#Rewrite

[thepinokio]

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[napyki]

REWRITE MY BELOVED 😭

[dreemurr-skelememer]

rewrites for @digglesgiggles

[alisinyobooty]

ׂׂૢ THE LOLLIPOP ׂׂૢ (revised)

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Summary: headed to the store craving a lollipop sweetness, You came back with Chris craving a different type of sweetness.

AN: I lit have the og on my account from a year ago… we don’t talk about that. So this is my new and improved version LMAOO!! Ts also long ash💔

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Up and around the staircase of the triplets house the 4 of you went. Plastic bags from the little dollar store run shuffled against one another and with a thud they hit the counter. Feet scurrying to dig for the bag of lollipops you and Chris were so hopelessly geeking about. Practically ignoring Nick and Matt you throw one to Chris before you feel his soft hand take yours down the steps to his bedroom. A place you were familiar with. Not only because you have been in this house countless of times before but because Chris hogged you like if you were already his. Claiming you without words, through actions. Not like you minded. His bed being your automatic spot, leaving it to you he sank comfortably in his little chair beside.

Silence between you two rose. Clicking and random TikTok audios. But the one sound that popped in here and there, barely hitting your own ears, the one that felt like the loudest noise, at least to Chris was the noise of the lollipop going in and out of your mouth. A pop and a suck. His stare unthreatening but deep. Observant. A glint of something bigger beneath played behind those blue eyes. Your tongue meeting around the lollipop taking in the flavors. Spit coating it for a moment before you dipped in back in your mouth.

The brunette across from you moving himself a little too much in his chair at the mere sight of something so innocent. Thoughts filling his mind as he himself was salivating. Not from the taste of the lollipop. But the taste he hoped was to come. A taste yummier. A taste more fulfilling.

Your thumb hits to pause your video. A final pop sound coming from you as you pulled just the stick of the now finished candy. Eyes training upwards, there’s no reason why. Was it you subconsciously feeling the stare? Either way you met gazes. Intense. Wrong time even as you trail right down to his palm in his lap. Then back to his face. Flushed? “Chris you alright?” Voice soft on the surface but to someone caught, and overwhelmed, it was sharp. Demanding. Condescending? Whatever it was, the heat growing wasn’t dying down. Not in the slightest. “Alright?” He repeated back. If you look close enough you swear sweat dripped down his face. Hips slightly move forward. Legs spread wider as he gives a half ass smile. “Don’t bullshit me” you reply crossing your arms as you tilted your head to him. He hated how you could read him. “Nothing!” This time it was quieter. Almost ragged. Your eyes trail back down as you watch his hand either move or cover himself. Was he- omg?

And just like that he was the lollipop. The sweetness you craved. The goodness that you held in your hand. His own gripping your hair like a lifeline. This lollipop had more to it. It made sounds. It came with a show. Even an extra surprise at the end. It felt like rewarding something you weren’t supposed to. He was just getting off to you through his clothes. Pre cum on it to show the evidence he couldn’t hide. Instead of leaving, you stayed. Stayed and dropped right to your knees. His pants followed right with you. The feeling of just your lips around his big form sent him into a frenzy.

Your eyes lowly looking to his. Bitting his lip, suppressing the sound of his pleasures to keep his brothers from hearing. The need he felt to yell your name. Turn the whimpers into full blown screams. Gagging a bit as he jolted his hips forward. Whore. His body was practically begging for more. You were willing to make him break. Hear your name on his soft lips just once. Tears filled your waterline as he twitched within you. Hes close. Just before you were to suck him clean, he filled you up.

Warmth filled your mouth, sweetness to a hint of saltiness. That saltiness that was overshadowed by just what you wanted. That deep guttural noise you've been craving More than any lollipop. Made it worth it.

he was finished and your mouth was full. Full enough as he breathlessly wiped his mess off you, a passionate kiss. One filled with neck grabs and a trail of saliva connecting you both. “Sweet” he simply says as you giggled.

Just like a lollipop.

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[sakxcii]

I hate this guy

[invictusunbrokenunbowed]

you you get it

but what if the star wars sequel trilogy had been an animated series like the clone wars but set during the rise of the new republic? what if it was another fairytale after at the end of the first? what if it was about heroes and hope and family and the promise that sometimes everyone can get their happy ending? what if instead of turning evil and destroying the new jedi order, ben overcame the darkness before it could consume him? what if finn was an ex-imperial-cadet who luke rescued and trained as a jedi? what if rose just got to have a space horse and be happy? what if poe and ben were the wisecracking duo of best-friends-who-each-secretly-think-of-the-other-as-their-sidekick, a sort of successor in spirit to anakin and obi-wan? what if finn and rey got to be their ahsoka, a young tagalong who sometimes maybe saves their lives (and is insufferably smug about it afterwards)? what if there was no first order, only the remnants of an empire that had to be picked apart? what if the plot of the show was of saving the things we love and not of fighting the things we hate? what if the dragons stayed slain? what if the princess and the knight and the scoundrel got to live happily ever after? what if they all got to live happily ever after?

just... what if?

[setestudios]

mfw

[bkchaos]

Trying to figure out how to draw Rewrite closer to their model..

[fabuloustrash05]

Hi! I've been wanting to publish a tmnt rewrite post for a long time about what if April's "Half Kraang" arc had lasted a little longer and how will she walk the path after "The Kraang Conspiracy" episode. You, as a writer, I'd like to hear your version of how she would deal with such news rather than accept too quickly that she has been lied to throughout her life.

I'll definitely credit you as an author if I take some of your thoughts in my future post.

Thank you in advance if you read it ^^

Ooo! Yeah, I've been thinking about this too actually. In the 2012 series April seems to accept the fact she's a mutant way too quickly. I wanted to see her come to terms with it, explore how she and others (her dad specifically) feel about it and when did she fully embrace it.

April seems genuinely shocked, scared, like her whole life has been a lie, when first learning she's a mutant and rightfully so, but then the episode ends. After that reveal, she just moves on with her life, not really talking about it and showing concern about her new found identity.

The very next episode is the Fungus Humgus episode so I think it would've been a good start to explore her identity crisis. Maybe instead of the fear she's seeing being her dad as a bat trying to eat her (which can still be included) its her seeing herself transform into a Kraang like monster. Indirectly showing the audience that she's scare and confused, unsure of what exactly she is: "Am I human or a Kraang?! Why and how did this happen to me?! What am I??!!!"

I feel it would also be a good moment for her to talk with Splinter, since he's the only human turned mutant she knows (that this point) who can enlighten her on what it was like, feeling his body change and move into something else entirely, and how he came to accept his new life as a mutant. I think Splinter would admit to April he hasn't fully adjust to his new rat body and there are times he hates what he sees when looking into a mirror, but it's his sons are the ones who keep him going and appreciate the life he has now. It would also be a good bonding moment for her and Splinter, which we needed more of.

I remember one time I made a Tiktok a LONG time ago that basically went like;

Casey: You didn't say your friends are mutants! April: What's wrong with that? Casey: Mutants are dangerous! April, shocked and hurt: I'm a mutant...

So April would have moments like that where she's conflicted with mutant subjects. She's not human enough to be considered "normal" but she doesn't look mutant enough to be with them. She'd torn between two worlds and neither will accept her (cause it's established in later season that some mutants HATE humans: Punks Frogs, Alopex, etc.)

I feel there was also a missed opportunity for April to discuss this with her dad. Kirby must have SOME KNOWLEDGE about April's Kraang origin because he was LITERALLY THERE WHEN THE KRAANG TRIED TO CAPTURE HIS DAUGHTER BUT GOT HIS WIFE INSTEAD!!! (i'll get to more of that later)

The April's mom episode will also really take a toll on her, seeing that Kraang creature and fearing that is what she truly is on the inside. She has seen what she is capable of by this point and I think it would've been interesting to maybe have an episode during the farmhouse arc where April goes away for a bit, scared she'll hurt her friends until Raph is the one who finds her. He'd open up to her and tell her that while he won't understand what she'd going through, he knows he fear she has of hurting loved ones. This would also give a good April and Raph bonding moment of his sharing with her his fear of letting his anger getting the better of him that he harm hurt his brothers. Raph's words will give April the courage to go back the farmhouse.

I've always stood by the concept of April getting more Kraang features the more be begins to embrace and understand her powers. For me, it would start with April having green eyes instead of blue for the entire show (her mom has green eyes and so do the Kraang, subtly foreshadowing, you know?). Then after the season 3 finale, that's when things get crazy.

This moment is when April's Kraang side will really show. After April's freak out of Splinter's death, 6 long skinny pink tentacles will sprout from the back of her neck, pink antennas pop from the top of her head, she eyes glow full green. This is April's new look for the rest of the series. She can easily retracked them but whenever she's feeling intense emotion or even during combat, they sprout out and assist her. I can even imagine her using the tentacles to help her hold things lol.

Once April is in space, that is when she truly comes to love and embrace her Kraang mutant side. Being in space was like a self discovery journey. I feel her befriending and training with Fugitoid would help her embrace that side of her. Fugitoid would train her to properly control her powers, making her comfortable with her Kraang features being out (note: beginning of space arc she'd hide them in shame for looking like the enemy, Mikey thinks they're cool and wants to test them, but the Turtles tell him to give her space and let her adjust). The Utrom Council could also play a role in April learning more about her Kraang side, or even her mother's origin. By the end of the Space arc April would fully embrace her Kraang features and show them off with pride. This will lead to conflict with her father later in season 4.

Side note: I'd also like to add the concept of April befriending Mona Lisa and her being the one to give her ideas of how to fight with her Kraang tentacles, since Mona fights with her tail. Just a cute idea lol

April would finally confront her father about their family connection with the Kraang after returning from space, and it's reveal Kirby has always known she was a mutant Kraang, and her mother had ties with them. He just never wanted to tell her and hoped the Kraang would never find them. He never wanted that side of his daughter to come out, after all he's been through with losing his wife, he feard this Kraang side of his daughter would make him lose her too.

Spoilers for Kpop Demon Hunters, but it will be like the scene when Rumi confronted Celine for making her cover up her demon patterns;

April: Why can't you love me?! Kirby: I do! April, Kraang side coming out, full of rage: ALL OF ME!!

This drama would also tie into The Power Inside Her episode (which btw would've been a good season finale after all that build up). I don't know fully how it would play out, but her dad will play a big part in the whole Za-Naron situation. It will end with Kirby finally realizing he's fear is pushing his daughter away and he accepts her for who she is fully and is supportive from there on out.

But those are just a couple of ideas I have for this concept! I hope you like them and I cna't wait to see what you'll do with them! Feel free to add your own creative ideas too :D

[rheitais]

Rewritting this one as well lol

DP X DC prompt: the constantine twins (it came to me in a dream)

So John Constantine and Danny Fenton are twin brothers (up to you if Danny is Goldie but alive or if all three of them are triplets) and one day Danny is summoned (by the JL, JLD, or a cult was unclear) and John was there.

I think Danny was injured when emerging from the circle(ghost fight, vivisection, GIW encounter), and so immediately collapsed. John catches him and is rightfully concerned. his twin brother (up to you if he knew about him being half dead or not) just came out of a summoning circle (ghost king, ancient of space, bridge between worlds) and he is in desperate need of medical care.

But at this point I woke up, so the rest is up to interpretation.

[manifestnotfound]

so

rewrite round 2 you say ... with gallery ... with memes .... this is banger btw uauuauauuuauau

the most sane and serious comeback from me yes yes hello

[xxelenorexx]

bee and breakdown duking it out on the battlefield for completely different reasons than everyone else is SENDING ME

“I WAS NEVER ENOUGH HUH” “YOU COULD NEVER COMMIT”

the other nearby bots who fight for a cause: ?????

It’s so tragic yet hilarious at the same time from the different perspectives 😭

Oppy and Megs are literally like: Great they’re at it again

While Bee and BD are having the most emotional battle of their lives 💀

[karasucatt]

When your boyf is a ✨creature✨

[erikthecathedgehog]

Rewrite sonic!! I really like how I drew him<3

[maggieknight]

Art I finished on stream. These goobers are having a picnic again.