Hi! I decided to share a segment from an original idea I’ve been playing with for the past few years! This snippet is on its own, it’s just an isolated test for a concept that I’ve had for a while. Hope you enjoy!
The wanderer had spent so much of their existence alone, so it surprised them to find a companion while exploring the decrepit temple. The doe followed them around, perhaps out of wariness, curiosity, or simple ignorance. It didn’t seem afraid of how the sword at the wanderer’s hip jostled and clicked. It wasn’t afraid of their colorful scarf, or of the way they splashed noisily through puddles.
The doe followed them without fear, as they crawled through holes in the old walls and explored the halls, finally stopping in a garden open to the sky, a serene sight enhanced by a small pond surrounded by greenery, water gleaming in the noon sunlight. As the wanderer stood silently, surveying the square, the doe walked up to the pond. It bent and took a drink of water. A tree stood at the pond’s opposite bank, it’s branches and leaves curling protectively over the pure waters.
Keeping quiet as to not startle the doe- though they assumed that nothing would scare the curious creature- the wanderer looked up and peered at a bird’s nest balancing on a branch. A bird flew down and poked at something on the ground. From a nearby crumbling doorway came a raccoon, and the wanderer’s attention was soon drawn to a small pack of wolves walking through another exposed hallway. One of the wolves broke off from the group and bounded through the open square, passing the pond and pausing in front of the wanderer, giving them a good sniff.
The wanderer crouched and was pleasantly surprised that the wolf allowed them to gently pat it on the head. The wolf then turned, ignoring the still-drinking doe, and found something new to inspect. They’d littered the whole temple, though the wanderer hadn’t paid much attention to them. The doe had caught their attention first, after all. But it was only when the wolf sniffed and nudged one of the dozens of skeletal remains, still encased in old, rusted armor, did the wanderer really pause and ponder the temple’s history.
There were so many of them: piles of bones and old armor and weapons, bones bleached by the sun and weathered by the elements. The armor and weapons were rusted nearly beyond recognition, dull enough that the wolf had no fear of getting cut when it nudged this particular skeleton’s sword. The wanderer gazed around the garden; hidden by the tall grass were more skeletons, artifacts of a battle. The holes in the temple walls must have been caused during that battle, but enough time had passed that vines had long since grown over the piles of bricks and covered them in wild grasses and weeds.
The doe stepped back from the pond, seemingly satisfied. At the same time, the wolf stopped its investigation of the soldier’s remains. The pair of them, as though they were not predator and prey, began walking side-by-side across the garden, and the wanderer followed.
The odd trio re-entered the temple’s decrepit and war-damaged halls, and walked slowly across the stained floors. They passed more puddles, holes in the roof allowing sunlight to shine in and glint off the water. Small groups of birds, squirrels, and other animals huddled at each puddle. Despite whatever carnage had happened at the temple, it was overshadowed by the nature that had continued to thrive in its aftermath.
The wanderer followed their guides, and silently let themselves marvel at the life that flourished upon of the relics of death, at the trees growing out of the walls and stretching out towards the sky through the fractured roof. Sections of the walls untouched by vines revealed faded murals and paintings; the temple used to be a place of worship, the wanderer realized, now walking so softly that the sounds of their sandals against the floor were drowned out by the chittering of animals.
The doe and wolf reached a fork in the hall and took the left path, leading the wanderer into a large room, just as damaged by violence as the rest of the temple. Amid the skeletons and rusted armor were small tables, wardrobes, and a humble bed. At the opposite end of the room was an immense, crumbling statue, illuminated by sunlight streaming in through tall windows. In cracks that webbed over the statue’s surface, small plants reached out into open air, and birds’ nests perched atop the statue’s head, shoulders, and crossed legs. It seemed to depict a holy deity, and the wanderer halted as the doe and wolf approached it.
Kneeling before the statue was a bald woman in a colorful robe; she turned as she heard the animals approach, and stood when she saw the wanderer. She smiled warmly and pressed her hands together, dipping her head at them. The wanderer silently mirrored her movements, and joined her before the statue. The woman sank back down onto her knees and gave the wolf a scratch behind the ears; the wanderer briefly watched them, then turned to the statue.
The depicted deity had a look of tranquility to it, and a sense of peace settled over the wanderer. They kneeled besides the woman and decided to silently send a prayer of thanks up to the gods, hoping that it would also reach this deity depicted in stone. As they prayed, the woman gazed serenely up at the statue, and the doe and wolf each sat down, warmly silent.
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Things That May Be Causing Your Writer's Block- and How to Beat Them
I don't like the term 'Writer's Block' - not because it isn't real, but because the term is so vague that it's useless. Hundreds of issues all get lumped together under this one umbrella, making writer's block seem like this all-powerful boogeyman that's impossible to beat. Worse yet, it leaves people giving and receiving advice that is completely ineffective because people often don't realize they're talking about entirely different issues.
In my experience, the key to beating writer's block is figuring out what the block even is, so I put together a list of Actual Reasons why you may be struggling to write:
(note that any case of writer's block is usually a mix of two or more)
Perfectionism (most common)
What it looks like:
You write one sentence and spend the next hour googling "synonyms for ___"
Write. Erase. Write. Rewrite. Erase.
Should I even start writing this scene when I haven't figured out this one specific detail yet?
I hate everything I write
Cringing while writing
My first draft must be perfect, or else I'm a terrible writer
Things that can help:
Give yourself permission to suck
Keep in mind that nothing you write is going to be perfect, especially your first draft
Think of writing your first/early drafts not as writing, but sketching out a loose foundation to build upon later
People write multiple drafts for a reason: write now, edit later
Stop googling synonyms and save that for editing
Write with a pen to reduce temptation to erase
Embrace leaving blank spaces in your writing when you can't think of the right word, name, or detail
It's okay if your writing sucks. We all suck at some point. Embrace the growth mindset, and focus on getting words on a page
Lack of inspiration (easiest to fix)
What it looks like:
Head empty, no ideas
What do I even write about???
I don't have a plot, I just have an image
Want to write but no story to write
Things that can help:
Google writing prompts
If writing prompts aren't your thing, instead try thinking about what kind of tropes/genres/story elements you would like to try out
Instead of thinking about the story you would like to write, think about the story you would like to read, and write that
It's okay if you don't have a fully fleshed out story idea. Even if it's just an image or a line of dialogue, it's okay to write that. A story may or may not come out of it, but at least you got the creative juices flowing
Stop writing. Step away from your desk and let yourself naturally get inspired. Go for a walk, read a book, travel, play video games, research history, etc. Don't force ideas, but do open up your mind to them
If you're like me, world-building may come more naturally than plotting. Design the world first and let the story come later
Boredom/Understimulation (lost the flow)
What it looks like:
I know I should be writing but uugggghhhh I just can'tttttt
Writing words feels like pulling teeth
I started writing, but then I got bored/distracted
I enjoy the idea of writing, but the actual process makes me want to throw my laptop out the window
Things that can help:
Introduce stimulation: snacks, beverages, gum, music such as lo-fi, blankets, decorate your writing space, get a clickity-clackity keyboard, etc.
Add variety: write in a new location, try a new idea/different story for a day or so, switch up how you write (pen and paper vs. computer) or try voice recording or speech-to-text
Gamify writing: create an arbitrary challenge, such as trying to see how many words you can write in a set time and try to beat your high score
Find a writing buddy or join a writer's group
Give yourself a reward for every writing milestone, even if it's just writing a paragraph
Ask yourself whether this project you're working on is something you really want to be doing, and be honest with your answer
Intimidation/Procrastination (often related to perfectionism, but not always)
What it looks like:
I was feeling really motivated to write, but then I opened my laptop
I don't even know where to start
I love writing, but I can never seem to get started
I'll write tomorrow. I mean next week. Next month? Next month, I swear (doesn't write next month)
Can't find the time or energy
Unreasonable expectations (I should be able to write 10,000 words a day, right????)
Feeling discouraged and wondering why I'm even trying
Things that can help:
Follow the 2 min rule (or the 1 paragraph rule, which works better for me): whenever you sit down to write, tell yourself that you are only going to write for 2 minutes. If you feel like continuing once the 2 mins are up, go for it! Otherwise, stop. Force yourself to start but DO NOT force yourself to continue unless you feel like it. The more often you do this, the easier it will be to get started
Make getting started as easy as possible (i.e. minimize barriers: if getting up to get a notebook is stopping you from getting started, then write in the notes app of your phone)
Commit to a routine that will work for you. Baby steps are important here. Go with something that feels reasonable: every day, every other day, once a week, twice a week, and use cues to help you remember to start. If you chose a set time to write, just make sure that it's a time that feels natural to you- i.e. don't force yourself to writing at 9am every morning if you're not a morning person
Find a friend or a writing buddy you can trust and talk it out or share a piece of work you're proud of. Sometimes we just get a bit bogged down by criticism- either internal or external- and need a few words of encouragement
The Problem's Not You, It's Your Story (or Outline (or Process))
What it looks like:
I have no problems writing other scenes, it's just this scene
I started writing, but now I have no idea where I'm going
I don't think I'm doing this right
What's an outline?
Drowning in documents
This. Doesn't. Make. Sense. How do I get from this plot point to this one?!?!?! (this ColeyDoesThings quote lives in my head rent free cause BOY have I been there)
Things That Can Help:
Go back to the drawing board. Really try to get at the root of why a scene or story isn't working
A part of growing as a writer is learning when to kill your darlings. Sometimes you're trying to force an idea or scene that just doesn't work and you need to let it go
If you don't have an outline, write one
If you have an outline and it isn't working, rewrite it, or look up different ways to structure it
You may be trying to write as a pantser when you're really a plotter or vice versa. Experiment with different writing processes and see what feels most natural
Study story structures, starting with the three act structure. Even if you don't use them, you should know them
Check out Ellen Brock on YouTube. She's a professional novel editor who has a lot of advice on writing strategies for different types of writers
Also check out Savage Books on YouTube (another professional story editor) for advice on story structure and dialogue. Seriously, I cannot recommend this guy enough
Executive Dysfunction, Usually From ADHD/Autism
What it looks like:
Everything in boredom/understimulation
Everything in intimidation/procrastination
You have been diagnosed with and/or have symptoms of ADHD/Autism
Things that can help:
If you haven't already, seek a diagnosis or professional treatment
Hire an ADHD coach or other specialist that can help you work with your brain (I use Shimmer; feel free to DM me for a referral)
Seek out neurodiverse communities for advice and support
Try body doubling! There's lot's of free online body doubling websites out there for you to try. If social anxiety is a barrier, start out with writing streams such as katecavanaughwrites on Twitch
Be aware of any sensory barriers that may be getting in the way of you writing (such as an uncomfortable desk chair, harsh lighting, bad sounds)
And Lastly, Burnout, Depression, or Other Mental Illness
What it looks like:
You have symptoms of burnout or depression
Struggling with all things, not just writing
It's more than a lack of inspiration- the spark is just dead
Things that can help:
Forget writing for now. Focus on healing first.
Seek professional help
If you feel like it, use writing as a way to explore your feelings. It can take the form of journaling, poetry, an abstract reflection of your thoughts, narrative essays, or exploring what you're feeling through your fictional characters. The last two helped me rediscover my love of writing after I thought years of depression had killed it for good. Just don't force yourself to do so, and stop if it takes you to a darker place instead of feeling cathartic
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