In theory i like the idea that rick is growing and developing as a person. In practice it ends up falling short though, because no one balances him out. rick is getting better while no one else is getting worse, and it causes the whole thing to end up feeling a bit stale. The biggest draw, at least for me, has always been rick and morty's shitty dynamic, but it barely exists anymore because rick has been so watered down.
The ideal solution is literally just to make morty into a bigger asshole. Essentially flipping the main characters' personalities would offer a wide variety of conflict into the show, and would also help keep it "fresh".
Instead it feels the writers are pretending that they can't possibly do anything with morty's character, that they have to keep him the same anxious idiot he was in season one. I've said this before, but it's incredibly frustrating to watch the show have no problem with expanding rick's character while struggling with keeping morty's heavily stagnated characterization consistent. Where rick has space to develop between multiple seasons, morty is constantly forced into one of two boxes (smart/stupid) depending on the episode.
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(ACT 3/4 OPTIONAL ACHIEVEMENT SPOILERS) Wanted to practice more writing and decided to do this quick drabble based on this illustration that @startagainaprologue made for his isat randomized roleswap au! Writing is under the cut:
<You wait for her to touch you.>
< As you stand there and wait you are suddenly hit with a realization.>
< A very obvious one, if you’re being truthful with yourself. >
< She will never be the one to reach out to touch you first. >
< Euphrasie is polite like that.>
< It isn’t to say that she’s afraid of touch. >
< Quite the opposite, actually.>
< Euphrasie is nothing like you.>
< You’ve seen her for dozens of loops hug the people in your party.>
< She enjoys showing that type of affection to others. It makes her happy.>
< She will always hesitate on giving it when it comes to you.>
< Even though you know now what she wanted to say to you.>
< You know you know you know but it can’t be real until you put pen to paper.>
< You want it be the truth so badly. >
=> < Keep waiting. >
=> < Rewrite the script. >
=> < Keep waiting. >
< You wait. >
<…>
< Nothing changes. >
< Why? Why do you keep doing that? Why are you still waiting? >
< Is it really that enjoyable to revisit the same old story again and again? >
< Do you enjoy torturing yourself that much?>
< This will continue to go on like this if you don’t make the first step. >
< Ah, what did she say a few loops ago? “Be the change you wish to see in the world?” >
< Well, here you are. >
< You’re in the same spot as always. >
< She says the same lines. She reaches out to you- for just a moment before remembering her role. >
< She starts to lower her hand away.>
< You wish to change the way this ends. >
< There’s a common saying that repeating the exact same actions and expecting different results is nothing short of insanity. >
<…>
< So what will you do? >
=> < Keep waiting.>
=> < Rewrite the script. >
=> < Rewrite the script. >
((“Oh! Hello Odile! It’s very good to see-”))
((“…-You?”))
((…?!))
< You lunge forward.>
((“Odile? Are you-“))
((“Ah-!”))
< You embrace her. >
< Euphrasie feels warm and comforting. >
< Far brighter than the sun that’s currently shining down upon on the two of you. >
< You hold unto her. >
< You smile. >
< You open your eyes and look up. >
< Euphrasie is… >
<…?! >
< She’s frowning. >
< You freeze. >
< You quickly let go and move away. >
< You feel cold. >
< Why? >
<Why does she look like that?>
< Why why why why wh- >
< You feel a tug on your stomach and you- >
<……>
< “Hello, Euphrasie. After hearing what you said earlier…I wanted to conduct private investigation on the Favor Tree.” >
< “.. I’d like to get it done sooner, rather than later since we have a finite amount of time on our hands.” >
((“Oh okay! I don’t mean to distract you, Odile.”))
< She smiles at you. >
< You don’t make the mistake of smiling back at her again. >
((“.. So intense..!”))
((“ But in all seriousness, I'll let you go. See you at the Clocktower!”))
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y'know what's funny in a 'not really funny at all but i have to laugh or i'll start biting people' kind of way??
the adaptation team working overtime to make the relationship between javier and lloyd look so much less deeper than it actually is in the novel makes the novel look so much gayer than it already did on its own. like. sorry but your attempts to cover up the homoerotism just makes it stand out more in its absence.
because if there truly was nothing remarkable about lloyd and javier's relationship and they were just very good friends and nothing else then why take the time and effort to change it in the adaptation so they look less close than they actually are.
why skip entire scenes that make their relationship deeper. why change their dialogue and thoughts so they're less invested in one another. why give interactions that they had with each other to their romantic interests. actually why give javier a whole new love interest that did not exist in the novel.
why go through so much trouble to change something that is so important in the source material if there truly was nothing else going on in the novel.
what was it about their relationship that made the adaptation team decide they just needed to change everything about it so they weren't as close and attached as they were originally.
if they were truly nothing but platonic with each other in the source material then why change their relationship so much in the adaptation that it's almost unrecognizable.
what about it did they find so unappealing that they simply had to modify it until it was but a shadow of itself.
in trying to cover up something they only managed to call attention to it by the people who knew what was there originally. now we know that they wanted to get rid of it so badly they were willing to butcher the story and plot for it.
it's really funny :)
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as a multishipper it’s so weird to me seeing takes like “zolu (or sanuso) have so much in canon but zosan not really so ofc zsn shippers just see them as hot or smth but there’s nothing more” and others like it. first of all… thats a weird hill to die on. since when does canon basis makes one ship superior to the other. second of all: some people just don’t enjoy having everything already established and served on a silver plate. i love zolu with all my heart, they are wonderful and perfect in a lot of ways and interpretations. but what also clicks for me in a special way (and why i can’t let zosan go since i was 16, even tho they’re very much not a priority anymore) is thinking what would it take characters that incompatible fall in love. how would it happen. how would they behave and deal with it and be stupid but also vulnerable in a lot of ways. how would this develop and change them and their worldview. its fascinating! its cool when things are pretty much established in canon and two characters are written like each other’s half but. it’s so much fun to make it difficult and make it a journey. the conclusion is always so satisfying.
so no, zosan is not just “they hate fuck and its cool”
its being incompatible and messy and weird and angry but also trusting each other and respecting each other in so many ways. it’s “you know the worst of me but you still here and i trust you with my life” and also rethinking their view on love and
it’s not for everyone, sure, but it’s not so hard to accept other people’s taste and way of thinking instead of demeaning it or making it a weirdest competition. it’s not. (especially when it’s about literally two of the most popular ships on fandom lmao)
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