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[phantompoetess]

I would really appreciate it if you could read this little sneak peek of my book, Shattered Heart❤️ Feel free to leave a comment (doesn't matter where) and let me know what your thoughts are of it, I always love hearing what others think of my writing✨️

[lyiswriting]

Okay, imagine this scenario!

I was thinking of a Jurassic Park-style + Survival show. I haven't seen the movie franchise completely and don't know the history so this isn't related to their lore.

Not proofread

Sunshine character that has always loved animals. Finally works at the Dinosaur Island and she's a fan favorite among the crowd, always had a special bond with the animals. Until the place suddenly goes haywire, everyone except some random park visitors and specific people is evacuated. In the beginning, they thought it was just a coincidence. Until they find out the cameras in the place are live-streaming them as if they were on a survival show even having commercial cuts.

They go through the basic challenges and slowly she starts losing friends. Notices the animals are not themselves anymore, that she can no longer trust them. Has to do what she can to try and survive even if it means hurting them, since there is one final way out. The first time we see her switch from her bright personality is when she sees a dino eat her friend. It's the first kill of the whole thing, then we see her scared and crying. Until she has to take up one of the challenges pushing or throwing everyone off a ledge, taking a risk that her favorite and bonded animal is still good and will help them.

In the beginning, I imagined her in the park uniform, her boots had pretty charms on them, a pretty hairstyle, and glasses. By the end, she's a wreck, wet, and dirty, hair out of place, and blood that she didn't know if it was hers. She had a natural light to her in the beginning but now she's just darker. During all this, they are activating bombs and trying to figure out who is behind all of this. Once they get to the escape pods or helicopter right when she is gonna get on she drags a guy off. For a second everyone thought she was behind it but no it was the guy, she closed the helicopter door and told them to leave. Even if they aren't right she can't leave that place behind, she tussles with the guy but she wins.

Villain: “You know this means you won, right?”

As he is sat criss-cross, bruised, tied up, disheveled, and smirking or tired smile.

Sunshine character who is now broken sitting in front of them with a detonator in their hands. “Yeah, I know”

In a blunt tone as they naturally press the button exploding/killing everything around them including the villain and herself.

Just to add a angst, the villain wasn’t a random bystander. It was someone she worked with, someone she trusted. Maybe they even liked each other, had a “date” planned and everything. The first kill was on purpose the villain didn't like how close she was with that guy. The villain thought they would escape together and live happily ever after, and in some twisted way, he technically won too. Getting her in the end dead or alive.

I can imagine her pressing the detonator in 3 ways. 1 is the one up top 2. She has his head in her lap and is playing with his hair in a way trying to comfort herself, then pressing it while trying to hide her face. 3. Her saying the line with a broken smile, leaning in to kiss him, and pressing the button.

Under the cut kinda what I imagine for her aesthetic

[loverofwhump216]

Final chapter is now up.

Series: How To Train Your Dragon

Title: Beating In Stride

Characters: Hiccup, Dagur, Toothless, Astrid

Summary: Johann is more brutal when he beats Hiccup up. With Krogan out of commission and the Night Fury nowhere to be seen, Johann takes a chance to torture the Dragon Master. Hiccup!Whump. Part 2 of my Seizure Procedure series.

Kudos and reviews are loved. I want to know what people think of my story.

[annieslytherpuff21]

I’m so proud of myself, I’ve been trying to read and review all the stories from the past year for Hogan’s Heroes on FF.net and I’m down to 28 stories! I definitely think I can get through them by the time of the Papa Bear awards! Maybe I’ll even finish this WIP before the end of the year lol

[cleverheroine]

Yall really need to understand....it is not hate to disagree with someone. And if someone uses words that you *personally* find offensive...it is okay...and well within your right to state the boundaries "that word offends me/triggers me/hurts my feelings/makes me mad" however and the other person if theyre a good faith actor will be like okay I won't use that lingo with you. ....

But then it is not fair to police this person using that lingo/dialect/word.....when talking to someone *else*.

How you getting offended at someone saying a word you don't want to hear and your ass wasn't even in the conversation? You know how to stop getting offended? Literally butt out and mind yo bizznizz.

I love you Tumblr but some of yall just clowning about getting offended like....someone can fucking compliment you and you gotta search they profile to FIND something that can trigger your ass.

I think yall just LIKE being triggered.and if that's a game you want to play and you'll do it without damaging yourself...can yall engage in the bdsm tactics and find the people who match your brand of crazy and go cherry pick reasons to be mad at each other in a different spot? Like....some of us want to he able to talk to people we get along with and talk about whatever we're talking about....and conversations are allowed to happen that aren't fights. People can just keep agreeing and enjoy that and so they just keep going. Like yall be so focused on your supposed to be offended yall either lost sight or just don't know the enjoyment of talking with someone you actually get along with. And I'm sorry for you for that. Really. But I'm gonna need yall to put the triggered button down sometimes....cause yall be looking for where you can be offended at some NOT offensive bullshit and....the rest of the world....the people who like not fighting? They're getting tired of you.

Please.

If you have the capacity right now in your funky self hatred. Please.....stop.

Stop.

Get off the disagreement = hate = we gotta fight = triggered ....thought loop.

Please.

Jesus loves yall.

If you are seriously trying to LOOK to be offended at people who just wanna be nice at each other....and at you if you'd let them....

You are NOT in the right.

You are NOT a paladin of truth.

I need you to understand....really understand....you're a problem.

This behavior is a problem prohibiting peace. Yall want the fighting to stop? Stop. Being. Triggered. FFS. Been going on least 20 years. Least.

......play with a different toy now.

I love you.

But if another person comes up in my crib....when I just want to find someone to get along with....and TRYING to be offended with all they little engine that could beta energy ass......I will not give a damn about your sensitivity and I will with a heart full of love and deep seeded PITY for you.....

Clown.

Your.

<Word you wanna cancel>.

Ass.

[feastofchildermass]

I need you to know something friends. I don't always remember to leave comments as often as I should. But if I love your fic and it gets a comment, it's getting an ESSAY. If you put a suggested song in the notes, then it's going on while I read and reply.

Kudos? Always! Saves and faves.

I will keysmash my thoughts, copy fave quote and share my unhinged thoughts. Those are the comments that can sustain me for a full year, so I try to deliver them wherever possible to my fellow writers.

I'm sorry if I seem intense. You see, I am.

[vampbite083]

Simon's Angels Chapter Eleven

New chapter is now up! Getting close to the crossover point! Read and Review!

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[kkecreads]

The Traitor by Ava Glass

Published: September 19, 2023BantamPages: 319Genre: Assassination ThrillersKKECReads Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️I received a copy of this book for free, and I leave my review voluntarily. Ava Glass is the author of the espionage series Alias Emma. A former civil servant and journalist, she once worked closely with spies, and that experience fuels her writing. Ava is the pseudonym for an international…

[hadesgirl015]

Story Update!

Mommy Lae’zel: Back in crèche Y’llek Lae’zel found a lone githyanki egg. With all other life in the crèche wiped out, Lae’zel brought the egg with her. She has been carrying it and watching it ever since. It shouldn’t hatch anytime soon…should it?

A series of one shots in no particular order except for the first two.

Chapter 4: Babysitting

Chapter Summary: Lae'zel needs sleep, but when Xan won't let her, she must allow herself to receive help from someone; or rather three elves who don't sleep.

[loverofwhump216]

FANFIC: This Changes Everything

[hadesgirl015]

Chapter 2: No Discussion Necessary

Chapter Summary: The rest of the camp finally gets to meet little Xan, and a discussion on how to keep him safe is started.

Story Summary: Back in crèche Y’llek Lae’zel found a lone githyanki egg. With all other life in the crèche wiped out, Lae’zel brought the egg with her. She has been carrying it and watching it ever since. It shouldn’t hatch anytime soon…should it? A series of one shots in no particular order except for the first two.

[hadesgirl015]

Another Kind of Healing Magic

Story Summary: Wyll notices that his love is about to perform healing spells on herself to ease her sore muscles. He decides to offer her an alternative.

Happy Valentine's Day Enjoy this cute little Wyll/Tav one-shot featuring Nixesh, a blue dragonborn who is a Tempest Domain Cleirc of Bahamut.

Still having trouble posting links the normal way, can't understand what's going on with it.

[catbrarian]

cats and libraries ۫ ꣑ৎ

[sergioguymanproust]

I guess this is where the idea of a cloud to store info came from,haaa! One more way to profit from us the sheep! Squeezing our hard earned money to feed our shadow government and the machines that translate our so called credit points into cash flow for greedy corporations and their lobbyists hound dogs,their corporate lawyers to chew and suck dry the marrow of the people.The cloud what a fancy name for a corporation that takes your personal information and sells your work ,only to let you know they’ve been hacked not once but several times in order to get away with murder.Then those hackers create businesses to exploit and promise to keep your accounts secure,is all a big scam a joke filled with false ppromises and discounts. Please make sure your information is protected 24/7.Do not trust big corporations that want your data and lie telling you they will never share your info in the black market.Be smart .Be wise and keep an eye on your business transactions.Well,blessings,and stay safe. Words by Sergio GuymanProust.

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[authorbenosgood]

𝙃𝙚𝙧𝙤 𝙤𝙛 𝙊𝙧𝙞𝙖—A tale of war, betrayal, and the fight against an ancient evil. Are you ready for the battle ahead? . . . . .