoil is rapier; and both the mecha saber and bounceblade are saber#utdr#deltarune#deltarune weapons#wood blade#spooky sword#trefoil#mecha saber#bounce blade#the dork doodles
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suselle my yuris my yuris my beautiful yuri it is a wonderful year for yuri for me specifically
#the meowing of a cat 馃惐馃挄#when my brother got to ch4 and noelle was like hey kris can u like go look for my phone and susie was like yeah go do that#AND THEY GOT TO BE ALONE TOGETHER????#i basically almost jumped for joy. my heart was pounding so hard and i was smiling so much 馃槶馃槶馃槶#i couldnt read all the dialogue because my brother wanted to continue with the gameplay but i WILL read their dialogje#*dialogue#deltarune spoilers
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UNDERTALE: GALT
Hello hellO! this is a introduction song! of a super cool blog!
alright vague reference over, this is a development blog for my Undertale AU that I've been boiling in my head since 2017
THE AU IN QUESTION
This AU is called "Genocide Altered" but in actuality, it's more like if I violently blended all possible routes in the game and poured the horrific nightmare slurry onto tumblr dot com.
This AU follows two mystery kids that, after the game's code basically starts having an active seizure, must return the world how it's supposed to be, there's only one ending and one of the kids came out wrong but hey, never said their creation was perfect.
BLOG? BLOG? BLOG? BOLG? BLOG?
This specific blog will be where I dump all information about this AU, character designs, character factoids, mayhaps even comics?
I'm on and off with developing my AU, so the blog will have bouts of radio silence as I make things coherent.
Posts will be tagged as canon or noncanon or nothing depending on the contexts of the post, this is mainly to keep things clean.
-enjoy! or don't! I don't care, this is for me first and foremost, @goosecorp
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Patching him up
Edit: Added ID thanks to @anistarrose !!
Edit: Also wanna take this chance to say in the original post, I already realised susie meant she patched tenna in the lightworld, not in the darkworld. Still, I liked envisioning how this would look like anyway :]
#Deltarune#deltarune spoilers#deltarune chapter 3#Tenna#Mr. Ant Tenna#Ant Tenna#i trust anyone not wanting to see deltarune spoilers have already muted the deltarune and deltarune spoilers tag#I am a little sad he was fixed up off screen#i would love to see just a shot of susie and the others patching him up#and greatful dialogue from tenna#susie#susie deltarune#pippins#shadow guys#Ive already completed both chapters im still just#sitting here thinking about chapter 3#even though its mostly the goofy kind of chapter#theres still. alot#lavdoods_vb
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Okay guys
#i don't wanna work a minute longer on this one i honestly started to hate it so im getting it out of my system as soon as possible#i have other Bilbo Baggins fanarts planned;)#also i dont care what anyone says Bilbo likes kids#hes a story teller he wrote the book for Frodo#maybe he got the idea from the young hobbits who have been a constant pesterers of his life asking him to tell stories about his adventure#i dont know i have a lot of thoughts on this but i cant write it down#not the best with words i am (as you can see from the dialogue lol)#anywaaaayss eat up Bilbo enjoyers#the hobbit#hobbit#bilbo baggins#tolkien#bilbo my beloved
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