Evannah Potter: King's Cross Station
My first ever published (mini) chapter (1,843 words)!! This takes place after the true beginning of this story, but is the only chapter I wrote that I am halfway satisfied with. That being said, there are a few things that need to be clarified: Evannah was raised away from Harry for reasons that will be explored in another post. Like many muggle-born students, Evannah received a visit from Professors Burbage and Dumbledore to explain magic to her (in her case with a long-lost brother bonus) and is making her way alone to King's Cross. The characters Phoebe and Nancy are originals and orphanage friends.
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For the first time since she was seven years old, Evannah Potter wasn't sure where she was going when she left the orphanage that morning.
London was engraved in her brain, obvious in her accent. Orphan City stuck to her like a tattoo- literally- and the London Underground system might as well be her playground, and this was all without counting the buses. So, standing between platforms 9 and 10 at King's Cross, trying to work up the courage to pass a wall, which would (supposedly) take her to a magic school, where her long-lost brother(?) would go to in two years, the girl had never felt more ridiculous or clueless. Evannah was early and exhausted from walking all the way from Soho to King's Cross with a trunk the size of a crib- which she still did not understand, these people had magic, magic, and insisted on carrying luggage around, of all things- not to mention the whining cat she brought with her in a cage on her other hand- oh yes, try opening a door like that. Or stairs. If the tattoo on her finger wasn't already enough of a people repellent, then that vision ought to do it.
"You're lucky you're cute, Atticus," she whispered down to the grey ball of fur meowing away in a box by her feet. The cat looked at her indignantly, and meowed louder.
Evannah crouched down in front of the box. "I'm sorry, alright? But what else should I do? Put you on a leash?"
Atticus did not look any less offended.
"What, you think I should've let you free? Atticus, you're scared of balloons, I can't expect you to follow me all the way here."
The following meow sounded like it meant that she very well could and should have, so she reached into the cage slowly, waiting for the cat to press up against her fingers. He did, after a moment, purring softly at her silent apology, until something caught his ear.
The next second, Evannah found herself sprawled over King's Cross' filthy floor, loud, startled cat protests echoing at her side and two red-ish blurs in front of her.
"Oh, by Merlin, are you okay? So sorry about this-" said one of the blurs at the same time the other said, "Ah, fuck, sorry, sorry. We didn't see you."
"FRED! GEORGE!" screamed a woman from far away. Distantly, Evannah thought she sounded like she was carrying multiple bags at once. Like those mothers with three or so small children that go around the supermarket playing with the cart, you know? The mothers that always have those gigantic durable supermarket bags on them.
"Nasty fall, that was, do you think you can stand?" asked someone gently, but casually. Not the blurs. An older voice. Someone that sounded like they wore leather.
"Again, so sorry about that-" said a blur.
"-we really are," added the other guiltily.
Did she fall? That couldn't be, Evannah Potter hadn't fallen since 1986. She had ridiculously good reflexes. Once she even caught a button that flew out of Phoebe's shirt.
One of the blurs made a sound of realisation.The one on the right? "Oh, you need your glasses, don't you? Ginny, can you get the glasses?"
A flash of movement to her left, the soft brush of metal against her hand. "Here."
Christ, she should really say something, shouldn’t she?
"Er, thanks," Evannah finally managed and put the glasses on.
Oh, the red-ish blurs were twins. Gingers. A whole family of fiery-red hair and freckled faces, it seemed.
The twins still hovered over her, brown eyes checking her for injuries. The older voice, the one that wore leather, was indeed much older and did, in fact, wear a leather jacket. Spot on, she thought distantly. The one who had handed Evannah the glasses, on the other hand, was a girl about Nancy’s age, maybe a bit older, definitely more outgoing.
“You’re welcome,” replied the girl politely.
“BILL, YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO WATCH THEM-” came the yelling again. Evannah could see the woman now, a short, less fiery ginger, mother with a kind demeanor but furious glint in her warm brown eyes- who was not carrying gigantic supermarket bags, although she must have at some point, with so many children.
“Oh, my! Dear, are you all right?” questioned the woman once she saw her.
Honestly, Evannah was still rather confused about how she ended up on a filthy train station floor, and the angry cat next to her wasn’t helping, so her eloquent response was: “I think so, ma’am.”
“What even happened?” asked a new voice. A boy with gelled-back hair behind the woman.
The older one with the leather jacket straightened up. Bill, from what Evannah gathered. “They were running around with their trunks- I know, mum, alright? I’m sorry- and crashed into her.”
“Really sorry about that,” said the twin on the right.
“We were trying to see who’s fastest,” added the other.
Understandable.
Irresponsible, but understandable.
Evannah made to stand, an attempt to help the twins out with their mother. “It’s okay, I think. Really, I’m all right.”
They helped her stand- the twins, that is- and she thought the family’s worry was rather sweet, if a bit exaggerated. Her trunk had probably had more damage done to it than Evannah herself.
“Sorry, kitty. We didn’t mean to scare you,” said a twin to Atticus as he flipped his cage back to the correct position. The cat hissed his opinion on the matter, but sniffed the boy’s hand nonetheless.
“Sorry, trunk,” copied the other twin as he took her luggage from the floor, and Evannah had to laugh. “Didn’t see you there.”
“Fred,” reprimanded the mother.
“But, mum, I’m only being polite,” protested Fred, offended.
The other twin, giving up his luck with Atticus, who had stopped sniffing and was glaring at him, took the cage from the floor and handed it to Evannah. “Here’s your cat. Sorry again.”
“Yeah, sorry,” repeated Fred, more genuinely than when he apologized to the trunk.
“It’s fine, really. You didn’t do it on purpose.”
The twin that was not Fred nodded, “We really didn’t, we were trying to get to the Hogwar- to our train on time.”
“Oh, you’re going there too, aren’t you?” asked the girl. Gina?
“...where?”
“Hogwarts, of couse,” announced a completely new voice, and Evannah was faced with two other red-headed boys- wow, that’s a lot of children- and a tall man that must’ve been their father. “We saw the fall on the way here, hope you’re all right,” continued the voice. The second oldest of the children, a boy with the three top buttons of his shirt unbuttoned.
“Oh… yeah.”
It must be real then. Okay.
“Us too.”
“First year?” asked the father.
“Er, yeah”
The twins straightened up. “Same as us, then.”
“Oh,” nice? Okay? Good to know? What do you say to people who knocked you over and were really nice about it? “-cool.”
“All right, we should start going to the platform, in any case,” spoke the father, ending the discussion, “Would you like to go first…?”
“Oh, sorry, I’m Evannah. I’ve never… been before.” the girl gestured to the wall.
“Nervous, are you?” said Bill . “You won’t hit the wall, don’t worry. Did it for seven years, only ever hit my head on the train window.”
“Charlie, go on first, then, show her,” commanded the woman to the son with the unbuttoned top buttons.
Charlie grabbed his trunk and rushed to the door, looking back at her reassuringly, and just as she thought he would collide face first with the wall, the tall boy disappeared behind the red bricks. The boy with gelled-back hair- Percy, apparently- went next, seeming very proud of himself for being a demonstrator. Soon enough the twins were through as well- the other one’s name was George- leaving Evannah to go next.
The mother smiled encouragingly at Evannah “Now, off you go, dear. We’ll be right behind you. You’ll be all right.”
“Unless you're waiting for your parents…” offered the father, suddenly realising that the girl was alone.
“Oh, no, no. I’m on my own,” responded Evannah immediately, vaguely. “Right, guess I’ll go, then.”
She shot the family one last look before holding on tightly to her cart and running towards the bricks. Halfway through, Evannah was already regretting her decision. Was she about to be knocked over a second time in the same day? She was ready so splash her head against the wall, Atticus hissing his protests behind her, and then…
The twin that was not Fred nodded, “We really didn’t, we were trying to get to the Hogwar- to our train on time.”
“Oh, you’re going there too, aren’t you?” asked the girl. Gina?
“...where?”
“Hogwarts, of couse,” announced a completely new voice, and Evannah was faced with two other red-headed boys- wow, that’s a lot of children- and a tall man that must’ve been their father. “We saw the fall on the way here, hope you’re all right,” continued the voice. The second oldest of the children, a boy with the three top buttons of his shirt unbuttoned.
“Oh… yeah.”
It must be real then. Okay.
“Us too.”
“First year?” asked the father.
“Er, yeah”
The twins straightened up. “Same as us, then.”
“Oh,” nice? Okay? Good to know? What do you say to people who knocked you over and were really nice about it? “-cool.”
“All right, we should start going to the platform, in any case,” spoke the father, ending the discussion, “Would you like to go first…?”
“Oh, sorry, I’m Evannah. I’ve never… been before.” the girl gestured to the wall.
“Nervous, are you?” said Bill . “You won’t hit the wall, don’t worry. Did it for seven years, only ever hit my head on the train window.”
“Charlie, go on first, then, show her,” commanded the woman to the son with the unbuttoned top buttons.
Charlie grabbed his trunk and rushed to the door, looking back at her reassuringly, and just as she thought he would collide face first with the wall, the tall boy disappeared behind the red bricks. The boy with gelled-back hair- Percy, apparently- went next, seeming very proud of himself for being a demonstrator. Soon enough the twins were through as well- the other one’s name was George- leaving Evannah to go next.
The mother smiled encouragingly at Evannah “Now, off you go, dear. We’ll be right behind you. You’ll be all right.”
“Unless you're waiting for your parents…” offered the father, suddenly realising that the girl was alone.
“Oh, no, no. I’m on my own,” responded Evannah immediately, vaguely. “Right, guess I’ll go, then.”
She shot the family one last look before holding on tightly to her cart and running towards the bricks. Halfway through, Evannah was already regretting her decision. Was she about to be knocked over a second time in the same day? She was ready so splash her head against the wall- shielding Atticus, of course- and then…
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