Ride 727: The training camp's first battle!!
Pag 1
1: Oh, Touji-kun
Thank you so much for this year, too
2: Everyone else has already started running
Yeah, I was a little late with preparations
You have some lively first years
Thanks
3: It's the third time you stay here, so you can just park wherever
Thank you so much
4: It started already?
The “training camp”
5: It has already started
Pag 2
1: The first battle that will decide the Inter High's positions
3: The first “buddies battle”!!
Pag 3
1: E.... everyone has to pair up... choose their “buddy” and run, that's the rule of this training camp...
Huh.... Murakami.... your....
2: “Buddy”....
7: Is the second year Kaburagi-san!?
Pag 4
1: But... wait, our partner... shouldn't it be.... a fellow first year... huh!?
2: Can he do this!?
4: After all, before the start, Naruko-san only said.... “choose a partner among these people”!!
5: But the idea of choosing a second year senpai....
He played that card?
6: I didn't have good results in the first years' race
7: During the first years' race, at first, when Kinaka said we should accelerate
Pag 5
1: A small fry just fell, should we accelerate a little, Murakami-kun?
He's a nice guy. I think this pace is fine
I stopped Kinaka from accelerating and shaking off Rokudai
2: Now I regret being “nice”!!
5: After that Rokudai followed us on the mountain and the was at the top on the climb!! And even though he retired after that
6: He joined as a member in the qualifiers and his results were recognized!!
Seeing all that, I
Pag 6
1: I swore I would never show mercy to anyone!!
2: He opened them!!
Murakami's eyes!!
3: Let's go , Kaburagi-san
Let's quickly get rid of those who get in our way!!
But wait, why did Kaburagi-san pair up with Murakami
4: Uh... Murakami, you said “those who get in our way”....
No but Kaburagi-san is so fast!!
Pag 7
1: He got ahead of the line in a second!! And Murakami followed him!!
3: Please accelerate!!
4: Wait, Murakami! Oi, stop! That guy participated in the Inter High last year when he was a first year....
And he competed for the sprint line on the first and third day, too....
No, wait-
If you accelerate now, we....
Pag 8
1: Houru-
Pag 9
1: aaaaaaaagh
2: This is bad, waaaa
Follow them!! We have to follow them
Don't get left behind!!
Pag 10
1: Don't get lef.... ugh- waaaaa
So fast!! Dammit!!
3: Amazing!! So this is Kaburagi-san's acceleration!!
The legs that during the Inter High fought on par against Hakogaku!!
4: If I didn't know the timing and didn't bring myself as close to him as possible to cut the wind resistance, I would have been left behind too!!
5: But other than me, the other first years
Pag 11
2: Yes, we got rid of them!!
3: Haha.... hahaha!! I'll go to the Inter High!! That's why I joined Sohoku!!
4: Next, the second years... and then the third years!!
Pag 12
1: Straight road!!
2: Kinaka and Rokudai!!
They sticked close to us on the opposite side!!
Pag 13
1: You're keeping up, Rokudai!!
Somehow.... yeah, teh!!
2: You two again, dammit!!
They're entering the climb, teh!!
Pag 14
4: What a relief... they're not attacking on the climb for now....!!
Yeah
It's tough to keep up with that pace
5: But they'll attack at some point, so don't relax your attention, Rokudai
Yeah, teh
6: I'll keep an eye on Murakami's movement, if he starts moving I'll give you a signal!!
I'll leave it to you, teh!!
8: But Murakami's facial expression is difficult to read!!
Pag 15
1: First lap, clear!!
2: 1)Kaburagi; 2) Murakami; 3) Kinaka; 4) Rokudai
3: Kaburagi, Murakami, me, and Rokudai!!
We cleared it almost at the same time!!
4: Suddenly.... the first lap was so hard? Kinaka-kun
5: Ah... well!! It's probably gonna get harder from here on
Look, behind us, there are no
6: first years following!!
Pag 17
1: Dammit!!
Wa-
2: Kinaka-kun is a road racer, so of course he turns around to check behind at key points!!
And since Rokudai clings to him, he looked behind too!!
3: That was our sign to accelerate, Kinaka!!
I told you I would show no mercy!!
4: Let's keep going like this, Kaburagi-san!!
Pag 18
1: We left them behind!!
Murakamii!!
2: Hahaha.... like this, I'll be the top among the first years....!!
3: Hahaha the top!!
4: Danchiku....
6: This is bad!!
Pag 19
1: It's- it's okay, Kaburagi-san! Danchiku-san said he'd just be a little late and come with Kanzaki-san's car, didn't he?
2: Yeah.... you think he will really come, Murakami?
3: He will definitely come!!
Yes!! And he'll be as healthy as ever!!
4: I believe so!!
5: Yeah!! You're right
You're a nice guy, Murakami
6: Ah but we promised I'll be your temporary buddy until Danchiku-san comes
Honestly, I'll be sad when he comes!! I really want to run all 1000km with Kaburagi-san!!
Pag 20
1: Just until Danchiku-san comes, is that okay, please
Hm... well anyone will do, if it's not Danchiku..
2: Until then, thank you!!
What do we do next?
Let's keep going atthis pace, please!!
5: Ah?
6: Danchiku-san?
7: No.... he won't come, right?
Even I can see that his condition is bad
Pag 21
1: He has a serious innjury or some other problem, right!?
2: He won't come, that guy!!
3: You and me will keep running like this until the end, Kaburagi-san!!
Pag 22
1: Can you see it, Danchiku?
2: Those guys are struggling to understand the course
3: … yes!!
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when you first start the cousland origin, you can have some conversations with arl howe, teyrn cousland, and duncan that shed some interesting light on the political situation in ferelden. it’s definitely the origin where you get the most context on the rebellion and on cailan and his father. while howe isn’t exactly the most trustworthy of sources, he is also one of the most openly critical of cailan that we have access to, which i think is worthy of interest
howe remembers maric with what the toolset describes as “genuine fondness”: “your father hasn’t spoken of our time with him? that man took care of his friends. as they say, he was large as life and twice as tall!” i think we should pay particular attention to that man took care of his friends.
what howe’s talking about is a really important aspect of kingship, where you win the consent and enthusiasm of the nobility for your rule by offering rewards like wealth, land, and prestige to the loyal. kingship is always less stable than it’s portrayed, and this is one of the ways that kings must essentially sell to the nobility that answering to them is worth their time, which would be especially important in ferelden given everything we know about its culture. fereldans believe someone only has power when it is given by the loyalty of those below them, who have the right to freely rescind that loyalty. the dao codex says that “the sight of [fereldan kings] asking for—and working to win—the support of ‘lesser’ men is a source of constant wonder to foreign ambassadors.”
i suspect howe is remembering a maric fresh from the victories of the rebellion, who was able to reward those who had followed him with the spoils of those victories. at the end of the stolen throne, we see that in the final days of the rebellion, maric was killing those who had betrayed his mother to the orlesians even when they arrived under truce to meet him on holy ground. in dao, we see no lingering orlesian nobility except for those who married in and continue to be met with marked hostility. i think we can safely surmise that maric elected to make no conciliatory measures and give everything to those who had followed him; with the orlesians on the run and his people out for blood, he was in a strong enough position to do so, and it certainly served to win the fond memories of men like howe.
by contrast, howe goes on to say, “it’s too bad cailan isn’t half that.” the toolset notes establish very clearly that it’s the same issue, elaborating on howe’s thoughts: “bitter turn, i don’t get as much from the current king”, and “disdainful, i have no use for him, he does me no favours”. this isn’t a minor character detail, if howe’s last words when killed by the player are anything to go by. “maker spit on you... i deserved... more...” whatever it is that howe feels he should have been given, by the crown or anyone else, it characterises his actions and his defining treachery.
it’s in these same conversations that we see another side of this demonstrated. there are two points where howe can openly criticise the king, and bryce immediately admonishes him for both. one even has the toolset note: “speaks sharply, as a lord to a lesser man, not a friend to an equal”. it definitely comes across that way; the way he tells howe “that’s enough” is not far off the voice he uses when the player, his child, displeases him. bryce can’t tolerate any criticism of cailan, as the couslands in dao are ardent supporters of the king. to venture some hc, i suspect that this is not merely royalist fervour, and that howe’s resentment for having been given less is matched by bryce’s awareness of the precariousness of having more.
over the centuries, the theirins have consolidated their power and eradicated almost all the teyrns (the noble rank that is second only to the king). with the only other lingering teyrn being loghain, who is essentially part and parcel of the royal family, the couslands stand alone as the only real rivals to theirin power within ferelden. there are rumours that bryce was once considered for king instead of the theirins; he too could have decided to believe he “deserved more”. but unlike howe, and perhaps understandably given his strong position and happy growing family, he is satisfied with what he has. he will not take the risk of even the slightest challenge being made within his hall
(i expect that bryce’s satisfaction with the current situation further spurred howe’s dissatisfaction to its heights, given the complicated cousland-howe history and the fact that he was expected to accept a friend he had fought beside as a superior for the rest of his life.)
i don’t think howe’s judgement on cailan is likely to be without basis. we don’t hear about any victories the young king has to his name, from which he could have passed around spoils. (to be fair, cailan had harder luck than maric in this regard. a king who raises a successful rebellion gets to bring glory and prestige to everyone who follows him, whereas a king trying to rebuild after that rebellion mostly gets to bring, uh, taxes probably. especially on wealthy centres of trade like howe’s amaranthine, one might assume.) cailan also takes a far more diplomatic approach to the question of orlais, which perhaps predictably did not win over many nobles of howe’s generation. it makes sense that cailan’s strongest supporters would instead be men like bryce who hope for things to simply continue, peacefully, as they are. perhaps in another world where cailan had won the battle of ostagar, he might have earned wider respect. (you could actually argue on this basis that there’s more sense and purpose to cailan’s glory-seeking than he usually gets credit for.) but howe already acts before ostagar, which can only demonstrate his certainty in cailan’s failings at this point: his belief that even if cailan could win, he would not be stable enough to pursue justice for the couslands
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"Battle of Alberta, right? It was my first game: Calgary, Edmonton. We would play them in the preseason, and you know—trying to make the team I'd always be asking him to fight in preseason, always. I'd be runnin' my mouth—like, tryna fight the biggest, baddest guys, tryna make an impression.
And he would never fight me. He'd always tell me, like If you make the team, I'll fight ya. You don't have to worry about that, but I'm not fightin' ya preseason. And I totally respect it, I'm not gonna chase him down. It is what it is. He's established—I'm looking for my chance.
So I get called up, we're playing Edmonton in Edmonton: Battle of Alberta. [He's] over there on the other side, and it's like the coolest thing ever... you know, the buildup was crazy 'cuz I knew if the opportunity presented itself—if the game went the way I hoped it would, I would get an opportunity to fight him.
I remembered in warmups tryna skate by the redline initially just kind-of gettin' a feel for it—to see if I have to say something or whatever... He's got no bucket on, his big, bald head is glarin' around, he skates by the redline with the biggest smile on his face, and just gives me the biggest wink...
At that moment I knew Okay, he remembers. It's gonna happen at some point.
We were up 1, I think it was 2-1 going into intermission or whatever—Oh, no, I think it was 1-1 and we had just scored so the position I'm like Yeah, I don't know if I can fight him now because we have the momentum and we're winning the game. I don't want to lose a fight, then we lose a game and now I'm, like, never getting a chance again.
You kind-of gotta play the game within the game like [...] there's an opportunity to fight, and there's an opportunities where you shouldn't fight. Things weren't looking good, then they score and now we need a spark. I'm like Fucking perfect.
I just skate by their bench and I'm like It's time, big boy! He jumps out, we line up, and he goes We squarin' up or we goin' right away?
I'm like I'm not fuckin' squarin' up with you right now! We're goin' right away!
Drop em, we go right away, grab each other. I know he's a lefty so he's gonna let go—let's go of my right arm before he throws one. I threw one. Big boy went down, he jumped back up pretty quick. I don't know, I tell people all the time, I'm like I would've been in the league fuckin' 2 years earlier if there was good footage of this fuckin' fight!
For some reason—For some reason, the cameras cut out. I don't know if [he] had his cousins working the cameras or something that night, or if they're in the video room or what happened.
That was my first NHL game.
It's funny 'cuz Chucky was there—Chucky's there and he knows, he saw, he always laugh when I say that I would've been in the league earlier 'cuz he knows how things like that go. You get a little bit of energy and buzz around ya, and then kind-of momentum takes you a little bit further but unfortunate[ly], I missed that opportunity but I don't regret a thing.
[...]
The opportunity was there, I just—unfortunately, for whatever reason, the Hockey Gods said not yet." (Ryan Lomberg reminiscing over his first NHL game/fight) (x)(x) (please go watch the second link to see lombos giant smile as he tells this story jfc)
and other genuinely bonkers things to say about a hockey player in your first fight... like why did this need to be said like that...what
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do you have any tips for like... paneling? your lil comics, if i could call them that(?) with Dave are well made (to me at least) and I'd like to get into making comics! or if you know any resources that helped you. :') - sincerely, a beginner.
sorry to be answering this so late, wanted to try and give some kinda proper advice haha
so what i do is i just make my posts as long as possible so that it takes up like all of ppls dash, this means they are forced to look at it and engage with it!
no ok but for real, first off
this is just how i do things and by no means any sort of proper tutorial or anything,
most of this is prob kinda basic and intuitive stuff, but its good to be reminded of the basics and to notice why you might be doing said things intuitively so you can start doing it intentionally
so how i approach things is by picking a focus panel
whats the Punchline/Emotional pay off for the page/comic?
and then i try and build the rest around that
for actual Comics not every page is gonna have one of those ofcourse and thats fine
i tend to often have to many focus panels,,,, lmao(which is why my posts end up so long,,,,)
i try to group similar panels and make them smaller, it saves space, makes it so the attention goes to the more unique panels and makes things feel more sequential(or u can do like me and have too many similar panels and think, what if i just make it an animation, its just a few extra frames right,,,?<- clueless(i have done this twice now,,, the second is still a wip,,, ))
heres one of my posts deconstructed using all this, id do more of them but i dont wanna make this even longer asdsd, but i think its pretty obvious to pick up on once you know the formula lol
after that i think its mostly just clear composition and flow so things dont get confusing(like what panel(also applies to text) youre suppose to read next and such(thats easier with this cus its usually just individual panels and not full pages))
edit: oh and resources that helped me, i mostly just looked at other comics, paying attention to how the paneling was effecting the story and mood!
some comics ive looked at for paneling inspo are houseki no kuni, how they play with contrast and stuff, idk theyre all just very striking, i looked at ajin at some point as well for help with some action stuff, most action shonen are also great for that 2
so yeah, just find a comic scene that has the same vibe that youre trying to get and see how they did it, finding a few and comparing and contrasting what you feel works best
thats my thought process while doing stuff at least!
i hope this helps at least a bit haha
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