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Panel one shows Tenzō having turned away from Kakashi. There's tears running down his face again, but his posture hasn't gotten tight and defensive again.
"Hah. That's a pretty big drawback," he says, half joking,
Panel two, Kakashi's arms enter the frame and grasp the edges of Tenzō's happuri. Tenzō, seemingly caught off guard, lets him do this, too surprised to even mind that Kakashi can see his tears.
"On the bright side, you have a home," Kakashi counters, "people you trust,"
"and a shiftless, good-for-nothing Captain, who's too lazy to fill out the paperwork for hospital-dodging." Kakashi says in panel three.
The image shows Kakashi smiling more convincingly, if a little apologetic, gripping Tenzō's happuri in his hand.
Panel four shows him holding Tenzō's happuri out with one hand, and Tenzō grabbing the metal sides of it with both of his own hands.
"Anyway, I'm pretty sure you're not a liability or a threat to Konoha," Kakashi says.
In the final panel of the comic, Tenzō ducks his head, looking up with one tearful eye as Kakashi reaches out. Tenzō is still gripping his happuri in his hands, close to his chest. Kakashi's back is drenched in the yellow light of the hall.
"My couch is yours, if you want to stay the night," Kakashi is saying as he ruffles Tenzō's long, now-unbound hair.
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Hello! I don’t even know if the offer for you to draw in return is open anymore, but I felt the desire to draw the Bad Omens boys with my own boys anyway lol. Their names are Zephiel and Roxiflr :3
it's still very much open! :^D and also EEEEEE LOOK AT THEM!! thank you so much for drawing them and having them have lil interactions with your sillies too 😳 that's so fun!!!
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hey everyone, I'm planning on doing a write up for my website about neocities accessibility sins (things like cursors not having pointer states), lmk if any of you have seen something that makes a website hard to understand or navigate
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Vani writing tips + personal thoughts that noone asked for but you will be hearing
1: longer is Not always better. If youre telling a story, then your audience doesnt need 3 pages worth of side material. If youre writing to genuinely draw in an audience and tell a story then you need to not treat it like a game where the goal is to get the highest wordcount possible. You should be treating yourself And your audience with respect and making sure the words you use make an impact rather than trying to fill empty space. Brevity is your friend
2: if you need to make a clarification that your work doesnt endorse what your protagonist is doing, or needs to clarify that the protagonist is a Bad Person, then youre not mature enough to be writing that material. At best it shows that you dont understand the nuances of writing villain protagonists, and at worst it looks like you think your audience is too stupid to understand that saying slurs is a bad thing.
3: you cannot attempt to break the rules of writing if you dont understand them in the first place. You arent douglas adams. You arent Mark Danielewski. You need to stop and learn how to use a semicolon and a hyphen and how different words help describe things before you try to make a thousand word 'stray from traditional storytelling' . At the very least learn the basics from a youtube video
4: YOU NEED TO LEARN HOW TO WRITE DIALOGUE EVEN IF ITS BAD. You cannot dodge around dialogue by just having back and forth phrases in quotation marks. And no marker you use to differentiate speakers is going to be anywhere close to just using "he said" or even "he yelled". Youre robbing yourself of crucial storytelling materials. Even if you dont want to learn every part of how to write you Need to learn how to do dialogue or your entire story is going to crumble
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hiiiiii dante feel free to ignore me i am. watching black sails. as i do. and i was thinking about that initial ask you sent me about silver and marc and YES i did immediately derail it to make vale and silver comparisons BUT i think you were very much onto something in terms of how silver conceptualizes himself post-amputation. it reminds me of our crazy little hot girl's myriad complexes about his arm in some ways....
orig ask. laughing that this was my first ask to you i think... of course it would be black sails that would make me come out of my shell.. anyway. twirls hair HIII yes. YEAH. so within the context of black sails flint and silver are inextricably linked different sides of the same coin which is the same for valentino and marc right so i loved where u initially went with that ask.. cuz theyre both Both in different ways.. and like. i was conceptualizing vale as flint bc of how hes positioned narratively as well as how hes thought of by other characters - as a god. as the one who will betray anyone. who only cares about himself. gay and sinister with an evil buzzcut. and so on. and then marc as silver EXACTLY!!!!!!! bc of the disability of it all the losing his leg. what are marcs pre surgery adventures if not silver being surrounded by his crew and being told theyll still love him and support him even without the leg. marc being the one to usurp vale... like. you cant do 1:1 silver:marc obviously but thats not the point of any AU ANYWAY i digress. callie give me more thoughts anytime its been a while since ive been in the thick of thinking about black sails so im out of practice talking about it. i also think this quote is sooo vale. jack rackham did you know valentino rossi ?
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YOURE SAYING VALE CONJURED THAT STORM ? IM SAYING HE CONJURED US INTO IT. AND WHOS MORE POWERFUL: THE ONE WHO MADE THE STORM OR THE ONE WHO CONVINCED US INTO BATTLE TO DEFEAT IT #sepang15
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