My Inner Critic’s reactions as I read through my WIP.
The opening.
The introduction of the main character.
The premise.
Introducing the antagonist.
Dramatic tension and plot twist.
The sex scene.
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Scorpius when someone tries to take Albus from him: "not to be prejudiced against snakes, but assuming there are some evil ones, you are definitely one of them"
Albus when someone tries to take Scorpius from him: “Boy, have you lost your mind? 'Cause I'll help you find it. What you looking for? Ain't nobody gonna help you out there. Jesus could come through that door and he's not gonna help you if you don't stop sniffing after my boyfriend."
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♡ I successfully cleaned my room today, like I can see the floor beside my bed and it's so awesome ♡
♡ I organized my seasonal table/ alter
♡ I changed my sheets
♡ I picked up all the random fabric scraps off my floor
♡ All my laundry is put away
I'm very proud of myself!!!
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(The Office 4x11)
The actual, uncut exchange I have with the bf around 5 times a week.
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