#scriptedit

[theskyexists]

If id been the writer of apothecary diaries I would have come up with a different reason to kick Maomao out of the palace. In fact I wouldn't have had Jinshi kick Maomao from the palace at all. I would have let her term end and Jinshi desperately thinking about how he could offer her a job. Or asking her boss to ask her to stay. Whether she'd want that. And Maomao thinking: damn I kinda love being a taster EVEN THOUGH BEING HERE HAS PUT MY LIFE ON THE LINE IN MANY DIFFERENT WAYS. but I do want to see my dad again, BECAUSE HE SHOULDNT WORK IN THE FIELDS ALONE, and my sex worker sisters, who takes care of them now, now that their apothecary is gone? And she goes back. BECAUSE she is written up until this point as a caring person who is in solidarity with her fellow commoners. And Jinshi has set like three plans in motion to find out what she wants and to give her a place and to convince her to stay and. Then she just tells him goodbye, telling him why she's leaving (Jinshi realises her relatively poor circumstances keep her from him). And he realises he can't keep her against her will, she has people she cares about out there. He gets very depressed.

AND THEN, something happens that really puts Maomao in debt. NOT to her grandma figure trying to sell her into sex work as though its nothing. Some criminal and rich guy. Some brothel landlord, to contrast baba's verdigris palace and introduce some competition that would explain their money hunger. Maybe she gets called in and 'the merchandise' DOESNT survive, and she gets blamed and rung up for it. Or rather her dad, who's pushed to sell her. And Jinshi doesn't know that his job offer would be of great use now. She's getting threatened, Baba gives her a courtesan job to try and stave off her 'creditor'. Goushan finds out and arranges a meeting at an event along the lines in the show.

This maintains tension because it maintains the duress that Maomao is under in a believable way, and even increases the dubiousness of a relationship between a commoner and a noble. Maomao is now 'his', because she has no better choice. This also maintains the theme of the palace being so much like the brothel district. This would develop his class consciousness further and would prompt his desire to give Maomao intellectual status by making her do the exams, so he can balance and justify this new dynamic in several ways (outwardly, and inwardly). Also this money would go to her DAD, so that he really doesn't have to work his old bones IN THE FIELDS anymore.

Hit me up for any and all of your scriptediting needs because damn that was easy

[ezzybrownmedia]

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[kev-doso]

13/90 - Script Revision 📝🎬

#ScriptWriting#Screenwriting#FilmScript#ScriptWriter#WritingForFilm#Screenplay#ScriptDevelopment#Storytelling#ScreenwritersLife#WritingProcess#ScriptRevisions#Rewrite#ScriptEdit#ScreenplayEdit#ScriptDoctor#ScriptPolish#FilmEditing#PostProduction#EditingRoom#FilmEditor#VideoEditing#CinematicEditing#FilmProduction#FilmMaking#OnSet#Filmmaker#ProductionDesign#BehindTheScenes#FilmmakingLife#indiefilm

[hergifs]

S06 OTHERS CALLING CLARKE OUT

[bang2write]

LITERALLY no reason for the share tbh ... Tho I do remember some naughty B2Wers kept chatting about #CharlieHunnam during my last workshop at @ealingstudios BREAKING INTO SCRIPT READING (not me tho, I am a good girl 😆). Anyway, you can do the course this year LIVE ON ZOOM for the first year ever ... There's a recording too if you would rather do it UNlive too. Link in my bio. See you there?? ✒📚✏ #Bang2write #Bang2writers #amwriting #writer #author #authors #screenwriting #screenplay #novelist #screenwriters #book #novels #writersnetwork #writerscommunity #writingcommunity #writersofinstagram #writing #scriptreading #scriptediting #authorsofinstagram #writersofig #authorsofig #insta #instalike #instagood https://www.instagram.com/p/CGHpfZDBsnP/?igshid=1wlayewprugaa

[aspiestvmusings]

Script Edits #1

This was an old prompt. A general idea I wrote down long ago - the scene (camera movement, etc), and I just added the dialogue now while making the edit. The dialogue is modeled after a certain ship, and the description was also modified a bit as I was making the edit. Originally it was a bit different, but general idea remained the same. Since the page looked so empty with just the scene description, so I decide to add some lines, too... And though I’m sure similar scenes have been shown in many shows, and this is nothing new/original, I still made this edit...

[nanyoky]

Marathoned #riverdale last weekend while editing. Unsubtle in the best way. Not even halfway through draft 3, so starting the whole saga of season one over. Any suggestions for more #americangothic ? #septemberhouse needs to be fed more drama and secrets!!! #scriptwriting or rather #scriptediting

[iestynnicely]

TBT to WTAF? Kew Gardens inspired birthday cake. AKA Dame Trott. The director left in the script both cut and paste versions of the Dame and the King breasting the top of the beanstalk. Hello - we've just come to enjoy the view of (insert local reference). Then run round to re-enter. Hello - the King gave me a leg up. (Produce prop leg from carpet bag) #pantomime #tbt #tbt❤️ #thursday #pantodame #scriptediting #dragact #costume #finale #theatre #bloopers #instagay #theatre #dame #crewe #photography #crossdressing https://www.instagram.com/p/Bxg5ePeA9Xa/?igshid=nwcvalu447qg

[sdprocessblog]

Editing LRL (The rough cut and beyond)

Eva provided me with a list from  Rabiger and Hurbis Cherrier as to how the process of editing should be ordered:

Processing and transforming film to video (only when using celluloid)Transferring, logging, organizing and syncing footageReviewing and evaluating footageInputting comments and marking up the editing scriptEditing and reviewing a first assemblyEditing picture and primary soundEvolving rough cut to final cutPicture lockGathering sound elements (narration, foley, adr, score, pre-recorded effects/ambience/music)Constructing multi-track dialogueSound mixAdding titledColour correctionMastering the final programDuplication and multi-format distribution  

I made alterations to this process where I needed to as I wanted my rough cut to give the most complete impression of the final piece I could achieve to people I would show it to.

I began by deciding on the clips I intended to use. I personally prioritized clips in which lines were the most clear and accurate and the performance was the most authentic. This way the story would be the most clear.  I synced these clips and preceded to select my intended sound and video inserts. Reisz suggests montage is most effectively used where it deliberately demands the audience view the story as artificially. Due to our issues on the first shoot day there would have to be a degree of artificiality inserted into the story so this became an optertunity to use montages that emphasized the themes. I decided to look at music videos from the 1980s as influence for the opening dance number. 

The two things I took from these was a use of deliberately jarring jumps cuts, repeated clips and most importantly (as seen in the Siouxie Sioux video) overlays. editing it like a music video would add to the artificiality of the montage and insert archive footage seamlessly to add verity to it.

The overlays ended up not working with the footage so instead they became inserts to the overall film.

[rdbawa]

#Scriptediting at this hour, Gaskiya #iamnotlazy. Watch out as the #Gamjifilmworks team are cooking something new for you. #Executive #Producer Pixels Media...

[samkeethlunkad]

🤘🏻😘😍when i was goin to ma bed 😁💤i jus thought of ..i would edit ma script 😁nd sorry for blurry inconveniency😝😝😁 . . #movie #movies #film #tv #camera #cinema #fact #didyouknow #moviefacts #cinematography #screenplay #director #actor #actress #act #acting #movienight #hollywood #filmmaker #films #filmbuff #movielover #movieaddict #movietime #moviebuff #interesting #watchingmovies #scriptediting #strangerthings #scriptwriting😍

[jimthalman-blog]

Outdoor office today.#scriptedits on the lawn #nyc🗽 #nyc🗽 #lovemycity #westofthecitytv (at American Museum of Natural History)

[hergifs]

214 BODYGUARD OF LIES

who are you, really? by mikky ekko

♫   so you feel entitled to a sense of control  /  and make decisions that you think are your own...  /  well i have nothing left to prove  /  cause i got nothing left to lose  /  see me bare my teeth for you  /  who, who are you?   ♫

[script-rose-blog]

Picture from the Script Editing course I attended, led by Yvonne Grace. In the picture are writers Ashley Pharaoh and Jeff Povey, as well as the nine other course attendees. I'll be sure to write about my experience ; it was an enlightening, fun and brilliant four days. Right now I feel like I could take on anything. 😎 #ashleypharoah #jeffpovey #scriptediting #scripteditor #scripteditors #yvonnegrace

[hergifs]

104 MURPHY’S LAW

byegones by volcano choir.

♫   somewhere i heard you scream  /  for others' hearts  /  and in the limiest of lights  /  hold the keys to a cuban flight that you won't ever ride, it's time to up and die  /  set sail! (x4)  /  oh, you’re plenty competent  /  so why aren't you confident  /  it's softening to be softening  /  then why are you so constant then?  /  are we going on a coat ride…   ♫

105 TWILIGHT’S LAST GLEAMING

wasteland, baby! by hozier.

♫   all the fear and the fire of the end of the world  /  happens each time a boy falls in love with a girl  /  happens great, happens sweet  /  happily, I'm unfazed here, too  /  wasteland, baby  /  i'm in love, i'm in love with you…   ♫

[hergifs]

402 HEAVY LIES THE CROWN

ladder song by lorde.

♫   don't hang around once the promise breaks  /  or you'll be there when the next one's made  /  kiss the feet of a charlatan  /  some imagine freedom  /  all the rest is predictable  /  trying your hardest to melt the snow  /  tie the knots to concentrate  /  keep on pulling, that rope will break…   ♫