Jing Yuan x Ren [ canon ] @wakasano
Jing Yuan made sure that the Stellaron crisis would be where all his grievances would be resolved. It was easy to calculate things once Blade arrived his ship, and even easier to thread through people’s hearts on behalf of the future. Jing Yuan had paved a way for Yanqing to grow, had managed to get Dan Heng back on the ship, had bid farewell to his former friends… and even got a moment to test Fu Xuan’s skills as General while he was recovering.
This doesn’t mean that everything is said and done already, since he still has… weeds, for lack of better metaphor, that need to be removed from his garden. But it is true that things are falling right into piece.
And as if fate wants to prove him certain of his decisions, Jing Yuan finds himself staring at a man of black hair not too far from the facility of the Alchemy Commission. The area is safer from attacks now, albeit there’s still a lot to be done to repair the damage made by the denizens of Abundance. Alas, what waits for him is another marastruck man… but one which Jing Yuan misses terribly. And that’s why he keeps moving forward.
“At this point, one would have expected you to have left the Xianzhou Luofu a few days ago already.” The white haired, dressed in a hanfu that belongs to the Alchemy Commission, is still recovering. He didn’t expect to find the swordsman in one of his escapades, but well… “Care to share what you are still doing here, Ren?”
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Iokath + Traitor Arc Shenanigans
Eight: [Flirt] We should've teamed up sooner. I could've used a strong warrior like you at my side.
Theron: I'm going to be sick.
Lmaoooo, sorry Theron but it's not like that-- little known fact, but Eight flirts with people whose vibes he doesn't like in an attempt to make them less abrasive to him. It's not true of every situation and he uses it far less than his Nine self, but if he's uncomfortable and can't find footing with someone, that tends to come out.
In this case, the Supreme Commander of the Republic and Jonas Balkar were both people he had zero frame of reference for (not to mention Jonas' "what's up traitor" immediately insulted him) so he flirted with both.
Eight: Why suffocate them slowly when it's so much more satisfying to crush their windpipe?
Eight, that's your legacy force choke speaking. He doesn't even use the Sith ability right.... maximum killing efficiency instead....
Lana: Other top suspects include the Shroud, Darth Jadus, a rogue agent inside the Republic's Strategic Information Service...
Theron: Let's not rule out Sith Intelligence.
Has been contacted by the Shroud, works for Darth Jadus as his Hand, is a rogue double-agent for the SIS, was former Intelligence...wait a minute, that's me!
I get they were trying to do a clever nod to the entirety of the Imperial Agent story, but the context for this gets a lot funnier if you consider Eight is also in on Theron's betrayal so they're listing every exact trait he has while not breaking eye contact with one another.
Lana: who could the traitor be...
Theron and Eight:
Fast forward ahead, and we come face-to-face with Tyth. Eight's first impressions of the giant droid were "huh. it's kind of cute?" which probably sounds insane, but he tends to find weird entities like this endearing.
Eight: All right, Mister Rage. Can you drop the act and point me in the direction of the superweapon?
Tyth: [Scans] CALM. PEACE. IT DENIES FURY. A SACRIFICE MEDIOCRE.
Eight: (offended) I didn't come here to be poked and prodded.
I'm guessing the game was going off of his LS 2 gauge, but Eight always gets so mad when someone points that out, even if its true. XD How dare you call me mediocre....and nice to boot! Take that back at once! I am not a Jedi!
(Probably got so offended he woke himself up from the fever droid dream).
Lana: I know. You've been talking in your sleep.
Theron: I almost had to stuff a sock in your mouth.
Eight wakes up with drool coming out of his mouth, immediately snaps awake at Theron's comment before a shit-eating grin overtakes him. "Theron...I wasn't aware you were into such things!" Props himself up on one elbow and flips onto his stomach, "Want to shut me up, do you? With a gag, even? You naughty boy."
Cue Theron backtracking into nonsensical stuttering, with Lana wishing she had something to drink. There's probably some kind of joke you could make here about flirting with every male Shan he came across, but admin is too stupid right now to think of it.
Big steppy
Theron: But the Alliance outgrew you. Now it's rotting from the inside, the galaxy's fighting back, and you've become a symbol of oppression. So much for your dreams of peace.
Yadda yadda generic villain speech and Eight is technically supposed to be on the other side of this forcefield (Jadus moment), but keeping that in mind it kind of felt like Theron was saying this with the underlying meaning being I see exactly how this duty has hurt you so that's why I'm doing this as well.
Because his words do ring true. He was never its leader with the duty itself rotting him from the inside, the galaxy's back to a time of turmoil, and he became someone else's saint of murder for the entirety of this war when he originally struck out in search of the peace Keeper wanted for him. Not to mention the fact that he's the Outlander in this Alliance at all means this galaxy had no heroes to choose from-- absolutely none. It was already doomed.
And then the rest of this plays out as you expect, though in this AU they both ditch Lana here....which, makes me sad to imagine, but I can also see Lana being like "Eight....why? You were our Outlander--we were a team! Whatever he's said to you, don't listen to him: he's lying, I know it."
And he just smiles and says, "I'm sorry. I don't want to do this anymore." leaving her to jump out of that train alone with only her hurt and her vengeance.
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One of my biggest nitpicks in fiction concerns the feeding of babies. Mothers dying during/shortly after childbirth or the baby being separated form the mother shortly after birth is pretty common in fiction. It is/was also common enough in real life, which is why I think a lot of writers/readers don't think too hard about this. however. Historically, the only reason the vast majority of babies survived being separated from their mother was because there was at least one other woman around to breastfeed them. Before modern formula, yes, people did use other substitutes, but they were rarely, if ever, nutritionally sufficient.
Newborns can't eat adult food. They can't really survive on animal milk. If your story takes place in a world before/without formula, a baby separated from its mother is going to either be nursed by someone else, or starve.
It doesn't have to be a huge plot point, but idk at least don't explicitly describe the situation as excluding the possibility of a wetnurse. "The father or the great grandmother or the neighbor man or the older sibling took and raised the baby completely alone in a cave for a year." Nope. That baby is dead I'm sorry. "The baby was kidnapped shortly after birth by a wizard and hidden away in a secret tower" um quick question was the wizard lactating? "The mother refused to see or touch her child after birth so the baby was left to the care of the ailing grandfather" the grandfather who made the necessary arrangements with women in the neighborhood, right? right? OR THAT GREAT OFFENDER "A newborn baby was left on the doorstep and they brought it in and took care of it no issues" What Are You Going to Feed That Baby. Hello?
Like. It's not impossible, but arrangements are going to have to be made. There are some logistics.
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