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Among Us Logic: Rewritten • A Bunch Of Yapping!! (Part 2)

Once again, AULR is a colab project between me and @coinholder! HUGE huge yapping session and stuff is under the cut!! Note that all of this is still a work in progress and will probably change!! You can find Part 1 here!

ACTUALLY GETTING INTO MORE OF THE STORY-FOCUSED STUFF NOW RAAAGGGSGGGDGSH :3

OK OK JUMPING RIGHT INTO IT CUZ IDK HOW TO REALLY DO AN INTRO LOL so like. the episode summaries from the last post can kinda explain some stuff for me but yeaaa!!! A lot of the weird non-Among Us stuff I kept was mainly to serve as foreshadowing for the big 5 part “Finale” to the series with the NoVisor Arc!! I mean, NV’s connection to Player (and being the reason for his curse of bad luck) is already explicitly canon, so NV being the explanation for all the weird stuff in the series isn’t too far fetched to me! The prequel is still Fall Guys Logic and everything from those first two episodes stays pretty much the same, but AUL onwards is pretty different! Sorry in advance for the amount of times I might repeat stuff here and everything, I just. I just really like the silly gametoons among us fanfiction. REALLY hoping this next batch of paragraphs make sense >_<. Oh yeah also putting here that yes I’m making Noob a main character who’s actually likable (she is already in GT’s post-AUL content imo) and I’m making PlayVetNoob a thing instead of PlayVetCap. Boo me all you want, I don’t care! /hj /silly

ANYWAY please read the episode summaries in the first part of this series if you haven’t already cuz you’re gonna need to see all that for the sake of understanding the rest of this more lol. So a lot of the episodes here are bunched up into “Arcs” of sorts, with the first one being:

The Omelette Arc

This arc technically starts in the 2nd episode when Mr. Cheese kills TheGentleman as an Impostor. At the end of that episode, Player and others rejoin the lobby and are greeted with what is basically a screaming match between the two business partners. Episode 3 is when the arc really kicks off with the introduction of Mr. Egg, with the 4th episode causing a rivalry between him and the FGL Trio. Just like in canon, Mr. Cheese makes his grand return in episode 5, disguising as Player and killing Mr. Egg as payback for the Crewmate getting everything he didn’t (ie: TheGentleman being nice to his partner and not a dick for once). Oh yeah by the way, in this version of the story TheGentleman had technically never “terminated his contract” with Mr. Cheese, implying that his partnership with Mr. Egg was the equivalent of Gent cheating on him. Mr. Cheese’s emotions were already kinda understandable in the canon series, but in this rewrite we kinda leaned full in on Gent being an awful person at the start. Mr. Cheese doesn’t really want TheGentleman back romantically like in canon, at least not at first with the whole abuse stuff, but he just wants to work with Gent and have him treat Cheese with some basic goddamn respect!

Similarly to Episode 2’s ending, Player joins the lobby just in time to see TheGentleman speedrun his breakup with Mr. Egg (Like to contrast to how loud and obnoxious his breakup was with Cheese, he just walks up to Egg after everything and says “consider our work partnership terminated.” and leaves the game) and wonder what the hell is going on before the credits roll. The episode after that isn’t the Halloween special (that happens later) but actually a rewrite of AUL 8! After the beginning musical number, Mr. Egg is like. very much going through the 5 stages of grief with processing TheGentleman’s breakup and Mr. Cheese is practically going out of his way in trying to worsen it for Egg lmao.

Like. Mr. Egg at first is trying so hard to pretend like the breakup didn’t truly happen, being in denial of feeling any hurt from it. This eventually leads to him bargaining with TheGentleman to give things a second chance, but Gent is insistent on leaving things be for the sake of the rest of the Lobby. This sends Mr. Egg into even more of a depressive state, not even caring about finding out who the Impostors are anymore. His anger towards Mr. Cheese soon clouds his vision and he tries convincing the others to vote him out because “he must be the impostor, he’s ALWAYS the impostor! It just has to be him” but it’s so emotionally charged that literally nobody buys it… but with some advice from Player, Mr. Egg eventually learns to accept that TheGentleman’s moved on and that he must do the same. Idk I just like Mr. Egg and I think that episode idea is neat :3

The final episode of the Omelette Arc is the Egg/Cheese Impostor episode that we honestly should’ve gotten in canon like. it was right there GT cmon now… anyway, Mr. Cheese and Mr. Egg obviously both aren’t really thrilled about being each other’s Impostor partner, and spend a little while trying to sabotage the other player. Eventually though, they both have an argument when nobody else is around and blow up at each other. It’s revealed to Mr. Egg that Mr. Cheese never got any real respect from TheGentleman when they were together, and it’s revealed to Mr. Cheese that Mr. Egg didn’t even know he existed until after the stunt he pulled in his Player disguise instead of being fully aware like he thought he was. Now that the two of them are rightfully angry at TheGentleman, the two food-themed characters actually team up and successfully frame TheGentleman as the Impostor while still putting up a front of hating the other! After the game, we see the final post-lobby confrontation between the three beans, and instead of an argument, the talk surprisingly goes over well! After this episode, TheGentleman starts to put an effort into redeeming himself and being a better person to the others! Again, Mr. Cheese doesn’t get back with him immediately, but still! There will be among us yaoi trust me lmaoo

ANYWAY now that the first arc’s over I’m gonna talk more about the episodes in between all that and the Hackers’ Lobby Arc!! So by this point the few notable weird moments that have happened in-game can be handwaved off through other means, but the first truly significant non-among us thing is directly tied to NoVisor itself, although we don’t really know what it really is at this point yet. For the Halloween Special, we’re just straight up introducing NoVisor’s current vessel, Aiden!

The episode begins with Player dying per usual, getting killed by PoopyFarts96 as the Impostor (which is. Something to say the least). While exploring the out of bounds part of The Skeld in boredom waiting for the round to end, Player manages to find a hidden area in the map, no doubt some kind of Easter egg tied to the Halloween event update. In this new void area, he finds a lone brown Crewmate chained to the ground, and when he tries to interact with them, he finds they actually can communicate back! The problem though is that this person seems to have extremely little recollection of who they are, and there’s a feeling that they’re being drained of the small amounts of energy they have left, for one reason or another…

Somehow, Player does manage to jog their memory a little bit, and the Crewmate tells Player that his name is Aiden, and that he had gotten trapped in the Digital Space while trying to get work done for the college he was attending. There was also something about glitchy visorless ghosts and some kind of vessels? Player unfortunately didn’t get enough info about everything before he was forcibly sent back into the Lobby due to the game ending. He never got the chance to interact with Aiden again afterwards either, even while the Halloween event was still up. He thought it was a bit strange, but it was probably just a rare chance for a meeting like that to happen, and that he somehow scored the RNG odds to get it. Innersloth did a damn good job of making things spooky for the occasion, that’s for sure! At least, that’s what everyone took from Aiden’s introduction :] (I like to think that Aiden isn’t really mentioned after this episode for a while, so both people in-universe and viewers just assume that he only existed for the Halloween special, just like Freezy in canon, which would make the NV Arc being as big as it is all the more surprising!)

Blue also offhandedly mentions encountering a Cult during the early days of him playing Among Us too when he gets introduced to the rest of the game. He’s still very much the “normal guy surrounded by weirdos” like he is in canon, and he was planning to leave the group after his first few rounds with them, but Mr. Egg manages to get on his good side, and Blue decides to stick around a little longer to get to know him more!! Ninja also makes a small return in an attempt to help Player get his first Victory, but it doesn’t go as planned because it’s Player. After Player unintentionally breaks Ninja’s win streak as Impostor, he decides to take a page out of Blue’s book and look for other people to play with for an episode, leading him to stumble upon the GTG Lobby! I’ve always loved the idea of Rookie and Player mirroring each other when Rookie was first introduced all that time ago, and I’m definitely taking that idea for this rewrite in one way or another! The way the GTG Lobby play the game is by having it in a sorta gimmicky “hard mode” called Among Us Extreme! It basically has the whole shebang; highest speeds, lowest vision, confirm ejects off, anon voting, etc! I don’t have all of the GTG episode written out yet, but uh. I probably will soon!!

The Hackers’ Lobby Arc

This is probably the arc I’ve talked the most about! It goes from episode 12 to 14, so it’s quicker than the Omelette Arc was. I’ve yapped a lot about NotOrange’s episode in this post and the Hackers’ Lobby here, so feel free to check that out! TLDR being that NotOrange and Player are partnered up as Impostors, with NotOrange using a mod to gain the upper hand. Because of Player’s willingness to let it happen, he gets sent to the Hackers’ Lobby alongside NotOrange. After Player’s former companion ban-evades his way out of the lobby for the umpteenth time, Player is stuck in the room on his own and quickly finds out from the others there that he most likely is banned for good. Player, adamant on escaping, teams up with a trio sharing a similar goal to help him gain the approval of Ms. Pink and especially Admin.

These three crewmates in particular are Angel, Mother, and Goober! Angel knew Player before (episode 1) and is helping him out of the kindness of her heart, same with Mother but she also thinks that it’ll make her look better towards Admin so he could let her out too (along with Timmy and Franklin) (she is insistent on keeping their mods on), and Goober… Goober just has nothing else to do lmao. Don’t entirely know how yet, but Player does eventually get enough approval from Admin to show he’s changed about hacking in the game, allowing him to leave!

Now uh, I’m sure some people might have noticed that I haven’t really brought up Captain all that much! Well him being a side character here more than a main character is pretty intentional by this point. We aren’t really leaning into his “friendship” with Player as much as GT is and are focusing more on his self-proclaimed title as “Leader” of the crew. He’s even the one to introduce new characters to the rest of the Lobby! Lately though, people seem to be respecting his authority less and less, especially Player with that hacking-the-game thing! Captain’s a bit of a control freak in this, and Player breaking his rules as badly as he did was somewhat the straw that broke the camel’s back.

When Player arrives back into the Lobby, he’s immediately hit with another hacked game! This time, anyone killed by the Impostor is sorta turned into one themself, losing full control of their character as the bean is turned into a zombie! A lot of the episode kinda stays the same, but the Captain reveal is the most notable part that was rewritten here. With the round nearly over, Captain goes to turn off the mod and be the big hero… but it doesn’t work. Cap’s smugness quickly turns to panic as he’s caught red-handed by Player, and he explains that he created the mod to affect anyone he kills as the Impostor. He did do it to cause himself to win, but he wasn’t exactly going out of his way to make Player lose. His plan was to “save the day” and get everyone’s respect as leader back, but he wasn’t as skilled of a hacker as NotOrange was, and was gonna be sent into the Hackers’ Lobby anyway, so his plan severely backfired. The episode ends with Player apologizing to Captain for not respecting the rules he put in place as they both lose to the zombies, with a post credits scene of Captain meeting a ticked off Admin (and worried Ms. Pink) afterwards.

After the Hackers’ Lobby Arc, the group feel a bit off without Captain’s leadership, but they’re also understandably a bit pissed at him at the moment for the stunt he pulled. The episode after this is the first episode in a while that isn’t focused on Player, and is surprisingly focused on the two silent brown crewmates in the Among Us Losers (although one takes the white color cuz of Cap’s absence this ep): PoopyFarts96 and Cub! This episode with them is kinda silly, but we also learn some interesting stuff to say the least with these two! Since they’re both quiet in the series itself, they use Discord DMs and facial expressions(?) to communicate what they’re saying. The episode shows that the two only have one goal: make Player lose. Always. Even when they’re on the same team, they both need Player to lose. However in this particular round, they make a huge error that gives Player the upper hand, so they kinda have to scramble in a comedic way to prevent Player from getting that sweet first victory before the game ends! They’re successful, but the two aren’t really celebratory afterwards about it. The ending of the episode shows one final DM conversation from the two beans, explaining that as much as they want to, they can’t back out from this grand plan now without harsh consequences… whatever that means. I’m sure it’s nothing important!

AULR Episode 17 is a proper Valentines special cuz we needed a proper valentines special imo and NO I refuse to accept AUL 16 as one lmaoo… anyway this is more of a chill slow episode. Player’s the impostor and he does try to win the game like he usually does but he eventually just decides to focus on just being with the people around him and all that stuff. GentleCheese get back together, Noob and Player let Veteran into their relationship, Gnome and Engineer have some cute moments together and there seems to be something going on between Blue and Mr. Egg too… and Ninja as the token single who’s just quietly (lightheartedly) making fun of the others in the lobby. The way Player loses here is actually through a tasks win but like. as pathetic as that is at least it makes sense!!

Captain finally makes his return back from the Hackers’ Lobby in episode 18! The episode here is basically focused on Cap trying to get the respect of everyone back after the zombie stuff he did a few episodes ago! Also just gonna add here that Dum doesn’t play Among Us at all in this and thus doesn’t really meet Captain, sooo no CapDum!! I don’t really know how this episode’s gonna fully play out but Cap does somehow get a second chance from the rest of the group, just in time for The Airship to drop as the newest Among Us map (this all still takes place in 2020/2021 in-universe)!! Most stuff from Airship Arrival carry over, like TheGentleman and Player being impostors and surprisingly enough, the way Player loses stays the same too! I know people say that PF recording him was a copout in canon, but I think it makes sense in the rewrite with what we know about him and Cub by this point! …yknow, we haven’t really talked about an arc in a minute… I say we change that a bit!! Technically the NoVisor Arc starts on episode 21, but Hornsly’s introduction episode is kinda where it all starts to go down.

This episode also takes place on The Airship, with a new member of the group, Hornsly, joins the Among Us Losers server, along with his pet robot QWERTY! Everyone obviously is like “yoooo adorable robot hell yeah” but QWERTY’s more shy and reserved at first, kinda like their owner, but something must’ve happened to it in between the waiting room and the round beginning, because things just kept getting more and more off with it as the game progressed, almost like it was being controlled by some type of higher being…. the round ends with Hornsly dying, but QWERTY taking the reigns and sabotaging the victory of every Crewmate, saying that the “mission” it had was “too important to jeopardize”. After the game’s over, both Hornsly and QWERTY are very understandably very confused, creeped out, and concerned with What The Hell Just Happened. The duo then leave the lobby to contact Innersloth about the issue, with the rest of the group planning to do another round in the meantime, changing the map to The Skeld just in case.

Despite Player’s increasing anxiousness about continuing to play the game, he decides to stay online with the others anyway, and the screen transitions from the waiting room to the actual round beginning… he finds himself not sitting in his room at his home laptop anymore, but in The Skeld as the bean inside the screen. Player is now trapped inside the game!! DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!! and then the episode ends on that cliffhanger lmao

now uh. for the rest of the NoVisor Arc… I’ve decided to make a third part for, cuz it’s quite a bit and I’ve definitely infodumped and yapped A LOT in this post already!! hopefully this can satisfy the few AUL rewrite fans for now! Third part coming soon hehe :3

#btw I wanna say that in this rewrite it’s canon that PF and Cub are in a private server together called ‘‘MINECRAFT ON WEED!!!!!!!’’#where they. well. yknow. play Minecraft while high #and plot secret evil schemes for the sake of building a better future and accepting fate and all that #oh yea forgot to mention that PF’s ‘‘language’’ here is just him using a soundboard lmao #he can communicate in English perfectly fine if needed but playing a goofy noise is infinitely funnier to everyone #nobody has ever heard his voice apart from Cub and like. MAYBE he did a voice reveal accidentally on a late night VC but everyone else #didn’t remember cuz of how tired they were lmao #among us logic rewrite #among us #GameToons #among us logic #AUL #Rose’s super epic and cool art #yes I got lazy with the backgrounds for the art but like. agggggh shoutouts to gametoons artists fr dude #among us oc #<- cuz Admin #THIS TOOK SO LONG AAAAAAAAA #MY BRAIN IS FRIED /hj #pls send me asks about AULR btw if there’s something confusing cuz i definitely put something in here that would probably need to be #explained more lmao

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