My writing of a v3 pregame AU:
The way ppl in 2020/2021 wrote pregame made me really confused because they said stuff like “oh it’s the opposite of the imgame” then made it not the opposite whatsoever so here’s my pregame rewrite or headcanon or au or whatever you want to call it
Shuichi Saihara
in the fanon of pregame he’s seen as this abusive masocist sadist manipulator but here I’m just gonna make him an autistic outcast that kinda sits at the back of his class drawing stuff of his danganronpa hyperfixation on the corner of his worksheets, he’s very online and makes theories on a blog about danganronpa, he has alot of online mutuals but not alot of real friends. His biggest fear is being seen as “just okay”.
Kokichi Ouma
In the fanon pregame kokichi is seen as this helpless little baby but in mine to contrast the ingame he’d be alot more social and trustworthy, one of the popular kids but not in a mean way, he has a little crew of friends he calls his “gang” but in reality all they do is like hang out on weekends. His biggest fear is accidentally hurting someone.
Kaede Akamastu
In fanon pregame kaede is seen as this bully but in mine she’d be struggling with mental health alot and stay in her bed for most of the time, she doesn’t really like people and has trust issues but she follows Shuichi’s danganronpa blog and supports him all the way. Her biggest fear is being gaslit or tricked.
Kaito Momota
In fanon pregame Kaito is seen as this bully thats always beating up kokichi but in mine he’d be reserved and quiet, on a few sports teams but nothing too exceptional to be noticed, he envy’s kokichi and his popularity. He wants to be popular and have friends but his social anxiety permits that. His biggest fear is being seen as an idiot.
Maki Harukawa
I don’t know much about fanon pregame maki. In mine she’s a top student but very reserved, she’s often a target for bullies (when she signed up for danganronpa she wanted a talent that could protect her) but doesn’t let it get to her. She’s relatively good friends with Kaito and more social than her ingame personality. Her biggest fear is losing herself.
Miu Iruma
In my au pregame Miu would be very focused on her grades but often has trouble grasping the material, she spends alot of time in the library alone, definitely an outcast. Her biggest fear is not having a job in the future and having to sell her body.
Rantaro Amami
In my au rantaro is a very nervous and uptight person, very rule bent. He is a relatively good student and admires Maki. He is always on Kaede’s tail for either showing up late or not showing up at all. His biggest fear is letting his guard down and getting hurt because of it.
K1-B0 (aka Kiibo)
In my au kiibo is not a robot but has an intense intrest in technology and AI. He mainly spends time in the computer room hacking stupid stuff onto it. He is a relatively relaxed person that doesn’t care about much, a little bit selfish too. He keeps all of his pictures and information neatly organized in files on his computer at home. His biggest fear is breaking a device to the extent that it loses everything on it.
Gonta Gokuhara
In my au Gonta is an outcast, big nature lover tree hugger and is ostracized for this, he fears technology. He is very self centered and forgets to think about others sometimes, he mainly spends his time in the school garden helping bugs off the pathway. His biggest fear is robots taking over the world.
Korekiyo Shinguji
In my au korekiyo would be chronically ill, having to be taken care of by his older sister (whom he has a completely platonic relationship with) because of this he mainly spends time in the library researching about anthropology, he keeps to himself and doesn’t like to talk too much. His biggest fear is losing his sister.
Ryoma Hoshi
In my Au ryoma would be a very caring person, on the tennis team but not extraordinary at it, very social and friendly and has a good relationship with Kokichi. Very content with his life but is envious of taller people and always strives to be a better tennis player. His biggest fear is being isolated from society.
Kirumi Tojo
In my au Kirumi is a very nice person who usually makes plans for her friends, she loves cleaning and helping out with the little things, very social. Her biggest fear is being in power.
Himiko Yumeno
Himiko is a very isolated person so she uses magic and card tricks to try and get people to like her, she tries very hard to be “cool” and “mysterious” but she always fails and ends up rambling endlessly about whatever she was thinking of that day. Her biggest fear is people thinking her magic is real.
Angie Yonaga
Angie is a transfer student that joined a while back, she doesn’t talk alot and has a bit of religious trauma. she loves any kind of art and her main specialty is sculpting, she has trouble grasping other forms of art. Her biggest fear is Cults.
Tsumugi Shirogane
Tsumugi is a very reserved and doesn’t talk alot, but when she is talked to she could ramble on about cosplay forever. She uses cosplay as an escape from the world. She tries her hardest to be the kindest she can be, but she struggles with intrusive thoughts and emotions alot. Her biggest fear is being the villain.
Tenko Chabashira
Tenko is a calm and collected person or at least she tries to be, she gets angry easily and uses martial art to blow of steam. She has a bit of trauma which makes her untrusting of alot of men, but she’s trying to get help and is trying to befriend more male students. Her biggest fear is letting her trauma get in the wayof her relationships.
And thats it! I made their personalities actually the opposite of their ingame. This took a while and no one is gonna read this but thats okay.
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DRV3: Despair's Last Legs, Chapter 1 Day 4
DING DONG BING BONG
“Bastards, bastards, bastards! It’s morning now, eat, eat, eat!” Masaru yelled as the Warriors of Hope appeared on the screen.
“Awww… panic attack Masaru was so much better…” Kotoko pouted. “He was so not annoying,”
“At least he’s not too busy to hate me anymore…” Jataro giggled.
“Monaca is glad that the Killing Game can continue uninterrupted!”
“We should all be glad, if Monokuma actually died we’d have to handle this game ourselves,” Nagisa said. “No offence, I don’t trust half of you to not kill everyone over a playground insult,”
“Hey!” Kotoko pouted. “Meanie!”
“I’m your great leader, and I demand that you say how cool I am!”
“Exactly my point…” Nagisa sighed.
Kaede’s stomach rumbled, she left her room with a pep in her step as she left for the Cafeteria, today was the day she’d help Shuichi set up his plan to find the Mastermind, and finally end this dumb Killing Game.
Her walking practically developed into skipping as she made her way to the Cafeteria.
As always, everyone (Miu excluded) was already there eating their breakfast. She sat near Tsumugi and Shuichi as usual.
“Hey Kaede!” Tsumugi smiled at the Pianist.
“Hi Mugi, hi Shuichi!” The Pianist nestled herself between the two people. “What are we gonna be doing today?”
“Well, my current plan is for you and Tsumugi to pick up the cameras, then we meet up at the Library and set up the cameras there,”
Kaede nodded. “Good, good,”
“Oh, and also I say we set up a lookout room in the classroom just outside the basement, there’s a vent in there that leads into the Library, so having someone there means that the Mastermind couldn’t escape through there,”
Kaede smiled widely at the Detective. “That’s actually a good thing to think about, Shuichi, good thinking!”
“A-Ah it’s-”
“Something, it’s something,” Kaede chuckled as she corrected. “And it’s a whole bunch of something, cause it’s our best shot at catching the Mastermind,”
“Y-Yeah, thanks Kaede…” Shuichi looked to the side for a minute before returning his gaze to the Pianist.
“I plain hope this plan works!” Tsumugi said. “I’m already plain homesick being here,”
“I think we’re all a little homesick,” Kaede reassured. “I just wanna sit back, relax and play some Gymnopedie no. 1,”
“Th-That’d probably be really pretty, I’d love to hear you play,” Tsumugi flushed as she complimented the Pianist’s skills, Kaede felt her cheeks dot themselves with a light shade of pink.
“Thanks Mugi! I’ll try to play for you as soon as I can,”
“I’d love to hear you play too,” Shuichi smiled.
Kaede giggled. “Maybe when we get out of here, I’ll hold a concert, just for everyone here!”
“That plain sounds fun!”
“Y-Yeah,”
SLAM
The whole Dining Hall turned towards the man who had loudly slammed his fists down on the table, The Ultimate Astronaut himself, Kaito standing next to Kirumi, Angie and Rantaro.
“Listen up all of ya, cause I got some good news!” Kaito announced. “I’m hosting a huge party in the Game Room tomorrow to raise our spirits, every single on of you are invited!”
“Even the soulless machine?” Kokichi turned his head.
“How rude! I’m perfectly capable of emulating the human soul!”
“Yes, yes, even the nonhumans here are invited!” Keebo made another complaint which was ignored. “Nyahahaha, how divine, how divine!”
“We’re thinking about 6PM in the afternoon,” Rantaro shrugged. “Not too early, not too late, y’know?”
Kirumi cleared her throat. “We wanted to ask if anyone wanted to help us set up; I’ll be able to handle most of it, but all help is appreciated,”
Tsumugi raised her hand. “I’ll help!”
“Nice!” Kaito raised a hand.
“Huh, why?” Kaede whispered in the woman’s ear. “Not that I’m against you helping out our friends,”
“I can make sure that the Mastermind doesn’t interfere with the Party,” Tsumugi whispered back.
“That’s a good idea,” Shuichi nodded. “You should grab the cameras first, though,”
“Sounds good!”
“Hey Mugi, whaddaya talkin’ about?” The Cosplayer jumped backwards, nearly snapping her neck and causing the first body discovery as a particular, small Supreme Leader appeared between them.
“N-Nothing, just discussing plans with my uh… my friends!” Tsumugi smiled at the thought.
“You have friends?” Kokichi turned his head.
Rantaro chuckled as he walked towards the Cosplayer. “Ignoring what Kokichi said, are you up to help us set up now? Cause uh, that’s when we’re going,”
“Ah, about that, I’ll be a bit late. I’m eh… h-helping a friend carry something,” Tsumugi stuttered like the FPS on a Brazillian server.
“Y-Yeah, I need help carrying something!” Kaede reassured, a big, unconvincing smile on her face complimented with an even bigger, even more unconvincing thumbs up.
Angie stared the two women down, with a wide eyed intensity only matched by her eternal smile. “Acceptable! I do expect help making the decorations, though!”
“Of course, me and Kaede just need to go… carry that thing,” Tsumugi said as Kaede stood up to awkwardly tip toe out of the door with her.
“Good luck you two!” Kaito gave a big smile. “I expect your full effort in helping still!”
…
“So…” Kokichi trailed off. “How much do you bet they’re making out in the bathroom or something?”
“Grr… what a degenerate thing to say!” Tenko yelled. “I’ll break your spine if you say anything like that-”
“20 Monocoins,” Angie smiled. “I do not expect them to remain in the awkward pining phase for more than a week!”
“Kyah! Angie’s a degenerate too?”
“I think she was joking, Tenko…” Himiko mumbled.
“No, no, I am simply making money,” Angie shook her head.
“Ignoring that… is attendance mandatory?” Maki asked.
“Well, I can’t exactly force ya,” Kaito shrugged.
“Then I’m not coming,” Maki began to move out of the Dining Hall, just as Kaito opened his mouth- “And I’m not explaining myself either, I don’t need to,”
“Pfft, her walls are gonna break one of these days, heh,” Kaito chuckled.
“I think you got a ways to go until then,” Ryoma said. “Good luck,”
“Gonta think Maki turn new leaf, then we all friends!”
Kaito walked over to the giant of a man to pat him on the back. “See? Gonta’s got the right idea,”
Kokichi tiptoed over to Angie to whisper in her ear like a schoolgirl telling a rumour, the real juicy kind that gives someone an eating disorder for the next thirty years.
“So… how long do you think until creepy girl and space boy get together?”
“Oh, they’ll be in the awkward pining stage forever, nyahaha!”
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“So uhh… where would Miu’s Ultimate Lab be?” Kaede asked the Cosplayer. “I got so caught up in helping that I forgot to ask where it is… hehe,” Kaede chuckled.
“Oh! It’s in the courtyard, near the building with that weird fountain at the end of the dome,” Tsumugi smiled.
“Okay great, hopefully she’s too tired to be vulgar,” Kaede pouted a little as she thought about talking to Miu.
“Hopefully, hehe,”
Tsumugi led the Pianist to what looked more like a run down shed than an actual laboratory; complete with a rusty metal shutter.
The Cosplayer knocked on the shutter, they heard the sound of Miu yawning within before walking towards and opening the shutter.
The Inventor let out another, somewhat moany yawn. “Whaddaya want Plain Jane?”
“We’re here to pick up the cameras,” Tsumugi said.
“Yeah, yeah,” Miu chuckled, instantly gaining her energy as she pulled out the three cameras and handed them to Tsumugi. “Before ya take ‘em, I should let you know that they have a thirty second interval between shots,”
“That kinda sucks,” Kaede chuckled.
“Well it’s better than nothing, ain’t it?” Miu let out a frustrated sigh. “I’ll be gettin’ my beauty sleep in here if you-”
“Oh wait, Kaito’s holding a party tomorrow in the Game Room! He wants everyone to come, and well… you seem like the kind of person who’d like to party,” Kaede chuckled.
Miu blushed a little. “R-Really? Why the fuck would I go to a party hosted by that dickcheese?”
“Jeez, sorry for asking,” Kaede pouted. “You’re not gonna be able to make any friends if you keep being rude like that,”
“Eeek!”
“And-” Kaede sighed. “Nevermind, let’s just go, Mugi,”
“Ooooo, Mugi?” Miu chuckled. “Are the two flatties fucking in the bathroom?”
Kaede balled her hands into fists. “At least my tits don’t sag like an old woman’s! Ours have some life in them, not like your ugly cow udders!”
Miu squealed from the insult and slammed the shutter, retreating back into her Ultimate Lab.
Kaede let out a frustrated sigh as Tsumugi patted her on the back with her free hand.
“Thanks for sticking up for me,” Tsumugi chuckled. “Miu can be pretty rude,”
“No problem, understatement of the century though,” Kaede chuckled back.
The two walked back to the basement, making light conversation as they met up with Shuichi outside of the Library’s front entrance.
“Okay, here’s the cameras!” Tsumugi handed them to Shuichi. “I gotta go set stuff up right now, good luck with your plan!”
“Bye Mugi!” Kaede smiled.
“S-See you around,” Shuichi said as he lightly waved the woman goodbye as she walked over to the Game Room, Shuichi and Kaede could hear various sounds coming from the room: Angie’s chuckling, Kaito haughtily ordering things for the party, and the placing of what were probably tables for the party.
“Th-That party honestly sounds pretty fun, if the mastermind’s one of us there’s a good chance that they’ll be there,” Shuichi said. “We should go to it, but leave near when it ends to hide in the lookout classroom,”
“What makes you think the Mastermind won’t leave before that?” Kaede turned her head curiously.
“I found this note hidden under the secret door,” Shuichi pulled a note out of his pocket at handed it to the Pianist. The handwriting was very neat, almost like a computer’s.
The Students are holding a party in the Game Room, little do they know that all they’re doing is gathering everyone up for my next motive! They’re taking just a little too long to finally kill someone… it sucks!
Those silly little demons students, silly, silly, silly. I’ll summon Monokuma to them just before it ends, and then boom! This Killing Game can finally smart.
She’d be so proud of me. Tehehe.
-MT
“So, the Mastermind plans to interrupt the party with a new motive?” Kaede looked lost in thought for a moment. “Who do you think the She that the Mastermind is talking about is?”
“That I’m not sure about, maybe the Mastermind has someone above them? They’d have to be apart of a huge organisation in order to capture 16 Ultimate Students,”
“That’s true, that’s true,” Kaede said. “We should show this to everyone once we find out the truth of the Mastermind,”
“R-Right… the truth,” Shuichi looked down.
“You seem sad about that, you were upset the last time I mentioned the truth,” Kaede said.
“Ah, uh, I’ll get into it once we’re done setting up,”
“Okay, sounds good,” Kaede nodded. “Speaking of setting up we should probably do that before it gets dark,” Kaede chuckled.
“R-Right, sorry!”
Kaede hmph’d as the two entered the Library, they didn’t cough at the dust this time. They’ve gotten used to it by now.
“Alright, you set up the cameras at the entrances, I’ll do the hidden door camera,” Shuichi pointed to where he wanted the cameras as he handed Kaede two cameras and a roll of duct tape.
“Aye aye Detective!” Kaede saluted as she went to set up the cameras.
It was easier than she expected, all she really needed to do was tape the cameras between two books, turn off the flash. She got the first one done within a minute, then as she was taping the rear entrance one in she heard the sound of metal scratching against the carpet.
It was Shuichi moving the stepladder towards the bookshelf that had the vent above it.
“Shuichi, what are you doing?” Kaede let out the smallest of chuckles as she saw the Detective moving stuff around.
“Ah, well I’m trying to see if I can place the camera up here easily,” Shuichi said as he went up the ladder, casually opening a book as he did so… he seemed to get lost in reading it as it laid on the bookshelf.
Kaede finished up taping the rear entrance Camera “Uhh… Shuichi?”
“Ah, right, just got caught up…” Shuichi chuckled uncomfortable. “I don’t think I can put it up here, it’d either get found or fall down,” Shuichi walked down the stepladder.
“That kinda sucks,” Kaede said. “Oh well, it’ll work anywhere as long as it faces the hidden door,”
“Yeah,” Shuichi moved the stepladder out of the way of the way of the bookshelf, he then quickly taped the camera to the bookshelf.
“Okay great, that’s done!” Kaede smiled. “Now, let’s go to the lookout classroom, I wanna talk to you,”
“O-Oh okay,” Shuichi let the Pianist lead her to the Lookout Classroom.
It was a pretty standard classroom, the exact same as the other classrooms with the only difference being the vent leading to the Library.
“Sit down,” Kaede smiled as she set up two chairs at either end of a desk, Kaede sat on one side while Shuichi sat on the other.
“Uh… Kaede, why are you doing this?” Shuichi pulled his hat downwards a touch.
“I wanna know why you seem… afraid of revealing the truth,” Kaede said, her voice quiet and her tone gentle.
Shuichi sighed. “Remember when I said I only really solved one case?”
“Yeah?”
“I-I’ve always regretted solving it too,” Shuichi pulled his hat down further as he mumbled. “The victim had been abusing the killer’s family for years, h-he had led them all to suicide. So the killer decided to kill him. As he was being arrested he looked at me with this look of… hatred, I’ve never been able to get that look out of my head…”
Kaede nodded.
“That’s why… ever since then I’ve been ashamed of my talent, of revealing the truth…”
Kaede cleared her throat. “It’s not your fault, Shuichi,”
“H-Huh?”
“I said it’s not your fault, he was going to get arrested anyway, so you shouldn’t blame yourself for revealing the truth about him,” Kaede said, raising her voice just a touch to get the point across.
“I-I guess… I just, I just can’t bring myself to reveal the truth ever since then, I don’t want more people to hate me for it, I don’t want to hurt anymore people by revealing the truth-”
“Don’t worry about that, Shuichi,” Kaede interjected. “Sorry for interrupting, but you shouldn’t let your fear control you,”
“Wh-What do you mean?”
Kaede sighed. “I wish I could just play a song to get the point across, or cheer you up, this is the next best thing, I guess,”
Kaede laid her hand on the table, on top of Shuichi’s.
“You can feel it right? I’m shaking just as much as you are,” Kaede chuckled. “I’m just as scared to reveal the Mastermind too, but I’m not gonna let that stop me from revealing the truth; from protecting my friends from this Killing Game,”
Shuichi paused as Kaede removed her hand from the Detective’s.
“Do you get what I’m trying to say?”
“Y-Yeah… thanks Kaede,” Shuichi smiled as he lifted his hat a little.
“Don’t mention in, you’re my friend!” Kaede smiled as the two got up from their seats. “Oh, and hey! Once we get out of here I wanna see you with your hat off,”
“My… hat off?”
“Yeah! I think you’d look nice without it,” Kaede giggled, Shuichi blushed and muttered out a thank you.
Kaede checked her Monopad, 6:00 PM.
“It’s getting a bit late, I think we should split up for now,” Kaede said. “See you tomorrow, Shuichi!”
“Bye Kaede!”
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Kaede went back to her room to collect her thoughts, doing a mini celebration in her head. She’d helped Shuichi even if just a little.
Kaede realised how tired she felt in that moment, apparently setting up that plan was a lot more intense than she had thought it’d be.
She plonked herself onto bed, intending only to take a small nap before near instantly drifting off into sleep.
Tomorrow was another day day day day day day day day day day day day day day day-
3 VVV VV3 33 VV3 33V VV, YOU READY TO GO IN?
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WHAT’S WITH THE SILENCE? THESE ARE OUR FRIENDS.
IT DOESN’T MAKE ME ANY LESS SCARED? WHAT IF WE SCREW THIS UP?
I FEEL YOU, I’M SCARED TOO. I’M NOT LETTING IT STOP ME FROM
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You know I've seen quite a few people say they're wanting to make v3 rewrites lately--and as someone who is actively working on one by myself, I feel like I should give some advice. I know I'm nowhere NEAR done with Twins AU, but I've made a ridiculous amount of progress and I think these things have greatly helped me out personally
So here are my tips for making a V3 rewrite and actually making it stick/not to burn out before the first chapter!
This is important. Don't try to please everyone. You will never please everyone. Write this for yourself, and you will find an audience. People can and will hate your fic no matter what you do. Don't try to please them, they are not your target audience-- so Write this story for, first and foremost, yourself. It'll feel so much more rewarding if you do I promise.
V3's main theme is extremely muddied due to how the narrative was and how open ended the game was left, and from my own research, no one can agree on what V3 was trying to say about truth and lies, or Reality and Fiction. If you want to rewrite this story, you're going to need to narrow down what you want your rewrite to say about the themes presented.
PLAN THE EVIDENCE AND MURDERS AS THOROUGHLY AS YOU CAN. I think not knowing what I was going to do for the cases and trials really scared me for the longest time until I essentially sat myself down and fleshed out all of the cases for Twins AU. Make evidence lists, do research on how your murder cases might go, the works. It's a lot of work but I personally followed this post and also made an evidence list to help me out plot out the murders for Twins AU. This is also a great way to flesh out your protagonist as well, since you get to explore their note-taking style and what kind of language they'd use for taking notes and if they have opinions about certain things.
Write a summary of each character in the story. DR games have a big cast and V3 has an even BIGGER cast than usual, so it's good to write down summaries for all of the characters. I also suggest really studying each character too, even if you plan on changing a character to better suit your tastes (or to get rid of offensive material.... looking at you Angie) you still want to keep the core of their character intact for fans of that character.
Speaking of characters, make sure to try and remember to write each one as a human being, even if they aren't human (Kiibo for example). Develop them, give them quirks and flaws, motivations and wants and desires and dreams. Even if you hate a character, doing this much character study will help you keep them in character and keep their motivations reasonable and understandable.
If you don't have a good grasp on a character, study harder. Don't go looking for other people's interpretations or try to be a crowd pleaser. Make your own interpretation, and that interpretation becomes special to your rewrite.
If you plan on changing a character, for the love of GOD do your research first. Don't go accidentally making Angie into a worse racist caricature of Pacific Islanders Please and Thank You. Actually, just do a ton of research in subject you think might be relevant to a character or the plot--like Gonta and how ableism prevails in his story. Like how Shuichi has anxiety up the wazoo and how Maki has learned helplessness. Study and research hard.
Pace yourself--I don't think people realize how GIANT a V3 rewrite project is--remember that this game is extremely long and you cannot write this in a single month. Once all of your planning is done, write a reasonable amount for it each day. For me, I'm able to crank out 2k a day because I type absurdly fast, but most people would probably want to start at maybe 500 words a day.
If you're not having fun, step back. You might be burnt out and need a break, or maybe the scene you're writing is just not working. Take time to assess your own feelings and do what is appropriate to resolve them.
Don't feel too discouraged if you need to rewrite a whole scene--it happens to the best of us and sometimes things are just not working. It's not lost progress to retry--consider the scene you are replacing as a rough draft you need to remake. I've had to erase huge 1k chunks due to this.
Reward yourself for big accomplishments! When I finished the prologue, I threw myself and my editor ( @trans-shuichisaihara ) a pizza party, and I plan on doing something like that again, albeit probably cheaper. Reward yourself for huge milestones! Hell, I owe myself at least one treat for two chapters I've written, but tbh I've been having so much fun just writing that doing so is rewarding within itself. That doesn't mean external factors can't help, so if you finish a chapter and you're proud of it, buy yourself a treat for working so hard!
If you got a friend who likes editing/beta reading, invite them to beta read for you! They can help you find errors and typos that you might've missed. If you plan on editing your fic, I highly recommend reading your writing out loud to help you find weird sentence structures and awkward phrases. This should have the bonus of making it easier for people who use screen readers/just prefer audiobooks to enjoy your fic as well!
EDIT! Here are two more:
It's okay to be scared writing something new! Getting out of your comfort zone is going to happen with a giant story like this, and maybe you're going to flop at the best parts. That's perfectly fine!!! You can always edit it later--or even just call it "good enough" and move on! This is fanfic for fun, not a professional project you're making money off of. It's okay if things are less than ideal and incredible imperfect. An imperfect story is at least written. That's better than not writing it at all.
For the love of everything that is holy, remember that the characters should be people--and remember that their talents do not make up their entire personality. Their talents should not solely dictate what they wear, how they act, or the worst offender in this fandom--how their executions go. When writing a character Execution, think instead of what would be the worst way for that character to die--that is to say, what would bring them the most despair upon their death. DR1 and DRV3's executions all play with the despair of the blackened in each execution (with DR2 being noted to heavily miss the mark and to be the set of executions that are the most disappointing to Kodaka, from what I've been told.) So if you're stuck on writing a new Execution, try to think about what each execution from DR1 and DRV3 does to play with the despair of the blackened. What about their executions are giving them despair in their final moments? Do they at all relate to their talents, or are they completely separate from their talent? Study them, and you'll be able to use that information to write your own unique executions that are miles better than most of the fan made executions out there.
And I think that's my advice for now! Happy writing, everyone!
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