#dialogue flow

[hinamie]

unconditionally

[penstricken]

Top Tips for Writing Beautiful Dialogue

Read my top tips for writing dialogue in my new blog post here 👇 #amwriting #writing #fiction #writer

Dialogue is a critical part of any novel. Apart from the fact it makes up a monumental chunk of your overall word count, it can be a powerful tool for creating suspense, driving the plot and fleshing out your characters. Get it right, and you’re halfway towards writing a killer novel. Get it wrong, and you’re done for. If you really want to see a master of dialogue at work, you should read Hills…

[northstarscowboyhat]

I think Clover should scream and yell and bite and blast things when they're angry, actually

[vuelode-irbis]

[ID: digitally drawn fanart of the cat from Flow. They're walking towards the left with a fish in their mouth, they look down to a puddle, in which they see their reflection accompanied by the friends they made along their adventure: the dog looking excitedly at the lemur and the capybara walking behind. End ID]

took a break from birbfest to draw some Flow fanart since i went to see the movie and loved it so much. i love when characters don't talk yet they say so much aaaa

i also made a little comic to my reaction at the end, which was mainly for instagram but i liked the face i gave my fursona so im posting it here too

[ID: digital drawing of an anthropomorphic cat sitting in a cinema room, watching a movie. They're crying as they eat candy from a bowl. There's a thought bubble coming from them that says "I fucking miss my friends". End ID]

i know the movie has some biblic stuff going on but i need more religious education to understand that and i haven't seen my friends in months

[you-know-cchio]

my favorite type of scene is when all four of them are onstage but two of them are having a conversation for the audience to hear and the other two are silently stagecrafting whatever they want.

bonus: luke playing two characters at once while the other three play ping pong in the background

[spinji]

'My Hero Academia: You're Next' - OVA Short: 'A Piece of Cake' [English Subtitles]

[mochipong]

Save them again, homecoming queen. Again, and again, and again

[cubbihue]

youre itty bitty au is so peak.. can we get more information on peri and timmys relationship?

When Peri went to Boarding School, Timmy was his “Primary Guardian” since his new apartment was closer to Peri’s school than their parents were. This meant that, on some occasions, Peri’s first call would be for Timmy instead of their parents.

Once, Peri got caught joyriding and ditching school campus against curfew. Timmy had to fly out to bail him (and Irep) out of the detention center. They crashed at his apartment while he worked with Anti-Cosmo to remove that incident from their records.

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[beaulesbian]

ONE PIECE ep. 1026 || "There's something I have to do."

[homokoken]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66336298

I made a fic because your hot as fuck Kremy art motivated me so this is for you now. It’s Coallecroux btw if you would like to read it

so i read your fic. give me more 😩👈🏼👈🏼👈🏼

[skunkes]

scrapped

[theinkwaygame]

This action will have consequences

Part 2 is here! Continuation of this post

Sorry it took *checks notes* …several months for me to finish this. I was motivated to make a comic but alas, I did not know how 😔 But what’s important is that I made it!

[twentyfivemiceinatrenchcoat]

i think you have to beat into your brain that everyone writes differently and that your writing style is something to cherish even in the places it lacks …. it’s valuable enough that it’s all yours.

[flushwithdarlings]

"Here, Rook, try this."

"Lucanis Dellamorte, I will gladly eat anything you give me."

It is an act that knocks Lucanis off guard, the way Argentei catches his wrist with an elegant hand and dips down to take a bite of the flaky pastry held between his fingers.

It is sweet, it is salty, and it pulls a pleased, bordering on obscene, sound of satisfaction from their throat.

Lucanis' blown black eyes narrow down to the way the pink tip of their tongue runs across the plush of their lips, chasing a stray bead of honey.

For one desperate moment, he thinks that they might move onto the crumbs on his fingers.

Mercifully, they don't.

Mercilessly, he is sure that they can feel his pulse thrumming like a bird pinned down by their thumb.

Their hand doesn't leave his wrist.

[cloudwardhoe]

I saw the movie Flow! Some thoughts:

So if you don’t know, Flow is an animated movie that follows a lost cat who’s home was flooded and there is no dialogue other than than various animal noises

I am not really someone who can sit with no dialogue movies. Like I can barely do subtitles

But I think this was worth it.

The animation was beautiful

All of the animals personality’s really shined through

Like the cat was my cat. It’s little meows broke my heart because that’s exactly how my cat sounds

The cat and dog interactions were perfect

The lemur was so funny

The birds were jerks though. All the other animals acted (mostly) how you would expect them too. But would a bird actually intentionally break another birds wing? It was awful

It reminded me a lot of the game Stray; but with less robots and more animals.

I wish we did get a little glimpse of the human that had to be there at some point. I found them relatable without ever seeing them. Like I too would create a massive statue of my cat along with various other statues honoring her many cute little cat poses.

Overall I would recommend it. Maybe be cautious of taking kids who get bored easy. But highly recommend to animal lovers especially cat lovers. And anyone who loved stray. Nice little quiet movie during a hectic time of year.

[annikathewitch]

Upsides to making Garak and Bashir talking about Frankenstein a loadbearing part of my Garashir fanfic: Thematic relevancy, angst potential

Downsides to making Garak and Bashir talking about Frankenstein a loadbearing part of my Garashir fanfic: I have to actually write Garak and Bashir talking about Frankenstein