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Re-Re-Re-mapping Revachol
⦠and the Insulinde as a whole
Very much inspired by ssshiversss and Map Max, whose versions of the map were absolutely invaluable for wrapping my head around this project. Combining their work with the original map of Jamrock, and doing my best to stay loyal to the (often contradictory) descriptions in the text of the game, I think Iām happy with what Iāve ended up with.
Much like my predecessors, I have elected to separate Coal City and La Delta, and in fact ignore any attempt by the game to convince me that La Delta is west of Martinaise. It just⦠It just isnāt.
Game description struggles aside, this was really fun!! Details/Description in the alt text.
I just like maps
EDIT // LāInsulinde: Now with Pale encroachment
#disco elysium#harry du bois#fictional map#revachol#jamrock#i love maps so god damn much#still unsure of so many things BUT WE DID OUR BEST AND THATS WHAT MATTERS#MWAH MWAH#LOVE FROM REVACHOL#FROM THE HILLS OF LE JARDIN TO THE GHETTOS OF FAUBOURG#i still dont know what The Cycle was supposed to be#DEVS WHAT IS THE CYCLE#LE CYCLE#YOU CANāT JUST WRITE WORDS ON A MAP WITHOUT ANY INDICATION#OR DO RANDOM COLOURED LINES WITHOUT A LEGEND#beefing with a fictional map fr fr#anyway
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FASCINATING to me that in lashing out against the skua, a symbol of Revachol, Harry also destroys a symbol of reality itself. Not only that, but the discovery of the Insulinde that the skua represents is what leads to the proclamation of Her Innocence Dolores Dei. It's truly everything Harry is trying to run away from, all tied up in one neat little bow.
So he fucks it up, he destroys that reality, and then, ta-da! Mission accomplished Harry-boy, you wake up in a hostel room and can't remember shit. It's all gone. You got rid of it.
#disco elysium#disco elysium spoilers#just a tad#great writing from this game as usual#lotta different things that could've caused / contributed to harry's amnesia#but on some level i do believe he did it to himself#yes harry of course you can take your anger out on the world#you do have to forget everything though i hope that's not a problem
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i donāt think harry du bois is particularly good at sex but i do think he eats pussy and sucks cock like a starved man. also not saying heās particularly good at it either, very little actual technique, heād just be really eager. good if you like comical levels of sloppiness and donāt mind some accidental teeth.
#love when my brain gives me sex headcanons for characters knowing damn well Iām not going to draw or write anything about it. thanks man.#what do you want me to do with this.#post it i guessā¦.#also the fact that he canonically doesnāt/canāt have sex unless both parties are under the influence#which is very sad but also lends credence to the fact that heās probably not great#hdb the saddest man alive. takes someone home from the bar. gives them mid but enthusiastic head.#jerks off his limp ass whiskey dick while he does it. cums in 2 minutes. voila#disco elysium#harry du bois
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While I'm playing around with writing a lifestyle D/s KimHarry fic, I put this little beauty together, just to try and get their voices down a little better.
#sparklepants#they make out idk what you want from me#kimharry#disco elysium#disco elysium fic#kimharry fic#kit writes
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I wrote the beginning of a small fanfic with Kimās POV: Kim and Harry are working together at precint 41, but one day Harry goes missing. Kim sits down by his desk every night looking for some clues in his notebook. (Major stuff has already happened and heās just reading it all over again).
1/2 INTRO
āItās the same story every night: before going to bed you sit by your desk and start reading the quotes you collected during the day in your notebook: many many cases go trough your head, but only one remains. Harry. Harry disappeared. Three days already passed since you last saw each other, you were trying to solve one of the thousands murder cases you had since you came to Jamrock. A man burned down his exās house to the ground, disappearing as well in the night. āAt least he didnāt burn doraās house like that guyā you mumble in your breath, wondering if he didnāt suddenly go crazy and decided to pay a visit to her in Mirova, but the thought goes away as soon as you see the clock on your desk: itās midnight. Itās time to go. Go back to three days ago.ā
#disco elysium#harry du bois#kim kitsuragi#de fanfic#waiting to have my invitation from archive of our own so in the meantime Iāll post here#Iām not a native English speaker so if you spot errors tell me#also if Iāll keep writing it it would help if someone wanted to review the chapters before putting them out just to give me grammar advice#<3
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why was that payphone call so devastating out of nowhere š it caught me off guard fr i was sitting there like



#you know the writing is good when a scene can go from cheap crude comedy to An Emotional Moment within seconds#disco elysium#video games#mine
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Nagatha T'selvi (vas Sorelliam), 248, ex-financial advisor. || Rhanda T'selvi (clan Orraken), 300, ex-commando.
"Do you remember?" Nagatha asked, eyes locked upward to the featureless ceiling of the apartment. Nos Astra colored it purple, as if it wasn't still white plaster underneath. Her manicured fingers crackled against her own. Blue. Almost see-through. Rhanda gripped the smaller hand inside her palm, and felt her own rough heat through overworked silky-smooth scales. Nerves were most of what they ever managed to share without judgement. "Remember what?" "I don't know." Mascara caked at the corner of Nagatha's water lines. She smiled. "Anything, I guess." (The Empire of Preys, chapter 15)
#mass effect#asari#asari oc#halfway home#teop#the empire of preys#my art#my writing#nagatha#rhanda#see I didn't abandon my girls!!!!#they are part of a bigger piece that showcases every PoV character from TEoP#hope you like my pseudo impressionist disco elysium-esque vibes I tried to go for here#didn't want to overwork them but vOv who knows if that lands in any way!!!#their relationship is one of my favorite things about teop <3#being half-asari sisters is... a strange and complicated bond to be sharing let's say#they're both Such a mess but in radically different ways#(anyway. more... this summer. probably.)#(the poll has Spoken after all....)
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started writing in between classes and im deeply obsessed with orpheus parallels with ortega/chargestep so have this. warning for ortega being inebriated and wanting to die.
Time to rise Orpheus. The day breaks and you with it.Ā
(I donāt want to. Donāt make me.)
Thatās not an option. Get up Orpheus.Ā
(I have no legs. I have no hands.)
You will be repaired, doll of lyres.Ā
(I donāt want to be. I want to lay here and die.)Ā
Scio, sweetheart.Ā
(Will I see her again?)
Only on her deathbed.Ā
(I donāt think I can do this anymore.)
You will.Ā
Get up Orpheus.Ā
Get up Orpheus.
Get up-
āOrtega! Get down from there!ā
Chen pulls you off the ledge of the building you guess you were climbing over. You're not really sure.Ā
Youāre downstairs now. Your arm is over Chenās shoulders.Ā
ā-tega! What did you drink? Can you even hear me?āĀ
Youāre nauseous.
Youāre not nauseous anymore.Ā
āOk thatās. That can be someone elseās problem, come on.āĀ
He lifts you once more. Heās good at that. He does is a lot when you fuck up or do something stupid which is always cause youāre a poor excuse for man.Ā
You snuggle into the passenger seat of his car. Itās cozy, it smells like him. You donāt smell good.Ā
āDrink this.ā He says. He tips your head back and water pours into your mouth.
You do your level best to not choke.
Youāre on the wrong side of your couch. This is Eurydiceās spot, not yourās.
Sidestep. Sidestepās spot.
You shake your head, the smallest bit of clarity returning to your vision and mind. Chen has pulled a chair from the kitchen to sit in front of you. His expression swims but you think heās concerned. Not a clue why.
āSo. āNever gonna drink again?āā You spit onto the carpet and he grimaces.Ā
āDonāt know what you expect from someone like me. Whenās my word ever meant shit?ā You wonder if you could get him to punch you.
āYou- Iām not entertaining this. You need to get your shit together.ā He doesnāt say ābefore you end up deadā, but you hear it anyway. Or maybe thatās you saying it.
You let your head tip back over the couch. He wants you to try. You donāt know how.Ā
Yes you do. Rise from your corner.Ā
But youāre already so far gone.
Then go all the way. Pursual when you cannot see your target is what you do best. Find them.
Theyāre not dead.Ā
No.
Theyāre dead.
Not to you.Ā
I already failed them.
Then fail again.Ā
Isnāt the definition of madness trying the same thing over and over expecting a different outcome?
No, thatās a misconception. And anyways, when has that ever stopped you before?
Fair.Ā
Now tell him something so he doesnāt send you to a madhouse.Ā
You look back at Chen. His clenched teeth twist his scars on his lips and his hands are clasped together so tight you swear you hear the creak of metal. You slump forward, uncoordinated, and put one of your hands on his.Ā
āIāll tell my⦠therapist,ā the word is still a rock in your mouth, āabout. This.ā Youāre not sure if you mean the drinking or the climbing.Ā
Thatās not true.
Yeah well fuck you Iām not getting sent to a madhouse. Iām not crazy.
Then whatās this?
āThatās good.ā Chen breathes out in a long relieved sigh. āThatās good.āĀ
You tug him off the chair and into a hug. You know he can feel your heartbeat through your shirt, and you know he needs that.Ā
Out of his view you stare daggers into the wall. Youāre determined (for now). You have to find them again.
Miles to walk Orpheus.Ā
And promises to keep.
And promises to keep.
#i am asking you to endure it''#also the last three lines are pulled from robert frost's ''Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening#this is far from my only thoughts on him and orpheus#might post this to ao3 even though its short just for organization purposes#he makes me. insane.#this was written in like. an hour.#significantly inspired by intactics'#sammy speaks#fallen hero#fhr ortega#ricardo ortega#fhr#fallen hero rebirth#fhr chen#he's here a little at least#also this is very much unedited#oh also! very much inspired by disco elysium skill conversations#sammy writes
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There are certain things that DE fan stuff includes that I think are interesting and cool choices, but that *I feel* fundamentally go against canon. Kim having skills-based internal thoughts is one of these things. i will still read and enjoy fics that feature this bc its a fun narrative device and I like it when people psychoanalyze Kim, but the tiny annoying know-it-all part of me will occasionally go "he wouldn't think like that...."
And if someone just isnt aware, you can ask Kim about how he thinks:

I feel like this also connects to how some people write the skills as fully separate entitites from Harry that he caught from something (eg. pale exposure) rather than a stylized internal monologue. Kim simply doesn't have an internal monologue, at least not in the way Harry does.
#i don't wanna discourage anyone from writing stuff like that bc as i said it IS fun#i'm just Annoying. and i will admit to it#i personally do have a nonstop internal monologue so imagining anything else IS weird!#i just love these little details that the characters have. you wouldn't automatically go out of your way to figure out how your oc *thinks*#disco elysium#kim kitsuragi
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Im doing a lot of thinking abt why roleplaying feels different/less natural for me in beastlife s4 in comparison to s3, and i think itās because thereās ways i know i should be feeling (based on the perception of my characterā when i was fresh out of s2 nobody knew enough about my guy to have opinions) vs how i am feeling. Iām catching myself thinking, āit wouldnāt make sense for my character to [blank],ā and itās like⦠what do i mean by that. what do i mean that this feeling im having in-session āwouldnt make sense for my characterā to feel? It might be surprising to other beasts who know me for one thing and expect consistency, i guess?? but in s3 i just acted on feelings and then shit happened. what. why am i trying to enforce a character that does not exist when the strength of mcrp lies in its improvisational nature. I didnāt write this guy on purpose, why am i trying to write him now
#i suppose its both the perception + higher investment from myself#I care about this story greatly now#and want it to be āgoodā. But thereās only so much control i have over that#Its not my job to break down the themes of the narrative and try my best to make it cohesive im here to play games and dramatics#My favorite mcrp narratives werent written on purpose. they literally just happened naturally#Imagine if i went into elysium after death thinking āhow do i properly conclude my character arcā#And not āThis will probably land us a conclusion. lets ballā#I think thereās also more pressure because my character is universally seen as a bad guy now so im like. ohh#What if i make him too sympathetic on accident and everyone thinks im weird irl about it#Bitch youre roleplaying with cubes. who give a fuckā¦ā¦#sorry for posting like you people know what im talking about btw#But i also just think mcrp is rlly interesting#beastlife#<- i guess. I use it as an organizational tag but its funny that thereās a āmaintagā now#Still using it for organization though idgaf#Unrelated but I got a good scott ask earlier today in my drafts that i just remembered#The forgetter#Ftr i think its good to be somewhat narratively aware but the way i typically do it is in an entertainer sense#and not a serious serious mode writing sense. i am much more comfortable with one of these over the other#which would be why playing s4 feels a bit unnatural for me at times#not to say people who do go into mcrp with this mindset are like. wrong. it just does not work for me i think
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who i was doesn't matter to who I am right now or who I will be
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hello all who like disco elysium and are also crazy about jean and harry's relationship and the decline of it
here's 7k of that
#bird writes#disco elysium#jeanharry#jean vicquemare#harry du bois#this was very fun to write and a great distraction from my uni work#i love you second person pov i love you omniscient narrator
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if youād like a starter from anyone, please let me know who from and who for if you are also a multi!
otherwise you can take your chances and give this a like!
#call.#also considering for when iām back on a computer:#a separate james f!tzjames for a disco elysium verse. i want more of him SO bad but the writing style is a little#complicated and far off from his own source material. so it doesnāt quite belong on @gildedlife#you MAY request him and he will probably go here!#oc pages are somewhat minimal but up!!
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theres a strange language and drawings on my wall now i think also in blood. after the authorities came and cleaned it too.... i though all this would blow over but no. more shit i gotta deal w
If you report the blood carvings to the RCM complaints department as vandalism, you can have some workers from your district come to clean it as āgovernment upkeepā, free of charge again of course; if this is the second time itās happened though Iād recommend having someone come do some forensics on the writings, and make sure you have a proper lock on your door in case someone is playing a sick joke on you here. Regardless of the source, hope it clears up soon citizen.
#The strange language could also just be a language from another of the isola#have someone with a profession in different languages have a look at the writing if you can#hopefully theyāll see something.#kim kitsuragi#disco elysium
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#personal#does anyone have disco elysium for free for realsies? id really love to play it#partly because ive heard so very many good things about it as a game and story anyway#and partly because i want to get back into my writing and id like to allow disco to inspire me#the writing style. the way dialogue happens. i feel i could learn a lot from it that would work specifically well with my story#im not great at dialogue. id like to learn from disco elysium because from the parts ive seen#(which is not much). the dialogue is really well done#still janky at times but very sincere and i think it could really help me to work out the middle ground for my own writing#for how to do a middle ground of stilted and expressive. im just mad that the internetarchive one was free#and working when i started downloading it but between start download and finish download the page got taken down#i would pay for the game if i could but this bitch can barely afford to feed herself so thats not an option right now#maybe one day. or ill donate to the whenever the actual developers recieve moneys ik there is/was some fuckery with that#but regardless. if anyone has disco elysium they could give me or know where i could get it for free for now#that would be super really greatly appreciated (and id probably name a character after you if youd want me to or sth)#disco elysium
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i won't lie, there's been a certain level of both reassurance and self-consciousness in reading WIWV which is both that it makes me go, oh, maybe I don't need to think so hard or be so concerned about my placement of dialogue, or rather the way I tend to break it apart to go along with movement and so on and so forth -- and also that sometimes lately I do look at my WIPs and think about how fragmented into tiny paragraphs they are and how action-by-action, movement-by-movement they tend to be --
but of course, I'm not writing literary fiction, an I? š I'm writing, essentially (whether fanfic or original) romance fiction and prose soap opera stuff eith some action, except for where some moments (mostly Kaine) veer vaguely upmarket haha
#arghwrites#this isn't a bad thing it's simply what I write but I know a lot of people don't break their paragraphs up nearly as much as I do#maybe this is a side effect of the fact that I sometimes struggle to keep my place in large blocks of text#a kind of self accomodation that then adjusts the aesthetic of the page on which i write#of course i also do lean occasionally prose poetic and visual structure and shape is relevant there#sometimes i need a line to be trailing a certain way or for a set of lines to form an angle#maybe I need to dig into some descriptive self indulgence more though#i worry sometimes that people may find it awkward the way i detail things out#but then again i think if you read it like you might hear a description in disco elysium it makes some more sense#the silicone baby spoon is part of setting the specific tone and existence etc. (not a silly example it's in a scene in hbhbhb on ao3)#read the paragraphs about kaine's thanksgiving as if the narrator from DE is reading it lmao#...man i wonder if he does audiobooks. not that i listen to audiobooks but i find his cadence very captivating#i know some people dislike his rhythm but i like it a lot. it makes everything feel a little bit revelatory.
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