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[allthingswhumpyandangsty]

please please please please reblog if you’re a writer and have at some point felt like your writing is getting worse. I need to know if I’m the only one who’s struggling with these thoughts

[the-bar-sinister]

First whumper uses physical violence to train whumpee. Pain is the great teacher.

When whumpee has been trained to respond to pain, then the actual violence isn't needed. Then all whumper needs is the threat of violence, and whumpee responds.

When whumpee has been trained to respond to the threat of violence, then whumper doesn't need to threaten anymore.

After that, whumper trains whumpee to the implication of violence.

The subtle cues. No one but whumpee would even know that whumper was making a threat.

Even a gentle smile can be an implicit threat.

And whumpee responds.

Whumpee has been taught.

Later-- much later-- caretaker has to work to understand why some of their innocent actions and gestures make recovering whumpee flinch, and jump.

[kjwriting]

Caretaker finds whumpee locked in their cell.

Whumpee calls out to them weakly from the dirty floor.

Caretaker pries open the door and drops to their knees, eyes darting all over whumper’s body in concern.

Whumpee says they need to get out of there quickly.

Suddenly caretaker’s face changes.

An amused, sadistic grin creeps onto their face.

They were working with Whumper all along.

And they’re only just getting started…

[generic-whumperz]

If they didn’t want to get napped, maybe they shouldn’t look so whumpable 🤷

[whumpy-wyrms]

i dunno what possessed me to draw this

[saffitaffi]

Uhhh so I’ve had this thought bumping around my brains for a while but it doesn’t fit any of my characters so I give it to the wider community instead

Whumper who ties, chains, or holds whumpees hands into a position so they can slip into the space in between

(Works well with creepy/intimate, delusional, even parental whumpees)

Some helpful diagrams

Feel free to trace, use as base, reference, etc.

[kabie-whump]

WoW Birthday Whump Day 6

Prompt: Nonhuman whumpee / Reluctant whumper / “Run!” Additional content: werewolf whumpee, self-mutilation mentions, werewolf transformation whump

“There’s another way. There has to be.”

Whumpee just sighs, glaring up at Whumper. “We’ve been over it a million times. This is our only safe option.”

“Safe for me. What about you?”

“I’ll…” Whumpee trails off, biting the inside of their cheek. “I’ll be okay. It’s more important to me that you’re safe.”

“I just don’t think I can handle knowing you’re hurting and not helping you.”

“Then just forget about me. Please.”

Whumper kneels in front of Whumpee, cupping their cheek. Whumpee is fully immobalized, their limbs wrapped in chains. It’s hard to see their face in the orange glow from the single lantern that lights the otherwise empty celler. Whumpee had said it would be the safest place for this to go down.

Their transformation.

It happens once a year, apparently. Whumper didn’t know they were a werewolf yet when the previous one came around. Whumpee had just disappeared for a week and returned covered in nasty clawmarks. 

“I was visiting my grandparents out of town,” they had said, waving off Whumper’s concern. “They have mean cats.”

Cat scratches the width of my finger. Sure. Totally believable. 

“You know I can’t do that,” Whumper mutters, checking over the chains one more time. They should hold Whumpee there at least until the transformation is over. That’s the worst part, apparently. It’s incredibly painful, and Whumpee explained that they usually end up clawing at their own skin on accident, just trying to hurry things along.

They theorize that if they can just hold still and let the transformation run its course over the 24 hours its supposed to take, they’ll be able to save themselves from most of the scarring. After that, they’ll be able to break free from the chains but they won’t make it out of the celler through multiple sets of reinforced doors. 

Whumper glances to the opposite wall, where there’s a sizable trough of water set up and a cooler full of raw meat. It’s not quite enough to feed a rabid beast for an entire week, but they won’t starve.

“I’ll take you out to eat when it’s over,” Whumper promises, brushing Whumpee’s hair out of their face one last time. “Wherever you want. Your pick. I’ll even pay.”

Whumpee forces a smile. “You’re too good to me. Thank you for… for not letting me do this on my own this time. It means a lot to me.”

“I just wish you’d told me sooner.”

“Yeah. Me too.”

Then their eyes squeeze closed involuntarily and they gasp, their body going tense. “Leave!” They choke out.

Whumper stands but doesn’t move away any further. “Are you sure I can’t just stay for the beginning? I could comfort you-”

“Get out of here, Whumper! Run!” They let out a broken scream, writhing in the chains.

Blinking back tears, Whumper runs for the door.

[whumping-valentine]

Content: Captivity, conditioned whumpee

I wrote this like a year ago back when I first found out about whump and was experimenting with dynamics. Thought I'd make some edits and post it because why not.

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Whumpee was sat in the grass, smiling as the warmth engulfed them. Cool wind was blowing through the leaves of the trees and the strands of their hair, light rain falling against their face like tiny kisses. Birds were singing, chirping and chattering all around as they searched for worms to feed their young. The outside world was so free and open, and Whumpee was grateful to even get a gaze upon it, let alone sit among it.

They looked up at Whumper with wide, grateful eyes, "Thank you for taking me outside." They said sincerely.

"Well, you've been good, haven't you?"

Whumpee wasn't sure what the right response was, "I am not sure, have I?"

"You tell me, what do you think?" Whumper said, crossing their arms as they did a small roll of their eyes, "Why else would you be outside? Yes, of course you've been good."

"Oh— I'm sorry, I didn't—"

"Yeah, yeah. Just because you're apparently stupid doesn't mean you're bad. Enjoy this privilege."

"I will, I'll enjoy it."

"Good for you." They said, uncaring. "I'm going to run inside real quick, and you're going to stay right here until I get back, okay?"

"Yes Sir/Ma'am." (???)

"Good."

As they walked away they turned their head and continued smiling, feeling grateful for the opportunity to be outside. Though now left alone, a terrible realization struck. The smile vanished from their face as they sunk their nails into the dirt.

What am I thinking?! Being outside is a privilege? It's not a privilege! I should be allowed go outside whenever I want! And explore the woods alone! And make my own food, in my own kitchen, whenever I want! Those aren't privileges!

A hit had been taking to their pride as they realized how conditioned they became. It had happened so slowly they couldn't even see what was happening right in front of them. They were blind to it.

All of this niceness isn't because Whumper actually likes or cares for them, it's just so they'll be good and obedient and not cause them any trouble! It's manipulation! How could they be so stupid?! So conditioned?! They were smarter than this, smarter than to fall for manipulation, and yet they still did.

This monster had them doing all these things just to have the privilege to what, eat? Go outside? Not be tortured?!

If they had any sense of dignity left, they would stand up and take off right now. They were alone, they were outside, they were... not free.

It didn't matter if Whumper gave them a key to the outside world and a map to get home. It didn't matter if they opened the door and let them go. Hell, if they told them to go. It didn't even matter if they dropped them off right back in their old bedroom, because they'd still come crawling back to Whumper.

Physical freedom means nothing if your mind is held under lock and key.

And it's just what Whumper wanted.

They've got them.

"Look at you." Whumper cooed as they returned, "Still here. I knew you were too good to run off. I'm so proud of you."

Whumpee felt defeated, and Whumper could see it in their eyes, which just made their next words all the more satisfying to hear

"Why would I go... when I have everything I need right here?"

[rabbitdrabbles]

whumperflies are such an interesting phenomenon like wdym I get a tingly feeling in my stomach from seeing fictional characters getting beat up and disemboweled and bleeding out and dying

[aceofwhump]

If life could calm down again so I can come back to whumplr that would be super 😭😭 I haven't had time to make a gif in like 2 months or even check out the tags! I have so many messages to answer. And I have things I wanna talk about!

I miss you guys! I hope everyone is doing well!! I hope you've all found some great whump!

[whumper-whimsy]

content: suicide

"There will be rest, and sure stars shining

Over the roof-tops crowned with snow

A reign of rest, serene forgetting

The music of stillness,

holy and low..."

- The Music of Stillness, Elaine Hagenburg

Whumpee was on the floor, bleeding out. The gash in their side was spilling blood on the floor, staining the dingy concrete.

Whumper would find them hours later, lying in a pool of their own blood. They would be furious, but they would have no life to take it out on. Not anymore.

Whumpee had been through too much in this basement— years had passed by now. Whumpee couldn't take it.

So when Whumpee found one of Whumper's tools left on the floor, they took the chance.

Now, they looked out that tiny window high on the wall, at the stars shining above them. They knew now that they could finally rest.

[allthingswhumpyandangsty]

caretaker and whumpee are archenemies — the complication of their relationship involves long history of kinship, betrayal and unresolved sexual tension — when whumpee is injured, caretaker is surprised when they learn they can’t let whumpee die, for some unknown reason, even if whumpee is their enemy.

so caretaker ends up saving whumpee’s life and taking care of whumpee.

this is the part where both caretaker and whumpee have to face their own feelings, which they have for each other, that have been kept secrets for so long.

read a fic with this trope here.

[i-eat-worlds]

Hey does anyone here have any writing that involves caretaker unmuzzling whumpee? Perhaps with some caretaker new whumper thrown in? I’m in a mood

[whump-mania]

Dialogue Lines: Whumpee/Whumper/Caretaker Variations

(TWs: torture, cursing, collars, implied murder, drugging, nightmares)

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Whumpee

Classic Whumpee Lines

1. “Touch me and it’s fucking over for you.”

2. “Please, please, I-I didn’t mean to—I didn’t mean to mess up, please don’t hurt me!”

3. “What’s the point of trying? I’m never getting out of here.”

4. “I-It hurts…it h-hurts so bad…why won’t it g-go away…?”

5. “Keep me chained up here all you want. You’re never gonna hear shit from me, buddy.”

~

Whumpee turned Caretaker

1. “Hey, I know, I know how much it hurts. Just breathe. Think of something else. That’s what helped me.”

2. “They got you too? That bastard. I’m so sorry.”

3. “Yes, I do! I do fucking understand, because I lived it! Now let me help you!”

4. “I didn’t get someone to help me through this when I was there. I want to be that person for you.”

5. “You remind me of myself…back then. Before they broke me.”

~

Whumpee turned Whumper

1. “Payback, bitch.”

2. “No. You don’t get to complain. Don’t you remember the rules against speaking out?”

3. “This collar…oh yeah, you remember it, huh? You always liked it on the tightest setting, didn’t you? Let’s start with that.”

4. “Back then, before you, I always thought every person deserved mercy. But no. You’re not even a person.”

5. “Wait, you’re crying? Come on, Whumper, are you kidding?! It took you weeks to make me cry for the first time, and you’re giving up on the first day?”

~~~

Caretaker

Classic Caretaker Lines

1. “This is gonna hurt. It’ll be over soon.”

2. “You think a little nightmare’s gonna hurt you? Nah. I’m here now. I’ll fight it off.”

3. “Just let them down for a second—Let me at least give them some water, it’s been almost two days!”

4. “I don’t know how you were even able to go through something like that…you’re stronger than I’ll ever be.”

5. “Come on, get up. Fresh bandage time—no, I don’t have to clean them today. That’s tomorrow.”

~

Caretaker turned Whumpee

1. “How…h-how did Whumpee do this?”

2. “Anything. I’ll be anything you fucking want me to be—just let them go.”

3. “Sorry, friend, I’m not gonna break as easily as they did. Bummer.”

4. “Wait, y-you didn’t…you didn’t tell me you did this to them…no, k-keep that away from me!”

5. “Whumpee, when they hurt me, just look away. Please.”

~

Caretaker turned Whumper

1. “Who else could have slipped those drugs into your food? Come on now, think a little quicker than that, Whumpee.”

2. “It feels kinda wrong, but…when you’d have nightmares, I…I kinda liked to listen.”

3. “I’m sick of taking care of everyone all the damn time. Well, guess what? Now you have no one.”

4. “Yeah, I’ve got them where you want them. They think they’re safe, but they won’t know what hit them.”

5. “Crazy how I used to patch these scars up…now, I get to make more.”

~~~

Whumper

Classic Whumper Lines

1. “Good morning. Come on, get up. I have so much planned for you today.”

2. “You’re so cute when you try to fight back. It’s like you’re not even trying.”

3. “Aw, you had a nightmare? Was it about me? I hope it was about me.”

4. “Don’t try and be a fucking actor. You and I both know you’re terrified.”

5. “Found you.”

~

Whumper turned Whumpee

1. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry for what I did, just…p-please, have mercy…”

2. “That all you’ve got? I used to hit you three times as hard.”

3. “No. I’m not apologizing. No matter how much you torture me. I regret nothing.”

4. “H-Hey, come on, we can be friends, right? You know I didn’t really mean all those things…h-hey, wait, get away from me!”

5. “No…maybe I deserve this. Maybe this is what I’m getting in return for all the things I did to you.”

~

Whumper turned Caretaker

1. “Hey, it’s okay, it’s just me! …Oh.”

2. “The nightmare…it was about me, wasn’t it?”

3. “I know you can’t ever forgive me…but let me at least do this one thing for you.”

4. “Okay, okay, yes, I did make that scar, but I’m the only one who knows how to make it better, so would you stop moving?!”

5. “Fuck, I’m sorry…I’m so sorry…”

[whumped-by-glitter]

I have a challenge for everyone who sees this!

Let's all spread some positive vibes this week:

If you're reading this and have the spoons, I challenge you to send at least 1, preferably more, positive anonymous asks a day to others. You never know who might be struggling and just need to hear something encouraging.

It doesn't need to be elaborate, just a simple "you rock" or "I love your work." Let's let each other know someone is thinking of them!

Let's have fun with this! 😊

[serickswrites]

Caught

Warnings: threat of torture, restraint, captivity

Whumpee swore as the snare they stepped in, the snare that was so expertly hidden, pulled tight and had them sailing into the air. This was not good. This was not what they needed right now.

Somehow Whumpee had become separated from Caretaker and the others. Somehow in their desperate hunt for Whumper, Whumpee had wandered off. Somehow Whumpee had let their guard down. And now they were caught in a trap.

Whumpee hung by their ankle in the air. They tried to reach up to free their ankle, but they couldn't. They continued to swing as they tried. They had to get free.

"That was far too easy," Whumper's low voice called as they stepped into the clear. "You are so predictable, Whumpee."

Whumpee froze, like a caught rabbit, desperate to cease existing so that they might be free. It took Whumpee's two swallows before they could speak. "You don't have to do this. Please. I won't tell Caretaker and the others."

Whumper cocked their head. "Others?"

Whumpee's heart thundered in their chest as they realized Whumper thought that they were out here alone. "I...I...I mean Caretaker."

Whumper shook their head. "Don't lie, Whumpee. I've caught you. It wouldn't do well to keep lying. How many others are there?"

Whumpee closed their eyes as they took a steadying breath. Caretaker and the others would find them. Caretaker and the others would track them. Caretaker and the others would save them. "Four."

Whumper nodded. "Well, then I better work quickly."

Quickly? "What are you going to do to me?"

Whumper grinned wickedly. "Anything that I want to, Whumpee. Anything that I want to."