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Shot-in-the-dark guess about the prophecy: perhaps the monster hero is going to absorb the human soul, thus killing the human hero in the process, in order to attain a massive power boost to "save the world". If the monster hero was actually Noelle, then it could explain the "guided by love" phrase (hearkening the Weird Route) and the heart icon that appears on a later panel of the monster (the SOUL). All total conjecture, but that's half the fun in waiting for new chapters!
It's been such an important point so far that Susie is outside of our control. She's the one element that really does what she wants and will only do what the player wants if she wants it, too, and even then, she'll still do things her way.
And yeah, I do have this distinct scary feeling that that rule's going to be broken by the end of the game.
#ask lynx stuff#deltarune spoilers#dr spoilers#something about Kris losing their hand#something the hand is necessary for Kris to remove and put back the soul#something Susie keeps threatening to take a bite out of Kris because of their apple smell#something something that red soul sure could resemble an apple huh#something the same will happen in the weird route with Noelle but now all character agency has been removed#something looking back at my theory of Ralsei having Kris's real soul#something Ralsei is so so willing to write himself off. Don't worry about me. Don't worry about me#something you cannot change what happens but what if. What if the outcome was still different!#something what does your interjection into the story as the player allow that was not possible before!!#something something who will we actually save who will we actually lose!!#I have 200 pieces that are supposed to go onto a conspiracy board and no string and I am sitting in the middle of them screaming and crying
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Shipping Cassandra and Leliana is so funny because I feel like the only people who actually do it have either only played Inquisition or don't think much past "Well they're the Left and Right Hands of the Divine" because you KNOW they only get along to the extent they do in Inquisition because they've never had an actual conversation because the second Leliana opened her mouth about her theology in front of Cassandra, they would have been trying to strangle each other
#either they never talked about it#or Cassandra just silently had an aneurysm because she didn't want to disrespect Justinia by fighting Leliana to the death#also because Leliana is obviously the Divine's favorite in that manner#but I think Leliana is smart enough not to stir the pot when she needs Cassandra#because like look at her if she romanced the Warden#Cassandra will be like 'we LOOKED for the Warden we can't find them!'#but the second its clear they aren't gonna be trying to bother the Warden about leading them anymore#Leliana is like 'yeah I knew where she was the whole time wanna write her a letter? we're in touch constantly she's busy leave her alone'#also like how Leliana reacts to be romanced and becoming Divine versus Cassandra#Cassandra is like 'oh we're going to break up because that's what my religion strictly tells me to do'#meanwhile Leliana not only DOES NOT break up with the Warden but is very public about not having done so#like literally even all the way back in Origins she flirts with the Warden by being like 'Hey god wants me to eat your pussy'#and she's 100% serious about that#Cassandra would become an atheist before she got on board with Leliana's beliefs lbr#dragon age#cassandra pentaghast#leliana
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don't ship with me my reply time can be anything from 1 week to 4 years and when I write asks you'll have to deal with novellas 💔
#❛ 𝐒𝐈𝐃𝐄 𝐒𝐓𝐎𝐑𝐈𝐄𝐒 ⧽ — ooc.#WENT THROUGH MY INBOX AGAIN YESTERDAY AND FOUND ASKS FROM 2022 THAT MY BRAIN WENT: oh this looks lovely jupiter please reply ♥️#i will tell you now. If you've ever sent me something in there. Unless you deleted your blog it stays there#my inbox will never be empty due to the fact I usually save the chain positivity ones in there as it brings me joy to read 💕#I'm surprisingly working on things in the bg. I have hit a very romantic mood in my writing and I think that's great. 🥰#So I'm indulging myself a bit. Sometimes activity for me can be lots in one night. Other times it's redoing particular paragraphs of writin#I have. A lot of good news to share tonight that I'll be posting after work#Particularly re the project I keep on going on abt so I'm particularly excited to go into deets!#And tonight I will be back to the writing board. Thank you SO MUCH for your patience as always#I'll be clearing this blog up a bit too💕#might be hidden in the tags but honestly shout out to the people who ship with me / who we are currently discussing#shipping possibilities with you are ALL the best I cannot wait to give you novellas of my love 🥰
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#people very much want to blame readers for a lack of engagement with fic these days but frankly i think this is.... incorrect#we need to be real about WHAT ao3 is#it is an archive#it is not a space that is particularly conducive to social engagement#the most collaborative experiences i ever had around fic happened on livejournal#it was not on ff.net#like i agree that there is a depressing drop off in like...idk the idea of the social acceptability of leaving comments#and a far more pronounced divide between readers and authors#but this isn't happening bc readers suck now and they're selfish and entitled which frankly is how many posts opining about this issue sound#it's not like lurking or sorting by complete works only is NEW#these are things that have always happened#what has CHANGED imo is that the spaces where fic happens and the spaces where fandom happens are now very different#and isolated from one another#and we can blame readers for not bridging that gap all we want but it's not gonna fix it#especially since we know how well shaming people for Not Enjoying Things Correctly tends to go#like i don't have an answer to this problem but i think this ''you're entitled!'' ''no YOU'RE entitled'' back and forth#between writers and readers certainly isn't going to fix anything either#it's only going to push those two groups further away from each other#to my mind what we need is a) a platform more conducive to collabortive fic writing and fandom interaction#(think LJ or old dedicated fandom message boards)#and b) a cultural shift within fandom spaces away from this idea that authors are like... untouchable or whatever#bc from what I have observed authors who DON'T have this issue are ones who started creating fanworks from within a pre-existing friendgroup#a pre-existing readership really#and these little subsets then grow into larger readerships#the problem is how partioned all these group start#and that i think is a byproduct of an overall more hostile fandom space where people feel like they can't speak or create openly#without being in danger of running afoul of some fandom scold and their lackeys#like fandom has never lacked for drama but i do think in a post-tumblr/twitter fandom space we can all agree that shit jas gotten Buckwild#*gestures at how bg3 fandom recently speedran fandom insanity primarily on twitter*#shit is different these days and blaming each other for that is missing the forest for the trees
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Reading Their Monstrous Hearts and genuinely why isn't the dead grandmother the protagonist. Why is it this fuckin guy
#things i've read#their monstrous hearts#im like a lil over 100 pages in and now that ricardo isnt suffering as badly hes more annoying#'oh boohoo i still need to write this book i got a huge cash advance on and i was lonely at my prestigious boarding school'#fuck outta here man. can we PLEASEEEE go back to your grandmas journal#its genuinely so much more interesting what shes got to say
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Bought a stupid suit thing. Disgustang.
#speculation nation#i got it on sale but it was still kinda expensive. ughhhh#hates every part of that. it's so stiff and uncomfortable and unnatural feeling.#but business professional is the recommended attire... so to that i went...#felt bad staying so close to close but the employees were nice about it at least. and i still got out b4 they closed (barely)#i wanted to go shopping earlier today. in between class and orchestra. but allegedly attendance is required in the lab.#so i went. didnt really feel like attendance was taken. but i still went.#still gotta finish prepping my resume but i dont think itll take Too long... i got a template to follow#from my web coding class actually. bc we just happen to have a resume building assignment this week.#so by working on my resume im working on the lab!! yay!!!#except im not doing the lab resume rn. just the normal resume. the template is still helpful tho.#also need to do a bit of research into the companies that are there and the interview style thingie#GOD this is going to be a whole hassle. i dont wanna wrinkle my stupid suit so i shouldnt stuff it in a bag.#and i dont wanna BIKE in the stupid suit. so im thinking of driving up to campus. forking over the money for guest parking#do the stupid career fair then drive back home to change and then go back up to campus on bus or bike in time for bowling#hopefully. we hope. nonzero chance of having to miss bowling and web coding classes tho. depending on how long i spend at this thing.#ultimately career bullshit is more important than one day of bowling so like. whatever.#but i still want a reward for sucking it up and going to the stupid career fair anyways. even tho i Really dont want to.#im already planning on skipping my first class. he made it sound like it would be fine + expected. so we can go to the career fair.#and that opens up a good amount of time so. doing that. and then hoping i can make it to bowling class...#it's funny to imagine if i didnt have time to go back home to change. me showing up to bowling in a suit.#im not doing that tho. this shit was too expensive to risk it doing physical activity.#BLARGH i am so supremely grumpy going to this thing. i dont want to. at all. i hate all this Professional Attire bullshit.#but i need to... and i already went thru the hassle of getting the damn suit... might as well just go.#i will simply pout and grumble the whole way. until tomorrow where it'll be full social smiles and whatever the fuck.#need to get enough sleep to make talking easier. no time for any fun stuff tonight.#need to find my damn. razor. bc i need to shave my little mustache thing probably. for 'professionalism'. ugh.#kicking and screaming this whole way. man i dont think i even own an ironing board. gonna have to hang the shit up and hope for the best#longest sigh imaginable... i just wanna write....... or play video games...... wahhhh#at least itll be over tomorrow. but then i will have to do presentation stuff for thursday. ughhhhhh
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HAPPY DAY WEARING MORK'S WORKSHOP SHIRT DAY FOR US WHO OBSESSED WITH THIS IDEA I'M SO HAPPY. MONICA CONTINUE TO MANIFEST YOU KNOW WHICH SCENE(S) PLEASE
Y'ALL NEED TO PROMISE ME RN YOU'RE GONNA COME VISIT ME AT THE PSYCH WARD BECAUSE WHEN I TELL YOU TODAY IS THE DAY MY COWORKERS FINALLY CALL AN ENTIRE MENTAL HEALTH CRISIS INTERVENTION TEAM ON ME IM NOT FUCKING KIDDING I STOOD UP FROM MY DESK SO FAST I SENT MY CHAIR FLYING ACROSS THE OFFICE AND BARELY STOPPED TO PUT IT BACK IN PLACE BEFORE LOCKING MYSELF IN THE BATHROOM LIKE

THIS IS IT. THIS IS WHAT SENDS ME OVER THE EDGE. MY GRASP ON THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IS TOO LIMITED TO EVEN ATTEMPT TO PUT INTO WORDS THE DOWNWARD SPIRAL INTO MADNESS IN GOING THROUGH RN NO AMOUNT OF SCREAMING SHAKING CRYING FROTHING AT THE MOUTH THROWING UP BLOOD SPINNING COUNTERCLOCKWISE ON THE FLOOR BITING BARKING HOWLING CAN EVEN COME CLOSE TO DESCRIBE IT
NOT ONLY WE'RE GETTING DAY AT MORK'S GARAGE BUT HE'S ACTUALLY HONEST TO GOD FOR REAL WEARING MORK'S SHIRT. WITH NOTHING UNDERNEATH. IM BEING PLAGUED BY VISIONS LIKE WHAT IF. what if mork and day are out for a walk and they get surprised by a sudden downpour so mork takes day to his garage until the rain stops since it's close by, but by the time they get there they're both absolutely soaked so mork lends day one of his work shirt to change into. cue mork having to look away from day because all that skin in display is making him feel stuff and day getting home still wearing mork's shirt and he didn't really pay attention to it while he was still with mork, but in the quiet of his own room the smell of motor oil and cigarette smoke that clings to it is so strong it feels like mork is still standing right next to him and then. AND THEN!!!!!!!!! [GETS SNIPED OUT OF EXISTENCE]
#MANIFESTATION WORKS!!!!!!!!!#WE HAVE A VISION BOARD AND WE'RE MAKING IT HAPPEN!!!!!!!!#WHAT'S IT LIKE TO LOSE WE WOULDN'T KNOW!!!!!!!!#SOMEBODY SEDATE ME I FEEL INSANE AND SOMEHOW I HAVE TO GO BACK TO WORK#ALSO HAPPY DAY WEARING MORK'S SHIRT TO US INDEED ANON THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS MESSAGE#last twilight the series#morkday#m: ask#if anyone really reads all the shit i write you deserve a cookie and a hug fr
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an important writing question to ask yourself is "how much time and effort do i want to put into figuring out what this character's legal documents would look like"
#newt has THE MOST BULLSHIT COMPLICATED backstory for this i stg#born out of wedlock in west germany in 1990 when the two germanies were IN THE MIDDLE of reuniting but not done yet#and then almost immediately moved to the united states with his dad because his parents broke up#which seems to imply his dad got full custody?? which seems at least a little weird for the time period#could not figure out if it was even legally plausible because TWO GERMANIES#but both parents wanted his dad to have full custody so like... maybe??#anyway what fucking citizenship does he have. i dont even know#was thinking dual but germany doesnt like dual#so that might only work if his dad transmitted american citizenship to him like a bloodline curse#but i think that only works if his dad was already a citizen when he was born and his dad is german so THAT would mean-#*insert that one gif of charlie day with the pepe sylvia conspiracy board*#so maybe he just has american citizenship???#i dont know how that works either...#and then when im writing him hes trans on top of all that#which makes all this relevant unfortunately! could this man have gotten a legal name change circa 2010?#i THINK so?? im probably just going to handwave it?? but AARGH#i dont LIKE handwaving these things because like#anachronisms with trans characters & the transition process always bug me a bit#im almost 10 years younger than newt but i remember shit was DIFFERENT even back in like. 2014.#this isnt a legal thing but i remember before there was a nonbinary pride flag. we shared the purple-white-green genderqueer one#well. 'we' including me at the time. im a man now#and surgery has changed! no-nip top surgery was really rare to hear about before like... even just a few years ago?#im sure it was happening but it's way more common now than it was in like 2020#and i didnt even know trans people existed until like 2010#the first time i saw a trans character in ANY work of fiction was 2011#personal#unscientific aside#im way off on a tangent now i forget if i was going to say anything else#good enough hit post
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i think i might have been too friendly in my discussion board introduction, because two of my classmates have emailed me questions about finding the textbook and where i got mine.
on the plus side, i love going "hey lil guys. lemme tell you about. pirating textbooks. on libgen. :)"
#periodical life updates#so funny. like not one but TWO people asking. if another asks might as well cc the whole class how to get it /j hdkjh <33#also literally six people responded to me on the discussion board and thats so silly. i replied to all of them (<- too friendly) <3#we talked about art and writing and such <3 (<- avoiding saying he writes fanfics by saying they write short fiction novels)#silly! two periodical life updates and this ones not even a period </3#organized a grocery list for my mom with helpful pictures and clean organization. (<- loves making lists)#going to eat dinner and get back to work on the animation#EDIT NEVERMIND I AM GOING TO COOK RICE NOW APPARENTLY -_-
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not me coming up with most of the prompts for the lestappen week and now not having any ideas for ANY of them
#dont worry i'll figure it out#eby just pointed this out to me because i was lamenting about how i had no ideas to her#and i think its really fucking funny#i had an omegaverse idea for day three!!!! but idk if i can/want to write that#so.#back to the drawing board we go
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okay i've been having fun lately so! send me 🎨 for a pinterest board based on one of our dynamics! please specify said dynamic(s). feel free to request 1-3 in the same ask!! these can be any dynamic, not just romantic. these will obv be mutual-specific, so these boards will be separate from my character boards ( so that i can give them sections!! )
#☽—— ⸢ meme ⸥#please it'll be fun fkdsjaldslhj#also like if we haven't written much but we HAVE plotted? these are still open!!#like as long as we Get the dynamic it's fair game!#if we have AUs i might also includes sections for them ;)#going ahead and posting this sooooo late but i'll rb it in the morning and prob 300 more times#OH ALSO. i will /try/ to not take from pre-existing boards if it's a ship i have one for ( wil.lry being one lmao )#maybe like 1 or 2 things but nothing more than that for sure#ALSO ALSO. THESE /ARE/ OPEN TO NON-FN.AF DYNAMICS LMAO#trying to ease back into writing and planning on including D.R stuff esp into that even tho most blogs seem so dead so like. hi <3
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....honestly i think part of the reason i don't give readers the version of my manuscript i intend to Query is because at that stage i absolutely cannot stomach the idea of making more revisions based on feedback lol
#text#personal#writing#querying#i mean i know once you get an agent and an editor you do that whole merry-go-round again and that's Fine#but by the time i feel solid on querying i am absolutely sick of revisions for then and there#and like. i have exhausted my fresh readers by that point#i do think having an agent/editor on board would revitalize me for a project honestly#i get very excited to talk about things when someone else is there also getting hyped#but more than say. four. rounds of revision. is too much for me before attempting querying#and we hit the issue of 'good enough' vs 'perfect'#sure books are never perfect#but i can only make it so Good Enough before i must yeet it#anyway this brought to you by: i'm reading a friend's fourth (4th) draft#and i'm giving her perhaps way more feedback than she wants......#she was hoping to query it but uh. it's not ready.#or AYE don't think it's ready#it's gotta be up to her#i'm afraid i'll send her this and she'll be pissed at me though#i know AYE would be pissed if i sent a fourth draft and someone gave me back as much feedback as i'm about to give her#but. also. don't ask if you don't want feedback.#and for me fourth draft is the Don't Ask I Don't Want More Feedback cutoff i think#the desire for validation is strong#the desire to be fucking done is stronger lmao
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get you a partner who hypes your work up so much that they delight in helping make critiques and listening to your frustrated editing process
#bat chatter#Im getting back into writing trap troubles again#and to do that i need to go back and actually Look at the words i've written#and so we are at the stage of 'arrow will you sit and be my sounding board while i figure out what works?'#and i recieved a VERY enthusiastic '/YES/' in response#im very loved
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my agenda of the angels being dilf-lovers continues <3
#original post#fic: splinters of madness#great news. we still have a lot. but! less than before. uh. in worse news#this chapter is gonna be more than 30k. sorry; i know thats a lot#my bad yall. i just. dont want to split stuff up :')#unrelated. itching a lot. trying to figure out if this is a sertraline side effect. it SAYS its uncommon but like.#i swear to fucking god man if im like allergic or some shit im going to lose it :') back to the drawing board id go and i DONT want to#my writing
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Something I don't think we talk enough about in discussions surrounding AI is the loss of perseverance.
I have a friend who works in education and he told me about how he was working with a small group of HS students to develop a new school sports chant. This was a very daunting task for the group, in large part because many had learning disabilities related to reading and writing, so coming up with a catchy, hard-hitting, probably rhyming, poetry-esque piece of collaborative writing felt like something outside of their skill range. But it wasn't! I knew that, he knew that, and he worked damn hard to convince the kids of that too. Even if the end result was terrible (by someone else's standards), we knew they had it in them to complete the piece and feel super proud of their creation.
Fast-forward a few days and he reports back that yes they have a chant now... but it's 99% AI. It was made by Chat-GPT. Once the kids realized they could just ask the bot to do the hard thing for them - and do it "better" than they (supposedly) ever could - that's the only route they were willing to take. It was either use Chat-GPT or don't do it at all. And I was just so devastated to hear this because Jesus Christ, struggling is important. Of course most 14-18 year olds aren't going to see the merit of that, let alone understand why that process (attempting something new and challenging) is more valuable than the end result (a "good" chant), but as adults we all have a responsibility to coach them through that messy process. Except that's become damn near impossible with an Instantly Do The Thing app in everyone's pocket. Yes, AI is fucking awful because of plagiarism and misinformation and the environmental impact, but it's also keeping people - particularly young people - from developing perseverance. It's not just important that you learn to write your own stuff because of intellectual agency, but because writing is hard and it's crucial that you learn how to persevere through doing hard things.
Write a shitty poem. Write an essay where half the textual 'evidence' doesn't track. Write an awkward as fuck email with an equally embarrassing typo. Every time you do you're not just developing that particular skill, you're also learning that you did something badly and the world didn't end. You can get through things! You can get through challenging things! Not everything in life has to be perfect but you know what? You'll only improve at the challenging stuff if you do a whole lot of it badly first. The ability to say, "I didn't think I could do that but I did it anyway. It's not great, but I did it," is SO IMPORTANT for developing confidence across the board, not just in these specific tasks.
Idk I'm just really worried about kids having to grow up in a world where (for a variety of reasons beyond just AI) they're not given the chance to struggle through new and challenging things like we used to.
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oh tumblr, they all know. all of them. two minds were blown today.
#well not sophia she doesn't count#shut up#i don't think i'll see sophia again till her operation and recovery is over#everyone pray for her#seriously though can we buy a card for her and all write on it and#is that weird#she has a dentist appointment on monday to extract a tooth and then thursday is a scan of the heart and then#i think the operation is the following week maybe the monday??? thursday???? no idea#so far away but so close#guys what do you mean you don't want to hear about her life#be careful or i'll discuss what i learnt about tony today#okay where was i#oh yeah sophia#i spent today ringing the ATO to make sure her payment plans would be okay through her hospital stay#she's not back on board till 3rd april idk#oh oh the best part she's switching the phone calls from her phone to the office#finally#i know i joke about all this but oh my goddddd this is so so so so scary#like she's going in for an operation#we're all so terrified#like if she... if she... oh my god... if they stuffed up.... no it'll be fine they're trained professionals it'll be okay
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