#sorry for inconsistent punctuation

[handsomesnoog]

A thought about the lords in black:

People have pointed out that In the summoning they take the forms of people that grace, pete, and steph care about (Jon plays wiggly and Richie, Kim plays nibbly and karen, corey plays pokey and solomon, etc.) but I haven’t heard anyone mention,

Where did they get those bodies?

I mean sure they could shapeshift but it’s not like they haven’t possessed people before.

Imagine Richie and Ruth’s cold corpses sprouting green tentacles and purple eyes and escaping from the morgue they were placed in. Richies skin turned slightly green and Ruths mouth sealed closed to make room for more eyes

Imagine Solomon’s fresh body oozing blue liquid from his mouth and eyes that mixes with his blood as he rises from the ground emitting a high, powerful sound.

Imagine mark and Karen Chasity sitting in their living room when all of a sudden sharp goat horns protrude from mark’s head causing his skull to crack, while Karen begins coughing up teeth and fur and pig blood, neither of them knowing what’s going on or why it’s happening.

Imagine all of them materializing in the gym with bloody clothes, their fatal blows visible on their bodies. Grace sees the bone fragments coming from her father’s head, pete notices that when wiggly speaks water spurts out from his lungs, steph sees the fracture on the back of pokeys skull.

should I get an ao3 account.

Edit: i have an ao3 account.

[flame-of-tar-valon]

[helcef]

Hii I just wanted to say I love Reuben sm🥹!! Also my questions are 🎶💛🍎

hhhiiiiiii tysm im duper happy to hear u like him!!!! was kinda worried Guy from My Own Brain wouldnt take off but here we are!!

🎶 what type of music does your oc like? do they listen to music very often?

his music taste isn’t solid in my head yet:-( BUT its likely german (industrial mostly) techno when he’s alone and house music+neue deutche härte like rammstein on the regular. he’ll listen to just about anything though, loves some good classical or rnb too. sometimes he just sits and stares in silence pre-race though, unexplained behaviour

💛 how many languages does your oc speak? what language(s) are they learning, if any?

english and german! he speaks the carinthian (southern austria) dialect bc he partially grew up in spittle/drau which is also where his mother is from. he likes throwing in dialect specific words when talking to someone who’s speaking standard german to him. he’s also picking up second-hand italian bc ollie keeps practicing it on him (hes good at picking up languages even when hes not even actively learning any— wasted talent)

🍎 where was your oc born? do they still live in/around their place of birth or do they live somewhere else? how do they feel about their birthplace?

st.john’s newfoundland canada babey!! projecting so there’s nl rep.. reub lived there for a short while as a child, started up hobby karting, parents divorce, moved to austria w mom. He has good memories of st johns but he doesn’t know too much about it atp bc he hasn’t gone back since he was a bab. he’d go back more if it didn’t mean he had to visit his dad lol, complicated father son relationship lore💥‼️

[dnd-procrastinators]

the path is one i know

not from experience but rather memory

her memory

she follows me now, hand clasped in mine

feet dragging along as i lead her

down the well-trodden path

i can’t help but look around

at the ones that came before us

time has not been kind to them

most have crumbled apart

those that still stand have been weathered

words smoothed over with tears

until all that remains is a blank slate

few carry anything of note, untouched

we keep walking

me in front, her silently behind

it gets better as we go

the path is newer, paved by each set of steps

the ones here are clearer, sharper

giving way to a glimpse of what once was

but they start to blend together

a mass of indistinguishable differences

overlapping, multiplying

we near the end of the path and she stops

finally lifts her head to look at the most recent one

“i held her hand just like you did”

“i know”, i smile softly

“do we really have to?”

“yes. you know how this goes” i offer, but we both know there is no consolation for this

“im scared. i don’t want to go yet”

“there’s no need to be scared” i gently reassure, while pressing down on her shoulders

she turns to face me, watching me through her descent

“you won’t be alone. you saw. you saw everyone before you. you’re only joining them”

she tries to speak but i keep pushing

“its alright. i’ll join you soon enough. once the next one comes”

she lays there staring at me with a blank look on her face

i can’t bear to see it

soft earth claims her, blankets her and whisks her away

i hold my breath, feel the air around me shift

and then release all at once a chorus of sighs

i hope that when my time comes i’ll face it with a bit more grace

perhaps i’ll hold my head up high, maybe even take her hand, play shepherd to my own fate

there’s no point dwelling on it

i know how it goes

[tm-trx]

Pit Babe 2, ep 4

Live Reaction Notes:

(warning: may will contain inconsistent punctuation/capitalization, stream of consciousness reactions, and rampant speculation)

now it's Babe's turn to be the protective boyfriend love it

lol Chris - all these emotions are getting in the way of his science

Jeff has a secret now? is he pregnant?!

ah no just another vision - borrring! also I thought he’d told them everything already

of course Willy showed up at the same gym

too distracted by Babe/Pavel working out; can’t concentrate on what they're saying

::brief pause for appreciation::

and we’re back: “what did i do to you?” he’s playing the clueless card, but not believably, sorry kid

IG photo alibi, okay sure

okay but was Babe lying about ‘sorry i misjudged you’ and why did Willy have that look on his face? is he catching actual feelings?

plot cliche that I loathe alert: the loud over-reaction to someone clearly trying to be stealthy and/or keep a secret just so another character notices and joins the scene

put a ring on it Charlie!

that’s the second “not until after the serum is complete” - fishy

Hey Pete, you know this isn’t Way, right? The way he’s pursuing Chris makes me wonder.

Pete has a speakeasy in his basement: nice.

That’s right Chris, they weren’t even boyfriends. Run. Away.

oh that was intriguing; I'm trying not to over-analyze every time Chris’ face changes while Pete is telling him about his history with Way.

love me a pool table scene

um wow did they just . . . ?!?

Kim and Kenta: Team Cockblock

ah so cute - he really put “Mama” on the cake lol

flowers, candles, etc is usually too cheesy for me to take seriously but this is nicely done and Babe loved it; i love them

and then Tony ruins the vibe by corrupting Winner completely yikes; I suspected that other guy was doomed but not like this.

Final Thoughts:

current Tony Mole count:

Willy (obviously is)

Kenta (also obvious but unlikely)

Chris (still might be Way)

Dean (stealth option)

Has anyone written up a lore guide for this show yet? I have thoughts about the world they’re in and how the senses work in everyday life. I know why the characters want an erasing serum, but what would a layperson think of the whole idea? Pretty sure they’d be horrified by what both Charlie and Tony are doing. I’m trying not to think too deeply about it because that’s a whole can of meta worms to get into.

This show is giving me all the romance cliches and I am eating them up. Babe, sitting beside Charlie’s bed for hours, waiting for him to wake up but scared he never will. Delicious.

I was very confused about what Jeff was worried about now, because I thought last episode brought everything out in the open. Turns out he hadn’t been totally honest about what all he’s seen.

I went back to rewatch the gym scene to figure out what is going on with Willy and got distracted again. >.< I’m desperately curious about what is up with him. Is he developing feelings for Babe? Is it hero worship? Do they have history that Babe doesn’t know about? And does Babe really believe the social media alibi or is he stringing Willy along to get info?

Pete and Chris - Holy shit, chemistry! I’m really starting to think that Chris might actually be Way. Or Way’s brother? Could be his brother. His reaction when Pete said that he left Way behind with Tony was telling. Yes, Pete was telling him something horrible, but that looked like a personal reaction. And what was he starting to say to Pete, when the doorbell rang??

I really thought Kenta somehow had proof that Chris was Way and that’s why he needed to get ahold of Pete so urgently. Total letdown to find out he just wanted to go investigate Tony. LOL

Babe’s face when Charlie said no, these aren’t marriage rings. He wants to be married so bad. I’m glad Charlie picked up on that and reassured him, but if we don’t end with a marriage epilogue or at least a proposal I’m going to be just as disappointed as Babe.

Winner - oof - The actor played that scene so so well, wow. Desperation, disgust, and fear were all over Winner’s face while he was killing Tony’s guy. But mostly desperation. He is stuck and he knows it. And unless he swallows his pride and reaches out to the X-Hunter team, I don't see a way out for him.

So, who's taking odds that Tony kidnaps Chris to fix his serum problems?

My Pit Babe 2 recaps: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 / 11 / 12 / 13

[cheetour]

The Void Within's dialogue is sloppy to the point of not being fully literate*.

It's been noticed that the rough sketches and the final artwork don't match up in quality, and seem to be declining as the plot goes on. The same is happening to the writing.

This is, I am sorry, a post about the latest major Neopets update. Not only that, it's about the GRAMMAR in the dialogue for that update. Riveting.

I SWEAR I AM NOT JUST A PEDANTIC ASSHOLE, I GENUINELY WANT USERS TO KNOW THERE'S AN ISSUE!

Most people who complain about "incorrect" grammar in games and comics are wrong. Homestuck, Night in the Woods, We Know the Devil, and Captain Underpants all have fine grammar, just stylized.

I really, really, really like The Void Within. I think it's a fantastic idea, and I am determined to enjoy it as much as possible.

I am a professional editor. Noticing this stuff is my job.

Now, PLEASE bear that in mind when I say:

tl;dr: Neopets is asking you to pay money to a product that does not meet the quality standards of a primary school English test for ages 10+.

*I don't mean to use "not literate" as a stand-in for "stupid and bad at writing." Literacy is very complicated, illiteracy is more common than you think, and there is no shame in being illiterate - you can be very intelligent and also have no written or digital literacy. I mean the literal "not able to use written language to its fullest extent".

It's clear whoever wrote the dialogue didn't have a perfect grasp of English punctuation. AND THAT'S FINE. Good writers don't always have good grammar, and you DON'T need fluent English to write good stories in English.

That's why writing, proofreading, and editing are all separate professions, and why a well-run creative project delegates those roles to separate people. They still matter.

People are more likely to notice grammar mistakes the more they read books. Correctly formatted English is how older, less online, and disabled people with visual or linguistic processing difficulties read. Text-to-speech doesn't work correctly on writing without correct punctuation. These are serious professional standards, and they exist for a reason. They're not worthless just because you don't understand them.

A good-quality publisher of books, comics, or video games wouldn't release dialogue like this to a paying audience. They would consider this standard unacceptable. They'd either use correct grammar, or stylized grammar. (Inconsistent grammar, with no logical or narrative rules, isn't a style. They're not choices if you don't know you're making them. They're mistakes.)

To an extent this is nitpicking, and most people wouldn't notice this stuff.

But Neopets is MAKING MONEY. They are SELLING PRODUCTS for this. They have MULTIPLE PHASES of NC Market sales for this plot.

As an educator, there is no way I could show this (perfectly kid-friendly) comic to a classroom of children - it would have no educational value. It's not written correctly or with any obvious care. If they paid attention to it too much, they'd get the wrong idea about the English language!

I think it's fair to say that if you're publishing an official Neopets story, and you want Neopets to be a kid-friendly, fan-driven, story-based brand with a target audience wider than "people who don't really care about whether stories are professionally written", the script should've been proofread.

To give you an idea of how many typos Chapter 3 has, here's one of the dialogue pages with the missing punctuation added; I also took 5 minutes to rewrite each line for coherency.

And THIS is a website showing you at what points in primary eduation we teach children to use commas correcty:

Art is hard. Programming is hard. Hell, good writing is hard. It's HARD coming up with dialogue and a plot that people actually want to experience.

Grammar is boring and sometimes pointless. It's not difficult. It requires only basic literacy. Children learn how to use commas at ages seven and up.

If you don't care about the story you're telling enough to check that it would get a good grade on a child's school test, how can you possibly expect anyone to pay for it? You need specialist skills to code a website or create a high-quality digital graphic, but the only thing you need to get this right is... one literate adult who cares enough to try.

So where are they?

**There is no shame in being illiterate, but there is CERTAINLY shame in selling illiterate writing.

tl;dr: Neopets is asking you to pay money to a product that does not meet the quality standards of a primary school English test for ages 10+.

Finally, here are some browser petsites/RPGs who have never prompted me to write an 800 word critique:

Fallen London

Pixel Cat's End

Lioden

[kirloris]

Hi, everyone!

Hey, how’s it going?

Personally, I’m happy! A bunch of people liked one of my short posts, and I’m starting to get an idea of what’s most appealing. Yeah, The Promised Neverland seems to be something people really like, and how could they not? It’s a masterpiece! I love this manga even though I’m aware of its flaws. If I ever create an original manga, I’d love to follow a similar structure—full of psychological tension and plot twists.

I plan to post at least something small on Tumblr every Sunday, which is why I’m writing this. I don’t mind not getting a lot of views—well, I do care, but regardless, I’ll keep writing. I want this account to be exclusively about TPN, but I can’t help slipping in bits of my personal life.

Unfortunately, if I ever publish a The Promised Neverland web manga, it won’t be until after June 2025 or even 2026. I can’t improve my English and drawing skills overnight. I can barely manage decent three-point perspective in simple, boxy backgrounds. And if I make a manga, I want to do it right, with the quality it deserves. That said, I’ve started writing a fanfic version of what the manga would be about. I’m rereading the manga and watching the anime to capture the characters' reactions and behavior as accurately as possible. If you guys are on board, I could start posting fanfic chapters here and on Wattpad around May.

If I’m not mistaken, I mentioned it’d be a "What If" about Ray. What do you think it would be about?

Also, I just want to clarify that novels use different punctuation for dialogue in different languages, like Spanish vs. English, and I’m not totally sure if there are other differences. I’ll have to look into it.

I’d love to start posting chapters sooner, but I’d rather have several written in advance just in case I can’t write new ones for some reason. That way, I won’t fall behind or have inconsistencies. Plus, I’m a student and took on several extracurricular activities this semester, including a field research project, and my workload is pretty intense. I don’t want to neglect my studies, so you’ll have to wait a bit—sorry :((

If I can post a chapter earlier, you’ll see it here, but it won’t be anytime soon.

See you, cherubs!

[eemamminy-art]

fanfic askkkkkssssssss 👀😈?

👀 Do you have any WIPs that you would never let see the light of day? If yes, what are they about?

Currently that's all my ffxiv WIPs frankly :') idk how to feel about them or how to finish them... They're all really over the top smut and I'm like, kinda cringing at myself so I haven't gone back to finish/edit them 😖 There's f!grahawol, f!zenoswol (featuring the much hated "in from the cold" dinner scene, but sexy), and exselch but I realized the exselch one is kind of like the f!exselch I wrote before but with them being their normal guy selves so I got really hung up on like, why am I writing this... I kind of already wrote this... 😭 Maybe I will go back to them one day but they've all been languishing in my gdocs for the better part of the year 🥴

Also there's some first draft chapters from my stardew valley fic that got cut and I doubt I can repurpose them at all but I'm keeping them like, for my own knowledge at least ghdsjjgds also mostly smut parts because bruh that's embarrassing but also there's a few drafts of the finale that were cut too (the finale itself is still a wip but I do know how I want the fic to end more or less, whenever I get there)

😈 Is there anything you enjoy doing that you think your readers hate?

I don't know if I'd say hate necessarily because I'm fragile and don't want to think people are reading my fics and being like, mad about it? 😩 BUT ummm I know I am being inconsistent on a couple of punctuation things and I think there's probably some turbo nerd out there getting frustrated that sometimes I write a sentence like:

"Dialog," action. "More dialog."

And other times it's:

"Dialog," action, "More dialog."

Probably also someone is mad I use prolog and epilog and dialog but I'm an american I will use american english get your UE UE UE out of here! Maybe the run-on sentences too. I like to think it's stylized, and I could be more correct but I like the flavor of my writing reading as though it's someone telling you the story out loud. But yeah all that to say I am doing all those things intentionally, because the flow of the text matters 1000000% more to me than having the most correct english ever

OH!!! Also no one has said anything but I'm anticipating someone getting upset about POV changes mid-chapter. Gonna be one of those with later today's update so I'm bracing for it. For the record though if stuff like that takes you out of a story you're a turbo nerd, sorry to tell you 😞

Fanfic ask game

[not-orphaned-account]

Sorry, Wrong Number fun fact:

Everyone in the fic has their own texting style! This is true for any of my fics that involve texting, but I wanted to really push the point in this fic as it's so integral to the plot.

Suguru: capitalization, punctuation, no abbreviations Satoru: lowercase, rare punctuation, many abbreviations, kaomoji Shoko: lowercase, punctuation, some abbreviations Utahime: capitalization, some punctuation, some abbreviations

And, some that may or may not come into the fic later:

Megumi: lowercase, some punctuation, no abbreviations Yuji: some capitalization, no punctuation, occasional abbreviations, kaomoji Nobara: lowercase, some punctuation, many abbreviations, kaomoji

Also, I'm still trying to format the texting consistently and in a way that reads well, but editing the texting portions after posting means I have to delete the whole chapter and repost it with the edits, so it's pretty inconsistent right now. I'm sorry!!

[deliahscrush2003]

beta reader here!

beta & alpha readers wanted for fic projects will beta in exchange!

Hey everyone!

For those that don't know me, my name's Lou (she/her) and I have recently gotten back into revamping the numerous fic projects I had in my vaults and trying to get back into my writing again.

I have put out this post to say that if anyone is also in a similar situation with their own fics, I am offering my fellow fic writers to beta & alpha read fics in exchange for coming on as an alpha or beta reader for my own projects.

As a beta & alpha reader, I am willing to not only check for grammar, punctuation, spelling and formatting but also:

identify weaknesses in the plot.

identify pieces in the story where engagement was high or lacking.

identify points in the story where clarity is needed.

help develop characters (both oc & canon)

canon check pieces of information (for canonverse/compliant fics)

|| if you have specific needs, feel free to check with me ! ||

As a writer, I am looking for someone to help with:

identifying inconsistent tense.

identifying where engagement was high or lacking.

identifying points in the story where clarity is needed.

writing relationship development (platonic/romantic)

editing plot structure and fluidity.

writing descriptive settings.

identifying monotone or repetitive parts of the story.

Most importantly, I am looking for people who can approach my story as both a reader passionate about the fic and a writer/editor passionate about helping improve the story.

My projects are also multi-chapter (150,000) and usually part of a wider series (minimum of 3 parts) ; therefore, I am open to working on fic projects that are of equal length!

The fandoms that I write and will read for are:

Fairy Tail, My Hero Academia, Attack on Titan, Game of Thrones/House of Dragons (TV), X-Men (movies), Teen Wolf, The Last Kingdom, The Nine Lives of Chloe King, Harry Potter (fuck JKR tho), The DC Animated Films/Young Justice, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, The Walking Dead (universe), Scream (movies), The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, The 100, Glee, Pretty Little Liars, Percy Jackson, Criminal Minds, Wolfblood, The Chronicles of Narnia, Outerbanks, The Maze Runner, Grey's Anatomy, Tower Prep, Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves, FATE: The Winx Saga, Stranger Things, Star Wars, Resident Evil (Gameverse), Power Rangers (the movie), The Hunger Games, Five Night's At Freddy's, Pacific Rim.

The fandoms that I have as WIP right now are:

Teen Wolf, Harry Potter, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, The Chronicles of Narnia, The 100, Game of Thrones.

The rest of the fandoms listed are in the worldbuilding process, which I also welcome help with if anyone is interested in bouncing ideas back and forth and fleshing out each other's fics!

This is the link to my Ao3 if you want to understand my writing style.

if you're interested in one of the projects I have for these fandoms (as a beta or just as a potential reader), send me a DM or a ask!

The type of fics that I enjoy writing/reading are (with consideration that Ao3 is my primary writing platform):

M-E Rated (For that reason, I prefer to work with 18+ betas)

Plot-heavy but with a well-written romantic subplot (requirement)

Specific tags/plot I enjoy/write: Time-travel, Fix-It, Canon-Divergence, What-Ifs.

Canonverse fics.

Both OC (has to have the potential of good development, though) and Canon Character-centric fics.

Found family, healing from trauma, redemption arcs.

Crossover/fusion fics (where the original fandom is set in the universe of another fandom)

Zombie-Apocolypse fics.

Dark twists on characters, plots, and the wider canonverse.

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The type of fics that I steer clear from or don't enjoy reading/writing:

G-T Rated.

No romantic subplot at all (I am a romantic girly, sorry to say)

A Mary Sue OC/Reader-Insert or Mary Sue plot.

Reader-inserts.

Established Relationships (unless I can read the build up first)

Specific tags/plot: P*dophilia, Incest (outside of canon-typical), Mpreg, Omegaverse (only under special circumstances).

Modern AUs, Human AUs, No Power AUs.

No Comfort, No Happy Ending, Major Character (Permanent) Death.

Character bashing (I do read fics that bash, but I find it hard to beta for them only because I like to discuss characters objectively - but there are exceptions, so feel free to check)

Anything that attempts to glorify or justify racism, homophobia, transphobia, biphobia, xenophobia, ableism, sexism, bigotry, abuse, r*pe or anything even remotely similar.

(feel free to check with me tho, I am open to discussion of everything except the bottom dot point)

Because I believe beta reading to be an experience that should be enjoyable and insightful for both the reader and writer, I am open to :

Discussing any ships, character arcs, or plot points that my betas personally wanted to see in the show or are very passionate about (read: this does not mean I will change my entire story but that I am open to possibilities)

Analysing and critiquing any of the above media (read: NOT BASHING, but genuine analysis of how different media were handled to apply to our own form of writing)

Giving out and receiving fic, tv, movie and book recs to aid in inspiring each other during the course of our writing, but also to support our fellow writing community!

Even if you're not interested, please repost so it can reach those who are!

[goldenfox3]

Tagging System

Characters:

Characters are generally tagged by their full name, without punctuation. I don’t have separate tags for anime/mainverse characters with the exception of Captain Falcon. Examples:

Dr Stewart (no period after the Dr because I’m lazy)

Captain Falcon (applies to both mainverse Falcon and Andy Falcon in full costume for now)

Andy Summer (I’m a bit inconsistent about whether this tag is only for posts where Andy is out of costume or whether it also applies when he’s in it. Sorry.)

Bart Lemming (applies to posts depicting Andy in his Bart persona/clothes)

Douglas Jay Falcon (I’m aware this name is uncanon, but I use it to tag mainverse Falcon out of costume or with his face visible)

Ryu Suzaku (for Ryu both in the Falcon costume or out of it)

Creations:

I make fanart, fanfics, and occasionally cosplay or put together F-Zero inspired outfits. The tags for these are:

Duskart (fanart)

Duskpics (cosplay, outfits, selfies, etc.)

Duskwrites (fic)

Duskwips (works in progress)

Fic:

Posts related to specific fics that I’ve written are generally tagged with the name of the fic, unless they’re part of a larger series in which case I use the series tag. See my pinned post for any abbreviations I use for the series names. Examples:

Aflame (contains Embers, Ignite, Ablaze, etc.)

ATFS (A Thousand Fiery Stars series, contains Solstice, Heliodor, Drown, etc.)

Thousand Five (contains the titular Thousand Five, Binary Star, Raise You Like, etc.)

Rambling:

My misc rambling tags are:

#dusk rambling (for general off topic posts)

#fic talk (for talk about things I’m going to write or have written)

#fz musings (for rambling about F-Zero related stuff)

Ships:

I tag ships in alphabetical order. Ship names are formed by smashing the characters’ names together, though threesomes or moresomes tend to get unwieldy. Examples:

FalconStewart (for the mainverse version)

AndyRobert (for the anime version)

AndyRobertRoy

I also try to tag ships by vehicle number (in numerical order) like some Japanese fans do since these are easier to keep track of, though sometimes the anime and mainverse numbering differences may cause confusion or overlap. Examples:

0014 (Ryu/Jack)

0307 (Falcon/Stewart, both anime and main versions)

010307 (Roy/Robert/Andy)

[discustibglybored]

hellooo welcome!!

this will be my first time trying to pick up writing again after my (honestly horrendous) 2020 wattpad phase - don’t sue me we all had one okay!!

here is my masterlist!!

Warnings!

- My Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation and all that stuff definitely isn’t perfect and in (most) of my writing there will be purposeful lowercase (Sorry if that bothers you i'll try my best to remember to include capitals!) so i don’t forget halfway way and make it inconsistent

- Maybe in the future there will be some Smut/More mature themes but wright now i’ll be going for more fluff based stuff!

- Since i’ll be taking requests sometimes there will be characters i don’t know so if there’s anything you really want me to include that i might not be able to know from doing basic research please include it in your request (things like favourite foods,pet names, or any litle detail that will make it better for you!

-I’m a student so keeping my uploads super consistent will be a struggle but i’ll try and regularly upload/say if i’m taking a break!

Characters i will write for!

Harry potter

ׂ╰┈➤ Marauders Era and Golden

- Remus lupin

- James Potter

- Sirius Black

- Peter Pettigrew (i hate when people leave him out he was a marauder too!!)

- Poly!Maraurders!!

ׂ╰┈➤ Say who you want/dont!!

- Marlene McKinnon

- Mary Macdonnald

- Lily Evan’s

- Dorcas meadows

- Regulus Black

- Evan Rosier

- Barty Crouch Jr

- Pandora (if you want her as a Rosier i can write it that way!!)

- Harry Potter

- Ron Weasley

- Hermionie

- Fred/George

- Possibley Draco he pisses me off tbh

- anyone else i forgot too

including (popular) fan made characters if you wish - Matheo, Theo, Enzo, Grant, etc!!

I am more than happy to write diffrent Au’s your interested in!!

Spiderverse

- peter parker

ׂ╰┈➤ whichever version you choose!!

- any side characters too

- i don’t mind writing spiderman as in him just being anonymous if that makes sense (like you don’t know who he is)

Marvel

-All Avengers

ׂ╰┈➤ you choose movie/era for some more context!!

- Villains

- Side/Background Characters

ׂ╰┈➤ If it’s more neiche dw i’ll do my research for you!!

Youtubers

i’m more than happy to take request on different youtubers as long as THERE COMFORTABLE WITH IT!! don’t even try and lie i’ll do my research!! - if theirs a specific video of theirs make sure to add the title/link it in your request so i have some more to go off!!

There probably the main ones but i’m happy to take in your requests and this list will more than likely be added to/change!

if you want your request to follow a more specific plot make sure you ask for that please! <3

That's all angels!!

[tm-trx]

Pit Babe 2, ep 3

live reaction notes:

(warning: may will contain inconsistent punctuation/capitalization, stream of consciousness notes-to-self, and rampant speculation)

so he’s feeling the visions and not just seeing them - that’s new right?

Jeff’s visions hurt now but he’s just feeling what the person in the vision is feeling with no lasting effect on his body; wonder if that will change as he keeps having them

Babe and Charlie don’t talk after making up they just have sex - yeah okay Charlie

ah so there’s the reason for the skill eraser plot: they’re afraid Jeff’s powers are going to keep expanding and eventually lead to his death if he has a vision of someone dying - I like it

the crash was on Tony’s order; i was wondering if it was part of that plot; so Babe can’t drive for now meaning the new kid has a better chance of ousting him

!! time skill confirmed???

Why is Babe still in the hospital when it's just his arm that’s hurt.

look at them talking about their feelings

Kenta went to Pete! excellent, new mole candidate for the list

white towel bath: trope check!

so it was Willy who hit him, meaning he is working for Tony; has Tony been bankrolling the ETA team this whole time too??

Kim/Kenta crumbs - I will take them.

sorry but the LED spiral lights in the injection tube crack me up

oh good more racing in the racing show!

lol North

aw they’re cute

If looks could kill Willy would be dead 10 times over from that look Charlie just gave him.

!!

Final Thoughts

current Tony Mole count:

Kenta (new contender)

Willy (if we expand the definition of ‘mole’ to ‘anyone working for Tony who the team may or may not be friendly with’)

Dean (still might be a ringer so he stays on the list)

Chris (least likely at this point, but the jury is still out)

I was a tiny bit bummed we didn’t see Babe’s crash in real time, but Charlie being there when he woke up made up for it. A domestic moment is just as good as a whump moment.

The hallway conversation they had later was so good I watched it twice. Charlie totally lied about them not talking when they make up. These two definitely have better communication skills than that. And now I’m almost positive that Babe’s not actually going to cheat on Charlie with Willy. He’s going to play along to get information now that he suspects he’s working for Tony. Now, whether he tells Charlie ahead of time, is another matter. Bring on the angst and drama.

Nice to have it confirmed so early that Willy is working for Tony. The question now is, how much of what he’s done so far is because he wants to sleep with Babe. And what exactly does Tony have planned for Babe?

And was that hospital room trick the confirmation that we've been waiting for that Willy’s sense/skill is time related? He can stop time? Control time? So curious to know how it works. If he’s limited to stopping just a few seconds or if he can make it last longer.

They are really not drawing out the suspense over Tony. Kenta showed up at Pete’s and told everyone he’s alive. Poor Babe, first he’s confronted with the double of his dead best friend and now he finds out his evil ‘dad’ survived.

Kenta staying with Kim keeps Kim in play. I was wondering how they were going to do that.

I really really like where they are going with Jeff’s senses. It’s a clear reason for the research and treatment that Pete and Charlie are working on. If Jeff’s ability is changing and expanding like it seems, then it makes sense for him to want to get rid of it before it kills him.

Charlie lost control at the end of the race, because he’s lost his (Babe’s?) senses. So the treatment worked, at least temporarily. But in Charlie’s case, if the treatment worked permanently, does that mean Babe’s got his senses back? And what does it mean for Charlie’s driving skills? Has he been using them to maintain his place on the team, however unconsciously? We’ve seen that Babe clearly doesn’t need them to be a winning driver, but what about Charlie? Will this be a new source of conflict between them, that plays into whatever happens with Willy, if Charlie has trouble racing now?

My Pit Babe 2 recaps: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 / 11 / 12 / 13

[pippin-pippout]

Tags to block for current obsessions (sorry)(I will not make side blogs)

One Piece: one piece (+arc name if applicable). I tag characters with full name if they have it though I’m inconsistent on whether I punctuate the D. Otherwise I use epithets. Otherwise I use name + one piece.

CDramas: cdrama (+show name)

Lord of the Rings: Lotr

Star Wars: Star Wars (+relevant show, +spoilers if applicable)

Most things will follow a similar pattern. I'll try to keep this updated

[threesongs2012]

Your name is KASPAR, or at least that's what you tell people. You are the HOST of a D.I.D. SYSTEM, which is contained in the body of a 21-YEAR-OLD LESBIAN with JOINT ISSUES. You are currently writing the PINNED POST of your PERSONAL SIDE BLOG, where you save ONLINE POSTS that remind you of yourself.

As previously mentioned, you are the HOST, but more often than not, you either pretend not to be around or take a step back so your system's CO-HOST and APPARENTLY NORMAL PART can do the talking. Not that you think they do a great job of appearing normal.

Despite you and your system's best attempts at discerning your origin, no one is quite sure where you come from. Your best guess is that you are an INTROJECT of the concept of the IDEAL OLDER SIBLING cooked up by the BRAIN of a LONELY, SORE TODDLER, slowly being molded by the characters you found kinship with as you grew. You are utterly confident in saying that your main influences in existing are the main character of a BRITISH SCI-FI TV SERIES, specifically from the FIRST through FOURTH seasons of the newer run of the show, as well as the most RIDICULOUS, PRETENTIOUS ASSHOLES from a webcomic you got into far too young, and the crass humor found in the games of a certain FRUIT-COLORED BOX.

You are also a SOCIAL ALTER. Your main role outside of HOSTHOOD is to keep your co-host's peers from driving them BATSHIT UP THE FUCKING BELFRY.

MUSIC is your main avenue for SELF-EXPRESSION from within your meaty prison. Your current musical fascinations include artists from the noisier side of things, such as ADA ROOK and LAUREN BOUSFIELD, but recently you have found yourself quite enthralled by the musical stylings of artists like DOECHII and TYLER, THE CREATOR. Aside from that, you have a passion for ALL THINGS ARTISTIC. Most of your free time is spent bouncing between flexing your debatably-present POETRY SKILLS, making EXPERIMENTAL ARTWORK, or putting together SHITTY COLLAGES in your HAND-BOUND JOURNALS. You do quite like mending, but you are NOTORIOUSLY PRETTY AWFUL AT IT. Despite this, your friends often come to you for advice on the matter.

Your typical online handle is chemicalConfusion, but it has been quite some time since you used it, and it is now more commonly associated with other alters in your system. Your manners of speech are inconsistent, to match your image of yourself, but you most often speak in Semi-proper capitalization with either a notable overuse or notable absenceof punctuation, witha decnet amount of typos and doubled or missedspaces.

> KASPAR: Post.

Sorry that was stupid and pretentious. My name is kaspar im 30 and/or like 200 in headspace and 21 physically. I like writing.

TAG LIST me id- mostly for things that remind me of my source but also things i kin about lu indie bas art lol

[adventuresofzoeganov]

Stranded

1,773 words

“Jesus fucking Christ!” Zoe cursed and kicked the hull of her broken-down, smoking spaceship. Well, more of a space-boat anyway. She instantly regretted it, as a searing pain shot through her foot and up her ankle. She inhaled sharply and glared at her ship. Boat. Which only smoked and creaked sadly in response. 

Zoe looked around and threw up her hands. 

“Where the hell am I even?” She was standing on a rather regular beach, at which rather regular blood-red waves were lapping. Behind her, rather regular dunes obscured the rest of the land from her view. 

The map had last shown her plummeting through the atmosphere of some planet at the edge of the Kryx-System, but that couldn‘t be right. There was no water anywhere in the Kryx-System. Her expression turned sour as she realised that maybe the blood-red waves weren‘t water. God she hated the Kryx-System She glanced at her shipwreck again. A little red light was blinking somewhere in the midst of the smoke. 

“Fuck you,” she whispered. The red light went out. Zoe propped her hands up on her hips and turned around to see if there were any interesting new additions to the landscape since she’d last looked. The beach stretched on into the grey horizon in both directions. She climbed the dunes to get a better view. There was a forest nearby, and when she squinted, she could see a little hut behind the first row of trees. She looked at her wristwatch, which she had repurposed to a communicator long ago. (Don‘t ask her how. It‘s not important.) The blue light indicating some sort of network was still tragically off. No chance of calling Martyn.

Zoe sighed a tad too dramatically and stomped towards the little hut.

~

As she entered, the floorboards creaked. “Okay you little spooky house,” she said. The door shut behind her. It was cute. The smell of mould hit her nose, the kind of mould that only grows in wet places, the kind you would sometimes fatally confuse with moss. There is no such mould on Earth, and that‘s very good.

The entrance led to a small living room, dust covering the sofa, the armchairs, the bookshelves. An abandoned, pelt-covered mug stood on a small table, emanating the horrific smell that haunted the hut like a ghost. Zoe stepped carefully through it all, trying not to touch a single thing. Trying not to breathe unnecessarily. Who knew what kind of spores flew through the air.

Despite the dust and mould, the room looked rather peaceful. As if someone had left for a Sunday walk five years ago and never returned. 

In all the muted colours, something caught Zoe‘s eye. Next to one of the bookshelves stood a little commode with a glass door. Its inside was tiled with mirrors, reflecting a quiet, pulsating light. It was leaking from a jewel, carefully placed on a silver tripod, of a colour Zoe had never seen before. She approached the dresser and crouched down to get a better look at the jewel. As she studied it, the inside of the jewel seemed to stretch out, reflect her own eyes a million times until they blurred to a dark, deep nothingness, into which she fell, seeing all that was, is, and will be, the horrors and the wonders of creation and destruction, she saw the secrets of the universe and heard a voice, older than time itself, say Death is an illusion, Time is an illusion, the Self will persevere and the Self will be there to see the End of all that Is, and she understood, she understood everything, and she saw that she was both insignificant and the only real Thing there had ever Been.

Zoe blinked and stashed the jewel in the depths of her jacket. She wiped her hands on her pants, her fingertips tingling. She sniffed. A blinking blue light on her wrist drew her eyes away from her own reflection and she shook her fists in triumph like a little kid. “Yesss!“ She stormed out of the hut, barely noticing the shadow moving in the corner of her eye, and called Martyn as soon as she had reached the wreck again. 

~

“You are the dumbest person I‘ve ever met, Zoe,” sounded Martyn‘s tinny voice from her communicator. Zoe clicked her tongue.

“That is not true! What about… Mick Spindle?”

“Mick Spindle would‘ve known the difference between Kryxian and Immenish.”

“Well sorry that I‘ve only been learning Kryxian for like, two months? That could‘ve happened to anyone!”

“Choosing to say the only Immenish word that‘s also an insult in Kryxian doesn‘t just happen to people, Zoe.”

Zoe shrugged. “It happened to me.” Something like a sigh crackled out of the loudspeaker. 

“Yeah, a lot of things happen to you. Anyway, could you describe the damage to your Tonner?”

Zoe took a step towards the wreck and peered inside the fist-sized hole. The smoke had mostly vanished.

“Well… there‘s a hole in the… left side?”

“What do you mean, left side?”

“When you‘re sitting in the ship, it‘s on the left. Sort of behind you.”

“You mean portside.”

“That‘s what I said.”

“Anything else? What‘s inside the hole? How deep is it?”

“Uuh… about five centimetres deep, there‘s some wires inside… blue and green. Some are definitely fried. That‘s probably bad.”

“Depends on how important the wires are. Can you try and turn the entire ship on again?” Zoe peered at the hatch on top of the ship. It was ajar, a tiny trail of smoke curling its way outside.

“I don‘t know if it‘s safe to go in, Martyn.”

“She is a Tonner, Zoe. She can survive anything. That was the only reason I lent her to you.” Zoe pulled a face and mouthed only reason I lent it to you.

“Are you making fun of me?”

“No.”

“Okay, there‘s another way to try and fix this. I think they only hit your cooler, which should be fine to fly without, at least to the next workshop, which shouldn‘t be far… where exactly were you again?” The distant cracking of wood made Zoe‘s reply die in her throat. She spun around and scanned her environment. She could only see the tips of the first trees from here.

“Zoe? Everything okay?”

“No,” she whispered into her communicator as she scrambled up the dunes as quickly and quietly as she could. “I think I heard something.” She lifted her head over the dune just so she could see the edge of the forest. The gaps between the trees looked darker than before. There was no wind stirring the grass atop the dunes. Another crack. Zoe ducked below the dune again, pressing against the sand. She could feel it pour into her shirt. 

“Zoe,” whispered Martyn. “I am locating the Tonner. You have to get out of there as soon as you can. Kryx can be very deadly.”

“No shit.”

“I‘ll send you the route to the closest workshop as soon as I have your location, okay? You just have to-” Zoe pressed her hand over the loudspeaker as she heard another crack, this time louder. It was followed by more and more cracks and rustling, like footsteps through a forest. Zoe lifted her head again, slowly. A face was only inches from hers.

She screamed and pushed herself down the dune, skidding down the sand. Her feet sank in, she fell over and crawled down to the beach. A wet breeze was blowing down her neck, like the devil‘s breath. She didn‘t dare to look behind her as she ran to her ship. Her hands searched frantically for her gun, she never kept it in the same pocket, she really should get a belt.

Zoe reached the ship and climbed up its battered hull, to the hatch, and let herself fall into the seat. She hammered on all the buttons she could reach, and after a few seconds only filled with her panicked breathing, the ship started humming and the lights blinked on. She locked the hatch and ignored the little red warning light. It was labelled Cooler. She laughed hysterically. “I‘m so fucking stupid!”

A dull banging on the hull made her focus again. “Fuckfuckfuckfuckfuck,“ she murmured while pressing buttons and shifting levers she didn‘t know if she needed. Finally, she‘d hit the right combination and the windshield was cast over by the green space map, the ship began to vibrate and finally, finally lift off. An ugly scratch and a primordial howl accompanied her as she made for the atmosphere. “So long, sucker! Wohoooo!“ The Tonner rattled and creaked, but it kept speeding towards the stars.

~

“Um, uh… Zoe?” She started in her seat.

“Jesus, Martyn, forgot you were there. I‘m back in orbit, well almost! There was this weird thing in the woods, ugh, you should‘ve seen it.”

“Yeah, about that… I can‘t locate you.” Zoe frowned.

“What do you mean?”

“I mean the Tonner doesn‘t show up on my radar. Is she sending the signal?” Zoe checked the screen in front of her.

“Yeah?”

“That‘s… weird. Are you out of the atmosphere yet?”

“Almost. In five, four, three, two, one-” The ship dived into outer space and stars surrounded her. The rattling died down as the vacuum enclosed her, and Zoe breathed out. On her right, there was the giant Tirs with his pink cloud formations, and not far off she could see his moon Liren. This was the Kryx she knew.

“Ha, there you are! I‘ve got- Zoe, what the hell have you gotten yourself into again?” Zoe sighed.

“What are you upset about now?”

“There‘s no planet next to you, except for Tirs.” Zoe raised an eyebrow and turned on the back camera. “There absolutely- hm. There‘s no planet. What the fuck.”

“We can worry about that later. You need to get to the next workshop. I‘m sending you the route right now.”

“Oh yeah, Tricia says I have like, five minutes left to live.”

“Who‘s Tricia?”

“The board computer.”

“Yeah. Ok. Tricia‘s right. And Zoe?”

“Yes?”

“Kryxian, not Immenish.” Zoe rolled her eyes and turned off the communicator. The route Martyn had sent her now popped up on the screen, and the ship shifted to correct its course. Zoe looked at her reflection in the windshield and brushed a loose strand of hair out of her face. She winked. The reflection winked back. Back on the planet that didn’t exist, a creature called its master for the first time in ten years. Inside Zoe’s pocket, the jewel glittered with the light of a thousand burning stars.