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Hey! I'm getting into writing and I'd like to know how you would go about hiding the supernatural or Eldritch at the edges of a reasonable scenario. Things like someone fleeing through ruins while being pursued, and nobody notices that they seem to have unlimited stamina and require no light to see in the dark. Excitement or ignorance would make these things difficult to notice. I would like your thoughts about creating similar scenarios. As an added detail, the person fleeing would also be unaware. They assume they are normal, and will convince themselves of this if they must.
Whatever response you give, even if you're unsure, is great. I'm looking for an outside input and something to think about. You could insult me for all I care, reactions have meanings beyond the scrawl on a screen.
โ ๏ธQ&A pt5โ ๏ธ
I have written some mystery before and although I am not an expert, I could certainly give you some advice.
The mistery is, basically:
If you have two characters who are brothers, unless you say it the reader can't know it. For example, imagine that a story begins with two persons in a dark tunnel talking to each other, the conversation is somewhat petty, and imagine that one of the characters says "how did mom make the mistake of giving me a brother like you?" In a sarcastic way, and then the other responds in the same way, here the first character interrupts him saying "My brother has been dead for six months."
This, like the beginning of a story, is somewhat disconcerting and raises doubts for whoever reads it and from there the story can continue to develop.
In the mystery genre, the questions you generate are the most important thing, and you must control your reader like a puppet, very meticulously, you must plan everything to make them believe what you want them to believe and maintain consistency in the story.
If your character is, for example, fleeing from a wolf in the middle of a forest and has to jump a very large cliff and the character has (the ability) to jump over it, you would have to describe the fear, or the character's reaction and thought, as jump the cliff, leave it in the background, imagine that then a sheriff walks over it and in a calmer and more tense scene tells him that that cliff was more than five meters (it is practically impossible for the character, being a regular person, to be able to jump it) here it would be a shock for the character since it was not difficult for him to jump over it. That would give you to create a whole mystery and doubt in the character from then on.
As a last example, let's take over the garden wall, before the last chapter, many of us probably thought that the story was set in the middle medieval period, like the 1700s/1800s, since everything had made us think that, but then we realize that it is a sheeting a little modern (2010 or something) but we, without seeing the last chapter, couldn't know it
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I hope that my advice can be of some use to you, I invite you to investigate more and experiment as much as you want.
be creative, have fun, learn and above all write!
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How do people with ADHD manage writting longer Fics ? I love all my projects and want to eventually finish them but it feels like after banging out first 2 k words it's hard to get back to it ?
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as an aroace, I don't know how to write relationships very well, so I thought I would ask if you have any advice on writing polyamorous relationships.
Depends on the type of relationship ? Is everyone involved love (romantically) everyone else ? Do they only love one person ? Do they love multiple ? Keeping a small chart can help with remembering this type of things.
Remember that not everyone will treat two partner the same way, I am gonna use the Jade Winglet as an example, I am here assuming everyone is with everyone for simplicity but it can be applied to friendship as well:
While Winter might joke around or give sass to Qibli, Kinkajou or Carnelian, he knows Moon or Turtle are somewhat more insecure and might try to reasure them more and be careful. Carnelian, Moon and Turtle are good to talk about feelings of sadness or uncertainty while Qibli and (again) Carnelian can take angry rants more easily
Moon might know that Turtle and Carnelian needs more words of affirmation, while Qibli prefers physical touch and Winter and Kinkajou might enjoy quality time more
So yeah, think about personalities and love language, both in what they like to recieved and in what they give, it's kind of like the type adventages in Pokemon
#wof mentioned#moonwatcher wof#winter wof#carnelian wof#turtle wof#kinkajou wof#qibli wof#writting advice
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How did u give your ocs for ol2 so much character... how did you flesh them out so well..
First off hellow there :D ( not to be rude but I prefer exchanging with people by starting with a greeting )
And second thank you !!!
I really like media analysis ( even if iโm not the best ) and I love working on my oc on every shapes and instant that could define them as characters. Thing is with my game mc it tend to last longer ( been working on Valentin for almost two years now ? ) so they get a lot of details with time :o
Bonus I also have a big problem with daydreaming and scenarios, I have over 420 oc this is a good sign that I spend a bit too much time in my creativityโฆ
To be honest Itโs also usualy because I love reading about character relationship and little details about said relationship that I then love to add it in my characters. Itโs like ยซย i see something I like, I search why I like it and then I copy pasteย ยป
Also one of my main reasons to make my mc diverse in games is because I want to make representation for thing I want to see more and so I do research.
I really recommend doing research by directly seeing real peopleโs return about experience ( ex for Darcie I went trough some blogs of a girl who shared anecdotes about her teenage life wearing hearing aid ) or just search tips or informations that are backed up with resources ( ex research made by a recognized establishment )
But making research takes time which can be boring and I understand that not everyoneโs cup of tea so how else could you work on characters ? Try to ask questions you can answer by yourself.
So my advice to anyone trying to flesh out characters try with the basic ยซย why, how, when, and ?ยป for any questions relating your chatacter.
Why does Valentin struggle with her body ? Because of gender norms and beauty standards on social media
How does it impact her ? She become self conscious and try to overdo it to fit in the standard but it makes her miserable.
When ? During her time where sheโs at her lowest when her friends are cold and too busy for her.
And ? What do I do with that information ? I use it to think of the fact Valentin sees her life trought the lense of someone who is self conscious.
And also my last advice : you are allowed to rewrite stuff about your characters. Nothing is set into stones you can always add or take off some facts if they no longer align with what you want your character to be.
Hope my rambling is coherent enough and if it help someone then iโll be glad.
Thank you for taking the time to read, have a nice day :}
#dreamtyโs ramnble#writting advice#advice#ask answer#I need to find a tag for long rambling about my thoughts process
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Writing advice that slows down your creative flow is bad advice
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I am looking for a beta reader if anyone would be interested? Itโs for my new fan fiction idea.,
Summary: Titanic story line, but, with a twist. Gilbert and his little sister boar the Titanic after the unexpected death of their parents. Hoping for a better life. Anne comes aboard the Titanic with Marilla after loosing Matthew hoping for a better life as well. When the three of them meet, itโs a strong bond that nothing can break them. Not even the devastating tragedy of the Titanic can break that bond.
I know some people are against my story line and plot, but, if I get a gold beta reader and if someone likes Titanic/Anne of green gables like I do, I would really appreciate the help. I would give the beta reader credit to.
I would like someone to help me with stronger sentences, make my story stronger, help me describes scenes and emotions, maybe point me in the right direction on how to get reviews.
If anyone can help me, I would appreciate it. I never had a beta before. Iโm not exactly sure on how this work. But, Iโm willing to give it a try. I have my first chapter semi started. Itโs a rough draft of course.
#anne of green gables series#titanic#beta reader#beta reader for fan fiction#beta help#writing resources#writing help#writting advice#my writting#writing fanfic#any fans out there?#fanfiction#my fanfiction#anne x gilbert#follow for updates#follow for follow
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FOR THE LOVE OF WHATEVER FUCKING GOD YOU BELIEVE IN, STOP PUTTING TAGS ON POSTS WHERE THEY DON'T BELONG!!!
If you're writing *character* x oc, stop putting *character* x reader and vice versa!!
IT ISN'T THE SAME FUCKING THING.
And if you're writing *characterA* x *characterB/reader/yn*, stop putting *chatacterA* x *some other character/oc!! It is NOT THE SAME THING!!! It's annoying as fuck to go under a specific tag for specific fanfiction like Tsu'tey x reader and seeing Jake x reader/oc or Tsu'tey x oc!
And on a personal note, if you're writing two+ characters and/or reader platonically, please use +, not x. X, to me, means romantically or sexually.
Also add proper warning to your fanfiction(s) and TAG THEM PROPERLY!
Edit: Also, shipping a character with a different version of themselves (different demension/universe, AU, gender bent, ect) DOES NOT count as an x reader fanfic. It's basically incest.
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WRITING TIP: Make your dialogue beats do more.
A beat isnโt just filler; itโs how you write the silence.
The best beats reveal whatโs felt, not said:
โ hesitation
โ discomfort
โ tension
โ hidden motive
Whatโs a beat?
A dialogue beat is a small action or thought that shapes rhythm and reveals whatโs left unsaid.
Avoid:
โSure,โ she said, with a shrug.
(Filler beat. Adds no emotional value.)
Use beats with intent:
โSure,โ she said, without looking up from her phone.
(dismissive)
โItโs fine,โ she said. The fight was over. And sheโd lost.
(self-censorship)
โIโm fine.โ He lined up the silverware again - and again.
(anxiety)
A good beat doesnโt echo the line - it complicates it.
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I will be honest. Iโm here because of the world of honor fanfic. But Itโs the best one. My fave. That I recommend to everyone. So pls read this. Itโs super interesting and clever. Pls. Thanks.
Now, I think it's time to move onto the very purpose of me starting this.
So, point number one: the basics of fictional politics.
You think that most stories don't have politics?
Most stories just aren't focused on it. Unless your character is the last surviving human in a post apocalyptic world, a secluded monk or some kind of Robinson Crusoe, they will live in society. And where society appears politics follows.
You want to ensure that your readers (at least that part of them that understands politics a little bit) won't cry bloody tears reading your latest creation? Then put some thought into world building.
Now, there are two options when it comes to writing the political (or, think in broader terms - social) part of your story.
First is obviously a sociopolitical system that really exists (or existed at some point in the past).

It's the easier option as you don't have to come up with all the peculiar things like social hierarchy, power legitimacy sources or societal norms of behaviour. It's all already here, you only need to weave it into the tapestry of your story, making it interesting for other people to read.
My advice will be simple: research, research and more research. Make it detailed and make it systematic, and most certainly don't use things like Wikipedia without cross-checking the facts. Some people change the articles there for fun. I did it myself before tests when I worked in university in order to catch those geniuses who tried to cheat. You might think itโs mental, but Iโll let you know it worked.
So, check the facts and use at least two or three sources of information. That will save you from mistakes, personal opinions and propaganda. Because, and I hate to disappoint you here if you haven't got it yet, most sources on society are somewhat unreliable and full of ideological bullshit. Some are just more obviously biased than others.
Depending on how deep you want to delve into the political side of your story, you might need to simply gather facts or gain a deeper understanding of people's behaviour and beliefs that formed and defined it.
Let's say: your story takes place in the USA and one of your characters is mildly interested in the ongoing presidential race. Youโd need a couple of facts, maybe some ties between your character's social status and their opinions of the candidates, and that's it.
It would be completely different if one of your characters is a part of the team of a candidate. Then a lot of their life revolves around politics in general and the particular process, so youโd need to know some intricacies of elections, especially what the whole process looks like on the inside.
That being said, the purpose and the plot of your story will define how deep your research should be. Still, quality is what matters.
Second option is more complicated (and more exciting): creating an original political system.

That would require your imagination, yes, but youโll also need to actually understand the โhowโs and โwhyโs. Because, surprise surprise, there are reasons our society is like it is. The same would naturally be true about any kind of it, from epic fantasy to post-apocalyptic dystopia.
There are two ways to go about the creation of society in your own world: building from scratch and basing it on some real-life examples. More often than not people choose the second one because not only is it easier to develop into something complete, but familiar shapes help readers to relate with the characters they read about. Ironically, that doesn't save many authors from making the most glaring mistakes.
Either way, when creating your own society and political system the first thing you need to determine is the starting point. โWell, that much is obvious,โ you could say. The trick here is to know exactly what your foundation is, so you can confidently build the whole structure upon it.
For example, you are writing fantasy in a medieval setting. You choose Western Europe of the mid-fourteenth century as a foundation for your story. That means that you have some basic things like who has power, how the state is organised, what are relationships between social classes. But you also need to think of things that make your world different from Western Europe of the said period.
Or you want to write sci-fi and decide to build other planetsโ societies yourself. That's the most rational decision if what you envision differs too much from what you know about the real-world examples. But that means that you have to create the whole basis from the simplest norms of behaviour before moving to something as complex as politics. Basically, youโll have to make at least sketches of the whole history and social development to the point where your story starts.
In the end, just like any other part of your story, the social and political side demands a lot of attention and detailed planning. That is, if you want it to look believable. You're in for hours upon hours of research or world building. And some results of it might only get one or two mentions in the final draft of your story. But that's what makes it complete, what gives the world details necessary for the readers to fully immerse themselves. If anything, Iโd want my story to be life-like and my characters easy to imagine. What about you?
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โฐโโค ๐๐จ๐ฐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซโ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ญ
โฆ โ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ข๐ซ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ง๐จ๐ฅ๐จ๐ ๐ฎ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฏ๐จ๐ข๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฆ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐๐ก๐๐ฌ.โ
โฐโโค ๐๐ญ๐๐ฉ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐ฉ, ๐
๐จ๐ฅ๐ค๐ฌโ๐๐๐ฅ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ!
โฆ ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ฏ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ง ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐๐๐จ๐ซ๐. ๐๐ก๐ "๐๐ซ๐๐ณ๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ข๐ง" ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ ๐ข๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐. ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ข๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ค๐๐งโ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐จ๐ง๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐ฑ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฉ๐จ๐๐ญ๐ข๐. ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ง๐๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ก๐๐ฌ ๐๐ฑ๐๐๐ญ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐๐๐๐ข๐๐ฅ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ข๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ ๐ญ๐จ๐ ๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐ฎ๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐๐ฉ๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฒ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐๐ซ.
๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฌ๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฎ๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ฆ๐ข๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ซ... ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ! ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ. ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง: ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ๐จ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ฒ ๐ฉ๐จ๐จ๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ง ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ.
๐๐จ๐ฐ, ๐ฅ๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ค ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ญ, ๐ฎ๐ง-๐ฅ๐๐๐ซ๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ก๐ฬ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ค ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐๐๐ญ, ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฆ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ง๐ฎ๐๐ง๐๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ฏ๐๐ฌ. ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐๐ฌ, ๐ฐ๐โ๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐งโ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐โ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ข๐๐๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ.
โฐโโค ๐๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ข๐ซ๐ค, ๐๐๐ซ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐
โฆ ๐๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅโ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ฅ๐ ๐จ๐ง ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ โ๐๐๐๐ฉ.โ ๐๐ง๐ฑ๐ข๐๐ญ๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐๐ช๐ฎ๐๐ฅ โ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ง.โ ๐๐๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐ข๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ โ๐ก๐จ๐ญ, ๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐๐จ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ง๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ฌ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฆ๐๐ญ๐ข๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ.โ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐จ๐๐ข๐๐ญ๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐๐๐๐ง๐ญ๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐๐๐ซ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐จ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ.
๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซโ๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ง ๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ฃ๐๐๐ค๐๐ญ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ข๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ค. ๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐จ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆโ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ง๐๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ณ๐ณ๐ (๐ง๐จ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ) ๐จ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ โ๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐ซ๐ฒโ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ง๐ข๐ฆ๐๐ญ๐ ๐จ๐๐ฃ๐๐๐ญ๐ฌ.
โฆ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐๐:
โ ๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ = ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐๐ฑ๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ ๐ฃ๐จ๐ฒ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ง๐ฑ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ. ๐
๐ข๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ .
โ ๐๐๐ฒ๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐. ๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐๐๐ฅโ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ๐ก๐ข๐ฉ๐ฌ, ๐๐๐๐ข๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง-๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ , ๐๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฌ.
๐๐๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ฆ๐ฌ ๐๐๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ.
โฐโโค ๐๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ญ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฌ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐จ๐ญ๐ฒ๐ฉ๐๐ฌ
โฆ ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซโ๐ฌ โ๐๐ง๐ฑ๐ข๐๐ญ๐ฒโ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐ง๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ, ๐จ๐ซ ๐ข๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ โ๐๐๐๐โ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ง๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ข๐ฌ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ง ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ฏ๐๐ง๐ข๐๐ง๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ข๐ง๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฆ๐... ๐ฐ๐ ๐ง๐๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ค.
๐๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ข๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐, ๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ข๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฑ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ. ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฆ๐ ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฆ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ.
โฆ ๐๐จ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐๐ฌ๐๐๐ซ๐๐ก ๐๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ซ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ข๐จ๐ง:
โ ๐๐ฌ๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ง๐ญ๐ฌโ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐๐๐จ๐ฌ, ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ ๐ฌ, ๐๐๐๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฌ, ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐จ๐ข๐ซ๐ฌ.
โ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐๐๐ฅ ๐๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ฉ๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ญ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐๐๐ฌ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐-๐, ๐๐๐ฒ๐จ ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐, ๐จ๐ซ ๐๐๐๐.
โ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ค ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐๐ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐ (๐ข๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐ข๐ญ, ๐จ๐ซ ๐ข๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ค๐ง๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐).
โ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐๐๐ฌ๐โ๐ง๐จ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฒ-๐ฉ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐. ๐๐ ๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ง๐๐๐ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ โ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐๐๐ฉ ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ฆ๐ข๐๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐๐.โ
โฐโโค ๐๐๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐ ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ก๐๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฌ
โฆ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐: ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐๐ง ๐ซ๐๐ฉ๐ฅ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซโ๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ญ๐ข๐ซ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ... ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐จ๐ญ๐ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ญ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ก๐๐๐ญ, ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง.
๐๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ โ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐จ๐ง๐โ ๐จ๐ซ โ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐ฉ๐จ๐ฅ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐.โ ๐๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ง ๐ ๐๐๐ค๐๐ซ๐ฒ. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ง ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐ง ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ก๐๐ฌ ๐ง๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐ฆ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐๐ค๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐ญ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ, ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐ญ๐๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฒ๐ซ๐จ๐๐จ๐๐ฆ. ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ง๐๐, ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐, ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐.
โฆ ๐๐ฎ๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฎ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฌ:
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ก๐๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ฆ๐ฌ ๐๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐?
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ซ ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ?
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐ข๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐?
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ก๐๐๐ฅ๐ญ๐ก?
โฆ ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฏ๐จ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ ๐ง๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐๐ฉ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ง๐๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง. ๐๐๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ฃ๐จ๐ค๐ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฐ๐ฌ ๐ก๐ฎ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ซ๐.
โฐโโค ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฉ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฉ๐๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ก ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ง๐
โฆ ๐๐ข๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐จ๐ญ๐ฒ๐ฉ๐๐ฌ. ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐๐ฒ, ๐ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฎ๐ง๐๐๐ซ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ง๐ .
โฆ ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ง๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ:
โ ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐ซ๐๐ณ๐ฒ ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ข๐งโ โ ๐๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ฉ ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฆ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐ง ๐ฌ๐๐ก๐ข๐ณ๐จ๐ฉ๐ก๐ซ๐๐ง๐ข๐, ๐ฒ๐๐๐ก?
โ ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐ข๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐๐ข๐ญโ โ ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐๐ค ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐, ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐๐ ๐ฒโ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ณ๐ฒ.
โ ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐ข๐๐ข๐ณ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐ฅโ โ ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ง๐๐๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ฒ ๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ๐ฌ, โ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฑ ๐ก๐๐ซ.โ ๐๐ก๐ ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐ฉ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ง๐๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ.
โ ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ฐ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐๐๐ซโ โ ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฉ๐ซ๐ข๐ฌ๐! ๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ญ๐ข๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐๐ฌ! ๐๐จ. ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ง๐จ.
โ ๐๐ก๐ โ๐๐จ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ค๐๐ง ๐ญ๐จ ๐
๐ฎ๐ง๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐งโ โ ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐จ๐ง๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ, ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ซ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ง๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ก๐ข๐ง๐, ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐จ๐ง.
โฆ ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐๐:
โ ๐๐๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ฒ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฏ๐๐ฅ.
โ ๐๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ๐ก๐ข๐ฉ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ฒ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ง๐๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ.
โ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ญ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฌ๐จ ๐ ๐ซ๐จ๐ฐ๐ญ๐ก, ๐ฃ๐จ๐ฒ, ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ข๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ง๐๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ง๐๐ซ๐ค.
โฐโโค ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ฆ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ณ๐ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฉ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐
โฆ ๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฆ๐ข๐ง๐, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ง ๐ ๐จ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐ฉ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ .
๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ง ๐ญ๐๐ค๐ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ฌ. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ง ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฉ๐ฌ๐. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ค๐ข๐๐ค ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ง๐๐ฑ๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ญ๐๐ซ.
๐๐๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐๐๐ซโ๐ข๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ก๐ฎ๐ญ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ง ๐๐ฒ ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐ข๐ง ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ญ. ๐๐จ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ!
โฆ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ฐ:
โ ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ข๐ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ โ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐๐๐งโ
โ ๐๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ฉ๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐
โ ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ญ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ๐ฌ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ฌ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ
โ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ก๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐๐ฅ๐, ๐๐ฏ๐๐ง ๐ข๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฒ
โฐโโค ๐๐ฉ๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ฅ๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ, ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐๐๐ค๐ ๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ง๐๐ก๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐
โฆ ๐๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐จ๐๐ญ๐๐ง ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐๐ซ๐ค ๐ก๐ฎ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซโ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐ญ๐ข๐ฆ๐๐ฌ, ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ก ๐ญ๐ก๐ซ๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฆ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ.
๐๐๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐ฃ๐จ๐ค๐๐ฌ. ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ฌ๐ฆ, ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ.
๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ง๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฃ๐จ๐ค๐.
๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐ญ๐จ โ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฅ, ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐๐ง๐.โ ๐๐ก๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ. ๐๐ก๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐๐๐ก๐ฎ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ .
โฐโโค ๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐
๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐จ๐ฒ, ๐๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐ฆ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง
โฆ ๐๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐ง๐๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ค๐ข๐ญ๐๐ก๐๐ง. ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐. ๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐ง๐๐ซ๐ ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ก๐ซ๐จ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฌ ๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐จ๐ฅ๐จ๐ ๐ฒ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ญ๐ก๐ฌ.
๐๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ, ๐ก๐จ๐ฉ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ง ๐ข๐ ๐ข๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐๐ฅ๐๐๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ .
๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฆ๐ฉ๐จ๐ซ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ญ ๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐๐๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ. ๐๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฉ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐๐ซ๐๐ง๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐จ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐ซ๐๐๐ข๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ.
๐๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฅ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ. ๐๐ก๐๐ฒโ๐ซ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฅ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฑ๐ข๐๐ฌ.
โฐโโค ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ฌ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐ฌ: ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐๐๐ญ ๐๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐๐ซ
โฆ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ ๐จ๐จ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ โ๐ข๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐ฏ๐จ๐ฅ๐ฎ๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ฆ๐ฉ๐๐ญ๐ก๐ฒ. ๐๐ญ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ๐ฌ:
l โ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๏ฟฝ๏ฟฝ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฉ๐๐๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฆ๐๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ.โ
๐๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐จ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐๐๐๐ญ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ข๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ง๐ญ๐ข๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ, ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐๐ซ๐, ๐ง๐ฎ๐๐ง๐๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก ๐๐๐ซ๐ค ๐ก๐ฎ๐ฆ๐จ๐ซ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐๐๐ฌ๐จ๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ, ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐๐๐ฉ ๐จ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐โ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐โ๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐ญ.
โฐโโค ๐
๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ญ๐ (๐๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ก๐ข๐ง๐, ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐๐ซ)
โฆ ๐๐๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐ฌ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ญ๐๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฒ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐จ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐ก๐๐ซ๐โ๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฌ๐จ๐๐ญ ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ๐๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ก๐จ๐ง๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฒ:
โ ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฌ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญ๐ฌ.
โ ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐๐๐ง ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ โ๐ซ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญโ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ข๐ฆ๐. ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐จ๐ค๐๐ฒ.
โ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฏ๐จ๐ข๐๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฌ. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฌ. ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ฆ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐๐ข๐ง, ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ค๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ. ๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ข๐ฌ๐งโ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ญโ๐ข๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ง. ๐ ๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ฉ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ค๐๐ซ ๐ข๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐จ๐ , ๐ง๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ฉ๐จ๐ญ๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ค๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐๐๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ฆ.
โ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ฅ๐๐๐ง ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ. ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ ๐จ๐ง ๐ซ๐๐ฐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฆ. ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ค๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ข๐๐. ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐จ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฏ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐.
๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐ซ๐ฒ๐ข๐ง๐ โ๐ข๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ซ๐จ๐๐๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฌ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ก๐ฬ๐ฌโ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ง ๐ฆ๐จ๐ฌ๐ญ.
โฆ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐จ๐ง๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐๐ง ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐. ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฒ, ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ซ๐, ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ, ๐ฌ๐จ๐๐ญ, ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฎ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฎ๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ฌ.
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โamerican spiritโ
seven or eight loose checks to cash
holes in my socks, mud on the dash
my reflectionโs cursed to forever wander this walmart mirror
the poetry locked in your safe has made that clear
iโm sixteen and washed up with the debris
everyone knows my record as an absentee
knowing iโd feel a thousand times better with a little weed
knowing lifeโs passing me by at an impeccable speed
iโll stay home from school to sleep and to smoke
and lose another piece of me with every toke
iโll paint on my wings and zip up my boots
in honor of the boy who taught me the magic of spoofs
finding a sort of sanctuary in the presence of perverts,
itโs not the worst iโve been through โ it still fucking hurts
thoughts of deeming myself a cutting board always lurk
and youโre still printing pictures of girls in thigh highs and skirts
enraged, iโll take every last dime
locked in this house, iโve missed out on my prime
iโve woken trashed on the side of the interstate
a couple xans in my trap bag that i knew damn well were laced
carless, barless
with a few new problems i refuse to adress
when these worn journals i no longer wish to keep
and i feel ready to stay clean longer than a week
iโll cash my checks
and identify why iโm so in love with this complex
because whoeverโs paving my path
is probably having a good fucking laugh
theyโve been reciting my lines and i can finally hear it
theyโre looking right through me, screaming, โwhereโs your american spirit?โ
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How do you like just start posting your writing like has someone got a manual I can follow or is it just post and pray??
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Okay hi, I am working on a fake game partially inspired by Funger 2(just a tiny bit okay).
It will mostly be in written form like a videogame guide but it will also have an OST.
Third part that i want to ad are some fake visuals or game concept art. I am no artist so I will be using AI.
What are best AI engines to create sligtley funger likey grimey 2D art. I am sad I will be having to use AI instead of work of real people but in this economy nobody is working for free lol, so yeah, I would be happy if you guys gave me your best suggestions
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"La isla de las mujeres del mar", de Lisa See en la Lรญnea D
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If it's not too much work, could you share what your outlining process is like? I always feel a little lost when I try outlining my fics and I know the process is different for everyone but I feel like it would help to know what others do. Every time I try to google help I get processes for original novel writing, and it doesn't feel as applicable to writing a short fanfic.
I would love to :3
There are actually a few different ways I outline, and sometimes it depends on the length of the fic and how complex the plot is.
I'll use one of my saved radiostatic prompts as an example (it also gives me an excuse to sit down and actually outline it hehe)
So, sometimes just the prompt itself is a good enough outline for me (this is dependent on how long I think the fic is going to be. If it's short, sometimes the prompt itself works and I don't need to go in-depth. I say "prompt" but that also can mean a specific scene in your head that you want to write, or a concept, or even a piece of fan-art that inspired you).
Here's the paragraph prompt I wrote for this radiostatic one-shot/short fic (spoilers, I guess):
So sometimes, just this is enough for me to start writing the fic (my prompts do tend to get a little big because I like to add a lot of detail - about the scene or concept that grabbed my attention - so that I capture all the vibes and emotions that I want to incorporate.
But sometimes, it helps to go more in-depth so I'm not overwhelmed trying to get to the part of the fic that I want to write (NOTE: It is totally fine if you write out the scene/parts that you want to write the most, even if it's in the middle or the end. You can always fill in the blanks after. Or you can just post the scene you wanted to write without adding more. It's up to you).
I like to figure out what scenes happen that lead up to the parts I want to write, so sometimes, I'll make a bullet-point list of chronological scenes, plot-points, and details. For example:
And etc... you continue on until you've hashed out the sequence of events that take place in the story. This doesn't have to be super detailed (it can be really brief and to the point) and doesn't it have to be super clinical either. Just have fun and write down whatever silly thoughts you have in your head.
You bullet-point list can be as simple as:
Alastor goes downstairs to do exercise.
Vox shows up to do the exercise as well (invited by Charlie)
They get into an argument about modern technology.
Vox leaves.
It's really just about putting down the sequence of events starting from the very beginning to the very end. You can keep it simple like the above example
OR
You can make it even more detailed by doing an in-depth summary of the fic, scene by scene, plot point by plot point, until you get to the end (this is what I usually do because it gets everything planned out and on the page, down to the smallest details). For example:
And then it goes on like this until I've outlined the entire fic. You can be silly with this. Just have fun. Let yourself ramble and get all you're ideas out. Don't try to stick to a rigid plan, let the story flow naturally.
Then, once I've finished my outline, I use it as a guide as I write the rough draft. The thing about outlines is that you don't have to follow exactly what you planned. It's okay to diverge or adds things or cut things out. It really is just a loose guide to help you through the events of the story and get your thoughts on paper.
Additionally: You don't even have to fully finish the outline if you don't want to. Sometimes you get half of it done before you want to start writing, and that's fine. The rest of the story will reveal itself as you go.
If I'm doing a multi-chaptered fic, sometimes I'll break the overall idea of the story into pre-determined chapters and summarize it section by section. Or, I'll just be a maniac and summarize the entire fic in one big, super long, super detailed block of text. Another staticradio fic I'm currently outlining is 16,152 words long and I'm not even close to being done. I expected this fic to get super long and complex, so writing it out in a very chronological and detailed manner helps it feel less daunting. AND now I have every plot point, twist, emotional scene, and bit foreshadowing planned out and already placed where I want it to show up in the fic. It's great. It makes me life easier when I actually buckle down and write the rough draft.
Just as a final note, I want to say that everyone's process is different. This is how I outline, but I know it won't work for everyone. It's all about finding what method works for you.
I'll say that one of the most important to do while outlining is simply having fun with it. Make it your hype list. Make every scene you jot down a scene you're excited to write. Make yourself want to write it so it doesn't feel like a chore to slog through.
Best advice I've ever recieved: If you're bored writing a scene, the audience will be bored reading it.
Have fun and write the story you wanna write ๐๐
Hope this helped!
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