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genesis-rhapsodass · 4 months
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Just a found family on their way to a gentler life (hopefully)
So there's this really good fanfic by @eaymtb of Cloud being sent back in time together with child remnants that's got me SO hooked, I've been wanting to draw something for it for ages so here's some art of the boys on their way to Wutai
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betasquadx · 6 months
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Heyyy niaaa<333
I wanted to ask if you can make a aj fic bc I don’t know why BUT im in my Aj phase rn 🤭
⚠️YOU DONT HAVE TO OFC BABES⚠️
But you writing is amazing and it would slap so yeah (sorry im waffeling sm😭)
Okay thats it BYE BABES 😁🫶
Hey babes 😍
Ofc I will !! how could I not miss out on my favourite Dorito?
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Streaming - Aj Shabeel
Summary : Interrupting your boyfriends stream is a repetitive occurrence, but the cute fan edits you get after do make up for it. ( basically js a short cute hc/fic)
Warning : Kissing
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You gently knocked on the door, causing your boyfriend's voice to hush as you stepped inside. He turned his chair around, fixing his gaze upon you.
“Heyyy, we were just streaming you know.” You chuckled, “Who's 'we'? You're on your own,” he frowned, letting out a dramatic sigh.
“First, you interrupt my stream... then you insult me?!” Smiling, you took a seat beside him. “Yes, actually.”
“Yeah, crazy crazy, anyways, I was just on discord, I banned three people because of their horror edits,” he smirked, clearly proud. “Oh? Were the edits that bad?”
Sighing, he switched tabs to show you an edit of him as a rat. Unable to contain your laughter, you burst out laughing, watching as he kept a straight face. “It isn't funny,” he remarked.
Calming down, you pointed to the screen. “If it isn't funny, then why is the chat losing it right now?” He turned away dramatically and put on a sad face.
Proving him wrong, you began reading out comments from the fans.
“Yeah, we're not doing this today,” he said, taking control of the Discord as he scrolled down to find better edits, until one caught your eye.
“Wait, look at that one,” you said, pointing at the screen. “It's us.” He smiled, clicking on it and settling back in his chair.
The edit started off with a cute clip of you two, then transitioned into a compilation of more moments.
It was a simple yet adorable edit that had you smiling as you looked over at Aj, who couldn't contain his smile or blush either.
Not muttering a word, he quickly switched tabs to check the chat. “W edit, W edit,” he commented.
Smirking, you decided to tease him about this. “Awh, is someone blushing?” you giggled. “Shut up,” he grinned.
Gazing over at the chat, you looked at the fan comments consisting of “AWHH” or “THEY'RE SO CUTE,” making you smile.
It seemed your boyfriend had read the comments too because he looked over at you, leaned in, and softly kissed your cheek.
“Love you,” he muttered quietly, looking at his screen as his face was tinted a light shade of red. “Love you too.”
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This is so short but I love it, heavily inspired by Aj’s actual streams!!
But anyway enjoy x
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General Fic Tag Ao3 Account - All fics with [Ao3] next to them can be found here. Reference post for Steve's BMW
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Bad News First, Eddie - Completed [Ao3] Part One 🦇 Part Two🦇Part Three🦇Final Part
Shovel Talk(s) - Completed [Ao3] Part One 🦇Part Two🦇Part Three🦇Final Part
Porcelain Steve - Completed [Ao3] Part One🦇Part Two🦇Part Three🦇Part Four🦇Part Five🦇Part Six🦇Part Seven🦇Part Eight🦇Final Part
What's Eight Plus Seven? - On Going - [Ao3] Part One🦇Part Two🦇Part Three🦇Part Four🦇Part Five🦇Part Six
The Interview - Completed [Ao3] The Interview (Part One) The Response (Part Two) The Conversation (Part Three) Untitled Song - A The Interview Tie-In Fic [Ao3]
No Regrets - On Going Part One🦇 Part Two🦇Part Three🦇Part Four🦇Part Five🦇Part Six
Good People - Completed [Ao3] Part One🦇Part Two🦇Final Part
My Default’s Self-Destruct (Oh, I’m Not Used to Normal) - On Going Part One
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Envy, Baby. Written for Rustypeoplekillz for the Steddie Summer Exchange 2024. Eddie makes a new friend and Steve spirals about it.
Steve and Robin talk about how Steve wants to be romanced, instead of always doing the romancing.
Eddie's over dramatic, Steve talks him down, and they're okay in the end :)
Steve reflects on how other people make the decisions in his life and decides, y'know what? No. Fuck that and fuck you.
Beg You to Love Me - Steve and Eddie talk for the first time two and a half years after they break up. [Ao3]
Steve pines for Eddie and carves a pumpkin for the first time. He is completely normal about both things. [Ao3]
Eddie left, and has to face the consequences of that
Steve has great parents and goes to therapy. Too bad he forgot to tell his friends that [Ao3]
Middle School Meet Cute? [Ao3]
One sentence and one phone call are all it takes for Steve to realize he needs to go after what he wants [Ao3]
Steve's sad, Eddie's an (accidentally on-purpose) jerk, and the miscommunication gets solved? [Ao3]
Steve gets Vecna'd and a terrible rendition of Bohemian Rhapsody saves him
Angsty Ella Enchanted AU
Steve finds it funny, the differences between him and Eddie.
#81. “We’re in the middle of a thunderstorm and you want to stop and feel the rain?” [Ao3]
#23. “Just pretend to be my date.” and #60. “If I didn’t know any better, I’d say you were trying to seduce me.” [Ao3]
#60. "If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were trying to seduce me." [Ao3]
#13. "I dare you to kiss me"
Requested by Anon - Eddie catches Billy throwing Steve around in the locker room; it leads to an unintentional deescalation of the situation and a conversation Eddie's surprised to have. [Ao3]
Steddie Week 2023: Day 1: Pining [Ao3]
Anon Prompt - Robin brags about her boyfriend to Steve. He's a little jealous, because he wants to brag about his own boyfriend but doesn't know if Robin is safe to tell that too. Until, whoops, turns out Robin's BF and Steve's BF are the same boyfriend. [Ao3]
Steve doesn't want to be put on a pedestal. Eddie doesn't understand, and tries to reassure Steve. [Ao3]
Eddie's friends try to prove Steve's cheating on him. Eddie doesn't take kindly to them trying to ruin his relationship for no reason.
Plot Idea I’ll never fully flush out or write but gotta get out of my head or it’ll never let me know peace again. It’s basically Steve sent from the future going all John Wick.
Steve-focused ficlet exploring the idea of Steve becoming a Mean Girl because he learned his tactics from Carol Perkins rather than Tommy, and how he regrets the results of that.
Domestic Bliss fluff fic that ends in a loving blow job. Minors DNI. [Ao3]
Childhood Best Friends AU where Steve and Eddie agree to learn the elvish script from The Hobbit so they can pass notes and no one can read them. Things get a little messy when Eddie moves away with no notice but Steve takes it upon himself to learn Elvish anyway. [Ao3]
Steve doesn't think before he all but crawls seductively into Eddie's lap accidentally. There's also not much thinking once he realizes what he's done, or in the aftermath of it. [Ao3]
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Steve, Gareth, and Chrissy Are Cousins [Ao3]
Steve, Gareth, and Chrissy are all cousins, and Gareth doesn't want anyone to know that. For his street cred.
The Steve, Gareth, and Chrissy are cousins AU gets sad (Sad AU Part 1).
Steve realizes he's the only adult left In The Know in Hawkins; Gareth wants answers, one way or another (Sad AU Part 2).
Steve doesn't attend a funeral; Gareth goes with Jason&Co to Reefer Ricks (Sad AU Part 3).
The gang arrives at Skull Rock and Steve learns Gareth's now involved. Robin learns the truth (Sad AU Part 4).
Vecna gives Steve the vision and forces him to make a choice (Sad AU Part 5).
Everyone learns they are cousins now and it goes well. Gareth makes his own plan to save the day. (Sad AU Part 6).
Wayne joins the fight and Gareth ensures that Max gets saved (Sad AU Part 7).
The cousins reconcile. Max and Steve don't (yet). It's as happy an end as a Sad AU can get (Sad AU Final Part).
Time Travel Fix It Fic
Class of '85 [Ao3]
Save Max [Ao3]
September Prompts 2023
Coffee Smell ○ Horizon ○ Foggy Mornings ○ Jukebox ○ "Kiss me or leave me" ○ "Did you lie to me?" ○ Bonfire ○ Recipe Book ○ Gas Station
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rzyraffek · 1 year
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A confused and concerned yautja with a reader who loves books, and cries or smiles when reading
Yo babygrills im on streak! Second fic today! And that request is cute!
Tw: jelousy
They/them, sfw, Request open
Yautja with emotional bookworm s/o
First time when s/o asked him nicley to get them some books he didnt really question it, maybe its a human thing? He is a good boy so he brings them to some earth library and s/o almost started jumping out of excitement? Well that must mean he is a good husband😊
So he lets s/o 'borrow' some books and they go back to ship
Well he is kinda happy? It's pretty common for him to disappear to hunt for days, and its nice to know that s/o isn't just sitting bored at the ship. Makes the hunt less stressful. Before he was always worried "what if I hunt bad prey and mate will be disappointed? They waited so long..."
But he kinda gets worried when he hears them randomly giggle... uh what's so funny? Ooh the wooden plate said something funny? Cool
He gets jelous when s/o reads some romance stories and giggles and blushes over some words... he should be the one making them feel this way :(
But when s/o cries??? Dude litteraly hisses at the book. Nuh uh bbg you are getting break from books!
Ofc he cant ban them from reading books for ever! He just pressures them on avoiding romance books cus they make him jelous! He should be the one! He senses how some of those books make you feel.... Stop!!!
He enjoys lisening to s/o talk about characters, plottwists, lore. Its like the type of podcast you would lisen to fall asleep. He will wrap his heavy arms around s/o and slowly drift to sleep, or place their body on his and feel their body move and vibrate due to all this talking
Loves to lisen about s/o theories and how they react once they were right! Yay your crazy totally not obvious theory way right yay
He still can't relate to idea of enjoying funny looking wooden square that clearly is sending you a telepathic messages... it doenst sound intresting, he hates reading
Ate one of s/o books
Loves how s/o shit talks writers of books for cliche endings or dumbass main characters or totally obvious plottwists, he loves how dramatic they get over peace of paper
Yes yes I know your sad cuz guy from book died and it's so so sad... anyways i made us dinner, wanna eat in bed
Can't relate but supports
The only NO for him are romance books and horrors
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moonytoast-x · 9 months
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my lovely collection of fanfic recs summarized by yours truly <3
✨all the young dudes✨: canon, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/10057010/chapters/22409387
dress up in you: muggle au, remus is a hot bassist and sirius is so gay for him, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/13990401/chapters/32213229
atyd sirius pov: self explanatory (complete work) https://archiveofourown.org/works/34577035
text talk: muggle au, text fic, remus has chronic illness and sirius texted the wrong number, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/1651109/chapters/3501239
you wouldn't like me: muggle au, trans sirius, wolfstar, set in like 2005, very vibes, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/45502642/chapters/11449071
blends: coffee shop au wolfstar <3 (complete work) https://archiveofourown.org/works/7869079/chapters/17970910
on another ocean: wolfstar goes on a trip across europe together and has incredible sexual tension, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/39128118/chapters/117226243#workskin
choices: jegulus/jegulily, mostly canon compliant, takes place during hogwarts years all through the war (REALLY FUCKING SAD WATCH OUT), complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/30170643/chapters/74332617
tigerlily and wolfsbane: lily pov of hogwarts years https://archiveofourown.org/works/33079969/chapters/82118059
wading in waist high waters: gbbo au wolfstar, sexual tension, sirius used to be in a boyband, remus is a welsh nerd (I love him), complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/36896740/chapters/92052442
dear your holiness: remus is a priest and a bassist and sirius is incredibly gay and also confused, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/35105491/chapters/87450694
the hand that feeds: canon compliant dorlene (be prepared to sob), complete work, theres also a part two that focuses on emmeline vance and mary https://archiveofourown.org/works/38287942/chapters/95669569
nothing fades like the light: zombie cowboy jegulus, shortish, so sAD, has some black brother feels </3 (complete work) https://archiveofourown.org/works/43550415/chapters/109497873
bury our secrets shallow: marauders+slythershits muggle small town au with black brothers sorting their shit out, also wolfstar and jegulus I think (complete work) https://archiveofourown.org/works/49550836/chapters/128345881#workskin
bird set free: wolfstar figure skating and all the sexual tension (major second hand embarrassment but it's kinda funny the second time you read it), complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/44271820/chapters/112378375#workskin
like real people do: muggle au where remus has epilepsy and works at a coffee shop, and sirius is raising harry bc jily still died (😭😭😭) and they fall in love, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/44399764/chapters/111670651
crimson rivers: hunger games au, really long, really fucking angsty, SO GOOD, complete work https://href.li/?https://archiveofourown.org/works/39760044
we can take it out back if you promise to give me a kiss after you take me down: rosekiller muggle au, wip, they're dramatic little shits and theyre going thru it https://archiveofourown.org/works/50777170/chapters/128269429
just lovers: no war au with starchaser and marylily and rosekiller and wolfstar and general happiness and wholesomeness, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/38344720
intermission: cute rosekiller side plot from just lovers (your honor I love them), complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/39437451/chapters/98704770#workskin
I'm not gonna teach him how to dance with you: rosekiller trying to stop barty from getting into an arranged marriage, in canon-without-the-war, lots of slythershit shenanigans, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/41378289/chapters/103762113
annoying: rosekiller wrong number text fic (like text talk but even funnier and less wolfstar), complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/44115820/chapters/121605580#workskin
kill your darlings: college hockey au, jegulus and wolfstar and marylily and barty x evan x cerci, very angsty most times, truly amazing, complete work https://archiveofourown.org/works/40038048/chapters/100269270
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My jumbled up thoughts on season 2 part 2 of dragons rising...
AAAAAAHHH!!!
First off, Source Dragon Of Motion, super cool. Cool design, cool voice.
Aw, Wyldfyre trying to step up and take Kai's place as the red ninja... I can really tell she's grieving and that she wants to make him proud.
Did Shade die??? Since the new master of shadow looks like shade, I'd assume that's his daughter or something. Dragons rising really killing off all the old elemental masters. I really wish other elemental masters made cameos in this season.
Hey um ninjago writers if you're reading this can you please let Cole and Geo kiss. Thank you.
JORDANA'S POSSESSED I FRICKING CALLED IT!
I don't know if I like the Zeatrix reveal or not. Feels kinda lazy I guess. And her motivation for disliking the ninja just doesn't sit right with me.
God, Roby's annoying.
I ACTUALLY CRIED Why can't Jaya EVER just be safe and happy?! Damn you, ninjago writers!! Damn you!!! "And I will always hate you", Somebody smack some sense into this twink!
Seriously, what does Cinder get out of taunting Wyldfyre. Like, I know why he does it, but sometimes it's just like... This grown man, thinks he cool for picking on a teenager. Pfft.
Take a tablespoon of feelings of inadequacy, two cups of loneliness from missing two of the people you love the most, milk, and an ounce of frustration from lack of progress. Blend it all together and what do you get? An Arin suffering smoothie!
I see Ras continues to spend his time manipulating and abusing teenagers.
Omg Arin found out Sora lied and- and it's just like that one fic I wrote- it became canon- and- *faints dramatically*
I honestly expected the confrontation to be more sorrowful, like Arin would be feeling so broken down, on the verge of tears from feeling like he can't do anything, rather than angry. I also thought the scene would be a little longer, but this works too.
Omg Neuro and Camille cameos!
Poor Lloyd and his panic attacks... That episode was actually stressing me out >_<! C'mon, Lloyd!! You can do it!!
Wyldfyre being right about Bleckt being the bad guy is so funny to me for no reason.
Ras getting betrayed by Nokt and Rox was DESERVED. Bro acting shocked he's getting enslaved by the same person he enslaved, who is a much more powerful being than him. Smh.
I changed my mind, Roby's cool.
Roby and Wyldfyre's relationship is cute, weird, cringe and wholesome all at the same time. I went from hating it at the start, to loving it in the end. These dumb little kids share a single braincell and are perfect for each other.
KAI'S BACK KAI'S BACK KAI'S BACK!!!
Really wish we got some more Kai and Bonzle screentime at the end. I was ROBBED of an overprotective Kai seeing Wyldfyre get a boyfriend.
The fact that I KNEW Arin was gonna become evil or leave the ninja at some point but I didn't WANT it to happen. Please. Please bring the baby back home.
Omg Nokt and Rox hate furries.
Every time I see them making shrines for those they've lost I get sad WHY DO THE NINJAGO WRITERS DO THIS TO MY HEART?!
Ooooh, cool sword.
Also, what happened to Fritz and Spitz?? It looks like Geo went back to the land of lost things, so... did he just leave the kids home alone???
Good season all around, cliffhanger endings stress me out but I know they have a reason for it. 9.5/10 season. I'll definitely watch it again in October!
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lemonmaid · 4 months
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Imagine bassist Shoko
Fem reader, pick me friend. This does NOT contain lyrics, I kinda cringe at song fics.
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Imagine going to a sad bar on the edge of town with your friend and meeting a super hot bassist.
"This place looks like a dumpster fire...." You cringed, "and smells like one".
Your friend rolled her eyes, "Listen I understand but there's this band-"
"Oh god".
"Just shush!!! Listen, I went here on a date with a guy and these guys were playing and they aren't that bad! To be honest the singer is kinda cute-".
"So we are supporting a small band based on their looks?".
"No! They are acually really good!!".
"What's their name then?".
"....".
You sighed. Not want to argue anymore but also grimacing at the disgusting outer outside interior. "I'm sorry (Friend's name) but this literally looks like we are about to be sold meth".
Your friend rolled her eyes before opening the door to the bar. Now, it wasn't so bad, the stairs down into the small basement; there was a small bar in the corner, then a "stage" on the otherside of the wall.
"There's my number one fan!".
You both turn around to see a tall white haired man, he was... hot but there was a vibe that gave 'I will literally suck you dry, mentally and physically'. You smiled awkwardly, while your friend gave the guy a crushing hug.
"Of course!!! I told you I wouldn't a miss a show silly! I lovvvvveeeee y'alls single Satoruuuuu~".
'Gross' you thought.
"Ah first name basis already? Wow this was is different Satoru".
You made eye contact with a longed hair, pierced face man. He gave you a small smile then re focus his attention to Satoru.
Your friend made a face, "oh of course we are on a first name basis!!! He said the next song he'll write will be about me!".
Satoru rubbed his neck, giving his friend a cheeky smile while he in return was given an eyebrowed look.
"What's our next song about?".
Coming down the stairs with equipment in hand, was a beautiful, brown headed and brown eyed woman. Now, you were the type to be into people that were in a band but Jesus, talk about a tall glass of water.
Satoru laughed, "oh you thinking and throwing some ideas around..... thanks for grabbing the stuff Shoko!".
Shoko nodded, she then made her way towards the stage.
You kinda looked around, noticing how empty everything was, "uhhh I thought this was a concert or a performanc".
Suguru and Satoru stared at you, before Suguru coughing, "oh.... we are just planning on rehearsing tonight, SOMEONE, can't figure out an "adjective"...".
Satoru dramatically sighed, "it's a form of ART, this takes time.... Greece wasn't made in a day".
"But it was almost destroyed in a day" You mumbled.
You heard Shoko snickered behind you, your face turned a small hint of red.
Suguru stared at you and your friend, "So.... you wanna help us set up..... and give us a feedback?".
(Friend's name)'s eyes light up and immediately grab Satoru's guitar and bringing it to the stage leaving, three boxes to Suguru.
Shoko sighed but smiled softly at you while you help grabbed the cording and speakers, "let me guess... you were dragged to this?"..
You chuckled, "how could you tell?".
"You look fed up".
You looked back at your friend who was hanging off Satoru's arm, "kinda, I was expecting a show.... not being techie, but can't complain".
Shoko hummed, "Well" looking at your friend, "Let's hope she lasts".
You raised your eyebrow, "what do you mean?".
"Satoru is a slut".
If you could spit out water, you would. Your jaw dropped, "I mean... I got the vibe but I didn't-".
"Oh yeah no, his 'art' is just tickling other people's chords while he can barley raise his".
You started laughing.
"Do you really think... that guy can write a song? You should thank his ghostwriter Suguru".
You laughed harder.
"What are you two ladies talking about?"..
Satoru came up behind both of you, wrapping his arms between you, "can I know what's so funny?".
Shoko rolled her eyes, "thinking about taking a smoke break, you in....sorry I never got your name?"
"(Name)".
Shoko hummed, "Well (Name)... help me find a lighter in the van?".
Going outside, Shoko opens the back door of the van, inviting you inside.
The inside wasn't what you were expecting, it was an older model for sure, seating around the windows, red rugging, alot of red.
"Cozy".
She hummed. Grabbing a ciggerate and flickering the lighter a few times before lighting. She offers you a ciggerate but you polity decline. "Sorry I don't smoke-".
"Don't apologize... it's a bad habit".
The silence between the two of you was awkward, well for at least on your end.
You awkwardly laughed, "the outer exterior of the van doesn't do the inside justice".
"What's wrong with my van?".
"Oh no! I didn't mean it like that!"
Shoko laughed, "I'm kidding, I know it's a shit box, Satoru found it on Facebook and nagged me and Suguru to buy pitch in and buy it... fucker is a nepo baby....".
"Now that you mention it, he doesn't seem like the singing type-".
"Oh god, he can't sing, but he and Suguru can yell... to be honest, I think your friend and others just come to see Satoru and his looks. "
The silence was comforting now, Shoko gets out of the van, "Welp, I'm bored. Let's see what those freaks have been doing". She grabs your hand, helping you out of the van.
Before you and Shoko enter the bar, she puts her lighter in your hand, "You should come to practice more often, kinda nice not being the only girl."
A/N I might make a part 2 tbh, I lovvvveeee Shoko ♡♡
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starfoam-saloon · 1 day
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HNNNNN
Twst au but instead it goes like this;
One of the twst boys(whoever) ends up getting transported to your world with no magic. They wake up in your house after you help them when you found them in the alleyway on your way home like ouch dude. You find out they aren’t from this world after they do some magic so you guys spend the entire summer helping each other and comforting them since they have issues with themselves and being homesick or something. Yadda yadda yall fall in love and are dating during it.
One day, miraculously on the last day of summer, yall find the mirror and that twst boy is sent back after yall promise to find each other again. Maybe like a years later(idk imagine time runs differently there) you’re getting ready for bed and you wake up in that coffin.
Something something and you end up starting your first day at NRC. Yayyyy!!!! And when you meet the twisted wonderland guy, at first glance yall immediately know each other and yall are just being cute and everyone who knows you is like “HUH???” Imagine meeting Ace and he can’t bully you cause oh no that’s his idiot. Meeting riddle and he immediately calms down. Meeting Lilia and silver is just like “huh.” Or it could be the other way around. Ruggie seeing Leona all soft and he’s just like “when???!?!!??” It’s such a funny concept to me cause imagine you and Ace are together and your friends are like “Ace how did you pull on the first day” and before Ace can stroke his ego you just say “he stuttered 15 times trying to ask me out”
OH OH imagine meeting Vil and he’s like “and who is- oh hello dear- and WHAT-???” Vil tenderly holding you as the rest of the VDC group is just shocked that Vil mr popular had a lover. Or any of Octavinelle thinking it’s a bit strange that one of them is really good at walking since they don’t believe either of them when they said they went to the human world for the entire summer. Jade or Floyd just think the other explored the ocean the entire summer idk—
Jamil angst a bit cause he thought the one he loved would never be here again and feels slightly betrayed when they ask for help from Azul of all people. But just appreciates them entirely either way cause yeah. If you’re dating either of the overblot boys I guarantee they aren’t gonna let you get in the way and might keep you at a distance while you try to help your friends. (Yum favoritism)
Or dating one of the RSA boys so imagine their shock when Chen’ya kisses you at an Unbirthday party when he steals some food. Or Neige hugging you and saying all kinds of honeyed words with heart eyes as he sees you again. Is a bit sad you’re in NRC.
AND MY FAVORITE ROLLO!!! Like imagine he’s just being all dramatic and he sees his lover and just opens his arms cause he knows they’re gonna jump in them. Rollo trying to not be jealous since Mallues seems to care a bit too much about his lover(Mal just wanna be a good friend I swear). He keeps you in the bell tower to try and not get you hurt but you end up accidentally falling with the others. Yadda yadda, you stay with Trein even if you’re the most stubborn person on the planet, and you eventually pull him to the side before Malleus can do his whole ‘imagine losing to me lmao’ thingy ig. And the two of you talk but you two eventually just love and care for the other and when you leave the others are asking if y’all broke up to which you reply “um… nuh uh.” While holding a letter from Rollo so you two can write to each other (he texted while he cans and calls you but he likes to send letters since he thinks it’s romantic and reminds him of the love letter he gave you in the summer in your world.)
They love you lots, so don’t be too surprised if they feel like they want you to stay here with them. :(
IF ANYONE MAKES A FIC OF THIS USING EITHER THEIR TWST OC/SELF INSERT/ READER PLEASE @ ME/TAG ME I WOULD LOVE TO SEE YALLS THINGS WITH THE IDEA I HAD PLSPLSPLPS☹️☹️
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thecrutonking · 2 months
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This is a fun lil drabble I wrote based on @memento-rory ‘s Jarvis Johnson x reader fic. I love both him and Jordan’s friendship so much, so I thought it’d be fun to imagine how Jordan would react to the growing relationship.
Thank you Rory for letting me write this 🥺 It was a fun way to get back into writing and I absolutely love your stories!
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When Jarvis reached out to you for the first time, Jordan was immediately down for the idea. He remembered occasionally talking to you at parties and creator events before your breakup and thought you were a kind and funny person.
On their way to the first hangout, he made a passing comment to Jarvis of “Do I smell hurt/comfort wattpad story?”
They both chuckled at it, neither giving it much thought.
It’s after they start dating that Jordan brings it up again but more on that later.
Jordan picks up on the blossoming connection relatively quickly (a month) but doesn’t say anything outside of passing jokes. While he doesn’t know you super well, he DOES know Jarvis, and he trusts that he’ll realize his feelings and make the best choice for himself.
As the hangouts happen more and more, occasionally Jordan will just watch how you and Jarvis interact, a small smirk as he sees just how you both open up and bring the best out of one another. He also fights the urge to giggle at how cute the two of you are when one stumbles over their words or does something a bit embarrassing.
The SECOND Jarvis realizes he has feelings for you (which would likely be during when the big hangouts dwindle down to small hangouts), Jordan becomes both their #1 supporter and #1 hater
Sure, he’s the one that kept telling Jarvis to hang out with you alone, to make a move, and share his feelings.
BUT immediately starts eye rolling and sighing in an over dramatic fashion when Jarvis tells him about how it went, describing your cute mannerisms and vent about how just how much he adores you
Once it’s just you, Jarvis and Jordan, JORDAN IS AN ABSOLUTE MENACE
Oh, you’re facing Jarvis? Jordan is behind you making kissy faces.
You’re having some trouble with your laptop? Jordan pulls out Jarvis’s computer science degree (don’t ask why he had it on hand)
You compliment Jarvis’s shirt? Jordan is answering “He looks better without it.”
“Wow, Ethan’s match during creator clash was awesome!”
“You know, Jarvis’s match was wayyyy cooler and better.”
“I literally lost?”
“Not the point.”
A couple days before Jarvis confessed, he and Jordan had talked.
It was after they finished editing an episode of Sad Boyz. Jarvis opened YouTube on his phone to check what episode they were on, only to have the latest Chuckle Sandwich episode pop up on his timeline.
“Jordan… What if I mess this up?” He asked suddenly, anxiously biting the inside of his cheek as he remembered how happy you looked with Ted and Schlatt.
The insecurities that had festered after realizing his feelings for you were swarming his mind: Was it too soon to confess? Was he taking advantage of you? Is he a bad friend for falling for two of his friends’ ex? Do you even like him back?
Every thought born from his anxious mind came tumbling out as he aired it to his best friend.
Jordan sat back and listened, not once interrupting. Only once Jarvis finished his venting did Jordan speak up.
“(y/n)’s a smart, independent and mature woman. If there’s anything she’s not ready to do, she’ll tell you… As for those two,” Jordan pointed to Jarvis’s phone, referring to Ted and Schlatt, “they made a choice. They chose to break up with (y/n). If they’re good friends, then they’ll be happy for you or zip it.”
For the last part, Jordan put a hand on Jarvis’s shoulder, “You’re a good man Jarvis. You and (y/n) clearly care about each other and, even if she doesn’t feel the same, you need to be honest about your feelings…. Even though she’s absolutely into you too.” He added the last part with a cheeky grin, only to receive a playful shove from Jarvis in return.
After you and Jarvis kissed, Jordan was the first person he called to tell (after getting your consent of course)
“I knew it was a hurt/comfort wattpad fic.”
“Please stop saying that…”
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waveofahand · 6 months
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Different fics for different folks
Someone suggested that I should make a post describing some of the different sorts of stories and series I've written, all involving the Beatles in different ways, some funny, some very dramatic. And I thought, why not?
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"Yes," they say, "Why not?" So, in no particular order or plan... ROMANTIC: Sweet:
"The French Kiss"
"Bed Wresting & Secrets of Spun Glass"
"Time to Put Paulie to Bed"
"Paul, Not Strong, Leans on John"
"I really, really wanna hold your hand!" Tragic and Sad:
"Angel Eyes Comes for John Lennon"
"Paul just wants to hold John's hand"
MCLENNON HEAVY ANGST:
"Carry That Weight"
"Hello, Goodbye: Carry That Weight Part II"
"Here, There & Everywhere (Part III, still in progress)
FUNNY STUFF: "Paul is Dead, or He Soon Will Be"
"John and Paul Introduce the McSeamus to your Mum"
"Paul's Got John's Thigh, and He's Not Letting Go"
"Herr McCartney, about that piano you broke..."
"Now, look Paul, I'm not taking 'no' for an answer!"
MCLENNON FIGHTING:
"I"m taking you home, John!"
MCLENNON IN YOUTH:
"Mums, Yer Boys are Cryin'"
"Bunny McCartney, Secret Subversive"
JOHN IS HELPLESS ABOUT PAUL:
"Killing me Softly, With His Cuteness"
"John has no discretion and even less self-control"
"Help, Paul is Teasing Me!"
"I Promise, I won't let you down!"
"John and Paul discern a surprising new year!"
"John says 'yes'" FUNNY GENDER-NEUTRAL READER INSERTS: "You Know His Name & He's Got Your Number"
"Adventures in Lockdown: Paul Finds Bananas!"
"Waking up with Paul, in Lockdown"
"Temporary Secretary"
JOHN IS INSUFFERABLE:
"Hocus Focus: John Offers Paul Up to a Hypnotist"
"There's a line, and John has come right up to it"
"John takes his vengeance upon Paul"
FRIENDSHIP:
Paul and Ringo: "Life is Short but Scars are Forever." RANDOM ONE-SHOTS: With Jane Asher: "Paulie Nibbles Has Left the Building"
With Ciggies: Beatles and Butts: What the Ciggie Carton Saw!
Sad reader insert: "Macca, the Stranger on the Train"
RIngo: "Ringo, always the grown up!"
There's more but... that's enough! As ever, I thank you for reading anything!
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nautilusgays · 1 month
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Live reactions to Episode 2 of AMC's Nautilus
SPOILERS SPOILER SPOILERS SPOILERS
Oh the N rising out of the water is beautiful
Humility's massive skirt is pissing me off I'm having a viceral reaction to it - Oh yes it's getting ripped up - I think the fabric just looks like I would hate the texture
Ayyy it's going up
'Captain Crazy' lmao Ned Land would approve of that title.
Oh god that like cockney/sailor accent hurts
ANOTHER TWINK!? Oh god he's a brat 'algey boy' oh god no
Lmao they are literally giving Humility Aronnax-esq dialogue - except she's apparently lying?
'ah Mon dieu' just incase we forgot Benoir was French
'you are not going back to the underwater boat. Get back to the underwater boat' marvel called it wants it's dialogue back
Look I love a competent woman but ahhh her writinggggg
YES DOGGOOOOOOOOO
Nemo speach time - oh a threat instead of motivational - he's looking good in his rolled up sleeves and waistcoat tho.
Oh dreadnaught is back - more like Twinknahght there is three of them now!
Listen to the fucking captain you shareholder dickhead he actually knows how ships work (he's giving "and a (business) partnership was the only ship that he ever had seen" - a Gilbert and Sullivan lyric)
Oh! He knew Nemo??!
Oh god that comparison Humility babe - HUMILITY NO
'that will be none of your business' I love the way she did that slay
'its hope that brings people together'
Lmaoooo Lord Pitt is Humility's fiance??? Oh twink on twink violence.
Youngblood has some positive view of Nemo yas
Mate Pitt is weird af
HUMILITY! Her foot in mouth disease is real I kind of love it
Benoit sweetie! I love him. Also hope him and Humility have a cute father daughter-esq relationship.
I love submarines so much!
Oh this is adorable!
Him and Nemo are brainy besties I love it. "He has his reasons for being the way he is." Mate just give him some 2010s emo music and he'll be fine.
I love them messing with the kid so much omg it's so cute.
'hey concentrate' mate you put me in front of that window I will focus on nothing but the moving water and fish.
Aw Benoir is such a bleeding heart!
Nemo angst projected onto whales
Pfff dramatic waistcoat removal I love him.
Wait are those sperm whales??? (I don't think so but I can't tell lol - my bro is the marine biologist not me)
Wet cat Nemo fr fr - need a fic where Pierre sees him in a wet white shirt.
Damn Nemo savage!
"That was theft" why is that so funny to me
NOOO Humility baby imma hug you her sad puppy eyes
"they're made from whale bits" "the fish that made these are dead already" savage queen Imao
How tf did a mouse get on-board??
Horizon scanning is the favourite past time on the Nautilus.
"big boat with big big guns" that's how we should describe the dreadnaught from now on
Ugh competency is sexy - also I now realise why that the open waist coat and shirt combo is so sexy it's cause Nemo got that lesbian fit
UGH 'we better use our wits then' CUTE PATERNAL REASSURACE IS ALSO SEXY HES A GOOD DAD
Archie NO
Crawley mate don't fight the shareholder
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Oh stowaway?
"then the next stage of our journey maybe a spiritual one" NEMO NOT HELPFUL SWEETIE
Benoit and Humility make me happy (it's probably the daddy issues)
"how deep were they tested?" "50 fathoms" YOUNGBLOODS EXPREASION OMG - I love the plots of shareholders not understanding how science and engineering work and the people that do having to deal with it - I hate it in real life tho: looking at you RBMK Reactors and The Challenger! - I hope Crowley gets his commupence for not listening to experts and the actual competent people get to save the day (to make up for it not happening in real life)
This is so stressful
I like having the viewing port on top of the saloon window
Oh no a Brit
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gg-university-if · 8 months
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Okay I have loadsss to say!!!
Apologies in advance! It's a long rant. I'm excited.
Spoilers below!
All my ROs are Male so hence the pronouns my MC is a MLM
1. Beck is the most adorable fucking thing in the history of everything. I love him. Omggggggggggggggggg just how could your brain even come up with such a bean of a dude. He seems so stressed but so sweet. I adored his interaction with Jason it was so funny to read. And how much he actually misses his friend. Loved that I can have a crush on him because come on.
On that note tho:
Can I throw Ethan off a bridge???? Like Jesus dude cut it out. I see I'm gonna have issue with him on a beck route because dude doesn't know when to take a step back and not come off as a di....dingleberry!
2. The farewell with the fam was bittersweet as my MC has very complicated feeling towards the parents but Jace is just the best brother ever. Makes me sad I'm an only child.
3. Sids cute. ♥️ just so cute. Friendly and funny. Quite charming.
4. R is such a little lovebug. I love how we cldnt say no to him. And I had to stand up for him because no one gets to push my roommate around especially if they are really hot.
On that note again: ugh I want to punch Hader so badly... but I also want to romance him.. but I also wanted to throw a can at his head..empty can.. calm down.. 🙄 he can be glad he's hot and that I'm Slightly masochistic when doing IFs.. I also go for the your an asshole but i like you routes.. unfortunately 🥲
5. F seems like he is soooo fun! Very charismatic and DRAMATIC lol
6. Question. You said we would encounter EVERY (yes i saw that) RO.... did I see correctly and is there a secret RO.. and does that mean they are in the chapter? If it's Ethan end me now. It's gonna be an enemy to lovers route cuz he is aloooot.
Hmm what else..
I love the little things. Like choosing our aesthetics. Clothes, dorm room set up. It's a nice touch in customization. You love us awww 😭
Was wondering about customization and if MC is gonna have the option to have any piercings or tattoos their family know nothing about.
Oh I did see a bit of a typo I suppose. After Haders scene and meeting F. After you choose your food in the cafeteria. Instead of saying as you take a "bite out of your chicken katsu curry" it says take a "sip" but that's all I noticed. Also if you ever need beta readers.... 👀👀👀👀
Overall I loved the entire update. I can't wait to interact more with everyone. And as I'm on a music scholarship Hader is gonna have to get used to my MC talking back 🙄 it's great. Your writing is great. This is so fun to read and reading it brought a smile to my face. Thank you for working so hard on it. ♥️
Spoilers under the cut, let's break this down!
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I love, love, love all the detail!
So I'll try and answer or have a comment for each bit since you made so much effort to give me feedback when you didn't need to.
Fun fact: Sid and the male form of one of the ROs are actually holdovers from an ill-starred short-lived mlm fic I wrote before GGGLU ever existed.
1. I'm so glad you liked Beck! I was worried that people would get irritated with him or end up not liking his personality but I thought the way I wrote him was most authentic to the story I wanted to tell for his route. He's so exhausted but so willing to help and isn't that just the cutest thing ever?
Ethan is Ethan, you'll definitely get your chance to be snarky and put down some fighting words with Ethan in the future. Infact at no point do you have to come to like him for Beck's Route but I can atleast say that there is a reason that he is Beck's University BFF and to a certain extent in my mind it makes his character a lot more...understandable if not your cup of tea.
2. (Obviously) there's the death of the author and I don't get to dictate how others interpret my writing but I'm so glad that you saw it the same way that I saw that scene when I was writing it because to a certain extent parting is a bittersweet moment for the MC regardless of how they feel about Jace and their parents.
3. Sid is adorable, just a ball of pop punk flavored sunshine. Was definitely one of my favorite characters to write in this part of the chapter and as a music scholarship MC you might be seeing more of them...but I'll shut my mouth for now.
4. Yeah I had debated allowing the MC to deny R and totally skip the cafeteria scene but I thought it was more fun if it was a compulsory event and the idea that R already has so much sway over the MC is sorta funny to me.
Hader is a bag of emotions and definitely stormy ones at that, I can't promise he'll ever be B or R levels of adorable but I can say that Riley wasn't lying when he said Hader isn't always like that and that usually he's a little more hot than scary and broody than angry.
The intended effect for my Hader-mancers was that they would want to punch and kiss him at the same time and seeing as they were already simping I had to ramp up the punching bit.
5. Fred is also good fun to write, I keep on saying this but also one of my favorites to write this time round and also one of the hardest for me. I'm not naturally a very dramatic or big personality so it's hard to write someone who is naturally charming and affable, I'm happy it was able to work somewhat as intended.
6. Hehehe the secret RO is in the demo currently and seeing as they're already implemented it's not a particularly big deal for me to reveal them BUT seeing as you guessed wrong I guess I'll be keeping it a secret for a little while longer.
A little hint: part of the reason H is so angry has to do with our beloved secret RO.
7. Customization is going to come as necessary to the story, things like tattoos and piercings are planned to come in part 2 of chapter one.
At some point you'll have a chance to get bigger tattoos but so early in the story the only tattoos you can have hidden from your parents will be pretty small.
8. I do need beta readers 😭😭😭 but I don't know how to get in contact with anyone through the proper routes and I'm famously awful with Discord amongst my friends.
If I ever figure out how to set up a Discord or interact with readers outside of Tumblr itself through the proper routes of communication then you will definitely be at the top of the list!!!
Finally we're at the end, thank you for giving me such a comprehensive breakdown of your experience. I really couldn't and wouldn't be able to write if it wasn't for your encouragement and excitement to push me forward to write.
I'm glad my writing style is atleast palatable and I'm more than ecstatic that it was able to provide a momentary amount of joy when reading.
Thank you for reading!
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bobbys-not-that-small · 9 months
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LW&Co Series Commentary - Ep 6: "You Never Asked"
Here's the rewatch commentary that no one asked for! Take a shot every time I say "erasure". Context: my 2nd time watching the show, but first time post reading the books
Part: one, two, three, four & five, six, seven, eight
I find it so funny that the DEPRAC cleanup crews are always in full-on hazmat suits (though in hindsight maybe they have some kind of ghost-protection built in)
Barnes: "wbu Lucy, you’re unusually quiet" Lucy: "I think you should let us do it" Barnes: "frick, why did I ask"
I love Lucy's top (dark blue with stars?)
ALL THE HINTS TO JESS - Lockwood looking at Carver's death glow and then the long glance at the door!
I know it'd be less dramatic but I wish Skull had more of a whiny teen/youthful voice
I feel like I blacked out watching half of these scenes the first time, lots of bits I don't remember!
Urgh, traces of men in the room??? Clearly sinister (/jk)
Do you think skull has changed over time? He def mellows in the books, but he was clearly very twisted and evil when he knew Bickerstaff and he died very young
THE HAND SLIDE
It's kind of sus that they were invited to Fittes at 50 the day of, no? Like Penelope wanted to keep an eye on them or something, or specifically talk to Lucy?
The Kipps/Lucy attempt is kind of painful for me, he's like 5 years older than her in the books
Bless u though, sad little Kipps boy
Lucy's dress is SO PRETTY (and just Ruby in general)
Anyway, where's that angsty Jess/Kipps fic about the necklace?
They're so cute, I love them
Not the "first date"-esque happy retro music wahhh
Not Lockwood insulting gravy
Kipps leaning like that HAHAHA
Hot damn I need an inner jacket pocket as big as Lockwood's. That was at least A5!
Lockwood's go-to line is just "I've never seen [her/that] before in my life"
WAIT not the same "first date" music coming back when they fight Golden Blade and then flee Fittes 😍
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Such a great chapter!✨️
Kenjaku is such a sore loser, like he acts so high and mighty but his plans got foiled by the wettest saddest guy in history. So embarassing for him. I can't imagine living for however long he lived and just staying in the same flop era with same flop goals. So cringe of him...😔
I am placing bets on Yuki vs Choso because I want those two to interact and because I think it would be funny if he betrays Kenjaku the second that fight ends. That man deserved more L's than the world is willing to give him (and the world is already willing to give him a lot of L's).
I love Mahito's dynamic with Hajime!✨️Like two stray cats that should only be adopted together. That car chase was iconic! It's honestly great to see Hajime slowly start to realize that there are things beyond strength. I can't believe Mahito hit a pedestrian...😔 Like, imagine the last thing you see being a green lambo with no driver and a person with cyan hair screaming in the other seat. I would never recover (neither will the random pedestrian).
“Haven’t you ever gone the opposite way on an escalator? Isn't it a fun challenge?”
This fool. “Fuck you! You know I’m scared of escalators!”
“That sounds like a you problem!”
“Of course it is, it’s my fear! That’s a me problem by definition!”
This made me laugh so hard, poor Hajime... being afraid of escalators...
I can't believe they gossiped about Nanami in a treehouse. Like, it's definetly something both of them would do, but I can't imagine Nanami's reaction if he ever finds out about this.
“Well, look what just happened with Sukuna and Suguru-kun,” Mahito says calmly, gesturing vaguely in the direction of the Nanami residence. “Kenjaku’s been scheming for over a thousand years, yet his meticulous goals were thrown off-course by the most depressed man in the universe! Isn’t that so totally hilarious?” 
I love Mahito!✨️ He is so real for this one. Truer words have never been spoken.
“Whatever his plans are, nothing’s gonna go according to them. I wanna be there to watch that” Me too bestie, me too.
I did not expect the emotional conversation but I am so here for it. Sukuna's whole backstory is so in our face, but also not? It feels like watching one of those 1000 pieces puzzles. I know that they all form a cohesive picture, one that he loves to hint at all the time (he really needs some friends to talk to), but I also find it quite difficult to form that picture. Maybe I will make a list of all of the dramatic prejecting his issues on others he does to find it easier.
Mahito cried about Kashimo! I an way too emotionally invested in that interaction, but it was so cute!✨️
Sukuna's high emotional intelligence combined with 0 social skills is so fun to witness. Like, unlike Kenjaku's mysterious ass he is here infodumping about his trauma for free all the tine. King of never shutting up and never keeping things private.
"Water is best as ice" I see you, Sukuna, I see you—
Gojo really did not sign up for getting emotionally damaged by some theatre kid with 1000+ years worth of trauma.
Surprisingly, Sukuna seems genuinely offended. “I am not,” he shoots back. “Anyone who thinks gender correlates to strength deserves to be eaten alive by the gender they think is the weakest.” Progressive king!✨️
Gojo and Suguru are so cute this chapter.💖 Suguru really got a lot of character development (even if he had to lose an arm for it) and I am so happy for him!✨️
Tsumiki is getting a character arc! 🎉
Her argument with Megumi was sad, but also somewhat necessary for her? Like, it's good that she finally expressed her feelings, she needs to do that from time to time, even if yelling at Megumi wasn't realky the best way (even if Megumi was acting a bit like a jerk). At the same time, poor Megumi. He is really going through it right now. Also poor Gojo, it's clear that Sukuna's words affected him.
I'll write more, but I really need to go to sleep. Happy 2 years of writing TPG! 🎊 This fic is honestly one of the best I have ever read!💖
ooh i'm so happy you liked the chapter!! both scenes were really fun to write.
omg you're so right, kenjaku really is a sore loser. deserved. i fucking snorted at "his plans got foiled by the wettest saddest guy in history." so true, getou really fucked everything up for him through depression and character development. GOOD FOR HIM. "same flop era with the same flop goals" i dfghjkl. as for your theory on yuki vs choso...hm...interesting...
you described pfpk SO well, "two stray cats that should only be adopted together." real and accurate. they're so attached, they're like cats who constantly fight but meow like crazy if they're separated (my sister's cat is visiting for the summer, and that's how he is with my cat....) rip the pedestrian, and anyone who saw a car driving itself
i love mahito too! i wanted to give him interesting motives for going along with kjk's plans, since we never really found out in canon. i don't think he bought into the whole curses replacing humans thing, so why did he stay? i think him wanting to watch and study humanity as kenjaku tries to dismantle it fits with his personality.
their emotional convo was fun to write, especially their allusions to sukuna. that's exactly what i'm going for: all the puzzle pieces for sukuna's backstory are there, but missing a few key pieces for it all to make sense. slowly, we'll put things together, but not before making things way more confusing first
SUKUNAAAA MY OVERSHARING BELOVED we stan one zero social skills king. he's so vague but so expressive, and it's so funny and paradoxical of him. he never shuts up, but what he says never has substance.
"Gojo really did not sign up for getting emotionally damaged by some theatre kid with 1000+ years worth of trauma" PLEASE YOU'RE REALLY POPPING OFF WITH THIS MESSAGE gojo did get hit hard by sukuna's scarily accurate depictions of what it's like to be The Strongest. gojo is unsettled by sukuna, but the opposite is also true, which will only worsen as sukuna and gojo learn more about each other.
yeahhh tsumiki!! she deserves a character arc of her own, dammit. i'm so excited to write it! her argument with megumi was so gutting, but she needed to get her feelings out in the open so they can both begin to process and heal. but uh, not before some trauma first.
thank you so much for your kind words and for all your support!!! <333
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caps-clever-girl · 1 year
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Okay I'm going slightly wild because I think I know your opinions on the mainstream ships - don't feel the need to do all of these 😆
Robin/Thomas
Kitty/Mary/Annie
Julian/Fanny
Robin/Cap
Cap/Mike
I ABSOLUTELY answered all of these and you did actually include one of my fave rarepairs in this jkjshdfkj THANK YOU!!!!!! Ship game here!
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Fell in love with this pairing in the peach milk fic, i CANNOT EXPAIN this??? But i just lve how soft robin can be and i think thomas would do well with that. Also having someone who’s a bit more blase about monogamy could help thomas calm down a bit with how obsessive he is (or it could of course backfire and make him sad :c ) also i feel robins pranking/little shit-ness could go well with toms dramatics IF he let himself.
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This one was DIFFICULT. I love burnt bread ok annie/mary is absolute soulmate shit. Its funny bc at the start of ghosts i did think kitty/mary was very cute, but between a growing fondness for kitmas and my LOVE for annie/mary i lost interest. I personally perfer this trio as annie/mary and their bestie kitty? But i do think the potential is cute as fuck and i an happy to be convinced of an ot3!!!!!!
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I FUCKING LOVE JULIAN FANNY AND I WANT THEM TO BANG. I WANT THEM TO BANG A LOT. I WANT FANNY TO FINALLY SHOW HER TRUE HORNY COLOURS AND I WANT IT TO BE WITH JULIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously i fucking love these two as an item, they were giving VIBES in s4 and i want those vibes to continue in s5 DESPERATELY. I think they get on so well when they arent insulting eachother (and when they are) like they’re both smart and can go toe to toe with eachother. And fanny is soooo repressed, i think she should unleash that and finally be her horny self and who better to do that with than julian? Yes he’s an ass but there is a chance he actually knows his stuff. Repressed posh horndog x huge manslut <3. The concept of these two send me so bonkers. I dont think its romantic, though i would not be opposed to seeing that develop, but i do think they would become besties with nasty benefits. Enemies to lovers, to Frenemies to lovers, to besties to lovers.
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CAP AND ROBIN CAP AND ROBIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THEM I LOVE THEM I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!! 100% a case of have 2 fave characters? Ship them! Its a shame bc they have SUCH little interraction in canon :( i cry about that every day. But i think they would work and actually work WELL. Robin not only lets cap infodump about weaponry but he’s interested in it!! And again, robin is a little shit but he is also a soft bitch. He would be patient with cap, but in particular because sexuality doesnt really bother him?? (Twas simply not really a concept in is day) he has like…. idk how to explain it but like he has no kid gloves around cap navigating himself. He just says it how it is. He doesnt go overboard with encouragement or praises but its clear that he cares and that he understands its hard for cap?? Yeah?? And cap would appreciate that. Cap can go at whatever pace he wants, talk as much or as little abt it as he wants and robin wouldnt pester him, but would be VERY helpful if cap did need it. PLUS!!! They are nature boys. Tell me they would not spend HOURS out on the grounds looking at birds. Robin would show cap his mouse family and cap would LOVE it, and in turn he would show Robin the ants and robin would be intrigued by the fact insects can be organised and have jobs. Robin would teach him about the animals from his time and cap would be so interested. They would absolutely watch nature docs together. And robin would watch weaponry docs with him (not neccesarily war docs themselves). They would both spend hours watching How Its Made vids. God i love them. So so much.
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Ok my opinion on cap/mike. I do love the concept of this, but i do believe its one sided? Its hard to imagine mike falling for a ghost in general bc he cant see or interract with them in any way (hence i dont mind robin/julian/mike bc they kind of can have a bit of a chat and a joke). HOWEVER cap is canonically attracted to mike at the start of the series so hell yeah if that continued and developed that would be so good. The consequences of him being in love with mike would be excellent at any stage - pre-realisation of his sexuality would be incredible to watch, and it would maybe help him realise. It would be interesting to compare an infatuation with mike to one with havers and see the differences, esp if mike was mid/post realisation. I do think mike would be good mates tho. Just a vibe i have. I would love to see them interract so much. ALSO!!!!! I think the paralell of cap and fanny both having a thing for mike would be SO FUCKING FUNNY. Both of them sat bitching about it like “why me” “why me? Why HIM?” And “he lifted that box of silverware the other day and i fell through a wall.”
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craw-dacious · 10 months
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Review of made weak by time and fate, but strong in will by dialux
Summary: I really really enjoyed this fic, the characterizations made me actually like the characters like A LOT. Some characters were underdeveloped, but thats alright because it’s such a lily/James focused fic. Ending was good but a little unfulfilling. I do think some of the dramatics and action became more confusing than true plot devices, but it would have gotten very very long with full transitional throughout the book. Criticisms aside, incredibly well written, amazing prose, and truly beautiful symbolism. I read this in about 24 hours.
SPOILERS BELOW BEWARE
Chapter by chapter review, from someone brand spanking new to marauders fics (not harry potter)
Chapter one
Wait why is lily calling him Jimmy is that a thing
This chapter is long asf
I need to read up on how magic works, I know Lily is a super good witch but this seems unrealistic even for her
But also the hurt comfort is going to go crazy I already know
Just leaving your baby and almost dead husband alone in the woods is wild
I sincerely hope Snape still sucks complete ass, I hate him and his little monologue does nothing to help
NO WAND BRUHHHH
Overall: I am currently crying. That poor girls mom is dead. Am I confused about pacing? Yes. Am I cringing at the little “I am Thanatos” line to end it? Yes. But, overall the vibes are fantastic and I’m loving it.
Chapter Two
OMG lightning scar!!1
Thor as a wizard is funny bc im imagining like the marvel actor with a big fat wand
Literally how did they forget about Sirius bruh
Calling him Jimmy is getting on my nervesss like I guess its cute but it just does not fit his vibe
Why am I crying again
“Courage dear heart” my mommy captioned an insta pic of me chopping my hair off with that when i was like 9
Recap: the lightning is throwing me big time, like im so confused by what it means. Seems very symbolic and shit but also cool as fuck for James
Im excited for Sirius to be involved
Chapter 3
Crying again bruh Sirius never found out abt regulus in canon so sad
Recap is just that the fic is fire, I like all the dynamics other than thinking remus is a little underdeveloped and I dont understand the earth magic stuff. Excited to see baby harry again
Chapter 4
Crying AGAIN this regulus bullshit is so sad
Wtf are remus and James up to bruh
Lily is so convincing like she’s a genius
I really want to understand lily more as a character. Had a dream we were friends during my sick nap today and she was just Gracie and I called her a mudblood :/
This ritual magic shit is cool as fuck, im sure its not as prevalent in other marauders fic but its slaying
Remus and Sirius being so gay but not enough brother
Recap:
Huge plot shit,, how could this possibly get wackier sillier love it. (I know it’s like scary I just like the creativeness a lot) worried about Narcissa and craving some redemption/mention of Draco bc Im me. Need to see harry. Need to see harry baby harry
Chapter 5
THEY’D SAY HARRY DID IT I FORGOT IT WAS HER MAGIC THAT KILLED VOLDY
Threatening to raise Malfoy as not racist and it working is insane
James is actually so dumb racism is always bruh
But Severus is stupider how does he think his poetic shit is going down in Lily’s head??
HOW DID SIRIUS NOT DIE
HOW DID NO ONE DIE
No baby harry is criminal. Like actually criminal. Im losing it.
RECAP FULL:
I really really enjoyed this fic, the characterizations made me actually like the characters like A LOT. Still feel like Remus was underdeveloped, but thats alright because it’s such a lily/James focused fic. I do wish we’d had some sort of epilogue, I want baby Harry so badly. I do think some of the dramatics and action became more confusing than true plot devices, but it would have gotten very very long with full transitional throughout the book. Also Lily definitely told Petunia shed leave Harry for a couple days and then was gone for weeks. Like its insane.
Numerical: 8.2/10, lost one full point for "Jimmy"
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