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so the party consists of a young elf fighter and a human cleric (both low level) who are in love and heading back to the elf village to see her father and ask for his blessing over their marriage.

the dog comes out of the portal right outside of elf town so getting help from her high level caster father who knows how to scry is a very natural progression to meeting a magic talking portal dog panicking and asking for help finding someone who needs them.

oh my dad can find them for you he's 20 minutes that way, come with us.

the old high level elf is barely restraining his clear disapproval for the human boyfriend and it is implied to be racism.

something goes odd with the scry and they cant find any info on dogfriend but the dog describes a distinctive landmark and they all decide to party up and quest in that direction

the A plot is mostly about this dog trying to find his friend and growing as a paladin

the B plot is the relationship stuff with this new couple and a disapproving old man who really wishes he didn't have to be sharing a camp with these young idiots falling in love.

it is revealed during the adventure that the father isnt the typical elf racist but had his heart broken when his first human wife died of old age when he was still in relative youth and his half elf firstborn child had the wanderlust of a human and was drawn irresistibly to the dangerous quests that killed her. he reveals this for the first time at camp one night after his young daughter accuses him of hating humans during a watch change.

hes like, you will watch him die and your children will be delicate like elves and crazy like humans, you are purchasing heartbreak.

i haven't decided if the dogs friend is alive or not, dog must struggle with choice of oath of vengeance or oath of devotion, i think oath of devotion is the correct choice for a dog but there has to be temptation for vengeance right, so he has to at least plausibly believe his friend is dead. maybe they're prisoner and the dog rescues them or they're dead and the dog has a very sad scene where he has to accept that the party is all that's left for him now. kills the sorcerer either way i think.

there will be some kind of parallel conversation at the end with the dog discussing his lifespan and how hes got like 6 years left and the old elf takes him in knowing he is signing up for a dead best friend in mere moments.

but i think the young elf and human cleric get a bit shook by the idea and are left to have a long conversation and reevaluate things with the correct understanding of timelines, (they still marry prolly but i want them to stop and think)

D&D verse story: Dog paladin

Talking mastiff paladin PC who was a rangers dog until, when they were fighting an evil sorcerer, the mastiff gained sapience in the same magic surge that separated them from their friend, the Paladin dog PC does not know whether their master is alive or dead and is on a quest to find them. It is unclear whether the Dog will take oath of vengeance or oath of devotion as that is dependent on the fate of their friend.

this huge talking dog flies out of a portal calling a name and panicking over this missing person's well being and these two noob adventurers who see it happen have to help this giant dog to find its friend and either reunite or kill the sorcerer who did this.

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rough outline scene 2 kitchen Wayne manor, follow shot begins wide as Alfred is wheeled in and up towards the table, pulling closer as to match the speed he approaches the table, pulls to the left off Alfred's back and onto the door frame as Jason and Damien enter focusing on them and swinging out left and around the front towards stage left as they come in to bring the kitchen set from the initial blocking with entrance to entrance focused to a stage play profile of a kitchen with the entrances on left and right.

in the kitchen it is revealed that Alfred is no longer working as butler, he is in a large high tech ergonomic wheelchair and being pushed up to a kitchen island by Tim, Jason wordlessly begins cooking a high tier egg white omelette and frying some pork while Damian goes straight to making a proper pot of tea and slices a grapefruit, Tim sets a table and prepares a napkin bib and setting for Alfred. Alfred is served a royal breakfast as the brothers sit next to him and eat straight up bachelor chow bowls of cereal and pieces of fruit and slabs of meat they all dote upon Alfred in a dance-like synchronicity that shows long habits and well known roles, cutting his food and wiping his chin.

Alfred is mentally all there but physically very frail, just extremely old, requires physical care but is very much in charge

the morning routine revolves around care for Alfred and it becomes clear to the audience that the Wayne family operates on a 4 shift rotation where Alfred is always being attended to, a bat is always on the streets, a Wayne is always in public, and somebody is always asleep.

scene 3 batcave rough outline

Bruce is also mobility-disabled but unlike Alfred it is due to injury not infirmity of age. unlike Alfred who is brought down and up according to a schedule, Bruce does not leave the cave, he is not well and has been left more or less to his own devices with Alfred unable to wrangle him. it becomes clear he sleeps in short spurts and only eats when they make him, Bruce lives on monitor duty and communicates 99% through comms it is not clear who is batman but there is an active batman and it's not Jason or Damien. hes clearly no longer in charge but seems to think he is or refuses to believe he's not, Jason makes a comment that he cant give orders since he's legally dead now and it angers him, everybody else seems to choose an ignore / non-confrontational method but Jason is like, fuck you old man Bruce Wayne is dead so you cant call shots anymore.

it becomes apparent that Jason and Damien only really engage with Alfred and are at odds with the rest of the family, for some past conflict that is left unclear

they usually operate with radio silence and don't answer comms, they give non-format unsatisfactory reports and seem to have their own leads and cases.

it is heavily implied that they are a team not because they are good together but simply because nobody else can work with them anymore.

after setting up Alfred in the cave at monitor and placing food in front of Bruce for Alfred to nag him about eating they suit up and fuck off on bikes.

this is the opening trailer scene from the future AU Robin and the Red hood movie idea i first described in THIS POST

alfred is alive in this timeline, i have cast dev patel as dami and scott atkins as jason they about pushing 30 and pushing 40 respectively i think and have the right frames and muscle types, i dont care beyond that i like girls and im not a casting agent

i change tenses a lot here, i need to set a scene and ive never written camera movements before so i give up when its no longer essential.

i can see this video in my head, i know what this film looks like i just dont know how to write film

wayne manor sunrise, 15 ish years future

camera moving down hallway at floor level. dark hard wood floors, the walls are dark and there is old style large wooden detailing matching the floors pillars and doorframes are all the same dark wood there is pillar stands or little tables, (something tall and narrow) between the windows with vases or busts on them, above them- framed paintings on the walls and some family portraits, a few framed photos, angle of view does not allow surface or content detail.

this is gonna be a cgi cat so might as well digitally fake some hallway for length, only the "action room" needs to be practical hallway set and the rest can just be redecorated scans of it all stitched together and key in a running plate from a green stage.

extremely long hallway golden light comes in shafts through evenly spaced windows illuminating dust particles in the air

the camera moves quickly down the hallway on a dolly track at a height of about 10 cm (i can build it to run under the floor so there is only a line to key out

D:a pair of feet running, silent footsteps sfx noticeably missing, joined by a black and white cat who's barely audible pitter patter IS in the sound mix

the human and cat quickly begin to outrun the camera which focus's on the person as they come full into frame, it is a wiry man wearing only black sweatpants, he picks up speed silently as the cat keeps up with him increasing slightly in volume of gentle pitter patter.

the man suddenly outpaces the cat and the man jumps up off a wall and into a fingertip handstand on a wooden door frame top and the cat continues running past the door.

J:the door explodes open and a spinning heel swings out where the slim man's head would have been height wise

D:dropping silently out of the finger-stand above the door and into a right hand punch to the side of the head of the much larger man

J:the large man wearing a black tank top and fuzzy pajama bottoms who turns with the punch to the head and into a backwards elbow to the ribs

D:which was met by an expectant elbow block in a moment of hangtime turning the impact into comfortable spacing maneuver

the two combatants found their footing and balance simultaneously and faced off in a quick moment of eye contact before darting towards each other and going into very fast paced impressive fight choreography that brings them across the width of the hall and down to the ground into a grapple that real-life fighters would recognize to be a bone breaker or something but then the cat bumps a stand getting out of the way and a vase wobbles and the camera pulls from a wide into a tight on both their faces the two immediately stop fighting and focus on the vase's increasingly dangerous oscillations and in a single movement break the grapple and turn opposite to each other, aiding each others movements, so that in an instant J:the larger man is flat on the floor pushing off of both the wall and the slimmer man so that they combine their heights and movements into a spring maneuver D:the slimmer man pushing off the larger, slides on his hip across the wooden floor towards the now falling vase and catches against his body with one arm as the other hand steadies the stand.

there is a noise as the stand is suddenly righted on the hardwood floor and both men wince as though suddenly feeling their reddened cheekbones and darkening eye-socket for the first time

a voice calls from somewhere distant in the manor A: what have you broken

J&D: both men answer in unison as they silently and gracefully spring to their feet, "NOTHING" in that singsong unison way children do. the vase is replaced and they quickly jog down the hall towards the voice and around a corner out of sight.

The movie is all about these two ignoring the rest of the batfam who are an organized unit, and just tearing shit up around town on their own.

other family members are only seen out of uniform

50% adorable brother shit

50% brutal violence (much of which is directed at each other)

They each get a scene where the other gets hurt in the field by a meta villain and they just go berserker rage on whoever hurt their brother. A big venom'd up guy knocks Jason out and Damian cuts him to ribbons. A speedster guy manages to cut Damian open and Jason tackles him through a brick wall and beats him with the rubble

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this is the opening trailer scene from the future AU Robin and the Red hood movie idea i first described in THIS POST

alfred is alive in this timeline, i have cast dev patel as dami and scott atkins as jason they about pushing 30 and pushing 40 respectively i think and have the right frames and muscle types, i dont care beyond that i like girls and im not a casting agent

i change tenses a lot here, i need to set a scene and ive never written camera movements before so i give up when its no longer essential.

i can see this video in my head, i know what this film looks like i just dont know how to write film

wayne manor sunrise, 15 ish years future

camera moving down hallway at floor level. dark hard wood floors, the walls are dark and there is old style large wooden detailing matching the floors pillars and doorframes are all the same dark wood there is pillar stands or little tables, (something tall and narrow) between the windows with vases or busts on them, above them- framed paintings on the walls and some family portraits, a few framed photos, angle of view does not allow surface or content detail.

this is gonna be a cgi cat so might as well digitally fake some hallway for length, only the "action room" needs to be practical hallway set and the rest can just be redecorated scans of it all stitched together and key in a running plate from a green stage.

extremely long hallway golden light comes in shafts through evenly spaced windows illuminating dust particles in the air

the camera moves quickly down the hallway on a dolly track at a height of about 10 cm (i can build it to run under the floor so there is only a line to key out

D:a pair of feet running, silent footsteps sfx noticeably missing, joined by a black and white cat who's barely audible pitter patter IS in the sound mix

the human and cat quickly begin to outrun the camera which focus's on the person as they come full into frame, it is a wiry man wearing only black sweatpants, he picks up speed silently as the cat keeps up with him increasing slightly in volume of gentle pitter patter.

the man suddenly outpaces the cat and the man jumps up off a wall and into a fingertip handstand on a wooden door frame top and the cat continues running past the door.

J:the door explodes open and a spinning heel swings out where the slim man's head would have been height wise

D:dropping silently out of the finger-stand above the door and into a right hand punch to the side of the head of the much larger man

J:the large man wearing a black tank top and fuzzy pajama bottoms who turns with the punch to the head and into a backwards elbow to the ribs

D:which was met by an expectant elbow block in a moment of hangtime turning the impact into comfortable spacing maneuver

the two combatants found their footing and balance simultaneously and faced off in a quick moment of eye contact before darting towards each other and going into very fast paced impressive fight choreography that brings them across the width of the hall and down to the ground into a grapple that real-life fighters would recognize to be a bone breaker or something but then the cat bumps a stand getting out of the way and a vase wobbles and the camera pulls from a wide into a tight on both their faces the two immediately stop fighting and focus on the vase's increasingly dangerous oscillations and in a single movement break the grapple and turn opposite to each other, aiding each others movements, so that in an instant J:the larger man is flat on the floor pushing off of both the wall and the slimmer man so that they combine their heights and movements into a spring maneuver D:the slimmer man pushing off the larger, slides on his hip across the wooden floor towards the now falling vase and catches against his body with one arm as the other hand steadies the stand.

there is a noise as the stand is suddenly righted on the hardwood floor and both men wince as though suddenly feeling their reddened cheekbones and darkening eye-socket for the first time

a voice calls from somewhere distant in the manor A: what have you broken

J&D: both men answer in unison as they silently and gracefully spring to their feet, "NOTHING" in that singsong unison way children do. the vase is replaced and they quickly jog down the hall towards the voice and around a corner out of sight.

The movie is all about these two ignoring the rest of the batfam who are an organized unit, and just tearing shit up around town on their own.

other family members are only seen out of uniform

50% adorable brother shit

50% brutal violence (much of which is directed at each other)

They each get a scene where the other gets hurt in the field by a meta villain and they just go berserker rage on whoever hurt their brother. A big venom'd up guy knocks Jason out and Damian cuts him to ribbons. A speedster guy manages to cut Damian open and Jason tackles him through a brick wall and beats him with the rubble

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I've been resource gathering for YEARS so now I am going to share my dragons hoard

Floorplanner. Design and furnish a house for you to use for having a consistent background in your comic or anything! Free, you need an account, easy to use, and you can save multiple houses.

Comparing Heights. Input the heights of characters to see what the different is between them. Great for keeping consistency. Free.

Magma. Draw online with friends in real time. Great for practice or hanging out. Free, paid plan available, account preferred.

Smithsonian Open Access. Loads of free images. Free.

SketchDaily. Lots of pose references, massive library, is set on a timer so you can practice quick figure drawing. Free.

SculptGL. A sculpting tool which I am yet to master, but you should be able to make whatever 3d object you like with it. free.

Pexels. Free stock images. And the search engine is actually pretty good at pulling up what you want.

Figurosity. Great pose references, diverse body types, lots of "how to draw" videos directly on the site, the models are 3d and you can rotate the angle, but you can't make custom poses or edit body proportions. Free, account option, paid plans available.

Line of Action. More drawing references, this one also has a focus on expressions, hands/feet, animals, landscapes. Free.

Animal Photo. You pose a 3d skull model and select an animal species, and they give you a bunch of photo references for that animal at that angle. Super handy. Free.

Height Weight Chart. You ever see an OC listed as having a certain weight but then they look Wildly different than the number suggests? Well here's a site to avoid that! It shows real people at different weights and heights to give you a better idea of what these abstract numbers all look like. Free to use.

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my mind returned to the idea a little. i'm still probably not gonna write this out.

but (i'm basing roman's personality off under the red hood movie i'm ignorant, sue me)

Roman looked at what was left of the henchman in the chair in front of him

it was easier to describe what wasn't injured.

His legs weren't broken, his spine was intact and his ribs were in a state that allowed him to breathe well enough. His left eye and mouth were left functional, the rest of his face was a swollen, bloody, black, mess.

whoever did this wanted bill to be able to walk, to breathe, and to speak, to deliver a message. it seems they did not want bill doing anything else for a long time.

"it wasn't a 'Bat' boss" bill choked out the words. his voice sounded wet

"No shit it wasn't a 'Bat' if you're the one that got LET GO!! who was this soon to be dead imitator and what's the message that will be known as his LAST FUCKING WORDS!!!

bill hesitated and visibly shrunk into himself at the thought of delivering the message CLEARLY this was going to be upsetting. Roman steeled himself.

"he said to tell you" bill's sputtering words were turning into a gurgle, he wasn't going to be useful for long "he said "tell black mask the devil is coming for him"

"The devil?" roman could feel the tension building to a breaking point

"yeah boss. he was dressed in red, had horns, swung this crazy transforming weapon around"

roman needed to hit someone or he was going to snap, but the person who gave him that bad news would die if roman hit them right now, and roman was not done with bill yet. bad luck for the doorman who carried bill into the office.

as Roman re-adjusted his cuffs and jacket to regain his composure he pontificated to himself

"its bad enough that i have bats crawling around getting into by shit, but theyre the fucking weather at this point we have a system! now some satanic wanna be thinks he can call ME out? NOBODY CALLS ME OUT!! he is deceased! this motherfucker is past tense. Do you hear me!?

the priests at the church are gonna be scared to say the WORD 'devil' after what I'm gonna do to him.

i want his head mounted on a plaque!! "

bill only heard about half of this before he drifted into unconsciousness.

when roman finished, Bill was taken off to receive medical care from a veterinarian roman had on payroll. the doorman took him since he needed stitches anyway.

Daredevil Gotham isekai "You tell Black Mask that the Devil is Coming for him!"

kinda wanna write this, probably wont though

isekai dont worry why.

netflix personality and base but ill be pulling from comics for powers and extra stuff to buff him up

matt murdock gets warped out portal style and gets to gotham in full costume with his costume and gear its at matts lowest point in life and getting isekaied pushes him over the edge he loses his shit, thinks hes being punished by god so he just works 120 hours a week as daredevil and sleeps in abandoned buildings and buys food with a single handful of black mask's drug money from a stash which he burned.

Just a big belly burger fueled rage machine tearing a bloody streak across the mob.

Everyone thinks nightwing is just on some revenge shit so it takes a while for the bats to hear about him.

When bruce eventually finds him he has left a trail of severely broken but never killed bad guys and saved victims that he has demonstrated a clear code very similar to bat code if only a tad more brutal, and so its a friendly (for batman) approach

But he's on some crazy talk like god sent me to your world as a punishment, to a place where i deserve to be, an endless war on crime that will never stop, this is my hell, i am the daredevil.

and bruce is like, i can see youre me if i was catholic isekai this is going to be difficult.

if you take this you gotta send it to me so i can read it too

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Okay so i had some ideas about this and matt sees some things in gotham that help convince him he genuinely thinks he's in hell

he arrives in an entire city that cries at night and hurts each other and echoes with the whispers of corruption like the worst corners of his city but its the entire place here, he cant hear beyond the edge of the filth, it feels to him like his worst nightmares, as though the sickness that keeps him up at night has crept over the entire world. to matt's nose the entire city is soaked in blood to an impossible degree, he literally cant find a clear square CM anywhere he looks in his hometown the piss in the alleys smells like alcohol, here its fear.

The crooks here are all oddly accustomed to his fighting style and expect him to own the shadows and come out of high corners. they know too much about him and are calling him a "BAT"!!

think about what being called a bat would be like to daredevil, thats practically like being called a lawyer, hes got sonar hearing and he's blind (i know don't @ me it's colloquial)

he's on some level convinced that this city is a personal hell for him, filled with custom crooks made to punish him, and somehow already prepared to do so.

early on he hears people crying and someone doing abuse to them leading to matt raiding a kidnapping at warehouse ran by Scionis's guys

they call him bat and shoot into the shadows and rafters by reflex the second the guards fail the radio call. this is jarring obvi but he handles it from shadows with the grappling club and shows up out of the shadows to the last guy and says

DD "I dare you to call me 'Bat' one more time"

And this is bill-the-henchman-tm so he KNOWS this is a NEW voice

B "hey man i dont like kidnapping but black mask would have killed me if i didnt follow orders"

DD "then you tell black mask that the devil is coming for him"

Matt is canonically immune to fear toxins so thats cool for later chapters

Daredevil Gotham isekai "You tell Black Mask that the Devil is Coming for him!"

kinda wanna write this, probably wont though

isekai dont worry why.

netflix personality and base but ill be pulling from comics for powers and extra stuff to buff him up

matt murdock gets warped out portal style and gets to gotham in full costume with his costume and gear its at matts lowest point in life and getting isekaied pushes him over the edge he loses his shit, thinks hes being punished by god so he just works 120 hours a week as daredevil and sleeps in abandoned buildings and buys food with a single handful of black mask's drug money from a stash which he burned.

Just a big belly burger fueled rage machine tearing a bloody streak across the mob.

Everyone thinks nightwing is just on some revenge shit so it takes a while for the bats to hear about him.

When bruce eventually finds him he has left a trail of severely broken but never killed bad guys and saved victims that he has demonstrated a clear code very similar to bat code if only a tad more brutal, and so its a friendly (for batman) approach

But he's on some crazy talk like god sent me to your world as a punishment, to a place where i deserve to be, an endless war on crime that will never stop, this is my hell, i am the daredevil.

and bruce is like, i can see youre me if i was catholic isekai this is going to be difficult.

if you take this you gotta send it to me so i can read it too

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Daredevil Gotham isekai "You tell Black Mask that the Devil is Coming for him!"

kinda wanna write this, probably wont though

isekai dont worry why.

netflix personality and base but ill be pulling from comics for powers and extra stuff to buff him up

matt murdock gets warped out portal style and gets to gotham in full costume with his costume and gear its at matts lowest point in life and getting isekaied pushes him over the edge he loses his shit, thinks hes being punished by god so he just works 120 hours a week as daredevil and sleeps in abandoned buildings and buys food with a single handful of black mask's drug money from a stash which he burned.

Just a big belly burger fueled rage machine tearing a bloody streak across the mob.

Everyone thinks nightwing is just on some revenge shit so it takes a while for the bats to hear about him.

When bruce eventually finds him he has left a trail of severely broken but never killed bad guys and saved victims that he has demonstrated a clear code very similar to bat code if only a tad more brutal, and so its a friendly (for batman) approach

But he's on some crazy talk like god sent me to your world as a punishment, to a place where i deserve to be, an endless war on crime that will never stop, this is my hell, i am the daredevil.

and bruce is like, i can see youre me if i was catholic isekai this is going to be difficult.

if you take this you gotta send it to me so i can read it too

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What if the major leagues never happened to the mcu?

rough rambles, i wanna polish out but cant find motivation, do you think this could be good?

I want the netflix defenders to replace the avengers.

I want a loose mcu / netflix AU fic where instead of the movie timeline with the founding members and the aliens and that stuff…. i want to place the netflix timelines earlier and have Fury and shield start by recruiting Jessica Jones and Luke Cage and Daredevil and Iron fist. Coleen wing could have a little more of her comic abilities, also fix trish walker hellcat a bit Hawkeye and Black widow are still there. captain america and falcon would still be there.

the defenders initiative doesnt have to fight an army of chitauri in their inaugral battle, they could do longer narrative / character driven adventures.

make bulseye more like the comics to elevate him to a team threat

a bit lower stakes with a little less ultra powerful heroes, they wouldn't take orders from shield as a team, only the agent members would obey all orders and serve more as a communication point, rand can replace stark for money and the tower, Steve is still the leader.

ant man and wasp would be a founding members again, make it earlier and there you go. With earlier ant man you could make ultron hanks thing again, maybe make hank and bill foster a little younger.

ant man can only shrink, let goliath be the big dude make bill foster more comic influenced.

I really like bill foster hes a personal favourite so goliath would be cool for a minor league team, he could only grow to 15 feet and had proprtional strength, not kaiju

William Foster himself generally attained a stature of 15 feet for the majority of his crime-fighting activities. At this stature of 15 feet, which is 2.5 times his normal height of 6 feet, Foster's weight increased by a factor of 15.625, the cube of the factor of 2.5, from his normal weight of 200 pounds to a weight at 15 feet of 3125 pounds.

Thats it he was just big, not kaiju gigantic, he could kinda fit through doors and wasnt even bullet proof.

Characters like The Winter Soldier and yellowjacket would be team level threats. The purple man could become a HUGE problem if his arrival is timed right. fix taskmaster and introduce them like in the comics, team level threat.

The winter soldier would be the first huge threat, maybe Bucky is sent to kill or capture captain america after news of his return in order to stop shield from redeveloping super serum or having an active super soldier or whatever. have red guardian, whatever yelena gets re-named to, and winter solder sent in together and sold as nigh-unstoppable threat

punisher is still just doin his own thing and still has the matt connection, but frank is not a defender and maybe does a han solo on your left like once with a sniper

I think Iron fist has to go first to replace Iron Man, Get the rich guy on hero track right away, and his first thing is contained.

daredevil and punisher is next, you can do them contained, make punisher just like tv, maybe change daredevil a bit.

jessica jones gets contacted by shield for the team way before her show starts, she wasn't hiding.

they get luke cage by just offering to use shield rescources to prove him innocent, it buys less loyalty than they hoped but not none. he speechifies a lot and is a paragon like in the comics.

you could do the netflix defenders show without too many major changes and then just have shield swoop in during the ending to help in some way and clean up.

killgrave comes after the famous superheroes and is a movie level threat about it, he wants to rule the world and honestly has a chance.

the hand is a consistent problem just cause they have the numbers and organization to be a problem shield cant just stamp out.

then at the end something like the introduction of thor tied in to loki's chitauri invasion would be the paradigm shifting bigness that the story clifhangers on for the next phase If you steal this you have to let me read it when its up

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D&D verse story: Dog paladin

Talking mastiff paladin PC who was a rangers dog until, when they were fighting an evil sorcerer, the mastiff gained sapience in the same magic surge that separated them from their friend, the Paladin dog PC does not know whether their master is alive or dead and is on a quest to find them. It is unclear whether the Dog will take oath of vengeance or oath of devotion as that is dependent on the fate of their friend.

this huge talking dog flies out of a portal calling a name and panicking over this missing person's well being and these two noob adventurers who see it happen have to help this giant dog to find its friend and either reunite or kill the sorcerer who did this.

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Alien scientist abducts some humans for an experiment, they chose poorly.

This sort of thing is illegal in every sector. if a lantern catches you trying to abduct sapients you're screwed, not to mention the champions each planet always has. But some experiments require a subject that can answer questions. So you find a rural area on a planet far from where you live and abduct some people who are out alone at night and warp back home as fast as your engines will take you.

Science requires sacrifices. After having done it several times the guilt becomes easier to ignore and you can be scientific about it. One thing that is always important is keeping the subjects calm enough that they don't injure themselves in a panic or die of shock. It's a consistent problem. Which is why it's so strange that these two humans are COMPLETELY CALM. They haven't even changed the topic of their conversation. These two human women were walking in a field and got beamed onto an alien ship and simply glanced around and sat down continuing their conversation. They're was one exclamation when it happened but it wasn't one of surprise or fear, it was simply a loud stern "Clark" and then they just sat down and calmly continued discussing the events of a doctors appointment.

The scientist could not make heads or tails of their behaviour.

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Neither Victor nor Adam Frankenstein was a doctor and they were both monsters.

I think it would be so funny if instead of killing his wife and running to the arctic that instead Adam took s social revenge, got a medical license and became doctor Frankenstein. Just pretended to be a normal big fugly guy who got messed up in some war.

Like Victor is chasing him around high society London screaming that hes a monster and everybody is like, "hes one of the best physicians in the country, his understanding of anatomy is unparalleled, he saved my wife's life."

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I created an original superhero today. Does somebody wanna make a comic with me?

Cebil and Gidgee are names of very dense trees, some of the hardest woods on earth. She does not grow like Groot, she is stuck in a humanoid form. She is super dense and and can tank anything short of sustained concentrated damage or a rocket launcher. Her hair is grass.

When the loggers clearcut her grove of trees Ironwood killed them all in a grief struck rage and fled to where she came upon a dying woman. In their pained and confused state they reached out to each other and magically bonded. It was a memory imprint, not a soul bond, but it happened magically as her mind was crumbling from losing her grove and turned her into a new person. Cebil is an angry person, who puts on a hard exterior to hide her pain, no matter how much she tries to seem like it, she isn't as emotionally invulnerable as she is physically, quite the opposite in fact. She drinks lots of water and fights bad guys and does a little eco-terrorism on the side as a treat. Also at some point in the story she gets into a relationship with a woman but fucks it up at first because she's convinced she's unlovable and then because things get dangerous. She is an 8 foot tall tree ,with bark for skin and grass for hair.

She wears a hiking belt with some pouches from the dead girl as a memento, it becomes a utility belt of sorts but she has no gadgets so its mostly normal stuff you'd have in a belt pouch like a water bottle or phone etc.

location. hugest city that is in a region with lots of forests

Cebil Gidgee aka Ironwood is a dryad who was bonded to a small grove of trees who awoke to machines clearcutting her grove, she slaughtered them all in a griefstruck rage and then fled in a fueg state as her mind crumbled from losing the grove she was bonded to.

as she fled through the forest she was drawn to a wounded runner who was out and fell off the trailside down a small cliff and is leaking her brain on a rock, they reach out to each other and the dryads magic and panic imprints whats recoverable of the dying womans memories and uses it to create a new blended personality not dependant on the grove.

her magic is sealed and she is unable to acess her typicla dryad powers and is mostly just an empath with a thing for animals, physically however she is still a powerful tree woman so she has 50 tonne super strength and is extremely durable.

she makes her way to the city using the imprinted memories, begins in an abandoned building thats not fit for human habitation but she is a tree so its got water (dirty) and sunlight (hole in roof) so she is very happy

i guess Cebil is probably some kind of exploration of trauma and recovery and empowerment now that i look at it

She ends up unknowingly sustaining from the trees in the city and the parks and stuff and in the entire city becoming her new grove her desire and ability to protect it grows, she becomes more able to sense whats going on within range of trees that are part of her grove and eventually is able to sense evil throughout the entire domain. upon gaining full control over the bond she can unlock her magic again

she is an empath and has a need to drive away or defeat evil and malicious cruelty, so she ends up making friends with the vulnerable in the abandoned warehouse district, and frequently getting in trouble with criminals and police who want to abuse or take advantage of the helpless.

arc 1 is kind of a who am i what is life getting established arc where she meets her friends and finds some purpose

arc 2 is discovering the kingpin is largely responsible for most of the people being taken advantage of and hurt in town, targeting and hunting battling his mob

arc 3 is kicked off when ironwood defeats kingpin and thinks its chilltime now but the power vacume fills with several gang factions and Mineral-Man moves out to find his own way, now free of the kingpins influence. arc 3 will be less about overarching superhero plot and more about character development, with small episodic super stuff. as Cebil and Joe each figure out who they are in the new city. Cebil will meet her love interest in arc 3 but they will not be romantic yet, thewre will be just little bits of queerbaiting to get the shippers appetites warmed up.

arc 4 needs some big bad with a plan (preferably something corpo) but i have nothing planned yet, its about the new dynamics where Cebil begins a romantic relationship with her new love interst while also begining a new super partnership with Geode-Joe

She sucks at love and friendship and makes both harder than they need to be, i really want to explore that she is not only deeply traumatized but also, something entirely alien, a new type of conciousness made from two dying minds of different species, she is not wired like a human but has to learn to communicate with them and have relationships.

dryads are solitary and stationary in this verse, they stick to their groves and wander within the boundries of the trees driving most intruders away. but Cebil is in a city and trying to find a family because her human half needs that.

so yeah 27 pages an issue, maybe 6-15 issues an arc the first three arcs are pretty clear to me and the 4th and 5th are fuzzy but there.

Sorta if "Savage Dragon" was free from copaganda and fated to be hated for being too "woke"

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the first "fix it fic" is widely believed to be in Gilgamesh when Enkidu is alive again with no explanation in tablet XII.

so you go right ahead, and never let somebody tell you it isn't valuable art

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The most useful thing I ever learned on the tropes website

Watsonian logic: The character James Watson's reasoning, diegetic.

eg. he ate because he was hungry.

Doylist logic: The author Arthur Conan Doyle's reasoning, exegetic.

eg. he ate because the author needed him to choke and draw another characters attention

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Short excerpt from one of my works in progress

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She turned the doorknob with a tissue in her hand, unwilling to make contact with the greasy, dented, rattling handle. The dingy walls of the waiting room were a dark and uneven shade of yellow, whether from years of nicotine staining or from water damage she could not tell; it was both.

She glanced up at the broken clock on the wall seeing that it read 2:47 and noted that while the hands did not move, it continued to tick away dutifully. It served not to indicate the correct time, but to remind those in the room that time indeed continued to pass along while they remained there.

She surveyed the three dusty folding chairs, and selecting the edge of the cleanest one, she sat, hands folded over her lap, listening to the ticking of the clock in the empty room as she waited.

Her phone vibrated as it died. The door across the room opened, beckoning her into the office.

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I never name the protagonist in this book, i only call her "her" because she is supposed to be projected upon by the reader. sort of a cleaner YN