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vioshipping ยท 5 months
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MY WIFE FINALLY CAME HOME IN THE MAIL!!! AAAAAUGHHGHHHHH
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direpunk ยท 2 months
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filming friends
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rr311 ยท 5 months
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โฅ# โ€” ๐˜๐˜ฏ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ fluff, softie!bakugo, kissing
โ˜† โ€” ๐˜ด๐˜ถ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฎ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜บ bakugo canโ€™t sleep without your touches
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โฃ๏ธŽ โ€” ๐˜ข๐˜ถ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ด ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ต๐˜ฆ heyoooo, I had this idea to write a cute lil fic about bakugo :). Iโ€™m slowly starting to write for different anime so if you have any in mind let me know!. enjoy the story.
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โ€œ ๐–ณ๐—ˆ๐—Ž๐–ผ๐—๐–พ๐—Œ ๐–บ๐—‡๐–ฝ ๐–ข๐—Ž๐–ฝ๐–ฝ๐—…๐–พ๐—Œ โ€œ ๐–ช๐– ๐–ณ๐–ฒ๐–ด๐–ช๐–จ ๐–ก๐– ๐–ช๐–ด๐–ฆ๐–ฎ ๐—ˆ๐—‡๐–พ๐—Œ๐—๐—ˆ๐—
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โค๏ธŽ๏ธŽ๏ธŽ# โ€” ๐–ก๐– ๐–ช๐–ด๐–ฆ๐–ฎ It was strange that katsuki suddenly texted you, there was something probably going on but you didn't wanna assume, so you got up from bed to walk to the boys side of the dorm. it was dark and quiet considering everyone was sleep, making it to his door. you softly knocked against the wood, not even a minute he swings It open, he looked grumpy. "you know I can get in trouble right?." he rolled his eyes, "shut up stupid and come in." you gave a small chuckled, walking into his door leaning up to peck his lips, shutting the door behind you both. "you look grumpy. what's wrong?." he groaned, "I already told you nothing is wrong." โ€” "then why am I here?." you raised a brow going to sit on his bed who looked away, he was quiet. "kat?." again he grumbled. was there something he didn't wanna say?. "katsuki bakugo." you squinted your eyes towards him who groaned finally looking back up to you, "I jus missed you.." he mumbled but you heard him, smiling softly. when he didn't get an answer, he just seen you pat the spot on the bed, he didn't complain, getting into his bed cuddling with you.
he looked flustered. "you miss me?." he snarled, "I'm not repeating myself you idiot." โ€” "never told you to." you teased with a chuckle kissing his nose, you always loved moments like this, katsuki letting his guard down and being calm as you both cuddle with eachother in bed.. though he is a hot head he was yours. in reality, he didn't want to admit that your touches and warmth gave him comfortโ€” comfortable enough to sleep peacefully, he was a fool for affectionโ€” but just from you. you were surprised at first that katsuki let you touch him going beyond playing his hair and kissing him considering he hates being touched but it's different when you're the one touching him. your hands are so warm and soft against his skin, the way you would play with his hair, or cuddle him, kiss him. it showed a complete different side of him. he sighed softly feeling your fingers in his hair messaging his scalp as he held you close, "you're such a baby." you scoffed hearing him mumble a small shut up with a pinch to the waist, "If you wanted to cuddle you could've said that~." again he pinched you but on your stomach, a bit harder this time, flinching from the stinging pain."shut up and sleep." he's one to talk. you got woken up from your sleep.
you rolled your eyes snickering, "you're one to talk tough guy. you woke me up." you pouted, was having a good ole dream. katsuki mumbled a small, "sorry." something that was rarely ever said but you could tell he was he getting sleepy, his breaths were going shallow as his body relaxed more into your arms, but before he could let his eyes betray him. he lifted his head to look up at you, your beautiful face..he leaned a bit with a small grin. โ€œyou look pretty." you tilted your head with a small smile feeling your heart flutter, "I do?." he hummed, "yeah.." he whispered back before leaning in close to take your lips with his. it was a small and gentle kiss, sighing in relief that his night can finally end. after a few seconds he broke apart the kiss cuddling against your neck finally letting sleep take over. seeing this side of bakugo really made your love for him grow stronger, he wasn't the same kid you knew since middle. he's grown. and you're proud of him for that. for a few minutes that went by of playing with his hair and listening to his soft snores sleep soon took over you as well.
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seishihoe ยท 10 months
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i let my 17 year old brother add me on discord because he really wants to play fortnite together and iโ€™m DECEASED.
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inkmchine ยท 11 months
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Drops a mouse in your lap. Surprise!
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pastelliek ยท 9 months
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Boyo meets boyo
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full-swing-kiss ยท 5 months
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i finished reading โ€œthe borrow a boyfriend clubโ€ by page powars and i saw the dedication to sk8 and. yeah boy itโ€™s au time. we gonna cook fr!
lowkey i feel like langa could be asher and reki being noah, and reki feeling as though he has to prove his masculinity. also cherry, joe and shadow could be some of the boys (ex: lenny, camilo, etc.)
also the way noahโ€™s parents act is how i would envision rekiโ€™s parents acting about his transition (only using the first letter of his name, but also being supportive of him)
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burning-sol ยท 11 months
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I was raised by owners who starved me and berated me by the name they gave me. They caged me and chained me so I bit my chain until my teeth were sharpened and the chain broken. I did not tell them I was leaving. I did not tell them where I went. I left when they didn't expect it. I don't look back at this hometown plastered with posters of my old photos, labelled by my old name. They think I'm a lost dog but I know where I am, and it is NOT sitting by their side.
I am hungry, I have been walking alone, I am anxious to find someone who will love me but if I do not make you fight my sharp teeth and my growls, how am I to know you will put in the effort to love me for who I am? I wasn't always this way: one time I let a person get close enough to hear me, my bark, and they ignored me. They commanded me by the name I'd tried to forget, they made me sit so they could kick me, and when they tried to collar me I ran away.
There will be people who want to collar you, chain you, make you play their games. There are people who want to put me down. There are people who tell me to be quiet, to not howl or bark or whine. They call me wild as if they hadn't casted me out and left me exposed to disease and injury and fleas. They cannot understand what I've become, they do not see my brighter coat and softer eyes behind all this hurt and the dirt that is stuck to my fur and waiting to be cleaned by the hand of a gentle owner.
If I'm a fucking feral dog to you, if that's all I'll ever be, that's fine by me. But don't pretend you love me just to tell me to sit, so it will be easier to kick me, to put a collar on me, to pin me to the table and put me down. Don't make me die by my dead name. Don't put me back in my cage. DON'T GET CLOSE TO ME OR I'LL BITE YOU.
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dreamsicle262 ยท 8 months
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i have GOT to stop drawing so many dragons
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libertys-lovers ยท 1 year
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๐Ÿ–•Bastardcore๐Ÿ–•with Flug :>
-@fictionallyinparadise
Ooh! Welcome back in Paradise!!! Thanks for the ask!
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๐Ÿ–•Bastardcore๐Ÿ–• ~ Are there any โ€œflawsโ€ of Flugโ€™s that I find endearing?
Letโ€™s seeโ€ฆ
I believe his intense need to have a plan/schedule for everything would count for this. Of course, wanting to be prepared isnโ€™t a bad thing! He just tends to panic when he doesnโ€™t have one, or gets overly frustrated when events stray away from what heโ€™s predicted.
I find that all understandable though, considering the scale of his work andโ€ฆ wellโ€ฆ who his boss is. Itโ€™s also relatable! I donโ€™t react the same way he does, but having a plan for whatever Iโ€™m doing is really important for me too.
But, of course, I also find his in-general awkwardness to be absolutely adorable ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบโ€ฆ and also relatable BWJSKDKF
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solarrene ยท 1 year
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Possibilities and Acceptance
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Aki sees the little things. That's how he learns how to cherish these few specks of time.
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The strong and cool wind makes up for the heat of the sun, mighty waves crashing, soft yet rocky sand below his feet, and the voices of Denji and Power, it grounds him.
"But you're not alone now."
His eyes found Denji and Power, splashing around the water, so amazed by it. Aki almost smiles.
But Himeno is wrong and one thing she's right about. He had never been alone. Maybe he was lonely, he thinks a lot of people are, anyway. Maybe it was given that they'd stay side by side because that's what their job commanded. But he wasn't alone still.
She was nice to him. Kind to him. And kind she was. Letting herself be trampled upon those who she allowed for the sake of compensation. And he couldn't be alone then after he did an act of unkindness so that he could do it for her out of kindness. He could still clearly hear the laugh she let out that day, it rings in his mind, around him, against the waves.ย 
Against every dying day, she watched his back, even when he was well capable of his own. She watched his back even when he surpassed her. Risking her own, so he couldn't risk his. To live another day, so they could have their ramen and cigarettes.
"I had it back there." Aki spoke, wiping his katana clean.
Himeno shrugged, showing off her unfazed and lazy smile, "I know." He expected more for her to say something but all he got was, "Ramen? It's on me."
"We can't eat ramen everyday."
"But it's not everyday," she whined, clinging to him as they walked together. "And it's not just ramen! There's gyลza, egg rolls, fried rice!" she emphasized by shaking the arm she was holding onto. "And we have different ramen whenever we do." Continued her as they walked. Aki just let her drag him.ย 
He figures he could never get sick of the taste of ramen, not alone, at least.....especially not with her.
"You almost got hit because you covered for me." Aki's voice was sharper than it usually was when on the job, his gaze even more. Temper wanting to flare out by looking at her unbothered expression and just smiled--the cuts on her suit that gushed out blood was hard to miss.
"Almost," Himeno comically tipped her head to the side as if mocking him, pissing him off even further. She managed to swallow a chuckle when she saw how his face twitched. "And that's the point of covering for you, isn't it?"
"I had it."
"I know."
Himeno linked their arms, "I'll cook this time."
"Your cooking sucks."
"But you'll be there to teach me!"
Aki found he came to like another meal to have with her.
"You're never gonna stop covering for me, aren't you?" His expression was rather.....hopeless. His katana still jaded as he stood, chest heaving still as he stared at her.
Himeno coughed a little bit of blood, but of course, she managed to laugh, blood dripping out of her mouth. Shakingly, she stood up from the ground, body wanting to give up but she stood and limped her way to him.
Aki sighed, frustration in him as he strode to her before she almost falls to the ground. "No..." Weakly, she uttered, her smile lazier because of her state. He could only click his tongue, holding her up as they heard the medical team grew closer.ย 
"You owe me a ramen." His tone gone to normal, looking at her tired, closing eye. He sees her lips curved a little, "Always." Whispered her.
So until she was patched up and back on her feet again, they had their ramen, but only him that had a cigarette, saying that the doctor doesn't allow it not sooner--not that he was the one to follow orders like that, but it was the least he could do for all that she's done for him. After all, he didn't want to have his ramen all by himself or he wanted to have someone to share a cigarette with; her. So at the end of that day, he covered for her.
He was never alone.
Had he seen it before it wasn't there anymore?
"Eat your food while it's still warm, Aki."
Had he savor what was given to him before it ran out?
Indeed, what a gift it could have been to walk with her on the shore.
Maybe he should have it seen it coming. That her end would be in reason for his own to continue. Maybe he should have stopped her all those time.....but maybe he could have had and still she would have followed her own mind, her instincts, her heart moving for her. How could any being defy that? In any no way, was his answer. That's why he was still under the sun, a chance given again. Even in her absence from this land, she still teaches him.
Aki let his eyes be blinded by the sun as he stared at the sky, the world unmute again. He hears the continuous loud voices of back and forth of Denji and Power, he now stares at them. The both are now playing catch with the ball they bought on the way because he was forced by them. Better that, than them fighting strangers for it.
His breath hitches as he watched them play. Taunting memories wanting to creep in but he blinks them away and focused on the two. On their voices, the cool breeze fighting the heat, waves still as strong as before, salt of the earth in the air, the sand on his fingers as he dug through them, eyes still on the two. He can't let this second pass by. Right there and now, is what Himeno gave him.
So he vowed to be just there and always. And maybe someday to join both of them be lost in the moment.
March 2023
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vioshipping ยท 8 months
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GuYS GGGUYS I FOUND A RERUN PLUSH I FOUND ONE. A PLUSH. OF MY BELOVED. IM GONNNA START EXPLODING
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rohansdisciple ยท 1 year
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rr311 ยท 4 months
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katsuki bakugo , izuku midoriya & shoto todoroki
ยกsummary youโ€™re sick and you want their presence.
โ†ณ a.n ; next story iโ€™ll add a few more characters to the mix โ˜๐Ÿฝ, there gonna be short little drabbles but itโ€™ll be worth it! enjoy the story :).
katsuki ;
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not even a minute in a loud knock was heard on your door, chuckling as you got up. you stumbled a little due to dizziness but you made it to your door pulling down the handle to open it revealing your hot headed boyfriend with a hoodie and your favorite snack in his hand, โ€œawwww kat, you really do care about me.โ€ you teased but he only groaned pushing past you, closing the door behind you. โ€œof course I do idiot. why wouldnโ€™t I?.โ€ he asked giving you his hoodie, shrugging placing the blanket you had covering you on the bed to change into the hoodie, mumbling โ€œask mina or something.โ€ you mocked hearing him scoff, โ€œso funny.โ€ he was going to come anyways despite how he responded. he liked being an ass, it was funny getting the many reactions from you but you knew it was just him being an asshole. either way he was still going to come because he loves you. even though your like a stick up his ass he still does stuff for you. when you both got settled in the bed, you were quick to wrap your arms around him as he did the same around your waist. โ€œif you cough on me iโ€™ll kill you.โ€ he joked, you groaned heavily rolling your eyes cuddling more into his chest, โ€œwhatever you say kat.โ€ you muttered , starting to falling asleep. he knew by the way your breathes were slowing down, soon enough you had fallin asleep. he caressed along your back to give you the comfort you needed, softly smiling. though he hates admitting stuff, he loves being in your arms.
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It was so fucking hot in your room. the ac and the fan you had blasting in your face wasnโ€™t helping your case the slightest bit, you tried using your wings to fan yourself but despite that nothing wasnโ€™t really helping. you hated summer. you groaned loudly letting your wings spread out as you lazily laid in your bed sniffling, being sick while also suffering from heat was going to make you go crazy. after you sent that text to Izuku, 20 minutes had passed hearing a light knock at your door, not bothering to get up you used a feather from your wing to open the door. Izuku stood there with a bag of your favorite snacks and ice packs, his face softened but chuckled a little. you were spread out like a star fish, when you heard him walk in placing the bags down you looked up, โ€œtook you long enough.โ€ you grumbled hearing him hum, bending the ice pack in half letting it get cold. โ€œendevour made us patrol a little longer for our last day, but iโ€™m here now right?.โ€ you groaned rolling over to lay on your back, โ€œI guess so.โ€ you huffed but sighed in relief feeling the cold pack on your forehead, โ€œthat feels nice..โ€ he smiled, continuing to hold it to your head as he sat down next to you, โ€œhow have you been holding up?.โ€ โ€” โ€œI almost died from suffocation. Itโ€™s too damn hot.โ€ you complained, Izuku nodding his head in agreement caressing your hand with his, โ€œI do agree, we had to get new suits by how high the temperature rised.โ€ humming you turned on your side using the hand he held with yours playing with his fingertips, โ€œat least you donโ€™t have to suffer every damn year, but you just being here makes me feel better..so thank you.โ€ he felt you give his hand a squeeze, smiling down at you. he lifted your hand close enough to his lips pecking the back of it, โ€œof course my love, just rest for the day. Iโ€™ll be with you the entire time.โ€ and he did what he said. when you fell asleep he stayed with you the entire time, he placed your head on his lap as he kept the ice pack on your forehead making sure you donโ€™t overheat. the whole time he made sure you were comfortable and relieved.
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It took some time but once shoto was done with his dad and the others, you heard a knock at your door. you coughed a little into your sleeve, walking to open the door revealing your boyfriend with a bag of snacks and a hoodie, โ€œyou donโ€™t look good.โ€ you rolled your eyes playfully stepping aside to let him in, โ€œgee, thanks shoto totally didnโ€™t know that already.โ€ you sniffled, closing the door, walking back to your bed to sit on it watching as shoto set down the bag on your desk, โ€œare you feeling ok?.โ€ he questioned as he walked up placing his hand on your forehead, it was hot. โ€œnow that youโ€™re here yeah..but keep your hand right there..it feels nice.โ€ you leaned more into his hand feeling the coldness radiate off his palm, softly smiling. shoto gave a small grin also, โ€œiโ€™m going to need my hand if you want your snacks.โ€ you pouted slightly but by the sound of your stomach grumbling you nodded your head, feeling his hand leave your head. as the night slowly went by, you both were cuddled up on your bed both watching a movie eating the snacks he had gotten you. his hand wrapped around your waist as you laid comfortably on his chest, the comfort of his warmth mixed with his cold was putting you to sleep. he caressed along your waist intrigued into the movie not even realizing you were dozing off. but when he heard soft snores and breaths hit his collar bone he looked down to see you fell asleep, he softly smiled. you look so cute, despite the sick look, you still look cute. he leaned down to give your forehead a soft kiss before turning off the tv to get you both more into a comfortable position, he laid you on your side as he also laid on his side holding you close to his body. soon, sleep started to take over as well.
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thewriteadviceforwriters ยท 2 months
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25 Prose Tips For Writers ๐Ÿ–‹๏ธโœจ Part 1
Hey there!๐Ÿ“šโœจ
As writers, we all know that feeling when we read a sentence so beautifully crafted that it takes our breath away. We pause, reread it, and marvel at how the author managed to string those words together in such a captivating way. Well, today I'm going to unpack a few secrets to creating that same magic in your own writing. These same tips I use in my writing.
But before I begin, please remember that writing is an art form, and like any art, it's subjective. What sounds beautiful to one person might not resonate with another. The tips I'm about to share are meant to be tools in your writer's toolkit, not rigid rules. Feel free to experiment, play around, and find what works best for your unique voice and style.
Power of Rhythm ๐ŸŽต
One of the most overlooked aspects of beautiful prose is rhythm. Just like music, writing has a flow and cadence that can make it pleasing to the ear (or mind's ear, in this case). Here are some ways to incorporate rhythm into your writing:
a) Vary your sentence length: Mix short, punchy sentences with longer, flowing ones. This creates a natural ebb and flow that keeps your reader engaged.
Example: "The sun set. Darkness crept in, wrapping the world in its velvet embrace. Stars winked to life, one by one, until the sky was a glittering tapestry of light."
b) Use repetition strategically: Repeating words or phrases can create a hypnotic effect and emphasize important points.
Example: "She walked through the forest, through the shadows, through the whispers of ancient trees. Through it all, she walked with purpose."
c) Pay attention to the stressed syllables: In English, we naturally stress certain syllables in words. Try to end important sentences with stressed syllables for a stronger impact.
Example: "Her heart raced as she approached the door." (Stronger ending) vs. "She approached the door as her heart raced." (Weaker ending)
Paint with Words ๐ŸŽจ
Beautiful prose often creates vivid imagery in the reader's mind. Here are some techniques to help you paint with words:
a) Use specific, concrete details: Instead of general descriptions, zoom in on particular details that bring a scene to life.
Example: Instead of: "The room was messy." Try: "Crumpled papers overflowed from the waste bin, books lay spine-up on every surface, and a half-eaten sandwich peeked out from under a stack of wrinkled clothes."
b) Appeal to all five senses: Don't just describe what things look like. Include smells, sounds, textures, and tastes to create a fully immersive experience.
Example: "The market bustled with life. Colorful fruits glistened in the morning sun, their sweet aroma mingling with the earthy scent of fresh herbs. Vendors called out their wares in sing-song voices, while customers haggled in animated tones. Sarah's fingers brushed against the rough burlap sacks of grain as she passed, and she could almost taste the tang of ripe oranges on her tongue."
c) Use unexpected comparisons: Fresh similes and metaphors can breathe new life into descriptions.
Example: Instead of: "The old man was very thin." Try: "The old man was a whisper of his former self, as if life had slowly erased him, leaving behind only the faintest outline."
Choose Your Words Wisely ๐Ÿ“š
Every word in your prose should earn its place. Here are some tips for selecting the right words:
a) Embrace strong verbs: Replace weak verb + adverb combinations with single, powerful verbs.
Example: Instead of: "She walked quickly to the store." Try: "She hurried to the store." or "She dashed to the store."
b) Be specific: Use precise nouns instead of general ones.
Example: Instead of: "She picked up the flower." Try: "She plucked the daisy."
c) Avoid clichรฉs: Clichรฉs can make your writing feel stale. Try to find fresh ways to express common ideas.
Example: Instead of: "It was raining cats and dogs." Try: "The rain fell in sheets, transforming the streets into rushing rivers."
Play with Sound ๐ŸŽถ
The sound of words can contribute greatly to the beauty of your prose. Here are some techniques to make your writing more musical:
a) Alliteration: Repeating initial consonant sounds can create a pleasing effect.
Example: "She sells seashells by the seashore."
b) Assonance: Repeating vowel sounds can add a subtle musicality to your prose.
Example: "The light of the bright sky might ignite a fight."
c) Onomatopoeia: Using words that sound like what they describe can make your writing more immersive.
Example: "The bees buzzed and hummed as they flitted from flower to flower."
Art of Sentence Structure ๐Ÿ—๏ธ
How you structure your sentences can greatly affect the flow and impact of your prose. Here are some tips:
a) Use parallel structure: When listing items or actions, keep the grammatical structure consistent.
Example: "She came, she saw, she conquered."
b) Try periodic sentences: Build suspense by putting the main clause at the end of the sentence.
Example: "Through storm and strife, across oceans and continents, despite all odds and obstacles, they persevered."
c) Experiment with sentence fragments: While not grammatically correct, sentence fragments can be powerful when used intentionally for emphasis or style.
Example: "She stood at the edge of the cliff. Heart racing. Palms sweating. Ready to jump."
Power of White Space โฌœ
Sometimes, what you don't say is just as important as what you do. Use paragraph breaks and short sentences to create pauses and emphasize important moments.
Example: "He opened the letter with trembling hands.
Inside, a single word.
'Yes.'"
Read Your Work Aloud ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ
One of the best ways to polish your prose is to read it aloud. This helps you catch awkward phrasing, repetitive words, and rhythm issues that you might miss when reading silently.
Edit Ruthlessly โœ‚๏ธ
Beautiful prose often comes from rigorous editing. Don't be afraid to cut words, sentences, or even entire paragraphs if they don't serve the overall beauty and effectiveness of your writing.
Study the Masters ๐Ÿ“–
Please! Read widely and pay attention to how your favorite authors craft their prose. Analyze sentences you find particularly beautiful and try to understand what makes them work.
Practice, Practice, Practice ๐Ÿ’ช
Like any skill, writing beautiful prose takes practice. Set aside time to experiment with different techniques and styles. Try writing exercises focused on specific aspects of prose, like describing a scene using only sound words, or rewriting a simple sentence in ten different ways.
Remember, that developing your prose style is a journey, not a destination. It's okay if your first draft isn't perfect โ€“ that's what editing is for! The most important thing is to keep writing, keep experimenting, and keep finding joy in the process.
Here are a few more unique tips to help you on your prose-perfecting journey:
Create a Word Bank ๐Ÿฆ
Keep a notebook or digital file where you collect beautiful words, phrases, or sentences you come across in your reading. This can be a great resource when you're looking for inspiration or the perfect word to complete a sentence.
Use the "Rule of Three" 3๏ธโƒฃ
There's something inherently satisfying about groups of three. Use this to your advantage in your writing, whether it's in listing items, repeating phrases, or structuring your paragraphs.
Example: "The old house groaned, creaked, and whispered its secrets to the night."
Power of Silence ๐Ÿคซ
Sometimes, the most powerful prose comes from what's left unsaid. Use implication and subtext to add depth to your writing.
Example: Instead of: "She was heartbroken when he left." Try: "She stared at his empty chair across the breakfast table, the untouched coffee growing cold."
Play with Perspective ๐Ÿ‘๏ธ
Experiment with different points of view to find the most impactful way to tell your story. Sometimes, an unexpected perspective can make your prose truly memorable.
Example: Instead of describing a bustling city from a human perspective, try describing it from the point of view of a bird soaring overhead, or a coin passed from hand to hand.
Use Punctuation Creatively ๐Ÿ–‹๏ธ
While it's important to use punctuation correctly, don't be afraid to bend the rules a little for stylistic effect. Em dashes, ellipses, and even unconventional use of periods can add rhythm and emphasis to your prose.
Example: "She hesitatedโ€”heart pounding, palms sweatingโ€”then knocked on the door."
Create Contrast ๐ŸŒ“
Juxtapose different elements in your writing to create interest and emphasis. This can be in terms of tone, pacing, or even the literal elements you're describing.
Example: "The delicate butterfly alighted on the rusted barrel of the abandoned tank."
Use Synesthesia ๐ŸŒˆ
Synesthesia is a condition where one sensory experience triggers another. While not everyone experiences this, using synesthetic descriptions in your writing can create vivid and unique imagery.
Example: "The violin's melody tasted like honey on her tongue."
Experiment with Sentence Diagrams ๐Ÿ“Š
Remember those sentence diagrams from school? Try diagramming some of your favorite sentences from literature. This can give you insight into how complex sentences are structured and help you craft your own.
Create a Sensory Tour ๐Ÿšถโ€โ™€๏ธ
When describing a setting, try taking your reader on a sensory tour. Move from one sense to another, creating a full, immersive experience.
Example: "The old bookstore welcomed her with the musty scent of aging paper. Dust motes danced in the shafts of sunlight piercing the high windows. Her fingers trailed over the cracked leather spines as she moved deeper into the stacks, the floorboards creaking a greeting beneath her feet. In the distance, she could hear the soft ticking of an ancient clock and taste the faint bitterness of old coffee in the air."
Use Active Voice (Most of the Time) ๐Ÿƒโ€โ™‚๏ธ
While passive voice has its place, active voice generally creates more dynamic and engaging prose. Compare these two sentences:
Passive: "The ball was thrown by the boy." Active: "The boy threw the ball."
Magic of Ordinary Moments โœจ
Sometimes, the most beautiful prose comes from describing everyday occurrences in a new light. Challenge yourself to find beauty and meaning in the mundane.
Example: "The kettle's whistle pierced the quiet morning, a clarion call heralding the day's first cup of possibility."
Play with Time โณ
Experiment with how you present the passage of time in your prose. You can stretch a moment out over several paragraphs or compress years into a single sentence.
Example: "In that heartbeat between his question and her answer, universes were born and died, civilizations rose and fell, and their entire future hung in the balance."
Use Anaphora for Emphasis ๐Ÿ”
Anaphora is the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or sentences. It can create a powerful rhythm and emphasize key points.
Example: "She was the sunrise after the longest night. She was the first bloom of spring after a harsh winter. She was the cool breeze on a sweltering summer day. She was hope personified, walking among us."
Create Word Pictures ๐Ÿ–ผ๏ธ
Try to create images that linger in the reader's mind long after they've finished reading. These don't have to be elaborate โ€“ sometimes a simple, unexpected combination of words can be incredibly powerful.
Example: "Her laughter was a flock of birds taking flight."
Use Rhetorical Devices ๐ŸŽญ
Familiarize yourself with rhetorical devices like chiasmus, antithesis, and oxymoron. These can add depth and interest to your prose.
Example of chiasmus: "Ask not what your country can do for you โ€“ ask what you can do for your country." - John F. Kennedy
Even the most accomplished authors continue to hone their craft with each new piece they write. Don't be discouraged if your first attempts don't sound exactly like you imagined โ€“ keep practicing, keep experimenting, and most importantly, keep writing.
Your unique voice and perspective are what will ultimately make your prose beautiful. These techniques are simply tools to help you express that voice more effectively. Use them, adapt them, or discard them as you see fit. The most important thing is to write in a way that feels authentic to you and brings you joy.
Happy writing, everyone! ๐Ÿ–‹๏ธ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ“š - Rin T
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Polytheist & Pagan Asks
๐Ÿ™ - Which pantheon(s) do you actively worship?
๐ŸŒž - Which deity(ies) are you closest to/do you worship the most often?
โœจ - Do you believe in patron deities? If so, do you have any that you know of?
๐ŸŒ - Which pantheons do you believe exist?
๐Ÿ“œ - Have you ever made an oath, vow, or contract with a deity? If yes, how did it go (you don't have to share)?
๐Ÿ“ฟ - What are three things you're grateful to your deity(ies) for?
๐Ÿ–‹๏ธ - If you could say anything to your deity(ies) right now, what would you most want to say?
๐Ÿ’Œ - What is your favorite form of deity communication?
๐ŸŽญ - What is an emotionally impactful or a silly worship-related experience you've had?
โค๏ธ - What's one memory of your practice that you reflect the most fondly on?
๐Ÿฅ‚ - What is your favorite devotional act or offering to give?
๐ŸŽ‰ - Do you celebrate any festivals? If so, which ones?
๐Ÿซ‚ - Do you syncretize any pantheons with one another? If so, which ones?
๐Ÿ”ฎ - Do you delve into topics like the occult or the mysteries? Do you do anything esoteric?
โญ - What is something you wish people outside your practice knew more about?
๐Ÿ“– - Do you like the way your pantheon is most often portrayed in media? Why or why not?
๐Ÿ›๏ธ - Do you have a favorite statue or temple to your deity(ies)? If yes, what is it?
๐Ÿ”ฅ - Do you have a favorite myth or tale from your pantheon or others?
๐Ÿงญ - What led you to your practice?
๐Ÿงฟ - Did you have any other spiritual beliefs before discovering your current practice?
๐Ÿชฝ - Do you believe in angels and/or demons? If yes, do you worship or work with any?
๐Ÿช„ - Do you practice witchcraft? If yes, do you keep it separate from your deity worship?
๐Ÿชฆ - Do ancestors or human spirits play a big role in your practice?
๐Ÿพ - Do animal spirits play a big role in your practice?
๐ŸŒฑ - Does nature - plants, nature spirits, etc. - play a big role in your practice?
๐Ÿ’€ - Do you believe in ghosts? If yes, have you ever had an experience with one?
โ˜„๏ธ - Do you believe in astral travel/the astral realm? If so, have you been there before?
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