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Do you have an editor for Something Rots? Like for text and writing I mean. To look over for grammar/spelling/typing mistakes or inconsistencies. Just curious. Some people also prefer not to have editors or only want people they know to look over their stuff, I'm just curious where you land.
I do have some friends helping me since I'm a non-native English speaker. Everything I write is first written in the language I'm most comfortable with, then I translate it to english— my writing style uses a lot of weirdly structured prose to help that feeling of confusion, and that is really hard for me to translate without making any mistakes in the process. I'm still learning to translate my drafts and not making them sound stiff or machine-translated, but thankfully I have great friends that help me to correct any mistakes I might forget.
#chrona... answers things?#my spanish drafts are NOTHING like the end product#they're usually well-#not as bad as the eng version#but that's because i'm used to writing all my stuff on spa before eng#and don't even make me talk about my DE skill#everytime i write something in german it sounds so#stiff and unnatural
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Fun fact someone not liking children doesn't make them an asshole! Being mean to children makes you an asshole tho! Hope this helps!
#any time i see a post like “fun fact its unnatural to hate children” i wanna rip someones head off#like SHUT UPPPP#PEOPLE CAN DISLIKE AND HATE KIDS AND ITS NOT SOMR SORT OF A MORAL FAILING IF THEY DO SO#THEYRE ONLY ASSHOLES IF THEYRE MEAN TO KIDS#stiff talk
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goro akechi has hypermobility to me. i'm hEDS and the blackmask stances feel so freaking good, are actual stretches and if you relax your super tense muscles a little - boom. using the fewest muscles possible to reach or stand and its upsetting everyone who looks over at me. im slow-fast like a spider. hunching like a mad cat. claw fingers are such a relief from constant 'gentle looking' delicate super-firm focus pen holding, bag holding, nice pleasant hand shapes. holding your body like a normal person and being hyper aware of staying within the range of motion that doesnt upset people is mentally exhausting, let alone all the ramifications of hypermobility (pain, fatigue, atypical injuries that go untreated bc its not technically a muscle tear etc) everyones like "oh no, thats so scary, your body position seems frightening/gross/painful" yeah, maybe to you without ~ the range ~, but this feel sooooo good. epitome of going feral feeling good. even when a hypermobile stretch hurts, it hurts so differently (so nicely, what a relief) to the holding-yourself-upright pains. moving inefficiently for my body but within expectations of Properness is infuriating and unnecessary suffering and i have absolutely snapped bc it was costing me to conform and no one else paid that price. and thats gorocore
#persona 5#goro akechi#hypermobility#i'm literally hEDS and the chronic low level pain/fatigue of connective tissues not working right and#having a slight horror movie monster-esque way of moving if you drop the mask / forget anyone can see you#(which ppl mock u for / requires constant effort to hide)#absolutely makes sense to me with his character - and informs how i read fandom's reaction to his poses#people are like “aw meow meow freak” and it's like#yes. but - the freedom to move how your body is built for and the fresh stretchy good pain of moving right (compared to stiff weak pain of#holding your flesh together through mental fortitude/will power)#is so satisfying and it's a bit of a fck u society etc for making my movements unnatural coded.#persona 5 spoilers
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Honestly, whether you’re of a mind that it was natural for him or not, Lucanis breaking out the moves in the pantry during the almost kiss scene would one hundred percent have me giggling and kicking my feet, brain no worky, don’t ask me the color of anything
#lucanis dellamorte#‘he looked unnatural’ this ‘his face looked stiff’ that#he looked like a dude putting the moves on a sucker and I’m cherry flavored
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if they let annabeth talk w her natural accent ppl would stop saying her acting felt stiff thank you for coming to my ted talk
#listen#hear me out#my mom was talking abt this abt how leah’s lines feel clunky and awkward#and i think they make her overenuciate#and then it sounds unnatural#but when she just talks normally everything sounds better#also i’m black just for reference#but when she talks fast and doesn’t enunciate she feels more like a character#anyway#i love leah i think she devours everhtbjng she does#i just keep seeing ppl saying she feels too stiff#and i think that’s why#leah sava jeffries#annabeth chase#black annabeth chase#percy jackson#pjo tv show#pjo#percy jackon and the olympians#riordanverse#lynx talks
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OC Speech Mannerisms
Tagged by: @ladyshivs Thank you!!!
Corey Rook
NO. OF SPOKEN LANGUAGES: 1 / 2 / 3+
TONE OF VOICE: high / average / deep
ACCENT: Yes / No
DEMEANOUR: confident / shy / approachable / hostile (killer RBF) / other
POSTURE: slumped / straight / stiff / relaxed
HABITS: head tilting / swaying / fidgeting / stuttering / gesturing / arm crossing / strokes chin / er, um, or other interjections / plays with hair or clothing / hands at hips / inconsistent (almost 0) eye contact / maintains eye contact / frequent pausing / stands close / stands at a distance
COMPLEXITY
VOCABULARY: ⬤⬤〇〇〇
EMOTION: ⬤⬤⬤⬤⬤
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: ⬤⬤〇〇〇
PROFANITY
FREQUENCY: ⬤⬤⬤⬤〇
CREATIVITY (in regards to profanity): ⬤⬤〇〇〇
BOLD ALL THAT APPLY: arse. ass. asshole. bastard. bitch. bloody. bugger. bollocks. chicken shit. crap. cunt. dick. frick. fuck. horseshit. motherfucker. piss. prick. screw. shit. shitass. son of a bitch. twat. wanker. pussy.
IMPORTANT QUESTIONS
DO PEOPLE HAVE A HARD TIME HEARING OR UNDERSTANDING YOUR CHARACTER? - almost always / frequently / rarely / never
DOES YOUR CHARACTER'S INTENDED POINT COME ACROSS EASILY WHEN THEY SPEAK? - almost always / frequently / sometimes / rarely / never.
WOULD YOUR CHARACTER INITIATE CONVERSATIONS? - almost always / frequently / sometimes / never.
WOULD YOUR CHARACTER BE THE ONE TO END CONVERSATIONS? - almost always / frequently / sometimes / rarely / never.
WOULD YOUR CHARACTER USE 'WHOM' IN A SENTENCE? - yes / no / only ironically
YOUR CHARACTER WANTS TO MAKE A COUNTERPOINT. WHAT WORD DO THEY USE? - but / though / although / however / perhaps / mayhaps.
HOW DOES YOUR CHARACTER END CONVERSATIONS? - walk away / ask if that's everything / say that's everything / give a proper goodbye / tell their company they're done here / remain quiet / they don't.
WHAT SOCIAL CLASS WOULD OTHERS ASSUME YOUR CHARACTER BELONGS TO, HEARING THEM SPEAK? - upper / middle / lower.
IN WHAT WAYS DOES THE WAY YOUR CHARACTER SPEAK STAND OUT TO OTHERS? - accent / vocabulary / tone / level / politeness / brusqueness / it doesn't.
Tagging @localcryptic , @b33tlejules , @silvery-bluish :)
#This was so much fun lmao#Corey has a Weird set of speech mannerisms since theres so much dissonance between how they like to talk and how they were *taught* to talk#Much Nuance but their posture is super stiff unless you get them to actually chill bc theyll gesture wildly and fidget#and theyve been told off for it a lot so they tend to just cross their arms and hold unnaturally still while talking#theyre REALLY good at vocal mimicry and tend to adopt other peoples tone/ vocab#their voice is usually on the higher end of average and very scratchy#but they can do a perfect ortega impression#lots of thoughts about coreys voice#corey rook#fallen hero#oc lore
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Taking a temporary break from my art slump to bring you fanart for a fantasy webcomic I binged, @comicaurora (and a link to it's website) and testing out a new set of sketch/stippling brushes in Clip Studio. I'm still rusty and this could use some work, but it's been fun.
#art#aurora comic#I really want to do one each for the “main cast” but we'll see how that hashes out#Fun Fact: I was originally gonna do a panel redraw and I didn't touch it for like a week and when I get back to it#EVERYTHING looked so wrong I just scraped it immediately. Faces looked weird. Posing looked stiff and unnatural.
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My doctor has assigned me perfect classical ballet posture
#Real life#Medical issues#So my lung issues that I have complained about on here many many times#Turns out#My ribs were in the wrong place and all twisted up and compressing my lungs#Which#I did not know your ribs could fucking move raise your hands if you knew that your ribs could twist themselves around#What the fuck even are human bodys#Who designed us???#Whyyyyy is this an apperantly very common thing after coughing for weeks on end#Why did nobody tell me your ribs could fucking move#So today I spent the afternoon with the docs fingers digging into my ribs and yanking them back in place#(Guess how fucking sore I am now)#(She also put me on different inhaler medication yay)#But anyway she saw me after leaning and all twisted up and tore into me and was like#You trained as a classical ballerina yes? You need to hold that posture forever#For those that dont know ballet posture is the goddamn worst#Like stretch out your neck and back as long as you can go and then lengthen it out some more#Then you fucking relax your shoulder and arms and then you drop your shoulder blades (no lower lowerrrr)#Like its stiff and unnatural and painful and also I like sitting like the gay germlin I am#Ans now im supposed to exist like this 24/7 for the next year???#Might have to start dance classes up again so its worth it#All this complaining being said#I thought I was fucking dying so I'll fucking take it#It is a relatively minor thing all things taken into consideration
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they sleep :)
#sidenote but i like how when data gets knocked out he doesn't slump over like geordi and riker but goes unnaturally stiff instead#arms sticking straight up and all. nice little 'data is an android' detail there.#emma watches star trek
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Bought a stupid suit thing. Disgustang.
#speculation nation#i got it on sale but it was still kinda expensive. ughhhh#hates every part of that. it's so stiff and uncomfortable and unnatural feeling.#but business professional is the recommended attire... so to that i went...#felt bad staying so close to close but the employees were nice about it at least. and i still got out b4 they closed (barely)#i wanted to go shopping earlier today. in between class and orchestra. but allegedly attendance is required in the lab.#so i went. didnt really feel like attendance was taken. but i still went.#still gotta finish prepping my resume but i dont think itll take Too long... i got a template to follow#from my web coding class actually. bc we just happen to have a resume building assignment this week.#so by working on my resume im working on the lab!! yay!!!#except im not doing the lab resume rn. just the normal resume. the template is still helpful tho.#also need to do a bit of research into the companies that are there and the interview style thingie#GOD this is going to be a whole hassle. i dont wanna wrinkle my stupid suit so i shouldnt stuff it in a bag.#and i dont wanna BIKE in the stupid suit. so im thinking of driving up to campus. forking over the money for guest parking#do the stupid career fair then drive back home to change and then go back up to campus on bus or bike in time for bowling#hopefully. we hope. nonzero chance of having to miss bowling and web coding classes tho. depending on how long i spend at this thing.#ultimately career bullshit is more important than one day of bowling so like. whatever.#but i still want a reward for sucking it up and going to the stupid career fair anyways. even tho i Really dont want to.#im already planning on skipping my first class. he made it sound like it would be fine + expected. so we can go to the career fair.#and that opens up a good amount of time so. doing that. and then hoping i can make it to bowling class...#it's funny to imagine if i didnt have time to go back home to change. me showing up to bowling in a suit.#im not doing that tho. this shit was too expensive to risk it doing physical activity.#BLARGH i am so supremely grumpy going to this thing. i dont want to. at all. i hate all this Professional Attire bullshit.#but i need to... and i already went thru the hassle of getting the damn suit... might as well just go.#i will simply pout and grumble the whole way. until tomorrow where it'll be full social smiles and whatever the fuck.#need to get enough sleep to make talking easier. no time for any fun stuff tonight.#need to find my damn. razor. bc i need to shave my little mustache thing probably. for 'professionalism'. ugh.#kicking and screaming this whole way. man i dont think i even own an ironing board. gonna have to hang the shit up and hope for the best#longest sigh imaginable... i just wanna write....... or play video games...... wahhhh#at least itll be over tomorrow. but then i will have to do presentation stuff for thursday. ughhhhhh
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Robotic ass animation
#honkai star rail#this does not look like real people moving#am i just zzz pilled?#i cant be right? this looks so unnatural and stiff
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why is writing smut. so hard.
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okay question
if you could reblog that'd be great
#my posts#polls#poll#made this poll because my mom and i just had a very heated discussion about thank you notes#to me writing a thank you note feels stiff unnatural robotic and scripted#apparently to her they feel natural#presumably much of society feels the same#sometimes i get a glimpse into the neurotypical brain and am deeply shaken by what i see
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Hm i treat characters more like actors kn this scenario
I mean, bad thkngs happen to him but he gets himself into them. I guess i help him a little bit... at the same time i AM him. Idk ... it is complicated.
As an actor and writer, I find it so funny how actors will say stuff about “taking care of” their character and respecting them meanwhile writers are like “beat that bitch into the ground.”
#writing#i feel a bit like an actor-- bc i become the character.#i feelwhat he feels thats how i knlw how he feels#if i dont things get v stiff and unnatural
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Very old animation I made of Peppermint swaying on her feet from 2019. I never posted it cause I never finished it. But I look at it from time to time cause I think it's neat.
#my art#BPBRC#Peppermint Greer#her hair is weird and very stiff cause that's how her hair functions canonically#she's an alien using a human form so her hair is unnatural#you can tell it's old cause of how I draw eyes lmao#also kinda the body but that's maybe harder to tell unless you're me#I'm actually impressed I could make it this consistent across frames maybe I need to stop doubting my ability to be consistent.
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Istg my family managed to put into me the complete fear of grammatical errors in whilst making sure to let me know my (Romanian) grammar is utter crap and
it's
making my sending of any and all emails VERY hard and stressful
Which is not good with my being class prez
#and being expected to send emails and all that to professors#you can probably also see this when I talk Romanian on here cuz i probably sound veery stiff and unnatural#egg.txt#rant#vent
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