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more looning, I might be easier on the excerpts from here on out? but ANYWAY. Loon really just is a story about a girl finding out other girls exist only at the age of 19, what a travesty
Taglist: @dearunreliablenarrator @transthadymacdermot @words-after-midnight @tragedycoded @llesbianwrites
@sunmerry-writes (ask to +/-!)
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âHave you ever just sat amongst nature and tuned into all the signs and sounds around you?â
-d.n
#spilled thoughts#personal#spilled ink#mine#spilled words#love#words#nature#excerpt from a book i'll never write#explore#exceprts#enlightenment#spirituality#stream of conscious writing#collective consciousness#writing#writers on tumblr#excerpts from a book i'll never write#writeblr#writers and poets#writerscommunity#female writers#writer things#writer problems#stay tuned#open minded#gift of writing#poetry#free write#free wrting
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THIS JUNE
[wip introduction]
(originally known as the project Nothing in Particular and Everything)
start date: february 2021
stage: 4th draft
pov: first person, past tense
tags: #nip: inspo, #nothing in particular and everything, #this june, #this june inspo
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Story
Ray's friends are finally back home from college. But in the seaside town where they grew up, everything has changed. Madison is always distracted by work and her controlling parents. She's dating Oliver. Oliver doesn't know what he wants to do with his life anymore, but he knows he can't stay in Point Blink. Lonan has made a new home for himself in the city with his boyfriend, so nobody is quite sure what he plans to do next.
June in Point Blink isn't turning out as perfect as Ray planned.
Judith just moved to Point Blink.
A somewhat disastrous pair, Ray and Judith fall victim to an act of arson on a mysterious landmark in the woods. Whilst the girls uncover the identity of the arsonist on a dusty old camera, they develop a strong bond with one another and a connection to their mental health neither of them had before. However, as Ray gets closer to saving herself, she digs up damaging truths about her closest friends that threaten to tear the five of them - and Point Blink - apart.
Characters
Ray â 20, a somewhat optimistic college student who misses her friends but will do anything to keep them together. spends most of her time in alone her bedroom or in the woods with a camera.
Judith â 19, the energetic new girl in town with an enigmatic background and a savior complex. used to live with her brother but decidedly does not anymore.
Lonan â 20, Rayâs best friend who loves his friends dearly but struggles to put himself and his art first. struggling to live with past decisions while navigating a new relationship.
Madison â 20, hates the idea of college and is very set in her ways, which can be detrimental to her friendships. works at a local coffeehouse.
Oliver â 19, the last person to join the friend group; the first person to leave. known for his boastful grades and sour humor.
#this june#so yayay!! here is my new book!!!!#i love my book i hope you do too :)#as you can probably tell the story is pretty much the same except the characters have aged up a few years and are in college#im exploring the exact same themes in a more mature setting#also !! i am a second year college student now as well!!!!!#the struggle is real and i need a place to put everything if we're being honest haha#so i think this book is gonna do that for me <3#technically i didnt finish draft three but i did get close before getting SICK of writing it#sorry if there are typos in here i just really wanted to post this today ;-;#i dont have many exceprts yet but i am about 8k words into this draft so i suppose i shall have something soon!!#my writing#creative writing#original story#writeblr
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Find the Word
Thank you @gummybugg for the tag! Find their post here.
I'll be tagging (with no pressure) @lyra-brie, @karangarin, @jay-avian, @wrenofthewords, and from the strangers list, @chainsaw-raven, @lexiklecksi, and @skyfireflight-writes for the words eat, water, fun, pop, create, and thank.
My words are mean, close, lead, minute, lie, and object.
From The Curse of New Royston:
mean
âDo you think thereâd be a way to convince them to let me stay?â Cricket asks, peering down at Monty. âGosh, I dunno,â Monty murmurs. âI donât think there is. I mean, maybeâŚyou could just ask them to stay at the same high school you started at? Going to a new school can be scary. Especially if it looks like what it does in the movies, with all those bullies and mean teachers and stuff.â âIâm pretty sure it doesnât look like that,â Cricket sighs. âBut itâd still beâŚI meanâŚit would be scary. It is scary. But they went through so much worse, moving here before I was born, then having to leaveâŚâ
close
Though Cricket wants nothing more than to turn around, go home, and cry, he follows Auster as they move out into the hallway. Each student passes with a small breeze and their thrumming footsteps shake the groundânone as violent as the shoe crashing down right in front of him, but it still sets Cricketâs heart pounding. Auster holds an arm out to stop Cricket just as someone much bigger passes by, their leg swinging in front of the two. What with how visible Auster isâcrimson hair against olive skin and bright blue denimâthey shouldâve easily been able to see him! Cricket takes a shaky breath, a tear slipping down his cheek. With no comment, Auster continues, Cricket close behind.
lead
Heart pounding, Gio shakes his head, stepping back and taking Fletcherâs arm to lead out of the room. âI donât know. I donât recognize him. I saw him once before, at the school, so I donât know what heâs doing here!â âDo you think he broke in?â âI donât know.â Gio takes a shuddering breath. âI donât even know if heâs real.â âDo you think itâs a symptom from the oxygen deprivation?â âI donâtâI donâtââ A wave of dizziness washes over Gio, the world in front of him swaying. He clutches Fletcherâs arm tightly, stumbling toward his friend in an attempt to lean on him âWoah!â Fletcher mutters, turning to help support Gioâs weight. He gathers Gio in his arms to keep him standing.
minute
How is it even possible to tell whatâs good? How is it even possible to be a good person? As the sermon wraps up, as they stand and line up to get their wafers, Gio finds himself glancing up at that cross that Cameron had been fixating on before. How massive it isâbigger than anyone here. Certainly much larger than the one Jesus was crucified on, if that storyâs even true. Jesus was a traveler, right? Assuming the Mormons are right, and Jesus did visit America, and on the minute chance that he ever visited this one tiny little region of Connecticut, he wouldâve been small, wouldnât he? Much smaller than even the smallest of Port Forver, who can at least count homeownership toward their worthâGio assumes. Jesus wouldâve been so small, no one wouldâve been able to hear his words. Heck, they might not have been able to even see him. If Jesus hadnât owned anything, then Gio doesnât even know what wouldâve happened to him.
lie
Gioâs mother clasps her arm over Gioâs shoulder, nails digging in, and pulls him close. She pauses for a moment, glances down at his tie, and quickly seizes it to pull the knot tighter, collaring Gio again. âWhy donât you two invite Unity?â she asks, gesturing toward the Abbotts. âItâs been so long since the three of you had a playdate! Iâm sure sheâs dying to catch up with you!â Like lightning, Gioâs options flash through his mind. Inviting Unity is out of the question; if she actually said yes, well, thatâd be his own personal Hell. And thereâs always the chance she could say yes! But if he refused to invite her, his mother would probably interrogate him why over dinner, and may ultimately bar him from seeing Fletcher afterwards. And how would he answer the questions she would have? If he brought up their falling out again, heâd be setting a horrible example by not forgiving as God has forgiven humanity, and by not doing enough to prove himself a good friend to Unity. Heâs a Violettâhe has to be the best moral example of any teen in the Grove. But he couldnât just lie to his momâwhat other reason could be possibly give forâ âUnity!â Fletcher calls. âYou wanna hang out with us after dinner?!â
object
When theyâve almost reached the front doors, Fletcher grabs Gio by the arm. âDude, watch out!â he shouts, pulling him, but itâs too late a warning. Something slams into Gioâs foot and he watches, horrified, as a small body no larger than his index finger vaults in front of him and skids a couple feet. Tapping the object on his footâa bike, it seemsâaside, Gio kneels down, the shadows of his friends melding together as they lean over him to see. Itâs Cricket, wearing the same brown coat he had been wearing a couple days ago. The tiny figure sits up slowly, lifting one hand to steady his head. He looks up at Gio, blinking and shaking his head to find his bearings.
#find the word#tag games#writeblr games#wip: tconr#original fiction#ty for the tag!#these might be a bit long for exceprts but i wanna give as much context as i can and also i like sharing#two of these are from the gio church chapter lol#in case u forgot that tconr takes place in the primary world. the gio church chapter is here to remind u
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Word find tag
Words from @winterandwords: move, walk, run and fall :D :D :D
move
Callie POV
This was what sheâd been waiting for. A two-for-one deal if sheâd ever seen one: both of them bursting at the seams with completely opposite, sizzling, gorgeous abilities.
There was Bennett - the Perception one, a telepath. The one who could read and control minds, except - deliciously - not hers. All charged up with power and too scared to use it, that one. She was gonna have to break him of that.
The prospect thrilled her. Sheâd do it slowly, take her time.
But then there was Peter, the Matter one. The boy who could move mountains.
She didnât have an urge to call that one by his surname. She wasnât sure why. He was, quite distinctly, just Peter.
walk
Simon POV (showing up to Downing Bay after Callieâs destroyed it lol)
The cluster of metal buildings hovered threateningly on the horizon, and as they got closer, minds inside got louder, almost drowning Callie out. He wanted to tell them to turn around and take him back; the claustrophobia was overwhelming, the collective sense of being trapped.
The boat brought them underneath the smallest building; a scorched sign read Diagnostics in block letters with an arrow pointing up. What mightâve once been a loading dock was sectioned off with caution tape and hanging sadly down into the water, barely still attached to the rest of the infrastructure. They laid a make-shift bridge between the boat and platform to walk across.
run
Simon POV
âHow could someone get in here?â Ken said, through clenched teeth, as Miller issued orders in proper military staccato. âThrough all our wards? Itâs⌠like they popped into existence underground, it doesnât make sense.â
Indeed, a map of every ward in the school was running through her head while she spoke, every sweep of detection magic, every measure against this; it should be air-tight.
That was only half the problem, though. âThe missing kid,â he said, âwhatâs their name?â
fall
Simon POV (another from the scene he and Callie first meet, because, gah - I always liked this scene but editing it for placement into the second draft was just a high point for me :D)
âYou think youâre really something, donât you?â
Her eyes lit up. âI know I am.â
He found himself smiling back at her. âDoes this usually work for you?â he asked. âYou fire off personal questions like an interrogation, act like youâre godâs gift, and people fall into your bed?â
âYouâd be surprised,â she smirked.
âSo would you,â he countered, âif you actually listened to somebody else for a minute or two.â
What had gotten into him? If anybody talked to him like that heâd get up and leave. Callie only cocked her head and watched him closer.
âIâm listening to you now, hot shot,â she said, a seemingly genuine smile spreading across her face. âSurprise me.â
He named the sensation with a tiny shock of recognition: fun. The thing he was worried about with everybody else didnât apply here. Callie Ray was obnoxious but she was also a free zone, and he was having fun.
Tagging @authorlaurawinter, @the-orangeauthor, @dontjudgemeimawriter, @drippingmoon, and @sleepy-night-child with the words same, different, still, and always :)
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ATQH Snippet Excerpt #1 -Â âMistakes Are Madeâ
This one is long, so itâs going under the cut...
[tw for implied neglect/emotional abuse, I guess??, and alcohol/drinking. Big one for that.]
"What the hell is this?" She asked, unable to hide the tremble in her voice.
"It's a bottle of wine." Kris said, grinning.
"Don't be a smart-alec," she said, angry now. "I don't mean the bottle, I mean this. You." Kris ignored her, idly tapping the glass in his hand. "I haven't seen you drink more than a glass since you got here, and now you go and down half a bottle? What in the Morrigan's name is going on?"
Kris looked up and smiled. "Nothing's going on, besides the usual. I'm being kept at a reasonable distance until I stop being useful. But the joke's on you. I'm useless. So do yourself a favor and just send me home already."
Fallon's eyes burned with tears. "I don't believe you really think that. Whatever, whoever is going on here, this isn't you." Her voice shook, tears forming in her eyes.
Kris laughed, loud and sharp. "Oh, so you think you know me better than all of Oryn? Than me family? This is me. The drunk, the extra, the useless waste of space. I guess you don't know me at all."
The bottle slipped out of Fallon's hand and it crashed to the ground, wine spilling from the open neck. The tears she had been holding back came now, spilling from her eyes as she stared at him, speechless. Oblivious, Kris tipped his head back and took a long drink.
Fallon felt a bolt of rage shoot through her, and she crossed the space between them in two quick steps. Before she even knew what she was doing, her hand reached out and snatched the glass from his hand, and threw it. Hard. "What the f-?" The rest of his word was covered by the sound of shattering glass as the cup hit the wall and shattered.
"What the hell was that?" Kris asked, eyes sharp with anger.
Fallon grabbed his wrist, and looked him in the eyes. Her own burned with tears and anger, but her voice was steady as she spoke. "Don't you dare say you aren't worthy of love. Don't you dare go wasting yourself like this. You are a good man, Kristopher Pelle, and you'd better damn well act like, or I swear to you, you will be going home." She dropped his wrist and walked away, leaving the Prince standing, speechless behind her.
#*#writeblr#my writing#wip: atqh#excerpts: atqh#atqh: Fallon#atqh: Kris#angst#this is one of my favorite scenes I've ever written even though it breaks my heart#alcohol tw#drinking tw#exceprts#write on queue
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Your Antagonistâs Backstory: Week One
Verginia - Introduction
Prompt: This is pretty much like the classic intro - a small scene on who they are and how they see themselves, potentially with a moodboard or some further description. - provided by @yourocsbackstoryâ
Age: 58 | Personality type: INFJ | Gender: Cis Woman | Sexuality: Heterosexual | Nationality: Half-Angusian, Half-Algonian | Current home city: Civitas, Angusian, Angusian Empire | Title: Empress Mother, Duchess | Appearance: Gray curly hair, olive skin, petite features, sunken brown eyes, bony skinny body, short
The following scene is 13 years prior the start of the story, when Verginia was 45. Thereâs some minor spoilery things.
CW: domestic abuse Word count: 398
Verginiaâs delicate hand rose and smacked loudly against skin. The emperorâs cheek glowed red. He touched his lips. They stained his fingers with bright red blood. His eyes shot at her and flared with rage.
âWho the damned you think you are, woman?â Drops of blood splattered through Maximusâ teeth on her dress.
Sharp pain throbbed on Verginiaâs palm and wrist. She hadnât ever thought she could find so much strength in her hand to cause another human to bleed. Her eyes rose from it to face Maximusâ raging glare. The purifying flames of her anger burned her from the inside. It was exhilarating. A cool and composed smile turned the corners of her lips upwards.
âWho do I think I am?â she asked. âI know I am Verginia the Third of house Emerentius. I know I am the rightful ruler of Angusian Empire. I -â
Maximus grabbed her wrist and shook her. âYouâre nothing!â
She made sure her pain wouldnât show in her face. Instead she stared deep into his eyes. â- know I am the daughter of the rightful heir. I am light. I am the Sun. And if you wonât take your hands off me, I will call upon the might of YlĂa and he will burn your hand off, cousin.â
Apparently her unwavering gaze had convinced him, since a flash of fear widened his eyes and he let go of her. âYou witch! I always knew there was something wrong with you!â
âI am not a witch.â Verginia raised her chin. She wasnât going to hide in the shadows anymore. It was her time to take her place in the sun. âIâm the Avatar, YlĂaâs hand placed on earth.â She opened the neckline of her gown to reveal her birthmark on the middle of her breastbone, shaped like a sun rune.
Maximus took a step back and shook his head slightly. His expression was confused between terror and rage, the truest expression of him. âHow..?â He shook his head again. It was fitting her so called husband hadnât noticed her Mark. âYou did that with your dark arts!â
âMy arts are only made of lightâ, she said, softly.
It was sealed. She would have to get rid of him. She had known that before revealing her true self. No. She had know that for a long time. Maybe from the day of his coronation. Maybe earlier. After all, it was her destiny.
#writing#writeblr#yourocsbackstory#am writing#my writing#my wip#fantasy#original writing#original fiction#your antagonist's backstory#antagonist#my ocs#original character#high fantasy#epic fantasy#exceprt#my excerpt#dark fantasy#farocm#fall and rise of cor mantgamia#farocm excerpt#farocm moodboard
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I feel everything at once then nothing at all. I feel nothing and everything, all at once. I am in a daze, always appalled from reality and how sickening it is. I look around but I canât feel a thing. My soul is numb from the continuous flow of time and tragedies of life; of mine and of others. Thereâs no escape from it, no running away, no hiding, no matter how hard you try itâll come back at you.
I feel lost. I feel hopeless. What is to happen to me. What is happening to me. What happened to me. The more important question is, how did I end up this way.
I can escape from the truth, from reality just for a little while but what do I do with myself? Where do I take this soul which longs for something kind for something real for something to replace the pain it bears. What do I do until I find solace. How do I find solace when I am claustrophobic from the inside. My inside, it too aches for an unknown longing; it aches for freedom; freedom from myself.
#spilled ink#aesthetic#prose#poem#poetry#poesia#reading#poets corner#writing#writeblr#writers on tumblr#exceprt#poets on tumblr
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Camp NaNoWriMo 2021 Excerpt - Day Nine
âAre you okay?â he asked quickly, pulling himself out from under her.
âYeâyeah,â she answered, shaking the impact from her frame. âOne of those flying bastards managed to peg me right in the stomach.â She pointed skyward, to the four or five sparrow sized drones flitting through the air lightning quick. One landed briefly on a power line, itâs artificial talons tearing the rubber before being knocked aside by a mass of glowing white swimming like a jellyfish through the air.
Taglist: Â @danger-writes @aphteavanawrites @mayawritesbooks @reignnyx @valiant-wielder (msg me to be added)
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last line tag
tagged by @thepeninthestone and @tqrmentedkisses, thanks!
She looked at the body in front of her, while she hold her sword with determination and anger. This was the person who stole her a different life from this one. Amara was angry, full of hate and sadness.
âStand up and fight meâ ordered to Imryll, firmly.
âWhy should I do that?â asked Imryll, pulling her head up, with blood in her mouth and wild eyes.
âIf you could take me away from my family, I assume that you can fight meâ Amara replied, heavy breathing and in pain. She was hurt too, but it didnât matter to her in this moment. Ashes were falling from the night sky, like the snow... But these ashes were from the burning houses, trees and places that the dragons set on fire.
âWhy you just donât kill me now?!â yelled Imryll, crawling on the floor, moving in such a miserable way that Amara felt disgust, even more, when she saw the Queen bleed as she was moving. âYou have all the power to bring the world down, and youâre wasting your energy on me? Itâs such a shame. I didnât trained you for this.â
âYouâre right. You trained me to kill, but Sage taught me to love, to be empathetic.â
âSage was so useful.â
Amara raised a hand and the Queen Imryll yelled and stirred on the floor, panting in pain.
âI will kill youâ swore Amara. âAnd you will never hurt anyone. No more.â
tagging (you donât have to do it if you donât want to) @jugularss, @herondalelucies, @zielenheil, @halohidings, @percvalx
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NANO UPDATE | DAY 01
TOTAL FOR THE DAY: 2,822 OVERALL WORD COUNT: 1, 701 (I didnât keep all my words, but Iâm still counting them as words written)
EXCERPT / FAVORITE LINE WRITTENÂ â´
Kit ran through a series of emotions, starting with confusion and ending up with anger. How the hell could Trixie feel so comfortable giving out her address to a complete fucking stranger, she thought as she stood from her stool and padded over to the phone.Â
She dialed Trixieâs number, thankful that she committed it to memory; she wanted to keep the rage fresh and raw. Kit took a long drag from her cigarette and allowed her fingers to tap against the handset.
#nano 2019#nanowrimo#writeblr#writing#exceprt#my writing#the first day was kind of hard#but i got in a roll there close to the end#wip: project heist
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tmq update [6/16/19]
todayâs word count: 1,998 total word count: 60,054
been a while since i posted one of these!! been very busy with worldbuilding june, lol, but today, i woke up and was just consumed with the need to do some writing.
so have the most recent section i wrote today!Â
âBut I didnât come here today to discuss your weakness.â Her gaze left Aishlynnâto settle on Alinora.
âI came to retrieve the key to my fatherâs dream.â She smiled, then, and it was a horrible, monstrous thing. âHello, Lady Mynerva.â
Alinora straightened her spine. She wanted her armor. She wished she had worn it instead of these foolish things. Presentability be damned. They should have predicted something like this. Kaiâos had let them go too far without retaliation. Of course he was simply waiting for the logical end.
âKaltain,â she said, voice flat.
Kaltainâs smile stretched into a grin. âAfter ten years⌠you finally return home. But itâs not quite home, is it?â She leaned forward, as if sharing a secret. Her voice lowered conspiratorially, though it was still clearly audible. âI can take you home, Lady Mynerva. To your castle. You could have one last look around, before this world ends. Wouldnât that be nice?â
âIâm not going anywhere with you.â
Kaltain hummed. âSee, you say that⌠but I think you will.â She waved a hand. Black shadows burst into existence, all around Nevaria. Even from this distance, Alinora could see their skeletal faces, the poison-green glow of their eyes.
Wraiths.
Among the weakest of beings from the Forgotten Realmsâbut that didnât say much. They were still perilously strong and very, very difficult to stop. Unless those arrows were tipped with moonsilver, their archers didnât stand a chance.
âFuck,â Talitha muttered.
âHow the hell is she summoning so many?â Lyr hissed.
âKaltain practices the forbidden,â Aishlynn murmured. âThey all do. Stealing mana for their own. This is a paltry demonstration of her power. She can do far, far worse.â
Kaltainâs grin remained unchanged. âWhat do you think now, Lady Mynerva?â
Alinora pursed her lips. If she jumped up there, she could cut Kaltainâs connection to the Forgotten Realmsâthen use the sword to stop her. For good. But that jump⌠could she make it? And could she actually withstand the amount of power that Kaltain was using to tap into the Forgotten Realms?
She couldnât waste her chance to stop Kaiâos.
It wasnât worth the risk. Not yet.
âIâll go with you,â she said.
âAlinora, you canât!â Rivana said. âWe just got you back!â
âAnd if I donât, we lose Nevaria, and everyone inside.â
âYou donât know that. We could fight back.â
Alinora shook her head. âIt isnât worth the risk.â
âLeave your weapons behind,â Kaltain said. âThe bird, too. Then climb on the balustrade.â
Alinora began unstrapping her weapons, and as she did, she began to speak in a low voice. âElaena. I need to keep Weaverâs Bane. Can you cast⌠I donât know. A combination shrinking and illusion spell?â
Yes.
Elaenaâs voice slid through her mind in a way that almost made her shudderâbut she held the motion back.
âGood,â she said. âI donât care what you do, but I need you to do it.â
Weaverâs Bane will join Lieraâs ring on your necklace. When you have need of it, double tap it. It will resume itâs original form. While itâs in charm form, it will stay with you. But once you undo the spell, thatâs it. The sword will return to Talitha in 12 hoursâand it will not go back.
Alinora nodded. âThat will do.â She removed Weaverâs Bane, holding it alongside a dagger. She felt the illusion spring to life around it, as Bane disappeared from her hand.
Talitha took the dagger from her fingers. Good luck, she mouthed.
Alinora quirked her lips.
Weaponless, she turned to the balustrade, and climbed up.
Kaltain took her hand, and hoisted her onto the ship. Kaltain glanced at Aishlynn. A small, smug smile had replaced her grin. âHow does it feel to always be on the losing side, Aishlynn?â
Aishlynnâs fists clenchedâbut she said nothing.
Kaltain pushed her hand into Alinoraâs shoulder blades, shoving her through the door, into the captainâs quarters. Alinora threw one last glance back, before once again abandoning everything, everyone she had ever known.
This time, though. This time wasnât going to be an act of cowardice. This time she was going to save all of them. No matter what it took from her.
taglist:Â @quartzses; @idreamonpaper; @runningonrain; @witchywrite; @queenofsquirrelsstuff; @margaretcroftwrites; @purpleshadows1989; @klywrites; @she-writes-love; @sixstepsaway; @neptune-nereid; @firesidefantasy; @joshuaorrizonte; @waterfallwritings; @languageisbae; @lady-redshield-writes; @luciellesgarden; @dogwrites; @quilloftheclouds; @natalierosewrites
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lunar alchemy âž excerpt #1
Rival alchemical scholars are plunged into a shadow world of arcane magic when their mutual obsession with a lunar ritual threatens the natural order.
draft: discovery
genres:Â contemporary dark fantasy + paranormal romantic suspense
pov: alternating third person limited
word count:Â ~600
Big thanks to anyone whoâs interacted with this little project of mine! I am delighted and motivated by every note. Writeblr is such a generous space! <3
Excerpt:
The Prague skyline lit up in daybreak blues and oranges, the sliver of moon hung over bridges a thousand years standing, the maypole dance of wind-whipped hairâthere is magic in a view like this. Remnants of it. Like the swirl of sulfur ash after an alchemical reaction.Â
Foolish to stop and breathe it in.
Colin approaches Sylvie from behind and to the side. His hands are in his pockets. He leaves space enough for silence to ease between them as they look out over the glowing city. No accusations, no apologies. They were on the cusp of something this companionable not so long ago.
With the turn of her body, Sylvie shifts the air. Her scent catches in Colinâs throat. Metal sharp, her gaze cuts to the alkahest pendant rising and falling with his chest. âI can feel it from here.â Beneath the chip on Sylvieâs shoulder, Colin hears awe.
His fingers twitch in his pockets. He is too fed up to tuck the pendant out of sight, resist Sylvieâs curiosity. Alkahest doesnât belong to her world. Neither does Colin. The novelty will wear off when fear sinks in.
Sylvie steps closer, back sliding against the rail.
Colin doesnât let his pretense of taking in the view slip even when Sylvie is close enough to reach out. Her palm hovers over his pendant. Colin has lived with the thrum against his sternum for a decade; that is not what unsettles him.
âCan Iââ
âWhat are you after?â Colin has the words out, his hand locked around Sylvieâs cool fingers before his pulse can stutter back into rhythm.
Startled, colorless eyes meet his own. Whatever she sees there, her anger fails to kindle. âI know itâll hurt,â Sylvie assures him. âBelieve me.â
Colin is sick enough of all she thinks she knows to let her find out for herself. Sylvieâs fist closes around the uneven lump of alkahest. Contraband in her world, desecration in his. Colin had excavated it back when the cost differential between magic found and magic sought didnât seem so high. Eyes closed, blood thumping, Sylvie holds tight to her proof of the arcane world. His proof she is more dangerous than she should be. She has to let go, sagging on the rail.
Colin shoves the pendant under his collar, where it can thrum at him all it likes. An object lesson on warnings and how to heed them. From a place of bitter experience, he asks, âFeeling everything you hoped and more?â
Sylvie struggles to fill her abdomen with air, as if Colin had held her under the Vltava River. When she raises her head, it is to meet his shame. He knows the hollow too well not to recognize it this close up.Â
âIâm not Arcana, but I grew up in an arcane,â Sylvie refrains, voice edged with a grief Colin was quick to mistake for ambition. âI miss it, too.â
He searches Sylvieâs pale face so long he loses his turn to speak.
She puts in her earbuds, jostling him with her shoulder as she starts off. Colin catches Sylvie at the elbow. Even her indignance rings hollow now. Looking at her has unsettled him from the start. He doesnât know what seeing her will do to him.
âI believe you.â Those three words are all Sylvie has asked of him and still Colin can barely part with them. He shoves his hands back into the safety of his pockets. âFor what itâs worth.â
The compressed bow of Sylvieâs mouth hints at a wane smile before she jogs away.
So not worth much, then. Colin might have preferred it mean nothing to her. A backward glance confirms the evening sky has faded into mundane hues. His pendant thrums on, an empty reverberation in place of a beating heart.
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âEvery mer knows to avoid the krakens... they used to be gods and all they knew to do was take.â
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March prompts 2019 - Nonsense
For @writeblrs from the March Seuss prompts 2019
(For context these are Anise's thoughts and how she grew up to be who she is)
It's all nonsense, they told me.
Please stop concerning yourself with that nonsense. I have been told that in so many ways. Some were raw and cruel, childishly jealous. Some were gentle and kind, coming from loving people.
I think those hurt more.
It was nonsense for them but it was my nonsense. It was part of me, my imagination, my soul, my feelings. It was what made me me, and I wasn't going to give it up. Often I was proud I stayed true to myself. Sometimes I hated myself, because I knew I couldn't have changed even if I tried. I couldn't live without it anymore.
I know my parents were just worried for my future. My classmates were just wary of something they didn't understand.
I grew up with magic inside me the world had no place for. There was no point in it, they told me. It was all nonsense.
I thought it didn't affect me. That I was strong enough to build my own way to a world where magic was the norm, where I could study and develop, where my dreams suddenly got a tangible shape.
I thought I didn't believe what they said.
Yet I spend my life trying to prove them wrong.
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đ+August and Terra :)
Terraâs such a powerful character to write, and I hope I portray her as eloquently in writing as I see her in my head. Sheâs been with me for the last several years, went under several revisions and plot changes, and yet sheâs still here, more than ready to save the world. Sheâs quite strong and more warrior-driven than my other characters, which makes her harder to write, but all the more fun.Â
Terraâs Head-canon: Terra was born on March 14th, 2490, in Colony Omega of the 24 Colonies in âThe Green Zoneâ on New Earth. The story takes place in the year 2510, so she is 20 years old at the start of her journey. Her father was of African heritage and her mother was of Korean heritage, so sheâs mixed race. She also has Vitiligo, a condition where over time patches of white skin grew on top of her brown skin. Sheâs an outsider in Colony Zeta and struggles in grasping the concept of âfriendsâ. Most of the girls her age are scared of her. (To their credit, she does threaten to murder anyone who crosses her quite often).Â
Fun Facts:Â
She was originally born in Colony Omega but their village was ransacked by felines (four legged rabid mammals) and Scavengers (humanâs who became infected because of the harsh climate and went insane).Â
She was rescued by Dr. Harlem, the scientist of Colony Zeta, who was investigating the ruins of Colony Omega. He took Terra under his wing as her Guardian.Â
Terra is whatâs called a âColony Hunterâ, someone who protects the village and goes through extensive training/preparation. She tends to thrive in stressful situations where most people do not.Â
Has trouble communicating her negative emotions. She does so through threats and the occasional stabbing.Â
Is relatively quiet, but comforted by her sparring partner, Wyatt Ortleyâs, presence. She confides in him about her worries about Colony Alpha, where the president is located.Â
Sheâs not a mother figure by any stretch, but ironically adopts Lincoln Phoenix, a young boy who nearly drowned in a frozen lake. He is the first human being she develops an emotional attachment to.Â
Has never attended a âsocial gatheringâ and feels uncomfortable when Wyatt tries to drag her to one.Â
Terraâs birth name is âTheresa Annalise Bamâ, but she now calls herself âTerrain Bamâ.Â
Has never known what itâs like to feel âheatâ or âwarmthâ because she lives in such a cold climate.Â
The inspiration for her name comes from the Latin root word of âTerraâ, which means âlandâ, and Korean word for âBamâ, which means ânightâ or âchestnutâ.Â
Excerpt from âOn the Far Side of Infinityâ:Â
âIs Wyatt your lover?â The boy asked, and Terra gagged. Â Â Â Â
âNo. Absolutely not. Weâre partners.â Â Â Â Â Â
The boy frowned, âYou donât consider him a friend?â Â Â Â Â
 âI donât have any friends.â    Â
âNo friends, no lover, what is it that you do for self-fulfillment?â Â Â Â Â Â
Terra glowered, âSurvive.â Â Â Â Â Â
âWell, youâre boring.â Â Â Â Â
âIâm here, arenât I? And so are you. What does that make you?â Terra snapped. Â Â Â Â The boy opened his mouth to rebuke her, but thought better of it. He sighed deeply, and fell backwards onto his cot, no longer looking at her.Â
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