The amazing, wonderful thing about starting a shitty magical girl webcomic in 2016 is that I've improved so much as a writer that I can actually now take my original vague outline for the plot, rewrite it and improve it drastically because I'm a better, more experienced writer
The annoying thing about having started a shitty magical girl webcomic in 2016 is that I now have to fix the piss poor plot outline and try to make something decent so I can at least pretend I've improved as a writer
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*slides into your askbox* cowboy au?👀 I'd loveee to hear some of your thoughts🙈
Please don't do this to me I already have three wips I can't deal with more 🙈
BUT. Porchay and Kim.
The Theerapanyakun deal smuggled alcohol in the Wild West -not surprisingly, they are enemies with lots of other smugglers, it's a dangerous job. Porsche starts working for them to support Chay, but falls in love with Kinn, they marry. Chay falls in love with Kim, and in canon fashion, he confesses his love, but Kim is worried about his safety, so he cruelly refuses him.
Chay is heartbroken, but decides to go on with his life and starts sending letters with a girl on the other side of Texas. Porsche suggests Chay go visit (read: marry) her, problem is, no one can make the journey with him. And, of course, the Wild West is a dangerous place, he can't go alone. Who's the only person who can go with him? Kim.
Cue to Kim and Porchay traveling through the desert together, huddling together in the cold nights, fending bandits, bathing together in a river, making love tenderly under the starry Texas night, cough, you name it. Through that, Porchay keeps trying to convince himself that he doesn't love Kim anymore. Kim, on the other hand, has given up on trying to not love Porchay, and is hellbent on trying to get Porchay to marry the girl, so that he can be happy and safe, away from the dangers of being close to a Theerapanyakun. Kim is so in love with Porchay it's a bit pathetic, and he knows that Porchay staying with the girl will break his heart irremediably, but it's a price he's willing to pay for Porchay's happiness. (forced proximity, ungodly amounts of pining, Kim being sooo whipped for Chay you have no idea, but having to do so in silence because he'd rather lose an arm than tell Chay that he'll kill and die for him so his solution is just to. kill and die for Chay. Without telling him.)
I really really really shouldn't write this but the mental image of Kim taking off Porchay's hat so he can kiss him under the Texan dawn is a siren's song and I am but a humble sailor too close to the water for comfort.
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i finally understand why i dislike the third act. yes, i still think there's too much content but let me explain
act: we explore the wilderness, touch the grass, and learn how to play the game. we have one single goal — find a cure and we try different things: hags, devils, githyanki, druids etc
act: we need to explore the cultists and learn that all of this shit is the fault of three dumb magic power girls
act: we are going here with one single goal too — to kick Orin's and Gortash's asses and defeat the giant brain. but what do we have?
this is an emergency — the city can be ruined, and we constantly feel the earthquakes. BUT WE ARE NOT IN A HURRY AT ALL, we have a million side quests to do when my main concern should be to save the world first and foremost. and it just feels so.... ugh.
that's why i think some side guests and our companions' quests should be finished in the 2nd act or be locked behind the romance route. we'd start another playthrough anyway — it's impossible to cover everything in the first one, so why not split the content as well? i know we can just skip or ignore some quests but it's a big difference between "I can't do that because my choices are limited" and "I can't do that because I fucking tired"
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kind of feel like. it’s time. but I have to leave for work in two and a half hours and I sincerely doubt I can get through a whole liveblog in that time
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