Alright so i promised more character info so here we are
Character introductions
Igor Vladimirov character traits and data
* Full name: Igor Vladimirov
* Age: 24 years old
* A 9’7/294 cm tall avatar “dreamwalker” (a bit taller than Quaritch)
* He’s russian therefore he presents a thick accent when speaking English
* His job inside the RDA facility: RECOM soldier
* He’s as reckless as a 5 year old child (with guns)
* His favorite things to do are build, test and use guns (which he is paid for)
* Muscle mass so well developed he can crush a human in a bear hug with ease
* Personality is similar to young Jake’s but a lot more reckless and aggressive
* Is an extrovert
* Straight forward and sometimes rude
* Can be soft and nice but rarely and he prefers not to
* Cave man behavior
* Eats like a dog, mainly carnivorous diet therefore his fangs are huge
* Likes presents (preferably gun parts or bullets) and Tieg
* Tail betrays him when his excitement builds up
Bonus:
* His favorite dessert is Pavlova
Tieg Heimdall character traits and data
* Full name: Tieg Heimdall
* Age: 28 years old
* A 9’/275 cm tall avatar “dreamwalker” (a bit taller than Jake)
* He’s half german, half american
* His job inside the RDA facility: Marine Biologist
* He’s mostly calm and content but does show signs of discomfort and annoyance
* His favorite things to do are discovering and studying new forms of marine life (flora & fauna)
* Has been touched by an Atokirina
* Muscle mass is not so developed given his poor health condition and the isolation inside his lab
* Works so much he tends to drown in his own research and forgets to eat because of it
* Personality is layered, he can be acidic and sarcastic but he cares deeply (has very genuine feelings)
* Cares more for animals than for people
* Is an introvert
* Finds it hard to be around people, he doesn’t want to be interrupted and doesn’t hesitate to dismiss anyone
* Very educated and mannered (can also insult you fancy enough for you to take it as a compliment)
* Has a mixed diet, but he prefers fruits and nuts therefore his fangs are not so proeminent
* Likes little trinkets such as animal fangs, small, oddly shaped rocks, beads, shells etc
* Tolerates Igor
* His ears are very quick and active in showing emotion
Bonus:
* Has a pet Hammerbrow fish
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Writing Realistic Characters - part 2
- Journal from their perspective. It can be hard to write compelling, realistic motivation for characters if you don’t understand them yourself. By journalling from their perspective, even if the content of the journal isn’t included in your story, you’ll essentially be thinking as the character. This should help you understand who they are and how they make choices and react to things, like a real person would.
- Answer “character questions”, but be careful when using lists found online. The internet is full of lists of questions for writers to answer when building characters, but not all of them are actually that important or useful. The fact is, it really doesn’t matter what a character’s favourite colour, animal or day of the week is (unless it’s relevant to your story... but it usually isn’t). When looking for question lists online, or making your own, focus on questions that have to do with your character’s personality, such as how they’d react to a situation or which values matter more to them.
- Make character charts! I can’t stress this enough — character charts are incredibly useful tools for writers and I don’t know what I’d do without them. They’re a great way to keep track of important information about your characters in an organized way that’s easy to access when you need to quickly check a detail. I’d also strongly recommend making your own charts, not using templates online (I find it a lot easier to stay organized when I’m using my own organizational system). If you need a place to start, though, I normally create charts with 4 categories: role (protagonist, antagonist, etc.), name, identities (gender, ethnicity, sexual orientation, etc.), and description (just a brief few sentences about them). You can also make personality charts with things like their greatest flaw, greatest strength, story goals, etc.
- Come up with a few detailed memories/anecdotes from their past. Think of them as mini-stories you can drop into your main story to build a more realistic life around the character. These don’t have to be crucial to the plot, and should be brought up in a natural way, such as in conversation with another character or in the main character’s thoughts. For example, your MC’s best friend might compliment her necklace, and she tells them how her sister gave it to her as a birthday present before moving away. You can also use these anecdotes to drop in important information in a non-obvious way. Continuing the example above, the MC could mention that her sister has the same design necklace, but in green. Later, this becomes a clue, when she finds the green necklace outside the villain’s lair.
- Keep a record of their backstory. This one doesn’t really need much explaining... Just keep notes of your character’s backstory as you come up with it so you don’t risk inconsistencies, which tend to break down realism.
- Remember that the reader can’t see what’s in your head. Your characters may be fully developed, realistic people in your head, but that makes it easy to forget that your readers don’t automatically understand them the way you do — they only know what’s on the page. Asking other people to read your work can help you understand how your characters come through to an audience, but if you don’t want to do that, just re-reading it yourself is also helpful. If you do the latter, though, go through an entire chapter at a time, the way a reader would, not small sections.
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Appledash in my au had in total 4 foals(by accident).
They were born after Dashing Zapple and Cider Storm
Lightning Blitz
Gender: female
Age: 4
Personality: Charismatic, Athletic, Devoted, Confident
Sexuality: none yet
Apple Butter
Gender: female
Age: 4
Personality: Artistic, Straightforward, Sympathetic, Directionless
Sexuality: none yet
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