#lilith saga

[lilithsaga]

HAPPY ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY OF VTUBING!!! 🥳

That's right! Ya gurl officially debuted as a vtuber a year ago today! Hell yeah!!

(Be on the lookout for something happening later today... Maybe around 8PM EST on YouTube... gotta test a few things...) 🔎

[usopps-froggy-hat]

the brain of a genius - six vegapunks!

[mackerel1522]

omg omg omg omg omg guys look what i found

[onesidedradiostatic]

THE CRACK IDEA FROM YOUR DRAFTS AFADAFADSFF ITS BEAUTIFUL

Vox describing Alastor as the baddest guy in all of hell, and Lucifer reading that like “oh that’s 100% about me … Lilith..??”

Sending me

(referring to this)

LMSDKGSFOH wait you're giving me an opportunity to continue on. imagine if lucifer goes in response "I know who you're talking about. it's me isn't it?" and vox is like "alastor!?!??!?!?" in his head, does not tell lucifer he thinks that (because it's funnier that way)

also this being part of the commissions saga makes it even worse, the idea of vox thinking he's been commissioning alastor himself for spicy alastor art is funny. "wow what a fucking narcissist"/"well SHIT does he know it's me now")

and then lucifer goes "I think I know who you are" (he thinks it's lilith) and vox is like "FUCK." (does alastor knows he's vox now???) and then he sends him "FUCK YOU" followed by a "and you're okay with what I've been asking you to do" (you're okay that I've been asking you to draw yourself that way) and then lucifer is like "oh I'm not sure how to feel about that actually" (not sure how he feels about lilith asking him to draw that guy that way, he's also hurt by the "FUCK YOU" because does lilith hate him that much now?) and their interactions continue to be vague as fuck enough for each other to think they're lilith and alastor respectively

[palarien]

Canute Vinlandsaga ✨

[thebramblewood]

Note to self: never get that drunk again.

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[whaledocboi]

Post season 2 Cam getting super buff and fighting everything in sight to prepare for her inevitable confrontation with Lilith. When the time finally comes that they are face to scaly face, Cam is ready for anything. Anything but Lilith pulling her into a hug and begging for forgiveness into Cam’s messy curls…

imagine you train and get ready for the boss fight and then the boss in question falls to her knees the very moment you meet and starts shaking and crying and throwing up, i'd be pissed, like yeah i was gonna fight you, but not anymore, not when you put it this way

[lunastar92]

[lilithsaga]

A seed of doubt has been planted as this complex is not what it seems... Something sinister is afoot. 👁️

I also don't trust our Landlord... 🏠

[usopps-froggy-hat]

VEGAPUNK 02 | EVIL — LILITH

[aethira]

Made some tieflings :3

[goodonepiecescreenshots]

These girls are gonna make me act up 😩🍑

[twilightguardian]

Well, that's your fault for blocking me when we were having that conversation, now isn't it?

I wasn't "Totes Ownzing" you as a writer, Lilith. If you wanted to know what I meant you could have just, like... asked for clarification instead of assuming malintent and starting a fight with me. That's what most people do.

It was a show of good faith, (since I had done nothing but talk about how much of a caustic, disingenuous liar you were regarding Fixing and how uncharitable you were with those you blanketed as misogynists.) reaching out to you as a fellow writer and creative, not only saying that it was an older piece of work, so you may have already fixed it yourself in your newest draft. Then saying that if you wanted to grow as an artist that the one group you went to weren't doing you favours and if you were still with them to look for a better group who would be hard on your work, because that will show where your flaws are. Critique can hurt. But critique groups aren't there to build up your pride, they're there to hone your writing skills and do away with bad habits. You tear down your old, rotting ego and build a newer, healthier one, or rather it's like building muscle. Every critique is a little wound in your writing muscles. Those wounds heal stronger and your writing muscle, like real muscles, gets bigger, better, more able to endure and will be able to work more before getting torn again. Every artist goes through this and it's the normal process of creation. I had thought, perhaps naively, that you'd understand this at the very least.

I've been nothing, if not fair to you for the most part despite using you as an obvious example in my initial callout post. But I wouldn't have had to do that if there weren't so many examples of you being toxic and attacking people and making up things about them - in some cases serious accusations.

You get back what you give. If you're someone who comes into a conversation assuming that someone has ill intent and act with aggression, people are going to treat you the same. You wanted someone to fight with so after you blocked me I gave you what you wanted: Someone to fight. I'm willing to fight back when I see injustice and I'm not afraid to be catty. But it didn't have to be that way.

I'm also a writer, and on some level, no matter whether I like or dislike you, at the end of the day it doesn't matter. I'd still be happy if you grew as an artist and became better; if you found success. I initially was going to look into Glints Saga regardless to look into it and make comparisons between your old and new work because I was curious after learning you rewrote it to see how much it changed. It was just an innocent curiosity. Then to be polite I'd give my review of the work and be honest about it, because in my mind, there's nothing worth more than honesty. So you'd get my thoughts, if I liked some parts, if I disliked others, etc. It would give you more interaction with your work.

I made that initial long post because I saw all the dishonesty about Fixing and wanted to debunk it. If you found my fanfics and reviewed them I'd enjoy that but if you just went in to purposefully bend over backwards, contorting yourself into a pretzel to pick apart every single little thing for no reason other than wanting to hurt me, that's disingenuous. No one, not even 'critics' do that... for the most part. I've seen some bs in rwde, too, let's be real here.

To answer your question about my criticism, it's about a complicated mixture of realism and cutting fat in your writing. People normally don't say your name to you unless it's to get your attention or to emphasize they're speaking to you when in a group. If someone is speaking to you, they'll say 'you' and not your name constantly at you. Because they already have your attention. But it's also about brevity and repetition. Respect your reader's time and don't use unnecessary words because it just clogs up your prose or dialogue. Saying a character's name over and over to that character is repetitive to read. You want your writing to be concise and punchy. Every sentence, phrase and word has to matter, has to be there for a reason. If you want your writing to be as good as it can be, you make the necessary changes and take criticisms from people outside your circle of friends.

This is writing advice you can find anywhere. I'm not saying anything particularly groundbreaking or niche, but it's not something that everyone knows about, either. We all become blind to our own work and need an outsider - multiple outsiders who know how to critique - to come in and look. If you only surround yourself with friends who only ever praise your work, you'll gain a false sense of what your writing is like. I also had to learn it. I've done writing in the past where a character says another's name to that character every time they speak and I had to be aware of that to avoid it. Pointing out flaws in your writing isn't an attack on you as a person.

When I said I was going to review Glints, you just saw me as Floof 2.0 (regarding the review). Honestly, I have no idea what he said about it. I've had problems with him in the past when it came to reviewing writing and I called him out on it. He may have had good points, but I also don't doubt he said some really dumb things about your work. You assumed without evidence that I was going to be just as disingenuous as him, that I was going to use your series to attack you. Based on what? Because I called you out? I didn't call you out for no reason. The reason I took those screenshots was to back up my words to show that I wasn't lying. To show this is a pattern of behaviour that I can see that leads to the type of disingenuous criticism that I wanted to talk about and debunk. You have a skewed way of looking at the world and at people, and assume intent and malice when there might not be and I was demonstrating why that is harmful, not because I have anything against you specifically. Just your attitude and how you interact with people you disagree with.

You can take this however you like. But this is my genuine attempt to reopen dialogue with you. If not, I'll continue as I had before: Debunking your poorly thought out, bad faith criticisms of Fixing and once V6 is done so am I. But if you do, I'll continue talking to you and do what I can for you as a fellow artist.

Edit: Also as for your critique of Glints, it's coming. But frankly I have more important things to do and you're not all that high on my priority list. Properly reviewing takes time and energy.

[ordinaryschmuck]

Hey there! Just read part 1 of the "I Love You" saga, and your note said you're still taking one-shot suggestions, so if there's still a spot left might I suggest:

Luz and Lilith have A Talk about the whole time traveling/'helping' Philip thing, and the differences in their approaches to placing blame and/or dealing with guilt.

Hope this is to your liking.