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agirlsguidetolove · 2 years
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True Love’s Kiss
neteyam x reader
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words. ab 550
catergory. fluff 💗😍☝️
warnings. kissing ig and i think that’s it
Summary. being the best healer of the Metkayina clan (not to mention the most attractive 😉😉), meeting the sully family was bound, but ever since neteyam has found out you heal wounds with a kiss, he’s become your most common visitor. 
“Really, Neteyam? Again?”
Neteyam smiled sheepishly at you, eyes flickering over you as he approached where you’re sat. “Your friend likes to fight,” he explains. 
You roll your eyes, mumbling “skxawng” under your breathe and his smile grows wider, the few navi words he’s taught you sticking to you like glue.
You remember formally meeting the same boy, along with his brother and sister two weeks ago. Neteyam had a nasty cut on his hand, one he had somehow gotten from Aonung, the same boy who keeps injuring him to this very day. You had laughed it out with a sigh, reaching your palm out and gesturing for him to put his own it. He did so quickly, placing his hand in yours, and you remember calling Aonung an ass, which had him and his brother and sister chuckling. Your thumb brushed over the edge of the cut, and he hissed, throwing his head back slightly, but not taking his eyes off you.
“Sorry,” you said, pursing your lips in concern. His breathe had hitched as you leaned down, gently kissing the gash on his palm. You both watched as the slit glowed with a yellow shine before it had reconnected, magically stitching itself back together with ease. The look he and his brother and sister gave you was one you had grown familiar with after years of healing others.
You smiled, then looked at Neteyam will a soft smile. “All better,” you said, dropping his hand from your palm. He had looked at you with something you couldn’t explain, and his was agape before it was opening and closing like a fish. Then, his brother and sister ushered him out, telling you thank you. 
Since then, he has been a frequent visitor. 
Neteyam crosses the few feet separating the two of you with haste, sitting just in front of you. You can see the reappearance of the same cut that’s been lingering on his lip for the fourth time this week. 
“The same spot?” you muse confusedly, leaning forward to observe it further, unaware of how the boy in front you’s heart is fluttering as your proximity. 
He swallows dryly, wincing when your thumb touches the open wound. “Yeah,” he exhales, “Guess I still haven’t learned yet, huh?” 
You smile, shaking your head with laugh. You oblivious to how drunk he feels hearing laugh. He swears it’s music to his ears. 
“Don’t know how you haven’t, mighty warrior,” you tease. 
He hummed, trying his hardest to fight the wide smile making its way on to his lips. He isn’t in control of his eyes either. They keep flicking between your eyes and your lips as you inch toward him. 
Your eyes flicker shut. Neteyam allows his own to. Your lips tenderly consume his bottom lip and Neteyam holds back the groan threatening to spew from his throat. Just as quickly as your lips had touched his, they were gone. 
He chases after your lips, unconsciously leaning towards you, saying your name breathlessly before opening his eyes, remembering the situation he was in.
“All better?” you asked, tilting your head to give his lips a once over, making sure they were just as perfect as the day you had met him. 
Neteyam sighed, smiling timidly. “Yes, thank you.” 
“Anytime,” you laughed.
He really hoped you meant that. 
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sillspore · 10 months
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Could you please infodump some of your mothpool headcanons to us?
they’re so. they’re so i love them (my bad this turned into a mothpool story ramble instead of headcanons)
- leafpaw sees mothpaw once and her lesbian eyes widen like she just saw god
- mothpaw is super anxious and leafpaw makes her feel unjudged and like an equal
- yes i made moth a paw still, i’ll have it so moth was changed to a med app shortly before her warrior ceremony, explaining why she’s an app and hawkfrost is a warrior
-mudfur names her mothwing (after the fake sign hawkfrost planted) before he dies
- anyway back to the gays
-they’re both lesbians, mothwing is a trans girl :) for me bc im trans and i like making characters trans and also for biological kits purposes
- in the lake territories, leafpool has a crisis when she realizes she loves mothwing. they have a little abandoned cave slightly past the territories they’d meet in i think
- mothwing confesses first, not caring for the code (in ripples, meds can have mates just not kits unless they have a replacement while they step down to care for their family) (half-clan relationships are still forbidden until bristlefrost’s law is made, allowing cats to switch clans to be with their mate)
- leafpool gives in and they are mates!!!
- they almost run away. go back to save thunderclan :( just like leafcrow in canon
- shortly after, leafpool realizes she’s pregnant!! luckily, squirrelflight confesses that she is too. they concoct a plan…. leafpool will give her kits to squirrel to raise, and no one can ask where they came from bc of the queen’s rights law in the warrior code
- (leafpool can’t raise her kits herself bc she’s the sole medicine cat, her clan would be left without a healer)
- they openly tell everyone squirrel is expecting to take attention off of leafpool, brambleclaw immediately assumes they’re his — squirrelflight doesn’t refute him. she only sees him as a brother, but if she denied it the only other cat as a possible father would be ashfur, or a rogue. neither of those options are good for others to assume in her opinion
- as canon, squirrel and leaf go off, and luckily they give birth at the same time. squirrelflight gives birth to hollykit and breezekit, and leafpool gives birth to lionkit (name change maybe), jaykit, and dovekit. they do this at the moonpool, and the wailing attracts crowfeather. he and squirrelflight get emotional, muah muah, cutesy, agree to separate, crowfeather takes breezekit for his friend nightcloud to raise with the kits she was currently giving birth to. that’s the reason crow was out, to get her a nice stick.
- they go back to tc after a patrol helps em carry the 4 kits, later on dovekit dies, squirrelflight is devastated :( so is leafpool :(
and brambleclaw ig
- holly, jay and lion are raised as siblings
- after the reveal, i kinda don’t want leafpool to die as i’ve said before so i think she’ll go to riverclan to be with mothwing, but she’ll be there as a warrior
- theyre so sweet :( leafpool picks flowers and puts them in mothwing’s mane
- leafpool headbutts, a trait she shares with squirrelflight
- mothwing curls around her every night to keep her warm. in greenleaf, leafpool often has to kick her away bc the heat is STIFLING
- leafpool brings the thunderclan herb pouch craft to riverclan, which afterwards becomes quite popular
- leafpool takes her swimming lessons from mothwing, and doesn’t do half bad! she ends up enjoying it
- similarly, she enjoys fishing and how calm it is
- whenever she can find willow she weaves it into necklaces and crowns for mothwing. they are all over the medicine den
- mothwing loves her wife so much she uses her healer privileges to get her the best piece of prey
- leafpool acts as mothwing’s guard, which just means leafpool is required to accompany mothwing on most patrols. leafpool is delighted by this.
- they bask on rocks together!!!! leafpool is entranced by the way mothwing glows
- “i don’t know her god, but i’m no stranger to devotion”
- maybe they’ll even have more kits… who knows?
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omg i love suni Lee!! Definitely americas next it girl! Especially after hearing her story about her being diagnosed with not one but two kidney diseases, she’s so strong. I’m pretty sure Devin probably saw all the comments about them looking good together. It would be nice to see him with someone that’s not an ig model
omggg i had no idea abt that :( what a warrior
devin needs to stick to the rivers and lakes hes used to
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vilejpg · 2 years
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I posted 223 times in 2022
That's 170 more posts than 2021!
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fanclan stuff
came up w/ this a while ago- as in like a year ago- so here it is, ig
anyone can appropriate it if for some god forsaken reason they so desire to, just pls give credit ig?
Clan 1: Mesa Clan / Mountain Clan 
Camp: At the base of the mountain, with a cave entrance (sized like this).
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Inside the cave, there’s a dip in the ground where a pond used to be, which is used as a training arena. There are cliffs and ledges all over the cave, with ‘bridges’ between them made of tightly and carefully weaved sticks and stems. The entrance to the camp is hidden under ferns and aloe plants that they cultivate.
These cats have strong back legs and hardened paws, that help them jump and make sure they aren’t cutting themselves up every five seconds. Their claws are thick and hooked, all the better to catch and hold down lizards and geckos with.
Kits are kept in a nursery that’s completely bedded with moss, petals, and smooth rocks to protect their sensitive little paws as best as possible.
There is one area that is like… a miniature pride rock that can fit one or two cats on top of it. This is used as a gathering point, where the leader can call their clan together.
Here is what the surroundings of this clan looks like:
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never gonna show any colored version of this! why? because im godawful at coloring. but yeah. deer. mhm.
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give-grian-rights · 2 years
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not gonna main tag this BUT!!! WARRIOR CAT RUN DOWN
big post, just for people who dont know how warrior cat functions.
I'm making a warrior cat!dream smp fanfiction which wll..convey everything from wilbur founding l'manburg, up too when i die, or dream smp has a proper finale, ig. whichever comes first. so my story will be a bit divergent from the typical warrior cat laws!!
A clan is a group of cats. In this universe, all cats go SOMEWHERE in the afterlife. There's kitty cat hell, The Dark Forest, kitty cat heaven, Starclan, and vague mentions of an afterlife for the cats that do not believe/support Starclan! Such as housecats. For some reason, all of the ghost cats can kinda.. go too each of these places, to an extent.
The clans take up TECHNICALLY two names. A prefix, which I'll use the example of Honey. As a kitten, his rank would be part of his name. He'd be officially called "Honeykit" and it is considered strange to refer to him ONLY as Honey. He'd be a kit until he reach 6 moons, or six months. They measure time by "moons", or how long it's been from the last full moon. A week after a fullmoon, is a quarter moon two weeks after a fullmoon is half moon, as the moon is now half full. so "it's been a quarter moon since I started, "i only have half a moon left until i'm an apprentice", etc As an apprentice, or a teenage cat, he'd be renamed to Honeypaw. All apprentices add the word "paw" to their name. Apprentice are given mentors, who teach them how to fight, hunt, etc and guide them to surviving the clan. They have ONE assigned mentor that they stick with, unless there's an accident or something. But apprentices often train together, with one or both mentors teaming up to tackle tasks at once.
As a warrior, there is any possibility of what their name would be. It is very, very uncommon for a parent of a cat to give them their name. A parent, mentor, or apprentice themselves, may request a name, but is not guaranteed. The leader assigns a suffix. Some examples would be: Violetkit. Violetpaw. Violetglare. Once appointed and approved as leader, the leader loses their suffix and have it changed to "star". depending on the cat, sometimes their prefix is swapped with their suffix (for example: Swiftdream -> Dreamstar) it just kinda. depends on who knows what. preference, maybe
Only one cat is meant to lead a clan at the time. They have a second-in-command, who are the assigned cat to take over in the events of a leader's death, or exilement. This role is called deputy.
Herbs and plants have special meaning and can be used to heal. Clans have one or more medicine cats, to tend to the sick, injured, elderly, etc. A majority of cats have no clue what all a herb does, what each one look like, or the names of them. Twolegs: humans
Kittypet: house cat, or to be an owned pet
crowfood: rotten food
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kookie-doughs · 3 years
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Y/N L/N AND THE HALFBLOODS
Percy Jackson X Reader
-Y/N L/N met Percy Jackson and everything is now ruined.
Chapter 22: Then It Ended
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As soon as we came, Annabeth ang Grover tackled me. We were the first heroes to return alive to Half-Blood Hill since Luke, so of course everybody treated us as if we'd won some reality-TV contest. According to camp tradition, we wore laurel wreaths to a big feast prepared in our honor, then led a procession down to the bonfire, where we got to burn the burial shrouds our cabins had made for us in our absence.
Annabeth's shroud was so beautiful—gray silk with embroidered owls— Percy told her it seemed a shame not to bury her in it. She punched him and told him to shut up. Percy being the son of Poseidon, he didn't have any cabin mates, so the Ares cabin had volunteered to make his shroud. They'd taken an old bedsheet and painted smiley faces with X'ed-out eyes around the border, and the word LOSER painted really big in the middle.
As I was still unclaimed, Hermes cabin had made me one. (Just... IDK go crazy with your shroud IG) It was fun to burn. As Apollo's cabin led the sing-along and passed out s'mores, Percy and I was surrounded by my Hermes cabinmates, Annabeth's friends from Athena, and Grover's satyr buddies, who were admiring the brand-new searcher's license he'd received from the Council of Cloven Elders. The council had called Grover's performance on the quest "Brave to the point of indigestion. Horns-and-whiskers above anything we have seen in the past." The only ones not in a party mood were Clarisse and her cabinmates, whose poisonous looks told me they'd never forgive us for disgracing their dad. That was okay with me. Even Dionysus's welcome-home speech wasn't enough to dampen my spirits. "Yes, yes, so the little brats didn't get themselves killed and now they'll have an even bigger head. Well, huzzah for that. In other announcements, there will be no canoe races this Saturday...." Going back to the cabin I finally had time to talk to Luke. Who just expressed his relief of me being fine, and how he was scared when Annabeth told everyone about me. No wonder everyone was so shocked seeing me come back with Percy. On the Fourth of July, the whole camp gathered at the beach for a fireworks display by cabin nine. Being Hephaestus's kids, they weren't going to settle for a few lame red-white-and-blue explosions. They'd anchored a barge offshore and loaded it with rockets the size of Patriot missiles. According to Annabeth, who'd seen the show before, the blasts would be sequenced so tightly they'd look like frames of animation across the sky. The finale was supposed to be a couple of hundred-foot-tall Spartan warriors who would crackle to life above the ocean, fight a battle, then explode into a million colors. As Annabeth, Percy and I were spreading a picnic blanket, Grover showed up to tell us good-bye. He was dressed in his usual jeans and T-shirt and sneakers, but in the last few weeks he'd started to look older, almost high-school age. His goatee had gotten thicker. He'd put on weight. His horns had grown at least an inch, so he now had to wear his rasta cap all the time to pass as human. "I'm off," he said. "I just came to say ... well, you know." I tried to feel happy for him. After all, it wasn't every day a satyr got permission to go look for the great god Pan. But it was hard saying good-bye. I'd only known Grover a year, yet he was my oldest friend. Annabeth and I gave him a hug. She told him to keep his fake feet on. I asked him where he was going to search first. "Kind of a secret," he said, looking embarrassed. "I wish you could come with me, guys, but humans and Pan ..." "We understand," Annabeth said. "You got enough tin cans for the trip?" "Yeah." "And you remembered your reed pipes?" "Jeez, Annabeth," he grumbled. "You're like an old mama goat." But he didn't really sound annoyed. He gripped his walking stick and slung a backpack over his shoulder. He looked like any hitchhiker you might see on an American highway. "Well," he said, "wish me luck." He gave Annabeth and I another hug. He clapped Percy on the shoulder, then headed back through the dunes. Fireworks exploded to life overhead: Hercules killing the Nemean lion, Artemis chasing the boar, George Washington (who, by the way, was a son of Athena) crossing the Delaware. "Hey, Grover," Percy called. He turned at the edge of the woods. "Wherever you're going—I hope they make good enchiladas." Grover grinned, and then he was gone, the trees closing around him. "We'll see him again," Annabeth said. July passed. I spent my daysplanning out strategies with Luke for capture-the-flag and making alliances with the other cabins to keep the banner out of Ares's hands. I got to the top of the climbing wall for the first time without getting scorched by lava. From time to time, Percy and I would walk past the Big House, he'd glance up at the attic windows, and think about the Oracle.
I tried to convince him that its prophecy had come to completion. "You shall go west, and face the god who has turned." "Been there, done that—even though the traitor god had turned out to be Ares rather than Hades." "You shall find what was stolen, and see it safe returned." "Check. One master bolt delivered. One helm of darkness back on Hades." "You shall be betrayed by one who calls you a friend." Percy recited. "Ares had pretended to be our friend, then betrayed us. That must be what the Oracle meant.... Or maybe Nereid?"
"And you shall fail to save what matters most, in the end." He sighed. "I had failed to save my mom and lost you..."
"So why are you still uneasy?" The last night of the summer session came all too quickly. The campers had one last meal together. We burned part of our dinner for the gods. At the bonfire, the senior counselors awarded the end-of-summer beads. Percy and I got our own leather necklace, and when I saw the bead for my first summer. The design was pitch black, with a sea-green trident shimmering in the center.
"This is so beautiful..." I smiled to Percy. "The choice was unanimous," Luke announced. "This bead commemorates the first Son of the Sea God at this camp, and the quest he undertook into the darkest part of the Underworld to stop a war!" The entire camp got to their feet and cheered. Even Ares's cabin felt obliged to stand. Athena's cabin steered Annabeth to the front so she could share in the applause. I'm not sure I'd ever felt as happy or sad as I did at that moment. I'd finally found a family, people who cared about me and thought I'd done something right. And in the morning, most of them would be leaving for the year. * * * The next morning, Luke called me. He gave me a paper, telling me to fill it out, and asked me to meet him as soon as I could. I knew Dionysus must've filled it out, because he stubbornly insisted on getting my name wrong: Dear (WRONG NAME) , If you intend to stay at Camp Half-Blood year-round, you must inform the Big House by noon today. If you do not announce your intentions, we will assume you have vacated your cabin or died a horrible death. Cleaning harpies will begin work at sundown. They will be authorized to eat any unregistered campers. All personal articles left behind will be incinerated in the lava pit. Have a nice day! Mr. D (Dionysus) Camp Director, Olympian Council #12 That's another thing about ADHD. Deadlines just aren't real to me until I'm staring one in the face. Summer was over, and I still don't know what to do. I had no where to go to. The only option I had was Percy's or maybe Hades was not joking about inviting me back to the Underworld. Sighing I decided to just meet Luke before filling it for second opinions. The campgrounds were mostly deserted, shimmering in the August heat. All the campers were in their cabins packing up, or running around with brooms and mops, getting ready for final inspection. Argus was helping some of the Aphrodite kids haul their Gucci suitcases and makeup kits over the hill, where the camp's shuttle bus would be waiting to take them to the airport. I was walking around looking for Luke. I jumped when I felt someone tap me from behind. I instinctively unsheathed my knife and turned only to see Luke with his hands raised.
"Whoa! Calm down just me." He laughed.
"Kinda weird seeing someone laugh at a knife pointed at them." I smirked sheathing my knife.
"I only laugh since its you." He smiled and ruffled my hair. "Are you done with everything?"
"Not really. I don't know whether to leave or not yet. That's why I came. Help me?" I asked him.
He turned to me and to the forest. "How about you hear me out about something... important and private... then decide?" He gestured towards the forest.
"Not planning on killing me are you?" I squinted at him.
He gasped. "Not you. Never. I would never hurt you."
I let him lead me to a shrouded area of the forest.
"How serious is this thing that you can't let anyone see? I am blindly trusting you here Luke." I laughed nervously. But when he didn't reply I felt something was off. "Luke, okay this isn't cool. How deep into the forest do we have to go?"
"Y/N remember when you said... You want to be the person I trust...? How you promised to help me?"
"Luke?" He took my hand and pulled me sharply. I winced at how hard he pulled me. "That hurts! Let me go!"
He snapped back and let go of my wrist. "I-I'm sorry... Y/N..."
As much as I knew I had to leave, I couldn't I was worried about him. I reluctantly placed a hand on his shoulder. "What's happening?"
"I did it..." I said and sat on the ground. "I swear I didn't mean to get you hurt. But, I confess to everything. I  stole bolt and helm, I summoned the hound, I gave Percy the cursed shoes... And just now, I tried to kill Percy Jackson." He looked at me with empty eyes.
I shot up and looked at him in emotions I couldn't put in words. "W-Wh---" I wanted to leave and check on Percy. But once again, seeing him right now... I need to stay with him. "Why are you telling me this...?"
"Join me... please?" his voice was weak. He sounded vulnerable. "Let's serve my Lord together..."
"L-Luke... no. I-I can't do that!" I took his shoulder, "Y-You should stay with me instead. How about that, huh? L-Let's explain to Chiron and the others... come on please. I could help you!"
Nothing was working.
"Come with me..." He muttered.
"Luke, I won't join you. You have to change your mind. You can't do this."
"I can't change my mind."
"I can help you with that? How about you go with me huh? I could spend all my time doing this and that. Please, just change your mind."
He didn't reply for a while until he whispered, "Promise me."
"Promise you what?"
"You'll stay with me."
"What? Luke I wo--"
"You won't join... Just...don't stay here for the year... and stay with me."
"I-If I stay with you... what would that mean?"
"Yo-You... might change my mind."
"I'll go." I replied with no hesitation. "I'll leave camp for the year. And I'll find my parent to prove to you that Gods and Goddess aren't all bad. We'll find my parent together."
"I do my lord's bidding--"
"You can still do it. If you want to. But whatever happens... stays only between us. I'll stay with you until I change your mind. And I'll bring you back to camp."
"I would never do anything to ruin your trust in me." He knelt down. It was kinda awkward but hey... "I need you."
Worry not hero. We shall stay.
"Please..."
We'll meet again. Wait for us, we shall join you soon. Now leave.
I had no idea what happened since when I came to Luke was gone and there was no sign of him anywhere. How were we going to st---
We will meet him once we leave. Now go as our hero needs us.
I suddenly remembered Percy's state that Luke had told me about. So I ran. I ran to the Big House
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Percy finally opened his eyes. He was propped up in bed in the sickroom of the Big House, his right hand bandaged like a club. Argus stood guard in the corner. Annabeth and I sat next to Percy, I was holding his nectar glass and she was dabbing a washcloth on his forehead.
"Here we are again," Percy said. "You idiot," Annabeth said, "You were green and turning gray when we found you. If it weren't for Chiron's healing..." "Now, now," Chiron's voice said. "Percy's constitution deserves some of the credit." He was sitting near the foot of the bed in human form. His lower half was magically compacted into the wheelchair, his upper half dressed in a coat and tie. He smiled, but his face looked weary and pale, the way it did when he'd been up all night grading Latin papers. "How are you feeling?" he asked. "Like my insides have been frozen, then microwaved." "Apt, considering that was pit scorpion venom. Now you must tell me, if you can, exactly what happened." Between sips of nectar, he told them the story.
I bit my lip trying to keep what happened between Luke and I private. It was a risky move that would not be approved by anyone after all. The room was quiet for a long time. "I can't believe that Luke..." Annabeth's voice faltered. Her expression turned angry and sad. "Yes. Yes, I can believe it. May the gods curse him.... He was never the same after his quest."
Percy was looking at me as if checking what was my reaction to his story. "This must be reported to Olympus," Chiron murmured. "I will go at once." "Luke is out there right now," Percy said. "I have to go after him." Chiron shook his head. "No, Percy. The gods—" "Won't even talk about Kronos," Percy snapped. "Zeus declared the matter closed!" "Percy, I know this is hard. But you must not rush out for vengeance. You aren't ready." "Chiron... your prophecy from the Oracle... it was about Kronos, wasn't it? Was I in it? Y/N? And Annabeth?" Chiron glanced nervously at the ceiling. "Percy, it isn't my place—" "You've been ordered not to talk to me about it, haven't you?" His eyes were sympathetic, but sad. "You will be a great hero, child. I will do my best to prepare you. But if I'm right about the path ahead of you..." Thunder boomed overhead, rattling the windows. "All right!" Chiron shouted. "Fine!" He sighed in frustration. "The gods have their reasons, Percy. Knowing too much of your future is never a good thing." "We can't just sit back and do nothing," He said. "We will not sit back," Chiron promised. "But you must be careful. Kronos wants you to come unraveled. He wants your life disrupted, your thoughts clouded with fear and anger. Do not give him what he wants. Train patiently. Your time will come." "Assuming I live that long." Chiron put his hand on Percy's ankle. "You'll have to trust me, Percy. You will live. But first you must decide your path for the coming year. I cannot tell you the right choice...." I got the feeling that he had a very definite opinion, and it was taking all his willpower not to advise me. "But you must decide whether to stay at Camp Half-Blood year-round, or return to the mortal world for seventh grade and be a summer camper. Think on that. When I get back from Olympus, you must tell me your decision." "I'll be back as soon as I can," Chiron promised. "Argus will watch over you." He glanced at Annabeth. "Oh, and, my dear... whenever you're ready, they're here." "Who's here?" Percy asked. Nobody answered. Chiron rolled himself out of the room. I heard the wheels of his chair clunk carefully down the front steps, two at a time. Annabeth studied the floor. "What's wrong?" Percy asked her. "Nothing. I ... just took your advice about something. You ... um ... need anything?" "Yeah. Help me up. I want to go outside." "Percy, that isn't a good idea." Percy slid his legs out of bed. Annabeth and I caught him before he could crumple to the floor.
I said, "I told you ..." "I'm fine," He insisted.
He managed a step forward. Then another, still leaning heavily on me. Argus followed us outside, but he kept his distance. By the time we reached the porch, his face was beaded with sweat. But we had managed to make it all the way to the railing. It was dusk. The camp looked completely deserted. The cabins were dark and the volleyball pit silent. No canoes cut the surface of the lake. Beyond the woods and the strawberry fields, the Long Island Sound glittered in the last light of the sun. "What are you going to do?" Annabeth asked us. "I don't know." Percy replied. "I got the feeling Chiron wanted me to stay year-round, to put in more individual training time, but I'm not sure that's what I want. I also don't want to leave you both with Clarisse only." Annabeth pursed her lips, then said quietly, "I'm going home for the year, Percy." He stared at her. "You mean, to your dad's?" She pointed toward the crest of Half-Blood Hill. Next to Thalia's pine tree, at the very edge of the camp's magical boundaries, a family stood silhouetted—two little children, a woman, and a tall man with blond hair. They seemed to be waiting. The man was holding a backpack that looked like the one Annabeth had gotten from Waterland in Denver. "I wrote him a letter when we got back," Annabeth said. "Just like you suggested. I told him... I was sorry. I'd come home for the school year if he still wanted me. He wrote back immediately. We decided... we'd give it another try." "That took guts." She pursed her lips. "You won't try anything stupid during the school year, will you? At least ... not without sending me an Iris-message? Both of you?" Percy managed a smile. "I won't go looking for trouble. I usually don't have to."
"You already know my plans."
"When I get back next summer," she said, "we'll hunt down Luke. We'll ask for a quest, but if we don't get approval, we'll sneak off and do it anyway. Agreed?" "Sounds like a plan worthy of Athena."
She held out her hand. Percy shook it. She gave me a hug. "Take care, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth told Percy. "Keep your eyes open."
"You too, Wise Girl."
Then turned to me, "Good luck on your own quest Droopy."
"Of course Peabody." We watched her walk up the hill and join her family. She gave her father an awkward hug and looked back at the valley one last time. She touched Thalia's pine tree, then allowed herself to be lead over the crest and into the mortal world. "I made my decision." Percy said. "What's yours?"
"I'll be leaving camp... I'm going to look for my parent..." He looked at me in shock. "I'll be back next summer," I promised him. "I'll survive until then."
"Alone?"
I smiled at him.
"Don't you want to stay with us? Mom said---"
"I want to find my parent. I need to. I'll be fine Percy."
I helped Percy to his cabin so he could pack and went to mine. To my surprise I see a middle-aged man with an athletic figure slim and fit with salt-and-pepper hair, and a very familiar sly grin. He had bags at his foot.
"Delivery for Y/N L/N."
"Uhm..."
"Hermes." He said.
I froze and looked at him with wide eyes.
"Personally packed. As a thank you for what you're about to do." He smiled softly and handed me the bags.
"H-Huh...?"
"For helping Luke."
"I..."
Don't forget her mail!
Ooh! And tell her to bring us snacks next time we meet since it'll be often now!
No it wouldn't be often! She'll be with Luke!
"Both of you keep quiet." Pulling out a mail he handed it to me. "Luke... prayed to me telling me about your plan. He asked me to help you. I don't know what or why he did it. But I know he'll change thanks to you. So do guide him."
"Sorry you lost me at the talking air..." I blinked.
Hermes laughed and showed a caduceus. "It's just George and Martha."
"Hi?"
Hello!
Hi
"I just wanted to let you know. No god or goddess could see you. No matter how hard they tried. So your secrets.. are really secrets. Good luck on your travel."
Next time we meet you should have snacks.
Then he vanished.
Staring at the letter on my hand, I was stunned seeing it was from... my mom and dad.
Sweetie,
You've made quite a friend here.
-Mom and Dad.
I immediately knew where to look. I hurriedly took my bags not bothering to check the contents. I ran to Percy's cabin and helped him out so we could leave.
Percy got a cab and looked at me worriedly.
"I'll write you. Stay safe Arthur Curry." I ruffled his hair and watched him go.
I didn't know where to go so I just went to the first secluded area I saw.
"You have more stuffs than when you arrived." I heard someone behind me.
"You prayed to your dad. I hope he knows how to pack." I sighed turning to him. Turning around I barely made out Luke from the few days I last saw him. "You okay?"
"Do you know where to look first?"
Call upon our hound.
I whistled, I don't know why. But when I did, D/N came out of the blue. Luke looked at me and my dear dog, who was probably bigger than the hound he'd summon back then. "How do feel about L.A?" I said riding on D/N and making space behind me for Luke.
~~~END OF BOOK 1~~~
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I read your Christmas list of prompts
And I feel like these 3, 14, 38, 62 SCREAM aelin and Rowan (mainly aelin to Rowan) lol
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This one is late, I know. But here it is! Another fic for my Rowaelin Holiday Celebration. Set in my teacher au, which includes Camp Shenanigans. Please enjoy. Oh and i just went with 1 out of the 4. It’s the card.
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Aelin sighed in frustration. She was great at giving presents, fantastic even. She always knew what to get everyone once Yulemas rolled around. But this year she had lucked out, and it was really bruising her ego.
She prided herself on the annual Secret Santa at work, every year the recipient of her gift gushed about how perfect it was. But this year she had no idea what to get, and that was because she had managed to pull stick-up-his-ass Rowan Whitethorn from the moth eaten Santa hat Lysandra had held in front of her. Her best friend and most likely future cousin-in-law had been incharge of the whole thing but had refused to let Aelin swapped when she asked. That’s the name of the game she’d said and sauntered off.
So now Aelin had dragged Aedion shopping with her, just so she could get some sort of help. Aedion had agreed because he’d managed to pull out a dud himself.
“What do you get Manon Blackbeak?” Aedion mused and he browsed a table of holiday inspired knickknacks.
“Bottle the blood of her enemies,” Aelin replied. “I think she’d drink it straight.”
“She probably would,” Aedion agreed and he left the knickknack table.
Manon worked in the science faculty and was honestly one of the most terrifying people Aelin had ever met. So naturally, after a tense getting to know you period, they'd mellowed out into being respectful collegues and eventually some semblance of friends.
“We’ve got a betting pool going on how soon into the end of year party her and Dorian end up in some closet making out,” Aelin dropped casually. “Again.”
“Does Dorian know?” Aedion asked as they walked side by side to go browse elsewhere.
“Dorian is in on it,” Aelin said. “He thinks a half hour tops.”
“Manon would never let him have it that easy,” Aedion added.
“That’s what I told him,” Aelin said. “And then I also told Manon and she said he’s dreaming.”
Aedion scoffed. “Did you just rig it for yourself?”
“Of course not, I never mentioned the bet to her at all,” Aelin replied innocently.
“Why don’t I believe you?”
Aelin tried not to smile. “Fine I did, I promised to split the money with her.”
“I knew it.”
The cousins had reached a holiday display, decorations, cards, and holiday specific foods all set out.
“Hey,” Aedion said with a grin. “You could give him this.” He held up a card.
Aelin looked over and saw what the card had on it.
Will you be my ho ho ho?
“What, and end up in the middle of a sexual harassment case? No thank you.” Then Aelin added, “Why would I even get that for him anyway? I hate him.”
“Of course you do,” Aedion said like he knew all the secrets of the universe.
“What?” Aelin snapped.
Aedion gave her a grin that made her understand exactly why people tended to get infuriated with her. “Nothing.”
Aelin picked up a candy cane and pointed it at him threateningly. “Whatever you’re thinking, stop it.”
The grin stayed, Aelin wanted to throw something at him.
“Okay, let’s focus here. You’re his friend of sorts. What should I get?” Aelin said, wanting to just get out of the bustling shops by now.
“I dunno, he’s still pretty private even though it’s been six months,” Aedion said.
Aelin sighed heavily. “I’m going to have to do it. I’m going to have to do the mug and pen.” Even just saying it left a bad taste in her mouth. “I don’t know what else to do and you’re absolutely no help.”
She didn’t want to resort to the cliche teacher gift but really she had no other choice. She had to get something. Dragging her feet Aelin walked to the kitchen section to look for the least offensive mug she could find, then she would make her way to stationary and find a nice pen. Why did she have to get Rowan Whitethorn? Her reputation would be ruined.
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The last day of term rolled around and that evening they had the staff get together in a function room of a local restaurant. They were all standing around snacking, drinking, laughing, holiday songs playing in the background. Aelin held court in the corner with most of her faculty, honestly the loudest group in the room. Although Dorian was off trailing Manon like a lost puppy. The two of them were yet to disappear, Manon holding out to the appointed time. Aelin caught her eye across the room, Manon gave her a wink, Aelin tipped her glass in return.
“Ho! Ho! Ho!”
Fenrys appeared in a very cheap looking Santa suit, foregoing the beard, not wanting to hide his beautiful face apparently. He walked over to the tree and started calling out names, obnoxiously good in his role. Aelin sighed, she was still a little cut up about her more than average present. Maybe she could keep it from getting out, keep her reputation intact. It wasn't likely though, everyone loved the intrigue and gossip of who got who.
“Rowan! Seems that even if you’re a grumpy bastard you still get presents,” Fenrys’ voice boomed in the space.
Rowan made his way to the front, even managing half a good natured smile at the joke as he got his wrapped mug and pen. Aelin had to turn away; she was so annoyed. A few other names were called out then Aelin heard her own. She put her drink down and made her way to Fenrys. He was giving her a winning smile.
“I just want you to know your secret Santa had absolutely no help from anyone,” Fenrys said as he passed her a small package.
Aelin took it back to her little corner, shaking it before she started unwrapping it. What she found inside were her favourite chocolates, her all time favourite chocolates. Chocolate hazelnut truffles. These were one’s you didn't just buy from the grocery store. These were only sold at a little store in the heart of the city.
“Okay, which one of you got me this?” Aelin asked her friends.
No one came forward, adamantly denying it was them, it looked like Aelin would be joining in on the present gossip tonight. It took her a while, but curiously it had been Lorcan to give her the answer she wanted.
“It was Rowan,” he snapped as Aelin had been hounding Connall for information for quite a while. “Now, go away. I’m sick of hearing your voice.”
“Happy Yulemas,” Aelin said far too sweetly. She was too stunned to give him any more of a threat, replaying what Fenrys had said in her head. Rowan hadn’t had any help so how did he know exactly what chocolates to get her? She spotted him over by the drinks table, steeling herself she made her way over to him. Not only had he managed to get her the perfect present, but she had given him such an abysmally awful one she hoped he never found out it was her.
Aelin cleared her throat as she poured herself a drink from the punch bowl. “Thanks,” she said lamely.
“It didn’t take you long,” Rowan said.
“Lorcan gave you up,” Aelin told him and she saw Rowan roll his eyes. “I have to know, how did you find out they were my favourites.”
Rowan gave her a wry smile. “Santa told me,” he said cryptically. “And I don’t mean Fenrys.”
Aelin just looked at him, confused, gears in her head working. Before she could figure it out or ask more questions Rowan was walking away.
“Oh,” Rowan said, turning back to her. “And thanks for the mug.”
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Hi could you talk more about why youd recommend not watching ww84?
Sure!
warnings for under the cut: spoilers for WW84 and a bit of the first wonder woman; i only saw WW84 once a few days ago + it’s been a hot sec since i saw the original so if i get a few details wrong i apologize
tl;dr with no spoilers: WW84 is a poorly executed movie that insults its viewer with its messy and self-proud plot, bad character/relationship portrayals, and offers a personal slap in the face to a majority of its audience in their various discriminations, generalizations, and plot points.
the first point is the racism, made well by the post i reblogged here, (edit: found a second post that goes more in depth here) so i’d just suggest looking at that for that matter
next is just How they portray wonder woman in this one
i really appreciated the way the first movie portrayed diana because they did very well in keeping true to her Amazonian raising and life while still clearly showing she was a woman
when i say this i mean that a lot of media has a tendency to either make women who are very fem and keep to traditional gender roles or women who more or less shun femininity and attempt to largely fulfill only male gender roles
diana in the original is a warrior, strong and fierce, but still a woman, not trying to shun that or anything. she wears styles that suit her while still being woman’s styles (she doesn’t force her way into a suit), she talks of and addresses her womanhood proudly and without issue, etc
i want to note here i have no issue with female characters who act extremely masc and reject femininity- i love them tbh- but it’s important to remember that it’s not inherently against womanhood or anything to be a strong fighter who doesn’t stick to every stereotypical social gender norm
and the first wonder woman movie shows this very well
WW84... oh boy
first of all, wonder woman’s changing outfits every other scene. even between scenes where it makes no sense! i’m not saying she can only wear one set of clothes but Geez this was too much
not to mention an entire scene dedicated to her helping steve pick a fashion look? i understand this was to highlight the ‘80-ness of the movie, and it would’ve been fine if it seemed diana was helping him pick a period appropriate look, but it was clear she was trying to help him pick a ‘fashionable’ look which. wonder woman? from the island without a sense of popular outfits or fashion? what?
and the amount of focus on her wearing high heels.... ugh
i’m not saying you can’t have a badass woman who also likes social gender norm fem things but it felt clear that wasn’t what they were going for
wonder woman in the first movie liked practical fashion and not only were many of her outfits not that, her high heels? one hundred percent not practical
it didn’t fit her character and felt horribly out of place, clearly just the producers / directors / whoever going ‘oh, wonder woman is a woman how can we show this? fashion! high heels!’ and i hated it
(warning: imma be jumping from thought to thought as they bump into each so uh... enjoy the train-of-thought style of flaw informing)
and starting at the beginning like.... wow that scene had no purpose
wonder woman cheats in a competition and is punished for this by losing it in the end. except. this is stupid for two reasons
as the audience is shown she didn’t cheat on purpose. she made a mistake, lost her horse, and made a strategy to get back into the race despite this. honestly? i thought the story was going to be a lesson in ingenuity in the worst looking situations. but it wasn’t, which is bad storytelling, because the lesson is then based on a point that isn’t even that true
it is literally Never important again later. unless you count what was going on with the wishstone as ‘cheating to victory’ which i dont. that’s not even what the villain did. he wanted to take over the world. there’s no victory there you get without cheating. wtf. why did that message even happen
going into the actual story we meet the cheetah pretty quick, when she’s still whatever-her-civilian-name-is
and the cheetah... she’s such a bad villain
she doesn’t have the same backstory as she does in the comics
in this one, she uses the wishstone- which is a whole ‘nother thing in and of itself- to wish to be like diana, because ig being smart as hell but social awkward as hell too is so bad you need to desperately wish to be someone else? i hate that trope, but onwards-
she gets that, but in exchange for not only diana’s likable personality she also gets her wonder woman powers (and she loses her glasses, because pretty and cool means no glasses, right? /s), she loses her kindness bc of the rules of the wishstone- in exchange for your wish, it takes smth u care about a lot from you; for her, it was her kindness
this makes her villain! just because she lost her kindness. yep. honestly not a good look regarding all those people out there who are low/no empathy and can still be wonderful nice people but i digress
at one point she complains about why she needs to keep her power rather than go back to being just Her and i fucking wanted to scream
she has like. half a dozen degrees, clearly a couple of friends even if she’s awkward, and she’s got a life that was perfectly okay before she made the wish. as someone who is also socially awkward as hell, it infuriated me to here her acting like it was the fucking end of the world she couldn’t be more extroverted or whatever. there are ways to work on that!!! the movie trying to convince the audience she had a legit reason to not un-wish her wish (for the good of the entire world) was stupid and insulting
also her transformation between ‘looks human, wearing cheetah-pattern clothing‘ to ‘humanoid with cheetah fur/skin/appearance’ literally just. happened. for no reason. that was stupid
y’know what else is stupid? the wishstone. it was clearly just a plot device, and a poorly executed one at that. it isn’t even consistent in how it works
and they did a whole side thing with like. how it had the language of the gods written on part of it and it appeared in random locations across history around the time of great tragedies and,,, that was it???
they never explored the divine connection??? who planted it or why??? how it location traveled or anything????
like i said. poor plot device
i move on now to steve
oh boy steve
he’s brought back to life by diana’s wish on the wishstone, but... it causes him to come back in someone else’s body, quantum leap style. this is. weird. and is never ever addressed by him or wonder woman except once in a throw away comment. like. diana and steve kiss and are implied to have sex while steve is in someone else’s body and neither of them seem to care. this is not good!!
and then his relationship with diana? HORRIBLE
in the first movie they were barely starting to fall in love, only barely a couple even if that. more importantly they were friends, and that night he died diana didn’t lose a potential lover so much as she lost her first non-Amazonian friend
but WW84 portrays their relationship as if they were not only already a couple, but one close enough that even after forty years since steve’s death diana is still completely and hopelessly in love with him to the point that she’s literally hanging off his arm as soon as he’s back and making love that very night
it plays again once more into the misrepresentation of wonder woman’s character (how stereotypically hollywood female to fall over herself at the sight of her love interest) and it wrecks their relationship, which had been a lovely friends-who-could-be-more
what they should’ve done was focus on that friendship, build it back up after the long gap for wonder woman, and then started to rebuild that possible romance (and tear it down at the perfect moment... right when steve had to go again... ah that would’ve been lovely)
but they wanted to go in full-haul on the romance and it just felt. wrong and weak to me. diana’s refusal to consider giving up her wish (to get her powers back and save the world) is bc she doesn’t want to let steve go again, which makes more sense in the context of a first and true friend rather than a hastily slapped together love interest
steve’s character was generally good tbh but the way he played into the story? bad
moving on... the main villain of the movie? sucks. he’s just. fucking awful
despite a motivation being given that he wants to have money, he launches into wanting to take over the world for no real reason. he takes advantage of people for this and almost destroys the world he wants to rule for it. the main reason he stops this is for his son, who up until now he largely ignored and didn’t seem to care that much for outside of basic obligations. and the movie dares try to make him sympathetic by throwing in the fact he grew up poor and was bullied and not liked which i HATE
lots of people are/have been poor. lots of people are/have been bullied (myself included). that does NOT justify them DESTROYING THE WORLD TRYING TO TAKE IT OVER. can it be used to show the audience why he does what he does? yes. but to use it and clearly try to make it a reason to hand-wave-away what he did? NO. FUCK NO
also fucking. y’know how wonder woman took down this villain? she talked to him and the world. she gave a stirring speech while she laid slumped against a wall, not injured, just too weak to beat a bit of wind. she talked and she looped her lasso around his leg so she could talk to the world to to convince them to give up their wishes
once again... the mischaracterization
in the first movie, wonder woman gives a stirring speech while fighting Areas. it’s done in her battle, beating the god of war up while reminding him of what she stood for, who she was, why she would keep fighting for a broken world
it was BEAUTIFUL. it was MEANINGFUL. it was BADASS but SINCERE
this was weak. and it clearly wanted to be more than it was
the whole movie wants to be more than it is- it wants to have an important meaningful message like the first movie, about wishes for the self and war and the world and whatever. and it wants it so badly it does it horribly
the message is ham-handed yet messy and unclear and not right. it doesn’t make sense, and it feels poorly plotted. the movie thinks it’s more than it is and that makes it very hard to watch
and to finish my rant off... WW84 lied to its audience
did you see any ads for WW84? i did. they were bright, vibrant, funky music, stunning moments, action and intrigue. i was thrilled for a movie like it
the actual movie isn’t that
it’s not nearly as action filled, it’s not as ‘80s-focused as it leads you to believe, some of the most prominently featured moments barely matter
the lightning swing? pointless, as at that point in the movie wonder woman’s learned how to fly and does it for no reason but the trailers
and that cool suit? introduced in a random myth for no reason halfway through the movie, brought in at random with no explanation, only there for show and the trailers
WW84 is not the movie is lead people to believe it was, and the movie it is is poorly executed and insulting to a variety of peopler/minorities
if you’re gonna watch it, pirate it. i can give you a link. just don’t give dc your money or your legit views for it
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This isn’t THE tommyinnit villain essay but it sure is one of them
Ok ok so 4 those of u who aren't on discord with me: i have two main essays that have been in the works for MONTHS, these being my Complete Dream character analysis essay going in-depth for nearly all of his canon interactions and finding his character traits and motivations through the story, and my Tommyinnit (and Wilbur Soot) were Always The Villains on the server essay talking about how the only reason so many people view them as the good guys or heroes is because we see the story from their perspective mainly. This essay? Is not either of those. BUT, it does go through a lot of my thoughts on Tommy and Dream’s characters so I figured I’d post it. maybe itll help me organize my thoughts 4 my Mega Projects lol
@ranboocore bc u helped me pop off on this so hard LMAO
Warning, it’s VERY Tommy Critical, what a suprise. I do not like Tommy as a character lol. idk what triggers yall might need me to tag but if u need one in particular pls lmn!
My biggest issue with tommy's character is that he SAYS hes learned but he never does he is exactly the same person he was at the start of the server just More Sad and with Trauma, when out of all the characters he's had the most push to change. c!Tommy is a very tell-don't-show character which can make it hard for some people to connect to him, especially those who don’t directly share his trauma or see themselves in his character. Of course, there is still a MASSIVE amount of people who relate to his struggles and thus love him regardless of his writing, but those who can't relate to him will always feel some kind of barrier until the things they've talked about are actually shown to the viewer instead of being spoon-fed to them.
It is a very beginner writing thing, and I'm hoping that Tommy is figuring out how to fix this, maybe with support from the many other writers on the server. There's the 3 you mentioned, plus fundy, niki, and maybe tubbo who also play dnd, plus Dream who said he would've been an English major and does a lot of personal writing for fun.  I think the biggest issue in the writing lies in the individual ccs being inexperienced in the medium, particularly with planning out their own character growth. 
Another glaring issue I have with c!Tommy is how he's framed to be sympathetic and he goes through all these horrible things without acknowledging his role in any of them. The things that have happened to him are a direct result of his actions, but the thing is HE won't acknowledge and so it falls flat. This isn’t to say that being abused is his fault, because it’s NEVER the vicitm’s fault, but being exiled? His multiple fights with c!Dream? His friendships falling apart? Losing the disks in the first place? They’re the direct consequences of HIS OWN actions, but he never acknowledges this and constantly just... brushes off any accountability by either saying that it’s Dream fault or simply SAYING he feels bad without properly showing it through redemption and GROWTH.
Denial is useful in storytelling sometimes, but Tommy's character has been in denial since the very beginning of the server and at this point it's just exhausting. He only ever switches between denial and depression, not really going through all 5 stages of grief properly. His violent/upset reactions would be more powerful if they were any different from how tommy usually acts, but this is always how he is. When he “lashes out” because he’s reached the end of his patience, it doesn’t SEEM like the snap it is because that’s just... it’s seriously just his standard reaction to everything. It hold no WEIGHT to see c!Tommy yell at someone violently or threaten to fight them because he does that anyways!
Static characters can be a good thing, and can be interesting if done correctly, but not every character SHOULD or CAN be static in a story.
Static characters need to have their position or behavior challenged and question, where they look into if the way they see and interact with the world is really the 'correct' one or just evaluated to see if they truly believe in them. This questioning period is CRUCIAL! and NEEDS to be well done in a way that ACTIVELY SHOWS the conflict between the two ideals. If they decide to hold onto their beliefs/continue their behavior then, it feels deserved, because rather than just being a flat "they do thing its who they are" they have defined WHY. WHY is a very important question to think of when telling the difference between dynamic and static characters. The why of a character is ESSENTIAL to developing them as a relatable, sympathetic person rather than a flat story telling device. It makes them a human rather than a puppet. When a character's motives aren't well defined or discussed, they're doomed to fall flat in everything else, because the WHY is the foundation of what makes them who they are.
c!Tommy has an underdeveloped "why", his motivations are weak, rarely properly discussed and when they are it doesn't particularly stick with him. His motivations change without showing us the internal struggle that should come from literally shifting your driving principles. There are some good MOMENTS of him reevaluating the importance of certain things, but they're so spread out and contradictory and immediately spat one that they're hard to piece together. He TELLS us what his motivations are as well, which is another big flaw when it comes to all that but we don't have time to unpack all THAT Anyways, the key to static story telling is reaffirmation. The character goes through a complete journey and ends with the same beliefs because they've looked into why they have them and determined that they still matter to them. A great example of static writing in my eyes is c!Techno, who since the beginning has believed that governments are bad. c!Techno enters the server to destroy a government, and still ends up doing that because he sees and we see him experience that the reasons he didn't like government before still hold true and he has no reason to support them any more than before, and so his anarchist beliefs are REAFFIRMED, proving to him that they way he handles things is the right one for him.
c!Tommy’s attachments are all just... they're all so weird.  like he LITERALLY SACRIFICES HIS LIFE MULTIPLE TIMES for L'manburg. By action of sacrifice it seems like it should be the most important thing to him, but then he throws it away for some disks that mattered less to him just a minute ago.  But then it's all about how c!Tubbo is worth more than Anything and maybe he's found something more important! but then he shoves THAT out the window for the discs again ig!!! but then it's about l’manburg again? Make it make sense.... pls....
Here's smth that really irks me about Tommy's character, and is kind of weird but give me a second to explain: Tommy has never actually permanently lost much of anything on the server. Every punishment he's ever received he's tried to find some way around. And like... I'm not expecting him to be HAPPY to face the consequences of his actions but seeing him constantly have his cake and eat it too is very irritating, especially when there are characters who DO have to deal with actual permanent sacrifices. The whole thing with the disks. where he WILLINGLY OFFERED THEM UP AND GAVE THEM AWAY THEN SPENT FOREVER TRYING TO STEAL THEM BACK WHILE CLAIMING DREAM STOLE THEM FROM HIM, is the biggest example of this, but it's generally his characters way of dealing with things. He's very backhanded and conniving, constantly calling himself "big man" except for when he wants things from people and he plays up the "iM a MiNoR" card to try and get them to give him things or feel bad. He's not just some sweet innocent kid like people paint him, he knows damn well he's messed up and while he SAYS he feels bad about it, he has never once really shown, with his ACTIONS, regret for what he's done except for the stuff with c!Sapnap, which could it could be argued he did because he thought it would help get c!Sapnap on his side to fight Dream and he knew c!Sapnap was a skilled warrior and could possibly be persuaded to fight with dream.
c!Tommy is in NO way some sweet innocent child, he knows what he's doing. He KNEW l'manburg was a drug empire, and wanted to turn his hotel into the same He was FULLY prepared to just murder c!Schlatt for legally winning an election that he KNEW was rigged AND INTENDED TO HELP RIG HE LITERALLY TEAMED UP WITH c!TECHNOBLADE KNOWING THAT HE INTENDED TO BLOW UP L'MANBURG AND ONLY LEFT WHEN HE REALIZED IT WASN'T GOING TO ACTUALLY HELP HIM--
The line of c!Wilbur saying "Tommy, are we the bad guys?" wasn't him mentally going batshit it was him realizing that the entire time they've been doing terrible things. c!Wilbur was literally ALWAYS Vilbur but the time people CALL Vilbur is when c!Will himself realized he was a villain.
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mallowstep · 3 years
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I love the new PO3 au you just posted on AO3! Could you tell us more about it?
happily!
first off, the au summary (because i still have to add that to the ao3 series whoops)
holly, jay, and lion, kits of leaf and crow, are a year old when they leave home. it's good for wanderers to spend time away from their family, to find their own path so they know they want to be there. most return home. holly, jay, and lion, kits of heretics and codebreakers, are a year old when they meet their mother's kin. it's good for wanders to know their kin, to strengthen family ties. most are welcome. holly, jay, and lion, kits of leafpool and crowfeather, are a year old when they stand in the camp of thunderclan and finally stop and wonder what warriors know of wanderers.
so yeah, ig we can call this "wanderer au" while i figure out the title for the main work.
as the summary reveals, squilf is not a pov character. she's important, but she's not a pov character. hjl are the focus.
i've done a lot of stuff with types of cats, mostly loners.
there are recluses, cats who live on their own. if they move around, they're drifters. if they live in a human area, they're dwellers, if they live in a wild area, they're nomads.
wanderers is a broader class of bands of cats, anywhere from two to twenty, that travel together. they're typically kinship based, but not always. the unit term (e.g., a group of wanderers) is band. a band that sticks to human locations might be called a company, but the distinction isn't very important to most. bands that never frequent human areas are very rare, so there isn't a specific name for one.
cats who live in groups in one place are denizens (of their location). the unit term is colony, and most have a preferred specific term. (like the warrior clans, the tribe of rushing water, etc.)
"rogue" is a fairly derogatory way of referring to a cat outside of one's own group. it implies a lack of any manners, sensibility, etc. most cats get on very well with others, as long as territory is respected.
troublemakers is basically a more polite way of saying rogue.
"kittypet" is generally seen as rude, although this can depend on the cat. most prefer to be called housekeepers. some consider themselves dwellers, if they live in a barn/generally aren't close with their owners.
an uncollared cat used to live with people, but now is some form of loner. this can be a mark of pride, or a mark of shame.
mendicants are loners who interact with humans, with the intention of getting food or affection. it can be polite or rude, depending on the intentions of everyone involved.
i'm probably still forgetting some, but like i said, i've been working through some stuff with this.
okay, now i'm going to talk more about the au set up/details, so read more!
leafpool and crowfeather interact with a group of wanderers fairly early on, who kind of get them introduced to the culture. while wanderers' culture is highly variable, there's common decencies, territory etiquette, etc., to learn.
if you've read "without warning," you know i like to make loner names somewhat "cats don't know what weird names are." leafpool and crowfeather stick out like sore thumbs (dew claws?), so they change their names to leaf and crow to avoid being mislabelled as troublemakers.
holly and jay are fairly standard wanderer names, especially for bands that stick mostly to wild areas. lion is pretty rare. it's more common in city cats, who might have heard it around a zoo. still, they grow up considering themselves wanderers. leaf and crow don't have much good to say about the clans, after all.
when they're a year old, they go on their own journey. it's a wanderer's rite of passage/coming of age: leaf and crow effectively had their own by running away.
(it's where the tradition comes from; most cats tend to leave their old homes to become wanderers around a year old.)
anyway, they decide to head to the clans to meet leaf's kin. (wanderers, being matrilineal and matriarchal, don't really care about their father's kin.) of course, they know what the clans are like, but it's not until they meet a thunderclan patrol that calls them loners that they're like, "oh, these cats have no idea what our lives are like! fun."
in thunderclan, their main goal is to meet sandstorm, squirrelflight, any of squirrelflight's kits, and firestar. they're supremely frustrated by the amount of weight everyone is treating their return with.
and that's basically where we start! (it's where astatine ends, anyway.)
so yeah y'all are welcome to continue sending in questions!
<3
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intersexalastor · 3 years
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fantasy au where touya and jin are soulmates. some people are born and blessed (?) to be mages? (ig idk, i feel like there's a better word). but for every one of these people born, another is born and blessed with physical strength and power. and the latter are born to protect the former and the duo are soulmates and spend pretty much their entire lives together doing....idk whatever. i haven't decided.
these kids are always taken from their families at an early age. touya doesn't want to go, but enji is having none of it. he's embarrassed that his 6 y/o son is throwing such a tantrum. it's an honor, after all, to be blessed with such a power. and for touya to make such a fuss about following his destiny would look bad for such an influential family as the Todorokis.
he's sent away. as per the rules, he's no longer allowed to contact his birth family. it's best to have no worldly attachments, especially with the future he's facing. and he'll be far too busy training and studying anyways.
the only problem is.... they can't find his warrior. (idk how they'd be able to tell yet but. they can lmao.) and that continues on for a few years. so not only is touya ripped from his family, but he's forced to watch others like him develop strong bonds with somebody else while he's by himself.
it takes a long time for them to find jin. this isn't entirely uncommon for warriors, because they don't stick out like the others. but jin not being found this long is definitely an anomaly. one that has reason, however, because he's an orphan and homeless. no one pays much attention to him (unless he's stealing food) and finding him comes as a complete accident.
by this time, though, it's been years. at least a decade (which is extremely unusual. at most it's 2 years). touya is not at all interested in getting to know jin and avoids him. and when he can't do that, he's downright nasty to him.
then wherever the fuck they are falls under attack and they manage to escape together and now have to work together to stop whatever Big Bad Evil Force i come up with ig
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yewphoric · 3 years
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🏅🌪👔 for Frigidwater pls,,,
🏅 - what is your character’s reputation within their clan? what about the other clans? is your character popular?
hmm,, kinda changes through the story ig! at the point in time i usually reference for the story she's well-liked enough. she's pretty respected as a strong fighter, but though they're much less vocal than they used to be, there are still those that see her as lesser for being half-clan. she's known as a senior warrior of windclan to other clans, but she's nothing of legend or anything (though again, others may know she was born in riverclan). socially, she's got friends, but she's not popular. she and shrikescream mainly stick together.
🌪 - what was your character’s most traumatic experience?
definitely her first few moons of life, living in riverclan. she had to watch her parent get exiled as soon as she was weaned, there was constant tension in the camp because of how cruel and erratic foxstar was, and her foster mother viewed her with disdain for being half-clan. her half-brother snowkit liked her well enough, but snowkit's father viewed her as the thing that tore his family apart and though he tried to act as a father figure for her, it was pretty obvious he didn't love her the same as he did snowkit. then, he died, and at a young age she had to travel to an entirely new clan and find a new life there.
👔 - what would your character look like as a human? what sense of style would they have?
i actually have a picrew of what she'd look like! she'd have a more masc sense of style, and usually dresses at least somewhat formally (dress shirts/slacks/etc.). not sure about a surname, but her name would be friday!
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vaugarde · 4 years
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Iroh and Ty Lee?
iroh
do I like them: YES YES YES
5 good qualities:
-he’s just... he’s just so KIND oh my god i would love to have him as my uncle... hes just so nice...
-he has a really good backstory and arc like i think rn hes the only version of the trope where like hes clearly done awful things but regret them his entire life and actually got his shit together, did better, and strived to send a better message to his nephew and like yes he rightfully faces consequences for his actions and its just... man people trying to recreate this in their own shows just dont get it man
-i love how hes part of an epic old man group thats so fun
-his relationship with zuko... how he saw him as his son and wanted to protect him from his dad after his own son died... their scene in the finale... my whole heart
-i love how hes one of the characters who just has his shit together
3 bad qualities:
-his attack on ba sing se. even if i think hes well written he is still a war criminal and we still gotta talk about that
-im sad we didnt really get more focus on him i know hes not a main but i wish we saw more of his development
-i cant think of a third one i love him
favourite episode/etc: i loved that episode where he befriended toph it was so funny and ironic but still very adorable
otp: nah
brotp: does him and zuko like count here idk. def him and toph though they have a nice intergenerational friendship...
ot3: nah
notp: i cant really see him with anyone like the options are the other members of the white lotus and i just cant see him with a romantic dynamic with any of them.
best quote: “I was never angry with you. I was just afraid that you had lost your way.”
head canon: he has a memorial in his tea shop dedicated to ursa and lu ten
ty lee
do I like them: yeah!! shes very cool definitely my favorite of azula’s squad
5 good qualities: 
-adorable
-sweet
-i love her little backstory
-i LOVE how she joins the kyoshi warriors
-god damn her fighting style is GOOD
3 bad qualities:
-i cant think of any she’s good
favourite episode/etc: the boiling rock, go queen stick up for your friend!!
otp: ngl she and mai are cute...
brotp: she and suki i imagine theyre gonna be very cool now!!
ot3: nah
notp: her and azula... i heard its a thing ig but azula literally threatened and intimidated her into the group cmon
best quote: "I Joined The Circus Because I Was Scared Of Spending The Rest Of My Life As Part Of A Matched Set. At Least I'm Different Now."
head canon: she sometimes uses the technique she does for chi blocking to help her friends destress by hitting their pressure points. sometimes it goes well sometimes it doesnt.
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wannawrite · 7 years
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In Your Area
who?: Yuehua’s / Idol Producer’s Zhu Zhengting genre: 🌸 type: bullet point - I’m sorry I promise scenarios soon
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neighbours! AU 
• you aren’t quite sure what to make of your new neighbour but hey, he’s nice and pretty cute
Zhengting is so boyfriend material no one understands how I feel :”) I thought Justin was immortalised as my YH baby but Zhengting popped off ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ Thanks for requesting fluff anon!! I really needed it
- Admin L
a/n: sorry this took like two decades and can y’all vote if you want us to start writing for IP in 2018. drop us a message/ask!!! 
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everything written is purely fictional 
ZT’s diary: (/^▽^)/ moving day
what. the. hell. is. happening.
the dream that played out like a perfect movie scene in your head was VERY rudely interrupted and ruined by the ‘clings’ and ‘clongs’ scarring your ears
wrapping your stuffed pillow around your ears weren’t providing much help either 
‘you’ve got to be joking...’
you groaned, realising there was, in fact, a new neighbour moving into that empty apartment next door
eyes closed, paradise fought to overpower your current reality
it was drifting in the distance, just out of reach, beckoning you to immerse yourself in the paradigm once again
but a loud crash resounded through the atmosphere and shattered whatever serenity there was
muttering complaints under your breath, you peeled your eyes open and slowly clambered out of bed 
sickening...who moves in at this unholy hour 
it was 9am 
I found out that sleeping until 9am isn’t a hard task I thought it to be  
do these people have a conscience? are they not aware that weekends are time for people to sleep in? 
while complaints and rants ran through your mind, your cousin and flatmate, Wenjun, threw the door open and barged into the room 
‘WAKE UP!’ 
his face displayed an enthusiastic puppy-like smile. ‘WE HAVE NEW NEIGHBOURS!’ 
great 
‘wonderful, I can tell. Now, go give them some gifts and greet them,’ you tell Wenjun before flipping over and pulling your blanket over your head 
‘NO! You come with me! Aren’t you supposed to be the older cousin?’ he complains. ‘It’s rude if I go alone.’ 
saying hi isn’t exactly the first thing I want to do 
you sigh. ‘Okay, okay but later. We should give them some time to settle in. Besides, we need time to get a proper gift.’ 
I just really need a couple more hours of sleep why can’t you get any hints Wenjun :((((
huh maybe this is why you’re still single even though all of the college kids are in love with you 
I follow the confessions page on ig, you don’t even know 
oblivious, really 
‘just go get something appropriate from the mall nearby.’ you shove Wenjun, eyes still shut and head still resting on your pillow 
‘we have to choose it together so it’s more meaningful,’ he says. ‘sleep can wait.’ 
this child knows nothing about junior year in college 
lucky sophomore 
sunlight begins to gently flitter in from the curtains, you almost enjoy the warm sensation as it lulls you back to sleep 
that is before Wenjun decides to be a little pest and yanks the material apart, bathing your room in ample sunlight 
it tickles your face and burns into your eyes, effectively driving you out of bed 
‘OKAY! Just let me get ready first,’ you huff grumpily. ‘Wait till your mother hears about this.’ 
Wenjun just sticks his tongue out and prances off 
brat 
hastily and half asleep, you pull on a random college camp shirt and walk out in your sleeping shorts 
‘get me my sunglasses like qinfen’s and car keys,’ you order Wenjun since it is HIS fault for making me arise so early 
I can’t let Mrs Lau on the 8th floor see me like this...geez that nosy auntie 
she’ll tell this whole block for sure 
I know she secretly tracks our movement to arrive at the lift and the exact time when the gossip is fresh 
she really has too much time on her hands being the newest third wife of her current sugar daddy of a husband 
I hope our new neighbours aren’t like her...I also pray they know what they’re getting themselves into by moving into this condominium 
if we get just ONE more snobby, rich, gossip digger neighbour, I’ll gladly pay for that 11.2 million mansion Wenjun was looking at 
there’s no denying the estate you and your cousin resided in was a rich one, flourishing with the younger generation of old-money families
it didn’t help that prestigious universities were planted nearby 
okay fine, you and Wenjun lived big because of your family 
but y’all weren’t stuck up, gossipy or as gold-digging, as the majority of the neighbours you had encountered 
the new ones next door better not be any of the above 
click click click 
Wenjen pops his head over your shoulder to stare at your phone. ‘Why are you searching up that mansion? Are we moving house?’ 
your eyes swivel to check if anyone was lurking in the corridor before whispering in a hushed tone, ‘No but we will be if our new neighbours are anything like the existing ones.’ 
Wenjun sighs and shakes his head dramatically but his lips quirk up playfully 
‘I’m sure they aren’t that terrible. C’mon, let me get my new Gucci sneakers.’ 
remind me why my kid cousin wants to wear his 2K shoes to the mall smh 
no one is going to see them 
besides, isn’t Gucci a little overexposed nowadays? 
yes, I went to the local Gucci store to check it was like 1.9K? but round it up
pushing the gate open, you manoeuvre your way around the piles of cardboard boxes 
simple cardboard boxes 
nothing at all like the usual sleek black boxes embellished with the family name in silver calligraphy font 
all of which ended up in the trash bin afterwards 
dumb 
flip flop flip flop 
‘...could you at least get a new pair of...marketing slippers?’ Wenjun pointed out, blinking in horror at your worn out slippers, the left side’s sole was loose and threatening to fall  
‘oh stuff it rich kid. These were from Rubi and there was a sale!’ 
that led to a family bicker over slippers right outside your front door 
the two of you were so engrossed that you didn’t hear the pairs of footsteps drawing closer 
‘um hi?’ 
you froze 
Wenjun had a faster reaction time. He beamed brightly and cleared his throat. ‘Hi! Welcome to the neighbourhood! Have you guys eaten yet?’ 
吃饭了吗?
your eyes scanned over the two boys who would now occupy the last flat at the end of the corridor 
they both had dyed hair just in differing colours, one blonde and the other jet black 
both were tall 
one seemed older and more athletic than the other 
‘I’m Bi Wenjun and this,’ Wenjun paused to shove you the in ribs. ‘Is my cousin, Y/N.’ 
the boy with the blonde hair spoke first, smiling to reveal pearly whites. ‘I’m Zhu Zhengting and he’s my brother, Justin.’ 
not related but YH are so close they’re all fam 
OH SHIT 
AM I SERIOUSLY GREETING TWO HOT NEIGHBOURS IN MY PYJAMAS AND FLIP FLOPS 
WITH MY HAIR LOOKING LIKE A FRICKIN BIRD’S NEST 
at least there are Coach sunglasses perched on my head,,,not so bad not so bad 
Wenjun had already started making small talk. Just smile and wave! 
THIS IS SO HUMILIATING 
I’M NEVER WEARING THIS SHIRT AGAIN 
i need new shorts and slippers pronto!
• UGH 
‘oh! China School of Fine Arts! I go to the same college,’ Zhengting suddenly spoke up. 
at which Justin rolled his eyes at. ‘Pfp, not for a term. Don’t worry if you don’t recognise him, he never actually attends classes.’ 
Zhengting blushed and elbowed Justin away 
hm cute 
NO 
‘oh cool,’ your tone was clipped and you feigned disinterest, trying to get your burning face to cool off. ‘I suppose I’ll see you around.’ 
m o v e  you tried to send a telepathic message to Wenjun 
I CAN’T STAND ANOTHER SECOND BEING IN ZHENGTING’S PRESENCE WHEN I LOOK LIKE SHIT 
times Wenjun has been oblivious today: 2 
the wait seemed excruciating and when Wenjun finally bid them goodbye, you took of in the direction of the lift with a carelessly wave 
it was good that your neighbours were people around your age 
just so happened that Zhengting was incredibly good looking and currently the only dateable candidate available 
IF YOU CHANGED YOUR OUTFIT, THINGS WOULD HAVE TURNED OUT SO MUCH BETTER
all drive long, Wenjun kept teasing you about your appearance or gushing about how well he and Justin got along 
he insisted on gifting them the most expensive hamper from Tangs 
you didn’t see a need for two young adults to have bone strengthening essences meant for elderly 
but they were complementary in the particular hamper so...
supermarket was particularly quiet that morning 
and it seemed to be offering an alarming amount of samples and candy promotions 
candy was more suitable for a high schooler and college student but you weren’t up to argue with Wenjun
he seemed too whipped for Zhengting and Justin 
‘I need ice cream to get over this,’ you moaned. ‘There’s no way I can ever look our neighbours in the eye again!’ 
call me overdramatic but you would have done the same 
I haven’t even had breakfast yet 
stupid Wenjun 
I think it’s low blood sugar that’s causing me to be like this 
‘sweetie, it’s 10.30am in the morning and you are on a strict diet. Remember that detox tea you ordered a week ago?’ Wenjun reminded, shovelling free samples of chocolate chip cookies into his mouth 
why does my kid cousin always have a point...but my day was absolutely terrible! 
‘whatever, f*ck it. I’ll just pass those to Cheng Cheng.’ It was your turn to sample those cookies 
don’t you just love supermarkets? 
you didn’t think the back seat of your car would be stocked with boxes of biscuits 
morning supermarket runs are interesting in the Bi household 
luckily, there were no snooping neighbours in the lift lobby to witness the Bi cousins haul about a dozen plastic bags filled with questionable groceries 
such as croutons without a leaf of a lettuce 
lift buttons were nearly hidden from view by white plastic 
bring your own bags to shop! 
there were no longer any boxes lining the corridors when you guys arrived home 
thank god
imagine going all American Ninja Warrior with arms full of grocery bags 
there was a lot of packing going on in the kitchen 
and ripping open almost all of the cookie boxes by the time y’all were done 
Wenjun went over to lend a helping hand while you hibernated in your room, reflecting over your outfit choice and eat more 
it was just sheet embarrassment that plagued your mind and influenced your actions 
might as well be all comfortable and sappy around them because they’ve seen me in my pyjamas 
AND ZHENGTING IS PROBABLY MY BATCHMATE 
i hope he doesn’t follow the school’s confession page 
those thoughts made you crunch down on the biscuit with unnecessary strength 
ding dong 
the melodious - rather generic - chime of your doorbell broke your train of miserable thoughts 
‘hamper delivery!’ 
as you were still clad in your wonderful get up, you opened the door wide enough for only your head to be seen 
‘send it next door,’ you hissed quietly. ‘Say it’s from your new neighbours with love. Thanks!’ 
oh my god 
WITH LOVE? 
HEY ZHENGTING AND JUSTIN I LOVE YOU 
WENJUN IS GOING TO LAUGH HIS HEAD OFF LIKE A DAMN HYENA 
you slammed the door faster than the delivery man’s reply and raced to your bedroom 
‘i’m ruined.’ 
*cue dramatic Disney princess sob fest on bed* 
a few heart-pounding minutes passed, you strained your ears for any sign of reaction 
unfortunately, people paid for soundproofed walls around here 
yet, there seemed to be a sound coming from outside 
out of curiosity, you peeled away your balcony door to take a look 
lo and behold 
Zhengting was standing on the balcony, tossing small pebbles onto yours 
visual reference: Songyi and Minjoon’s apartment balconies from Kdrama ‘My Love From The Star’ 
is...he really wasting the decorative pebbles...
SHIT I’M STILL IN THE SAME OUTFIT NO NO NO 
battling a blush of complete mortification, you gestured for him to say something 
‘Thanks for the hamper!’ Zhengting yelled with a bright smile. ‘We appreciate it!’ 
on impulse, your lips stretched into a grin. ‘No problem! Welcome to the neighbourhood!’ 
he looked at the small trench of bamboo and pebbles separating the two balconies and then back at you 
please please please stop judging my outfit 
‘hopefully, we’ll see each other a lot.’ 
HUH? 
he shot one last smile, maybe a soft chuckle before stepping back into his room 
his words confused you
maybe he meant to spite your outfit choice 
or maybe he genuinely felt like seeing you more often 
that’s because he’s new and probably needs someone to show him around the estate and would rather have a friendly next-door neighbour do it than the security guard 
get your head out of your ass he doesn’t mean it like that 
hmm...
ZT’s diary: one 1/2 months of living with Justin╰( ・ ᗜ ・ )╯
over the course of a month, you learnt that Zhengting and Justin were very inconsiderate neighbours 
there was always some loud music playing from their flat at every time of the day 
fortunately for them, you and Wenjun were the only neighbours on the right side of the 12th floor and you didn’t really care much to complain
the resident care committee was rather useless anyway
regardless, their music still annoyed and distracted you to an extent
according to Wenjun their apartment was larger and thus, they had extra rooms to build a dance studio in
that was how you found out Zheng Ting was a dance major in CSFA
he just had to be under Professor Zhou or Professor Cheng
Cheng xiao’s real name is so cute omg
at least he was in a different major
you wondered if he knew Professor Wang
Professor Wang knew everybody and Zhengting looked like a popular kind of guy
+ the guy who actually liked his major
while it was touching to see how hard he worked, you wished ‘I am the sheep’ wasn’t stuck in your head while you were studying for a quiz
the clock read 2am, that was the time you finally snapped
popping panadol pills wasn’t going to take a headache away
the soundproofing here sucks! it only works whenever it wants to
shockingly, Wenjun was tucked away in his dreamland, wrapped up in a cocoon of his blankets and oblivious to the world that surrounded him
you grabbed your phone and stormed to your neighbour’s apartment, pounding furiously on the front door
it took a while but the music stopped playing and a few clicks of locks could be heard
‘hi,’Zheng Ting panted out, wiping the sweat that was beading on his forehead. ‘It’s about the noise level isn’t it?’
suddenly, the want to yell at him was gone
he! was! just! too! knowing!
it made you feel a bit ashamed
not to mention that his white shirt was slowly becoming see-through
you clasped your hands together, grinning.
‘No! Not at all! I-I j-just wanted to find out the song you’re dancing to.’
lie lie lie? 
Zhengting seemed to ponder about that for a moment before beckoning you to enter his apartment
not shady at all
let’s go
be sure to take off your flip flops before entering houses
each room was slightly larger than the ones in your home
surprisingly, the house was kept neat and tidy, minus the odd one or two boxes that had yet to be unpacked
‘where’s Justin?’
the lack of the younger boy’s presence in the flat noticeable
Zhengting revealed that Justin was away for a week visiting his family
no wonder Wenjun seemed a bit sulkier
Zhengting pushed open the door to his cosy little dance studio
honestly, it was spacious enough to have a group of dancers practice
very well lit by the fluorescent spotlights and outfitted with a panel of mirrors
there was even a ballet bar on the other side
and Zhengting had hidden this treasure how?
his personal studio was comparable to the ones at school
suddenly, you came face to face with an iPad, an iTunes tab open
‘these are all the songs I’ve been choreographing to recently, and uh...loudly as well,’ Zhengting said, handing you the device
all of his fancy music equipment was organised in a small shelf
cut
he’s so damn invested into his dancing career
‘why are you working so hard for?’ you wondered out loud
even during finals, Professor Wang never gave your class so many assignments to work on
this is so inaccurate ^ btw, don’t take my word for anything
Zhengting nibbled on his bottom lip and nervously readjusted his headband. Pink flushed his cheeks as he took a step closer to you
with his lips so close to your face, you could feel the ba-bumps of your heart quickening
if I tell you, will you promise not to reveal it to anyone else?’
so secretive
you nodded, eager to find out what Zhengting was hiding
‘all these are for the school’s dance showcase. this year is more exclusive and getting a seat in the audience is invite-only,’ he disclosed. ‘Scouts from all the prestigious academies are coming to take a look.’
a small gasp of astonishment left your mouth, hands flying into a congratulatory clap
*iPad falls from your grip and your reflexes aren’t quick enough*
forget the iPad
rip screen  
ZT has a million more in some boxes anyway
showcases were a MAJOR event for CSFA students, this had to be out of the world spectacular!
discovery: praise only caused your neighbour to turn redder than a tomato
‘will I receive an invitation any time soon?’ you teased, gently nudging his side with your elbow 
please say I didn’t smash his iPad screen
hey, I placed it on the floor G E N T L Y
a mischievous glint twinkled in Zhengting’s brown orbs
you guys KNOW that look
he let out a huff and pretended to be in deep thought, weighing out the pros and cons
arms akimbo, you willed for him to stop teasing and provide an answer
he genuinely has no idea if Professor Zhou will grant him so many passes, stop being so pushy😫😔
Zhengting clicked his tongue on the roof of his mouth triumphantly, finally able to decide on his answer
‘okay, IF you help me fine tune my choreography a bit more, I’ll beg Professor Cheng to save you a seat,’he offered
SCORE!
‘sure, of course! I am a composer and rap study though,’ you quipped in reply, hoping he would still go through with the proposal
ZT shrugged nonchalantly, ‘the more diverse an opinion the better. And please, you’re all Prof Jin and Prof Jackson brag about to our classes.’
now was your turn to blush and deny his claims
who cared if his iPad was broken
at least his heart wasn’t
ZT’s diary: month two of living with Justin\(・ω・)/
commotion 
yet again 
and it was early in the morning 
history does repeat itself 
thank goodness it wasn’t the sacred hour of 9am but 11am 
still early on in the new day 
however, havoc seemed to be wrecking your neighbours flat 
• one moment, the sharp charring of a vacuum cleaner could be heard and the next, shattering items or dropping of boxes boomed through the flat 
basically, just huge chaos 
not wanting to seem too nosy, you kept yourself from going over 
however, the level of pandemonium was getting so out of hand that Wenjun put down his gaming control and asked if he should check it out 
what could be so wrong on a Saturday morning? 
you opened your mouth to answer but was abruptly cut off by two urgent knocks on the front door 
the door creaked open to reveal a panicky, oddly-dressed Zhengting holding onto handles of pet crates 
‘hi,’ you quickly greeted, unable to stand the awkward silence. ‘Is everything alright?’ 
‘just peachy,’ he replied, tongue slipping over his chapped lips
ZZT WITH CHAPPED LIPS ???
WHAT WAS UP WITH HIS CLOTHING CHOICE TODAY?
my most fashionable neighbour is clad in a shirt that cost more than my life from some new streetwear brand and lounge pants - probably from the market - with yellow butterflies on them
what a fit, a fashion statement
such fittingly random sense of style today
something obviously wasn’t right
yes, I’m referring to his pyjamas featured on idol xinfan
YH sprouts rlly wear questionable clothes to sleep no offence
...at least they don’t sleep nude right?
like that’s living life on the edge imagine getting your period while sleeping that’ll be awful
anyway
turning your gaze on the pet carriers, you spot a pretty white kitten and a caramel coloured puppy
in separate carriers
‘I’ll explain later but um our parents are coming for a surprise visit and they don’t know about my babies yet so could you please look after them for an hour or so?’Zhengting begs, desperation creeping into his voice
an ear-splitting crash echoes from their apartment before Justin yells, ‘ge! I can’t get the cat fur off our clothes!’
this is an emergency!!!
you take the pets from his hands gleefully and throw out your lint roller in exchange
‘try this!’
in no way am I advertising lint rollers I don’t even think I have one
Zhengting shoots you the brightest smile you’ve ever seen and hurriedly dashes over to Justin
Wenjun joins in a few moments later, leaving you alone to bond with your neighbours’ pets
a puppy and a kitten? sign me the f*ck up
sorry, couldn’t find if he was more a dog or cat person so you get the best of both worlds
the snow white kitten cautiously pads onto your ottoman while the more adventurous puppy bounces happily onto your bed
I think your heart just melted into a puddle of goo
just imagine Zhengting playing with these two cuties
ba bump, ba bump, babump, babumpbabump
since you’re worried the young animals might pee on your bed, you take them out to the balcony to play
an animal approved balcony
they mess with a collection of small potted
after which, grow tired and begin snuggling up to you for comfort
without caring you’re attempting conversation with pets - that are not even yours, you pose shy of a billion questions
like ‘is ZT treating you well?’, ‘does he look better with his hair up or down?’,‘isn’t he so cute?’
‘Zhengting’s so attractive,’ you muse wistfully not realising the man standing on the neighbouring balcony
ZT chuckles, feeling red tint his cheeks
he only emerged from his room to inhale a breath of fresh air before the intense grilling by his parents could pepper him
yet he felt his heart grow warmer than ever, prior to your heartfelt confession
*intermission*
the front door clicked shut behind Justin and the brothers flopped onto the living room carpet, finally able to breathe normally
we pulled it off, we did it,’ Justin gasped in disbelief, wondering if all the cleaning he had done was a lucid dream
but the realness of Zhengting’s high-five and sparkling counters proved him wrong
ah ha! whatever ge’s parents said to him also proved it happened!
‘soooo,’ he drawled out teasingly. ‘pa and ma think you’re attracted to our neighbour.’
Justin’s hand reached to pinch Zhengting’s steadily crimsoning cheeks
He only snickered when his ge swatted his fingers away as if they were pesky flies
puppy love
speaking of puppies, Justin insisted that Zhengting collect their babies back
knocking at your door, Zhengting had no idea why he felt more anxious than usual
his throbbing heart seemed to want to jump out of his chest
at least he was momentarily distracted by your endless gushing of love for his pets
compliment after compliment, love confession after love confession
shhh...he kind of wished you were referring to him
‘they’re such great listeners too!’
oh!
they admitted that I’m handsome!
Zhengting raised a smug eyebrow, mouth curling upwards. ‘So, you think I’m attractive huh?’
ABORT MISSION ABORT MISSION I REPEAT ABORT MISSION
*sweats nervously*
thankfully, he doesn’t prompt for a reply as he takes the pet carriers from your grasp
with a wink, Zhengting walks off
leaving you in a frantic yet charmed mess
you: ZZT, you did NOT hear that
the text is fast, your fingers flurry over the keyboard  
his answer isn’t delayed either
zhengting: hear what? your Romeo&Julietesque confession of your love for me?
you: pft just bc we both have balconies doesn’t mean we’re Romeo and Juliet
you: it didn’t happen
you: I take my words back
zhengting: mhm and you definitely did not talk to my pets as if they were humans
you: SHUSH
zhengting: no :)
zhengting: come to the balcony
zhengting: please
zhengting: where are you
zhengting: :(
zhengting: come out or I’m calling Wenjun and exposing you
you rolled off your bed and onto your balcony faster than Usain Bolt
Zhengting had already propped his arms on the dividing decoration, awaiting your arrival
‘hey, secret lover,’ he poked. ‘Missed me?’
your orbs rolled in perfect circles,
‘please, I saw you a couple of minutes ago. If anything, I miss your puppy more.’
‘come over tonight.’
what? excuse me?
‘I really need help with my choreography. Please? You promised!’
Zhengting looked needy enough for you to say yes...plus, you wanted tickets to the showcase...and it couldn’t hurt to spend more time with help him right?
also because you wanted to see his pets again
you told him you would come over after dinner
the temptation would be too great to arrive on an empty stomach when a full-course meal awaits
Justin was clad in his baby blue onesie and carrying the small white kitten when he opened the door 
how childlike 
I should get matching pjs for Wenjun too 
with a knowing smirk, he mentioned that Zhengting was in his room 
in return, you filled him in on the new video game that Wenjun bought 
and then let him into your apartment to bug Wenjun 
hehe 
family goals 
you ventured further into the flat, a tad bit more familiar with your surroundings 
Zhengting must be playing with his puppy as excited barks were coming from the inside 
you rapped your knuckles on the door then entered 
bc you’re a cultured person who knocks the door before entering! 
you learnt you to knock after walking in on many...unpleasant things 
such as wang ziyi and cai xukun proclaiming their eternal love 
then catching xukun on a date with zhang yixing a few days later 
not the kind of things you want to recall 
as you expected, Zhengting is on his bed, playing with his puppy 
oh wow can I just say 
bedhead ZZT with his shirt sliding off one shoulder to reveal a defined collarbone 
his grey sweatpants have loosened around the waist to reveal his Calvins and the very tip of his waist tattoo peeking out 
wow 
so sexy 
but no, in reality, he’s just cradling his puppy and cooing sweet nothings into his ear 
‘what’s his name?’ the puppy pads over to greet you, flicking his small tongue over your hands 
‘Justin and I decided to name him Ry, taken from the end of Jeffery,’ Zhengting replies while casually fixing his top 
...as in Jeffery from school? 
oh goodness, of course, these boys had connections 
they must be popular 
even though ZZT never attends class???
what sorcery 
an awkward silence passes 
you both communicate without opening your mouths 
eventually, you’re seated on the floor of ZZT’s dance studio, cuddling Ry - not exactly paying attention to his dance 
honestly, I think Zhengting’s focus is unbreakable 
but when it breaks...it shatters 
you go from trying to explain that his left arm needs to be at the same height as his right arm 
to ‘oh my god I really like your new phone case.’ 
and then he’ll pick up the conversation from ‘thanks my phone case is from bare bears official.’ 
he loves being cute deep down and we all know it shh 
then it goes back to ‘one two...three...stop! pose. Wow, you’re a great choreographer.’ 
not even dance counts ^ 
blame Professor Wang for influencing my class with dance 
I’ve been dragged to deep down 
eventually, the night wears on and the two of you simply sprawl out on the dance floor 
tired 
Ry cheers you up by licking your face though, cutie 
you’re curious to find out more about zhengting, now seems like the perfect opportunity to pose questions 
‘what other animals would you want as a pet?’ Though, you can’t picture Ry and the kitten having TOO many friends yet.
you watch as Zhengting pouts, thinking hard 
‘maybe a pet piglet. My friend, Mubo has one and I played with it once at his place. It was so adorable that all my friends were in love with it.’ Zhengting laughs fondly at the memory. 
‘my mother would kill me though,’ he adds quickly
idk man we could like share a pet so we both gain from it and become piglet parents 
wh00ps did I say that out loud? Why is he giggling at me? 
‘yes, yes you did,’ Zhengting speaks between his chuckles. ‘I already am a Zhu so might as well be a piglet parent.’ 
朱 (last name) and 猪 (pig) are both ‘zhu’ 
jokingly, you say, ‘I’ll choreograph a celebratory dance if you take up my offer.’ 
that’s when Zhengting gets all excited and seriously considers buying a pig 
one hour passes just researching on pigs
how to care for one 
what to feed it 
where to buy one 
is it legal 
how much does one piglet cost
not that the cost affects his decision ^ 
‘let’s do it,’ Zhengting decides surely, the determination in his tone. ‘Let’s be piglet parents.’ 
‘you’re kidding...’ your voice trails off when you see he is COMPLETELY on board with the idea 
what :) have :)) I :))) done :))) 
I CAN’T BE A PARENT TO EARLY ON 
yet I really like the idea of Zhengting as a pet dad 
with me
it’ll be a small family 
‘we’ll work out the custody issues later,’ he jests. ‘Are you ready to sign some adoption papers? I found a reputable place.’ 
there’s this look of certainty and assurance in his eyes that only read ‘with me, everything’s going to be fine.’ 
maybe that was when you realised you were SO ready to admit you wanted to be with him
maybe confession could come later but for now
piglet parenting? 
hell yeah 
‘I’m in on it.’ 
I’m so glad you moved in next door 
I’m so happy Justin chose the right apartment complex
worked on this for one whole week oh my god and this lowkey became crack 
rlly wanted to get this up for his birthday!!!
so happiest 22nd/23rd to the gorgeous Zhu Zhengting!!
can’t believe he’s joining the old men club on Idol Producer I’m so proud :)
I fell for him on Pd 101 but unfortunately, his incredible talents weren’t recognised
he and Justin were my Chinese kings and now they’ve both come back to claim their kingdoms
Zhengting is just so talented, hardworking, kind-hearted and humorous
I love
tbh idk what lies ahead for his future bc YH’s plans look a bit scattered for the SKR and CH side
but whatever happens, I only wish the best for him and I hope that he would achieve his dream
literally, I would marry this man if the age gap wasn’t so big and if we shared the same religion
God bless him and his household, they deserve love and grace too
@ zhu family, thanks for raising such a wonderful man
朱正廷,祝您生日快乐!我希望正廷哥哥会得到耶稣的祝福,会继续努力也会好好照顾自己的身体。我希望有一天我们可以见面。加油吧!我一定会支持您。我爱您。💝💞💘
pls don’t bash me for my errors, my ancestors are disappointed enough already :”)
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shyvioletcat · 4 years
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I’m scared to finish ch 5 of made of ashes rn so may I instead put in a request for some rowaelin fluff, perhaps for the couples retreat au ;) or I’d be happy with some papa Rowan and mama Aelin and baby Elsie having some happy family time please 😭❤️
Ok that’s fair. Really, I think we all need some fluff after that. I put this together very quickly, please forgive it’s flaws. 
~~~~~
“Elsie, love,” Rowan said, trying very hard not to laugh at the sight of his daughter’s wild curls sticking out at all angles after her nap, “come here.”
The toddler did no such thing, she just laughed and ran in the other direction. Rowan chuckled softly as he went to track her down.
“Where are you, Elsie?” Rowan called out, a giggle immediately giving her location away. 
The giggle apparently wasn’t enough and he heard a muffled. “I hiding, Daddy.”
Rowan heard a snort, that most definitely did not come from his little girl. “That’s not how it works,” Aelin said. She was then viciously shushed. “Sorry, sorry.”
It was really hard for Rowan to not burst out laughing. Elspeth was still learning the intricacies of hide and seek, but she was trying. Rowan went into the bedroom, immediately seeing a pair of legs sticking out from under his pillow while Aelin read on her side of the bed. They grinned at each other as he approached the bed.
“Mum, have you seen Elsie?” Rowan asked exaggeratedly.
“No, I haven’t,” Aelin replied, her tone much the same as his. “Did you try under the bed?”
“I’ll check.” Rowan did, making sure his movements were loud. “No, not here.” The giggles started again. “Not under the blanket either.” More giggles. “Where could she be?”
Elsie giggled again, and went to reveal herself but Rowan was quicker. He grabbed her leg, pulling her over the blanket to him. Elsie shrieked before that turned into hysterical giggles.
“I found you!” Rowan cheered.
“Found me, Daddy!” Elsie parroted.
Rowan flopped onto the bed, making Elsie bounce. Then she was up again climbing all over him. He caught Aelin looking at him, smiling at the sight of them playing together. 
“That was a lucky find,” Aelin said, as Elsie moved to climb her instead. “That was a very good hiding spot.”
Now Rowan looked at them, as they grinned identical smiles at each other, the two of them were his whole world, he loved them more than anything. When both mother and daughter looked at him all Rowan could say was, “Lucky me, indeed.”
~~~~~
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mallowstep · 3 years
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kitty cat pronouns
today in: matthew slowly goes feral
anyway, yeah! i made up my mind about this...ages ago, really, and i made a off-hand comment about it but didn't explain it so here goes.
i don't think mml (meow meow language / catlang) has gendered pronouns. or more accurately, mmml (as in, my mml) does not. (i'm memeing about acronyms we're sticking with mml.)
anyway while one third person pronoun would be fine (or one for each number w/e but this isn't about plurals and number, that's different), but while that would be fine, i have better answer:
relative age based pronouns.
so cats have four pronouns: same age, older, younger, unknown.
but because age is a part of the cat social hierarchy, these also all have a bit of nuance.
i'm going to speak Generally here but even within the clans there's a lot of variation
same age is usually within a season. equal status. it's pretty reserved, in that sense, because most cats can only talk about their maara with the same age term, so there's some implication of growing up together, being close, etc. (else how do you know you're the same age?) altho elders tend to use it with each other, even cross-clan, unless someone is clearly younger bc at that point you're all old and on the same level.
older is respectful. kind of like sir/ma'am but also not really and it's built into the language. there's an element of status to it, an apprentice is always going to use older with a warrior. (if u read ashes yes there's definitely drama between hollypaw and jaypaw and lionclaw when this happens.) i'm not sure how far i want to push that, how it interacts with medicine cats, queens, etc., but anything that's a clear status increase is going to warrant older. so like, i think leaders probably always get this, unless they're talking to one another, but maybe during like? leadership challenges (i.e. when the clan makes a decision a leader would typically make), maybe not? i'm not sure.
younger is not Disrespectful unless you're talking down. which does happen. (again lionclaw definitely uses this with hollypaw and jaypaw and they're like "bro wtf".) but mostly it's Fairly neutral like. ig it implies they should be respectful to you but at the same time hm, it is perfectly possible for two cats to refer to each other with older or younger pronouns. for example an apprentice who's training for extra long (like whitepaw) will refer to a young warrior with older pronouns (rank), but the warrior will use older to refer to the apprentice. i haven't thought out enough of these scenarios but it happens. it can also b a little affectionate like. "little bro" vibes.
unknown which is. the Main connotation it carries is not close to this cat. it says "i don't know them well enough to know how old they are" and like tbf cats can't do math so determining the age of a cat you don't know is hard but like. outside of the context of the clans, cats might use same age as like. i know and care about them and the exact timing is not important.
anyway at the end of the day these r pronouns and like. cats don't think about it any more than people think about a t/v distinction.
(informal/formal you)
i'm probably never touching this in writing as much as i love the potential for drama it creates because there's no "painless" way to introduce a reader to it. i am expecting them to learn four new words/whatever tool i use to indiciate it, understand the general ideas, and be able to read into the nuance, which is more than i am willing to do.
i believe firmly that fics should carry their own worldbuilding. sometimes i go and write a fic like wcte where i just. hope you pick up on the nuance as you read. but even that, which uses seim, maach, and maara, i think you get the idea of what each word means in context. poppy defines seim, maara is used in contrast with maach, etc.
so bc i can't do that with this, don't expect it to come up in my fics. just know that i'm thinking about it sometimes.
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